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Mahrukh Khan

Michele Tubbs

ENGL 1301

November 1, 2020

The purpose to write this essay was to infrom my audience about differences and

similarities between childhood and adulthood like their identity, thoughts, responsibilities,

independence, and bodily differences all changed.

I imagine my readers to be my classmate and the teacher becaue they can all relate with

that as they all were kids once and now they are adults.

I was very confused between two to three topic and I asked my sister for her opinion. She

said to write about ‘LOVE vs HATE’ then I asked my other sister and she suggested me to write

about CHILDHOOD vs ADULTHOOD. That weekend my cousin came to vist me and I asked

her too about the topic and she suggested me the same one. She also added that this topic will be

easy for you because you can relate with it. I planned my essay by looking at my own life that

how is it changed over time. I questioned myself about what is changed in my life from

childhood.

I have mad many changes in my essay along the way. I added some paragraphs and

corrected some grammar mistakes. I also changed my thesis statement a little bit.

One of my peers said that I am not following MLA format as my essay is missing the

header. The other one said that my essay has some grammar mistakes.

This class has taught me how to think critically. Also it taught me how to build up college

level sentences and write essays. The draft that my teacher asked me to write before this
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assignment also helped me as it gave me time to look at it again and make necessary

adjustments. It all helped me in writing this esaay.