Point Distribution:

paragraphs outlined= 5 possible points total

Thesis and topic statement for each appropriate paragraph= 5 points total

supporting details outlined= 6 points total (you need at LEAST two per body paragraph)

clarity= 4 points

Introduction

Hook:

Leadership is a special gift some leader born and othor made themselves

Background information:

Leadership has many principles, definetly the closest definition about is leader is the persons
that have followers. Leadership by Ernest Shackleton when carried his crew trought the frozen
land and keep survive in comparison with Abraham Lincoln carrying throgh the victory and
keep united the United Stated in the civil war.

TH

Both leadership has many similaritys such as the principle of maitaining by victory, decisive and
be though. However there are some differences such as strategy and context.

I.-The leadership is maintained by victory

a.-By Victory.

1.-Shacketon carryed the crew step by step and kept the hope in the victory that was achieve
safe to Land.

2.-Lincoln gave the hope to the nation to maintain united and the victory was the peace of the
nation

b.-By Be tough

1.-Shacketon had to be strong when ordered kill the dogs

2.-Lincoln had to be strong when deciden to give proclamaiton to the slaves.