This week as a part of checking my draft I receive worthy feedback from:

Genaro:

He told me: I have to correct my grammar mistakes and in the 3rd paragraph it has to be
corrected because need to be clear.

Tomuka, She corrected me about my conclusión and how to restate the thesis. Tomuka gave
some advice about to focus my thesis.

Stephany: She indicated me about change some words in my introduction and the 3rd
paragraph has to be corrected because that need to be more concret with the thesis about
how diplomatic was Abraham Lincoln, and 2 supporting details more.