I think watching videos on the internet is different from time to time.

Watching
videos on the internet legally it isn’t matter. But illegally watching videos on the
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internet, you can go to jail. If you go to jail do it! I think no one wants to go to jail.
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If it’s not, you have better not see illegally. I think so because watching in Netflix,
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YouTube is legal and it doesn’t go to jail. As this, I think see in legally is okay. I have
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never watch in illegally, but I watch Netflix sometimes. I think watching videos are
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interesting thing. However,illegally download it isn’t good thing. Not isn’tgreat. It’s
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hideous thing. I think, who download illegally is deserve to be blamed. I want all of
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people that is download illegally.
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I think watching videos on the internet is different from time to time. It doesn’t
matter legally but streaming videos on the internet can make someone go to jail. I
think no one wants to go there, so you had better not see it illegally. In my opinion,
watching it on Netflix and YouTube are lawful and it doesn’t make you a bad
person. In my perspective, streaming legally is okay. I have never watched it
illegally in fact I watch it on Netflix sometimes. I think watching videos are
interesting thing. However, downloading it illegally isn’t a good thing. It’s hideous.
I believe, people who download it illegally, deserved to be blamed. I don’t want
people to download it unlawfully.