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Portfolio - PR - Issue Proposal 2
Portfolio - PR - Issue Proposal 2
Jason Copella
Mr. Ventura
ENG 1530
5 October 2020
Address what makes your topic timely, relevant, and credible in your opening paragraph/
Good job at addressing both sides of the argument, with specific details to support each
side
Close out the two sides of the argument paragraphs better- wrap up the ideas and
You do a good job of focusing on why you want to research this issue, but also keep in
mind persuading to your audience as well on why this issue is compelling and worthy of
their attention
More recent examples of serial killers would strengthen the idea of your issue be
timely/relevant
Are you suggesting the prevention of serial killers in the first place, the reform and
forgiveness of serial killers after their actions, or both? Your closing paragraph is not
Thank you for this feedback, it looks like the information you have provided to me will be useful
in my essay and I agree with many of your points that you make here. With your last comment
yes, can we find a way to prevent it all together and or create treatment centers, with that we