COHERENCE PARAGRAPHS

ACTIVIDAD 13

MONCADA LABRADOR LEIDY SOFIA

ID:531154

UNIMINUTO CORPORACIÓN UNIVERSITARIA MINUTO DE DIOS

ADMINISTRACIÓN DE EMPRESAS
BOGOTÁ D.C.
2018
COHERENCE PARAGRAPHS
MY WAY OF DRESSING IN MY WORK

The following paragraphs represent weak and strong examples of coherence.

Weak example: for me, the worst of my First job of saleswoman is the uniform. All the
saleswomen had to wear this ugly brown striped sweater. The shirts were polyester.
Sometimes, someone you know comes in. Now I have a job in a bank and I go out to lunch
with my friends.

Strong example: for me, the worst thing about my previous job was the uniform. In the
last place where I worked, all the saleswomen had to wear an ugly brown striped sweater.
Underneath we had to wear an even uglier polyester shirt. Sometimes, someone I knew
would come to the warehouse "Carrefour street 80" and I would be ashamed of my attire.
Now I have a job in an office, where I can wear my own clothes, I feel more beautiful, I fix
my hair, I paint my nails red,