Corrections/Suggestions Action Taken: Page the action taken:
given:
1. Look for a We change the theme in a
generalized theme way that shows results and which can cover based on the pupil’s either all the comments. positive/negative codes. 2. A theme should be Since this type of research supported by any is not common, we only claims, articles, found articles instead of research paper or theories and research theories. papers.
3. Conclusion part We deleted some lines that
should not include shows any suggestion in any suggestion. the conclusion part.
4. Teachers should be We put the teachers in the
the first one to be first number to be recommended since recommended first. they are the ones who teaches children.
5. Recommendation for We change the
parents is not related recommendation for to the paper. parents that is related to the math shortcuts. We include the school administrators and 6. Include school supervisors in the administrators or recommendation. supervisors together with the principal recommendation.