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Argument Essay Rough Draft
Argument Essay Rough Draft
ENG 111
8 December 2020
My paper seeks to change the emphasis of the ongoing reform of education to the benefit
of low-income students in the school systems of the United States. My classmates from my
English 111 course at Ivy Tech, as well as my instructor, will be my intended audience for this
article. This paper concerns my audience because it includes restructuring of education that will
influence several different facets of their education. Many members of certain family and
friends, if not ourselves, come from low-income households and districts of public schools. I
found that most of the students in this course agreed after telling classmates that teaching has
changed dramatically over the years and in a negative way. This was a significant revision of my
paper because it allowed me to far better understand my audience. The emphasis on rigorous
standardized testing has taken away the opportunity of the instructor to construct lessons that
More improvements to school policy have been made over the years than many people
might imagine. When a new politician takes office, it tends that they promote reform in
education to enhance services, what they think. Much has been said regarding this century's
talents, norms, and learning standards, but its primary focus has been to prepare for college and
career. The new demand for higher level learning and various early starting skills has increased
the pressure for further assessments and generated a learning style of "teaching to the test." New
reports of rapid growth in student poverty are brought to the attention of policymakers and prove
that they have done little but misidentify the issues. The aim of this paper is to persuade this
country's policymakers and citizens that education policy needs to be shifted to assist poor low-
income students.
Reporter Lindsey Layton tells us in a Washington Post news report that the majority of
public-school students come from low-income families" according to new research from the
2013 federal data (Layton). "Similarly, Southern Education Foundation reports show that "fifty-
one percent of pre-kindergarten through twelfth grade students were eligible for the federal
program that offers free or reduced lunches for students (Layton). Reports such as the one
presented by the Southern Education Foundation clearly show that poverty has become, and is
more critical than ever, the greatest barrier to educational advancement. Not only that, Janie
Boschma and Ronald Brownstein, prominent writers for The Atlantic, show that Most African
American and Hispanic students attend public schools in almost all major American cities, where
most of their classmates qualify as poor or low-income" (Boschma and Brownstein). If most of
their classmates identify as disadvantaged or low-income (Boschma and Brownstein). That poses
the issue of whether policymakers are implementing a purposeful structural economic and racial
isolation strategy. To support that, Sean Slade, author of the Huffington Post, makes a great point
nation." In his 1964 State of the Union Speech, it has been 51 years since President Lyndon B.
Johnson initiated the war on poverty (Slade). The pressure to attain high test scores has removed
choices that foster a love of learning and appreciate the special potential of a child. Particularly
in high poverty schools where these luxuries can't be afforded. States with high-poverty students
prefer to spend less per student... all but five states] spent less than the national average of
time to show people these problems that are negatively impacting our children's progress and
ultimately failing our future. Most educational systems are moved to the evaluation style of
teaching and make it more challenging for not only the students, but also the teachers. Teaching
the style of the exam and making it more challenging for not only the students but also the
teachers. The emphasis on stringent standardized testing has taken away the opportunity of the
instructor to construct lessons that relate to the learning abilities of various students. This makes
it difficult for students to be academically successful and it is expensive to place them at a huge
disadvantage with all the tools to help them progress. This country's leaders need to be made
aware of the negative effect that their hand has had on youth education. Teachers have been
trained for a cause and specialize in this area. Now that we've all been told, it's time to take a
stand against these corrupt politicians and begin to make Congress hear our voice. It is enough to
see reform introduced by a quick call from every last one of us all to our representatives that
prohibits these criminal behaviors of negligence. With the people, the strength of this nation
resides and is enacted by the people's voice. When our children and the future of our children are
Boschma, Janie, and Ronald Brownstein. “The Concentration of Poverty in American Schools.”
www.theatlantic.com/education/archive/2016/02/concentration-poverty-american-
Slade, Sean. “Poverty Affect Education – And Our Systems Perpetuate It.” Huffington Post, 24
Layton, Lyndsey. “Majority of US Public School Students Are in Poverty.” The Washington
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