ASSESSING WRITING

Look at the following piece of writing and answer the following

questions :

1) What nationality is the learner ? (provide evidence)

Italian ()

2) What level is the learner ? (provide evidence)

A2 vocabulary, grammar
3) What positive comments would you like to give the
learner? (give examples)
Vocabulary, some good moments with grammar
()

4) What developmental area(s) would you highlight for the

next piece of writing ? (justify your decisions)

Consider using articles where necessary, be aware of

homophones.

N.B This is a genuine piece of writing given to me by a learner

in Oxford. The learner happily gave me permission to use this
as a model in teacher training seminars and courses.