Professional Documents
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Plagiarism
Based on Harvard
Referencing System
Compiled by
Dr Chook Ka Joo
Quality Assurance Department
Tunku Abdul Rahman University College
and
2013
For internal circulation only. ©Tunku Abdul Rahman University College. All rights reserved.
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REFERENCES 14
AVOIDING PLAGIARISM
Tunku Abdul Rahman (TAR) University College views plagiarism seriously and
would like students to take proactive actions to be aware of what constitutes
plagiarism and the penalties for plagiarism.
b. making a copy of all or part of another person’s work and presenting it as the
student’s own work by failure to disclose the source;
Plagiarism can take many forms – written, graphic and visual forms and includes
the use of electronic and material used in oral presentation. Plagiarism may even
occur unintentionally such as when the origin of the material used is not properly
cited.
a. the work is marked on its academic merit (taking into account that the work
is not entirely that of the student’s) so that the grade awarded is appropriate
to the work submitted with an additional appropriate punitive reduction in
mark;
b. the student is required to submit the same piece of work purged of all
plagiarism or collusion for a grade capped at the minimum pass grade;
c. the work is marked on its academic merit (taking into account that the work
is not entirely that of the student’s) so that the grade awarded is appropriate
to the work submitted with an additional appropriate punitive reduction in
mark but capped at the minimum pass grade;
d. the student is failed in the examination of any unit or course or part of a unit
or course or the whole of the examination concerned;
f. the student is suspended from any University College examination for such
period as the Disciplinary Authority may decide;
g. the student is failed for the whole of the examination concerned and that the
student be required to leave the course(s) and refused readmission to any
course of study in the University College.
The chunk of text known as the paragraph is a series of sentences, all of which
relate to a particular point you want to make. This means that some paragraphs
are very long and others are very short. Paragraphs are usually more than one
sentence although a one-sentence paragraph can be electrifying. It is more
common to have four or five sentences bunched together around one idea, and it
is considered courteous for the writer to try and vary the length of those fives
sentences to assist understanding and prevent reader fatigue (Fox & Wilkinson
1993, p. 8).
Student A1 wrote:
A paragraph is a series of sentences that relate to a certain point you wish to make.
Some paragraphs will be long and others are short. They are usually more than one
sentence long and more commonly have four or five sentences in them. To be a
courteous writer, it is important to vary the length of the sentences to assist the
reader to understand and to prevent reader fatigue.
Comments:
Verdict: Plagiarism
Student A2 wrote:
Comments:
Although the student has attempted to cite the reference here, there is still
considerable amount of plagiarism. The words used are very similar to the
original. It is not sufficient to simply change a word here or there. When
paraphrasing or summarising a passage, you must ensure that you are writing
Avoiding Plagiarism – Based on Harvard Referencing System 3
the material in your own combination of words and indicate clearly any sentence
or part of sentences that you are copying directly from the original.
Verdict: Plagiarism
Student A3 wrote:
Comments:
This writing acknowledges where the ideas came from and the student has use
his/her own word combinations. He/She has clearly indicated where there is a
direct quote from the original text by using inverted commas and including the
page number of the original text. This is an example of correct referencing to
avoid plagiarism.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
Four students read the following text and used it in their essays in slightly
different ways. Which one would you count as plagiarism?
Original Text B
May, ET 1997, Barren in the promised land: Childless Americans and the pursuit of
happiness, Harvard University Press, Boston.
Because women's wages often continue to reflect the fiction that men earn the
family wage, single mothers rarely earn enough to support themselves and their
children adequately. And because work is still organized around the assumption
that mothers stay home with children, even though few mothers can afford to do
so, child-care facilities in the United States remain woefully inadequate (May
1997, p. 588).
Since women's wages often continue to reflect the mistaken notion that men are the
main wage earners in the family, single mothers rarely make enough to support
themselves and their children very well. Also, because work is still based on the
assumption that mothers stay home with children, facilities for child care remain
woefully inadequate in the United States.
Comments:
There is too much direct borrowing of sentence structure and wording. The
student changes some words, drops one phrase and adds some new language,
but the whole text closely resembles May’s. There is no acknowledgment
(citation) of May’s work. Even if May were acknowledged, this would still be
considered as plagiarism because the lack of quotation marks indicates that it has
been put into the student's own words.
Verdict: Plagiarism
Student B2 wrote:
By and large, our economy still operates on the mistaken notion that men are the
main breadwinners in the family. Thus, women continue to earn lower wages than
men. This means, in effect, that many single mothers cannot earn a decent living.
Furthermore, adequate day care is not available in the USA because of the mistaken
assumption that mothers remain at home with their children.
Comments:
The student shows good paraphrasing of wording and sentence structure but
does not acknowledge May's original ideas. Some of May's points are common
knowledge (e.g. women earn less than men, many single mothers live in poverty),
but May uses this to make a specific and original point.
Verdict: Plagiarism
Student B3 wrote:
As May (1997, p. 588) points out, ‘women's wages often continue to reflect the
fiction that men earn the family wage’. Thus, many single mothers cannot support
themselves and their children adequately. Furthermore, since work is based on the
assumption that mothers stay home with children, facilities for day care in this
country are still ‘woefully inadequate’.
Although the student now cites May, he/she still borrows too much language
from the original text.
Student B4 wrote:
Women today still earn less than men — so much less that many single mothers and
their children live near or below the poverty line. May (1997, p. 588) argues that
this situation stems in part from ‘the fiction that men earn the family wage’. May
further suggests that the American workplace still operates on the assumption that
mothers with children stay home to care of them.
