Hello Fawzi,

Great outline, i'm not very interested in video games but reading your outline i
already learn various things from it. For the statistics I would've liked to see a number
of how many people video games affect in a neurological way. I sadly got lost from
your thesis statement to your transitions as the outline was unorganized and was not
labeled properly so i wont be able to speak on those. One thing that helps me stay
organized is putting the titles in a bigger font on top. Your main points have a very
nice flow in how they go from explaining video games to the simulation effects. Your
closing statement is very well done, gathering all the information prefaced in the
outline and putting it together to create a lasting effect.