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THE POWER OF POSITIVE THINKING

When someone is in trouble or feeling down, many people say "think


positively" to that person just to comfort him/her. Why do they say so? Actually, it is a
fact that our mind affects our behaviour and mood. That is why, I strongly believe
that positive thinking has a lot of benefits. To begin with , it helps people usually
be happy. Positive people believe things always work out and so when they have a
problem, they try to change the problem into an opportunity. In addition to this , it
supports good health. For example , positive people are likely to exercise and eat
healthy food. Because of this, they don't usually get sick and have many health
problems. Finally , it helps people do well in their jobs. For instance, positive people
like learning new things, so they improve themselves. Their new knowledge and skills
make them better workers. In conclusion, positive thinking makes people happy,
healthy, and better workers.

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