Josue Teran

PEER CORRECTION

Read the following paragraphs written by your classmates. Then edit them using a more
formal and appropriate style. Include vocabulary from the topic: House – Home page 130
( COLLOCATIONS)

A. A. I live in an apartment of 4 floors, it was the last one, it is conveniently located

because all the stuff is near the house, the room is brightly and have an impressive
window, also it is comfortably because it is warm and the living room is elegantly
decorated and has a beautiful furniture.

B. B. I have been living near a mall in Quito city, the house is cold even though is
furnished with just a few stuffs, the living room is empty and it is decorated with a few
paintings, it has been built to be a business that is the reason the house is light and
airy, the most comfortable place at the house is the dining room the reason is that it
has a lot of furniture it does not look cramped and cluttered but it feels like a neat and
tidy area””

C. dear readers “I usually live in a house in Quito sir, in the north. The house is very
ideally pleasant because in the surroundings we have several shops which helps
numerously, the house has a tastefully decoration according of the idea of my of my
genetic mom, to finish I think the house has a comfortably furnished,”

D. I present my humble home dear that is located in the Santa Lucia sector around this
there are several residential complexes, near my house there is a street where you can
examine out to exercise or go cycling, I consider sir that it is in a positive location
because it is close to malls which makes it much easier to get around”

E. Dear Sir I live in a place called sector Montecerin, in a building called Olympus. I have
an apartment there with my parent, it's just the two of us so it's not a considerable
apartment. It has 98 square meter and 4 floors, but I am really cheerful with that
thanks to is magnificent warm and cozy, and it feels like home. Also is neat and tidy
because my mom love order