Comments:
The student makes use of the common knowledge in May's work but
acknowledges May's original conclusion and does not try to pass it off as his/her
own. The quotation is properly cited as a paraphrase of another quotation.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
Three students referred to McShane and Travaglione’s book for their work.
Which one would you count as plagiarism?
Original Text C
Student C1 wrote:
When employees feel responsible for their work, they tend to be more motivated
which results in higher performances.
These are the student’s own words but not his/her idea or information. He/She
must show where the idea comes from.
Verdict: Plagiarism
Student C2 wrote:
When employees feel responsible for their work, they tend to be more motivated
which results in higher performances (McShane & Travaglione 2003).
Comments:
The source of the idea or information is cited. The page number need not be
included as the example is not a direct quote.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
Student C3 wrote:
McShane and Travaglione (2001, p. 199) state that ‘when employees feel
responsible for their work, they tend to be more motivated which results in higher
performances’.
Comments:
The source of the idea or information is cited. As this is a direct quotation, the
page number of the source is included.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
The following are examples of good and bad practices from a variety of academic
disciplines.
Original Text D
Student D1 wrote:
Comments:
In this example, the original source is clearly referenced, and the reader is left
in no doubt that the Weinberg and Gould’s text has influenced and informed
this section of the essay. As the relevant section of the text is paraphrased
rather than directly quoted, there is no need to give the specific page number
in the text.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
Student D2 wrote:
Comments:
The Weinberg and Gould’s text has been directly quoted, yet no reference or
quotation marks are used, and this would, therefore, be considered as
plagiarism. Always include the full correct reference where relevant.
Verdict: Plagiarism
3.4.2 Law
Original Text E
Akdeniz, Y, Walker, C & Wall, T (eds), 2000, The Internet, law & society,
Longman, Harlow.
Student E1 wrote:
There are many proven advantages that have resulted from the development of
the Internet, but it has been observed that ‘many of these perceived dividends
can, unfortunately, be turned against the vulnerable and the unwary’ (Akdeniz,
Walker & Tall 2000, p. 4).
Comments:
This source has been correctly quoted. The quotation is chosen to prove a point
the writers are making in their own words.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
Original Text F
The Internet is an international medium and although views will differ on how
it should be managed in other ways, all countries should be able to agree on
legislation for child abuse and pornography. Balancing the need to protect
minors with the need to maintain freedom of expression is continuing to
prove difficult (JISC Legal 2007).
Student F wrote:
It has been argued that it is hard to find the balance between maintaining
freedom of expression with the requirement to protect children in relation to the
Internet. Still, it would be hoped that all countries could be of the same opinion
concerning the policing of Internet pornography and child abuse (JISC Legal
2007).
Quotation marks must be used around any verbatim text used in the source.
Use direct quotations in moderation and explain the argument you are putting
forward in your own words.
Verdict: Plagiarism
If you are stating something that everyone knows, this is classified as common
knowledge. Once you move outside of this, you need to cite your source. When
you are talking about an opinion or a common fact, correctly reference where
you have found this.
Original Text G
Akdeniz, Y, Walker, C & Wall, T (eds), 2000, The Internet, Law & Society,
Longman, Harlow.
The potential benefits of the Internet are numerous and range from the
simple improvement of communications to a revolution in commerce and
an increased potential for increasing the democratic involvement of
citizens whether in the nation state or in some level of political
engagement (Akdeniz, Walker & Wall 2000, p. 59).
Student G wrote:
The potential benefits of the Internet are numerous and range from the simple
improvement of communications to a revolution in commerce and an
increased potential for increasing the democratic involvement of citizens
whether in the nation state or in some level of political engagement.
Comments:
Even though the contents provided are common knowledge, if an original text
has been referred to, referencing of the original work must be provided for.
Verdict: Plagiarism
Student H1 wrote:
Employees must be given control of their work environment to feel responsible for
their successes and failures. This is called employee involvement, designed to
encourage increased commitment to the organization’s success.
Comments:
Verdict: Plagiarism
Student H2 wrote:
Comments:
This is the correct way of piecing together texts from various sources and linking
the ideas together.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
Conversely, Robbins et al. (1994, p. 241) put forward the idea that ‘motivation is
a set of processes that stimulate, direct and maintain human behaviour towards
attaining a goal’. In other words, ‘motivation’ is a complex concept which
encompasses a variety of competing theories. There are many reasons why
people behave differently in the workplace, but it is because these differences
exist that management pays attention to the theories, which provide them with
frameworks for problem solving.
The above is a good model on how to integrate ideas from multiple sources. Note
that usually the first sentence is a statement of proposition introducing the ideas
that you want to put forward in the paragraph. Then support the proposition by
including at least one or more authorities. Also, include a statement of opinions
contrary to the proposition to demonstrate that you have considered all sides to
the argument and summarise your argument or proposition in your own words.
Verdict: No Plagiarism
4.1 Learn how to cite reference correctly. Refer to the University College
Harvard Referencing System booklet available at all faculties.
4.2 Use the following checklist to ensure you avoid accusations of plagiarism
in your work:
The following online resources can be worked through relatively quickly in your
own time. You can gain a better understanding of how to write and prepare your
assignments by following the step-by-step examples.
Akdeniz, Y, Walker, C & Wall, T (eds), 2000, The internet, law & society,
Longman, Harlow.
RMIT Library 2007, Library guide on APA referencing, RMIT University, viewed
3 July 2007, from <http://mams.rmit.edu.au/szg3g615ahbdz.rtf>.