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Universidad Nacional de Villa María

Lengua Inglesa I

Práctico 2

10th September 2020

Marina Guevara

Pre-writing Stage

Edinburgh: strange food, kind people, beautiful places, old castles, interesting story, variety of

museums, amazing culture.

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Edinburgh: my dream city

I. I admire Edinburgh and I want to live there in a near future.

A. Geographical features

1. Loch Ness

2. Landscapes (Blackford Hill)

B. Story

1. Museums

2. Edinburgh castle

C. Culture

1. Traditional dance (ceilidh)

2. Traditional food (haggis)

II. In brief, Edinburgh is the most picturesque and interesting place in the world, and I hope to

live there one day.

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Edinburgh: my dream city

I admire Edinburgh and I want to live there in a near future. The first reason to admire Edinburgh is
its geographical features. There are lots of beautiful places to visit and to experience. A good example
can be the Loch Ness Lake. This lake is very famous and deep. Loch Ness is also said to be inhabited by
an aquatic monster. Other gorgeous geographical features of Edinburgh are its beautiful landscapes. For
instance, there is the Blackford Hill, which is a little hill that offers a magnificent view of the city. The
second reason to love this city is its story. In Edinburgh, it is impossible to ignore its interesting story
and not to make a stopover in all the museums where you can learn about it. Another option is to visit
some castles like the Edinburgh Castle, which is one of the most exciting historic sites in the city.
Finally, I want to highlight its culture. The traditional dance is the ceilidh, which is incredibly fun and
suitable for all ages. A typical dish is called haggis. It seems ugly but inhabitants say that it is
tasty. In brief, Edinburgh is the most picturesque and interesting place in the world, and I hope to live
there one day.

Good try!