Thanks for your response.

Not bad for the first time, but you still need to focus on several points to
make it better for the next time.

1. Avoid reading from your notes, speak naturally and freely. Reading is not acceptable!

2. Use academic and NS words effectively. Use functions!

3. Your speech was very short, try to give a bit more detailed information about each question by
referring to the video.

4. Use transition signals to make your speech sound organized and smooth.

Thanks for your response. Not bad for the first time, but you still need to focus on several points to
make it better for the next time.

1. Avoid reading from your notes, speak naturally and freely.  Reading is not acceptable!

2. Use academic and NS words effectively.

3. Work more on your grammar and pronunciation. Record your voice, find your errors, correct them
and then record again.