● The first difference I noticed is how much better the breath is

in the second video. While recording the first one I felt like I
was out of breath.
● I also noticed that the sound is generally better
● I don’t know if just having already read over the text made a
big difference but the second one had a better flow.
● In both I didn’t like my read but I guess this isn’t about acting
yet so that’s ok.

I don’t think the difference is huge but I think that’s because I was
in my head about how to read rather than just reading.