Criteria 4 3 2 1

The Thesis The thesis is I have a thesis My thesis is I do not have

well written but, it is incomplete a thesis
and is easy to unclear
understand

Organization My writing is My writing My My writing is

compelling has a organization disorganized
and organized beginning, a is rough but,
middle, and workable
an end

`Sentence Fluency My sentences My sentences My sentences My sentences

are clear and are well have many are
I have structured run-ons incomplete
complete
sentences

Word Choice My words are My choice of My words are My words are

striking and words are fine dull repetitive
varied and routine