Nowadays, Corona virus is our worst enemy.

It has been quite a long time since

it first occurred in China. And finally, the vaccine has been made. However, there is
a debate on whether the citizen will take the vaccine or not. For me, I think we
shouldn’t oblige everyone to have the vaccine. Instead, we could better let
everyone choose if he/she desires to take the vaccine or not.
I think it's because the vaccine can make the disease worse. Also, a person who
is not infected can be contaminated when he or she takes the vaccine. Of course,
everyone should go to the hospital and get the vaccine. However, if it gets worse
we should think differently. Moreover, if young children and old people be
vaccinated, they can even die if there is something wrong with the vaccine.
According to some research, some people died because of the vaccine's side
effect.
Everyone doesn’t have to take the vaccine because it can be harmful, too.
Comment/s:
The writing is well written and ideas are well expressed however, it lacks
some articles and some phrases need to be paraphrased.