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Here are some subject line examples — split into groups based on the type of sales follow up email
you're writing — that will make your prospects intrigued enough to open your message. These examples
have actually been used some of HubSpot's top sales professionals to help them achieve high email
open rates.
1. After a meeting
2. After a trigger event
3. After you tweak an email
4. After leaving a voicemail
5. After a trade show, conference, or networking event
6. After your first discussion
7. After you send a follow up email
8. After sending several follow up emails
Part 2
Cold email outreach is a big part of modern sales, and we’ve covered it fairly extensively on the Close
blog.
Before we can get to the follow up email, it’s important that our initial email is strong, so we wanted to
start by sharing a tried and tested cold sales email template with you.
With cold email outreach, there’s a timeline. If you follow our formula, it’s 1, 2, 3, 4, done. You spend a
week on a prospect and move on.
With warm leads, it’s a different story. There is no timeline. You continue following up until you get a yes
or a hard no.
If they tell me they are busy and they don’t have time right now, I will respond and ask them when they
feel like a good time would be for me ping them. The key here is to actually keep following up. If
someone tells me they are not interested—I leave them alone.
But here is the kicker—if they don’t respond at all, I will keep pinging them until they do. And trust me,
they always do. :)”
The two things to keep in mind when following up on warm leads are frequency and relevance. You
want to be persistent without being annoying, and you want your emails to be simple yet relevant.
Another great example of a follow up email is John Barrow’s “Did I lose you?” email. You follow up
several times with a prospect, and each time you hit reply all to answer. You always keep it in the same
email thread. After doing this about six or seven times, you hit reply all, but you change the subject line
to “Did I lose you?” and hit send. This will often get prospects who’ve gone dark to respond to you.
It doesn’t have to be complicated. If they aren’t giving you a “no”, there’s a reason. Your job is just to
keep putting your business in front of them and reminding them how relevant your offer is to them.
That’s the core of sales follow up. Be willing to persist. If you aren’t convinced, grab your free copy of
Steli’s book: The Follow-up Formula: How to Get Everything You Want by Doing What Nobody Else Does
The SaaS business model is a bit different than most other business models. Rather than pursuing a one-
time sale, your goal is to get users signed up for an ongoing subscription to your software.
Many SaaS businesses offer a free trial to get interested users on their platform and actively using their
product. This entails many of the same challenges as selling the product outright, but even when you get
the sign-up; you still have to turn those free trial users into premium customers.
A great example of this in action comes from Groove, a simple help desk software platform. (They’ve
also been documenting the journey of building their startup on their blog, sharing lessons learned along
the way. Highly recommended reading!) Groove’s follow-up sequence starts with a welcome email
focused on making a connection with the user rather than diving right into the product.
This initial email has also ended up being a significant source of feedback for Groove, which they’ve used
to improve the product, the website, marketing campaigns, and the onboarding experience itself.
From that point forward, Groove sends emails based on user behavior. For example, users who have
taken the step to create a mailbox on the platform get this email:
While users who haven’t reached that stage would get this email:
Groove’s follow up sequence is composed of six core emails sent out over 14 days. With the above
customization, they end up sending 22 different messages. Adding this type of customization improved
Groove’s trial-to-customer conversion rate by 10%.
Once the sequence is over, Groove sends out a “win them back” email. Some users opt in for a trial and
then it just doesn’t end up being a good time for them to try out a new platform. The goal of this email is
to get those users back at a better time where they can actually try out the software.
Groove has tested sending out this email 7, 21, and 90 days after the free trial expires, and the 90 day
version has converted best with a 2% customer conversion rate.
A more aggressive example comes from SamCart, a platform for quickly creating high-converting
checkout pages. SamCart offers a 21-day trial and sends users a new email EVERY SINGLE DAY of the trial
period.
Here’s Day #1: https://blog.close.com/hs-fs/hubfs/samcartday1.jpg?
width=1500&name=samcartday1.jpg
Clear expectations (along with an intuitive UI) will get the user straight into your app. Providing added
value will get users feeling really good about your brand AND stir excitement, leading to more app time.
And most importantly, you need to be taking users on a journey that plugs your app straight into their
challenges.
SamCart does this by walking users through a simple new feature each day. https://blog.close.com/hs-
fs/hubfs/samcartday2.jpg?width=1500&name=samcartday2.jpg
They take the user through a journey, from initial checkout page, to upsell..
https://blog.close.com/hs-fs/hubfs/samcartday12.jpg?width=1250&name=samcartday12.jpg
All the way to split testing checkout pages and other parts of the funnel:
https://blog.close.com/hs-fs/hubfs/samcartfinal.jpg?width=1250&name=samcartfinal.jpg
Since SamCart’s free trial automatically converts to a premium account if the user doesn’t cancel, their
goal isn’t to convert the user but simply to help them make SamCart a part of their marketing and sales
system.
