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Introductiontodescriptivewriting 110707130848 Phpapp02
Introductiontodescriptivewriting 110707130848 Phpapp02
A. B.
She was excited when Her eyes widened with
her parents gave her surprise and her lips
permission to go to the parted as she
party. screamed with delight
when her parents said
“Yes”
You are in the midst of a
thunderstorm. How would you describe
this?
A. B.
The rain was falling
heavily and everyone The raindrops attacked
was afraid the galvanized roof
and the windows
rattled. We huddled
. under the bed and held
each other tightly
The descriptions in The descriptions in
the first example the second example
(labeled A) tells you (labeled B) create
what is happening images in the
but it does not readers mind and
create pictures in allow them to
your mind experience it fully
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