And even if the user doesn't follow along actively, they are being exposed each day to a new benefit of
using the product.
Lead magnets tend to be educational in nature, and accordingly, the follow up should nearly always be
educational in nature.
For businesses with big tickets items to sell and a consistent content marketing strategy, there is really
no need to use email marketing for direct sales as part of their normal follow up. These businesses will
often use the email list primarily as an audience building asset, allowing them to send 30-40% of their
list to new content any time they want.
Popular marketers like Pat Flynn, Brian Dean, and Sujan Patel use this strategy to keep their business on
readers’ minds and to drive consistent traffic back to their websites. They will then run dedicated
product launches to their email lists 2-4 times a year.
So essentially, their follow up model looks like this depiction of Pat Flynn’s autoresponder sequence:
It costs 5x more to attract a new customer versus keeping an existing one. The sale is just the beginning
of the story, especially if you are running a SaaS business or offering some other type of recurring
product or service.
What you do after the sale is just as important as what you do before the sale—and will only gain in
importance in the coming years.
Every business model demands a slightly different approach, but we’re going to focus on three highly
effective strategies for the purpose of this discussion:
Onboarding
Education
Incentives
The Onboarding approach is all about getting users to experience an “aha moment” with your product.
This terminology was coined during Facebook’s meteoric rise. They determined that their users’ “aha
moment” would come when they added 7 friends in 10 days, and they focused all their energy into
making that happen.
The Education approach is all about educating your audience, establishing your brand as an authority
and driving regular re-engagement with your website.
Let’s break this down into a makeshift template you can use.
Describe a problem you faced
Describe the pain you experienced from that problem
Share the solution and how the prize played a big role in that solution
Talk about the benefits of the prize
Talk about how it feels to have the problem solved
CTA
There are a few key takeaways here that will help you launch your own campaign:
Don’t simply add giveaway entrants to your subscriber list without following up
Provide some value to every single individual who signed up
Reinforce the value of the prizes when you send them out
Invite new subscribers to engage with your content
You really can’t go wrong with giveaways. There’s not much more to say on the matter.
Contributor outreach follow-up
Promotional outreach follow-up
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Hi [first name],
My name is [my name] and I head up business development efforts with [my company]. We recently
launched a new platform that [one sentence pitch].
I am taking an educated stab in the dark here, however based on your online profile, you appear to be
an appropriate person to connect with ... or might at least point me in the right direction.
I’d like to speak with someone from [company] who is responsible for [handling something that's
relevant to my product].
If that’s you, are you open to a fifteen minute call on _________ [time and date] to discuss ways the
[company name] platform can specifically help your business? If not you, can you please put me in touch
with the right person?
Best,
Hi [first name],
I hope I'm not bothering you. Could you please refer me to the person in charge of [something that's
relevant to my product]?
Sig
My name is [my name] and I'm with [my company name]. We work with organizations like [company
name] to [insert one sentence pitch].
Could you direct me to the right person to talk to about this at [company name] so we can explore if this
would be something valuable to incorporate into your events?
Cheers,
Sig
The next referral cold email is a template directly from the team at Predictable Revenue.
I'm sorry to trouble you. Would you be so kind as to tell me who is responsible for [insert your biggest
pain point here that resonates with your ideal customer; OR insert function like “sales” or “recruiting”]
and how I might get in touch with them?
Thank you,
Sig
Let's check out two cold email templates that are using approach #2 and pitching the decision maker
directly on the value proposition and next action steps.
I hope this email finds you well! I wanted to reach out because [explain how we got their contact
information and how we relate to them: talked to a colleague, saw your company online, etc.].
[Name of company] has a new platform that will help (your team at) [organization name]. [One sentence
pitch of benefits]. We do this by:
Benefit/feature 1
Benefit/feature 2
Benefit/feature 3 (optional)
Let's explore how [name of your software] can specifically help your business. Are you available for a
quick call [time and date]?
Cheers,
Sig
I hope this email finds you well! I wanted to reach out because [explain how we got their contact
information and how we relate to them: talked to a colleague, saw your company online, etc.].
[Name of company] has a new platform that will help (your team at) [organization name]. [One sentence
pitch of benefits].
I know that [our product] will be able to help [name of your company] [insert high level benefit here].
Sig
Another cold email template is based on the "my higher-up asked me to reach out" technique.
Basically, you, the sales rep, write an email that is written as if a higher-up (e.g. your CEO) asked you to
reach out to this company specifically. You then forward that email to the prospect, included the
"forwarded email". The subject line plays into this with "Fwd: YourCompany + ProspectCompany"
Here's an example of a company that's been using this cold email strategy a lot recently: