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Literary Diagnostic Essay
Literary Diagnostic Essay
Zachary Williams
Mrs. Cramer
18 December 2020
What would you do to achieve justice? The Children of Blood and Bone is an extremely
intriguing novel that explores that question through enlightening themes and ideas. The story is
about a diverse group of main characters who are attempting to restore magic. Zelie, a young girl
with a newfound magical power of the dead, Amari, a royal princess who fled from a capital
with a vital artifact, and Tzain, Zelie’s brother who proves unmatched in physicality, are on a
quest, on a time limit, and up against grand foes in order the complete a ritual that would bring
back magic to the abused race of diviners in Orisha. The book masterfully carries out this plot,
while also exploring ideas of oppression and the fight against it, as well as other important
sentiments such as self-love, the ability to change, and numerous others. One of the biggest ways
the author expresses these themes is through the characters. Tomi Adeyemi’s The Children of
Blood and Bone is a captivating read because she successfully creates characters who are
The first idea that should be mentioned about the characters is how realistic and relatable
they are. Possibly the biggest example of this in the book is the main character Zelie. On page
25, Adeyemi allows the reader to learn about the death of Zelie’s Mama, which is later revealed
to an extremely violent, cruel, and unjust circumstance. Throughout the book, more and more is
learned about Zelie’s traumas as she experiences more in real time, but this death is an obvious
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mental toll on Zelie and is the main source of numerous character foibles. Possibly the biggest
flaw is that her actions are purely driven from vengeance rather than anything else. Having the
protagonist of the book clearly portray and be based upon such a raw and “villainous” emotions
is a rare occasion that typically puts them on a negative path, but in this circumstance, it only
makes Zelie more realistic as a character. These justified emotions humble and humanize Zelie,
and allow people to connect with her character on a deeper level on concepts such as loss of a
loved one or faith all the way to negative emotions. Speaking of loved ones, the book also
contains incredibly well executed interpersonal relationships and interactions. The audience
learns about the family dynamic of the royal family in chapter 3 (Adeyemi). It can be obviously
inferred that this is an abusive and broken family for various reasons, such as the way the father
would force the two children to sword fight until near death or the way the mother would force
the children to be silent. This is in stark contrast to the way the other main family mentioned in
the book functions, where there is a system of unconditional trust, love, and support. These two
examples just go to show the vast range of bonds the author makes an effort to create. These
multiple takes on various character relations allow more chances for the characters involved to
become more realistic and relatable to a reader. Overall, the characters are beautifully written
and thought out as to make them more realistic, which truly does captivate the reader.
The second idea that Adeyemi executes perfectly is making the characters dynamic and
developmental arc. The line “‘I am a princess, not a prop’” (page 264) perfectly depicts this
growth (Adeyemi). It takes the entirety of the book for Amari’s character to truly become what
the audience desires of her. She went from being feeble and complacent to being called “the
lionaire,” one of the strongest mystical beasts in the book. Through various trials and tasks, such
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as rallying a group of diviners to perform a prison break to killing her own father who was the
tyrannical king, she realizes her strength and abilities. This is just one of the countless examples
of character growth and developmental arcs that happen in the book that hold the reader’s
attention. Another important character in the book that had a rather intriguing character
development was Inan, Amari’s brother. Page 322 contains a piece of his puzzling stance in the
story. This is when he decides to team up with Zelie to raid a camp and get the last artifact for
the ritual (Adeyemi). The reason why this is such a strange circumstance is because up to this
point, he was the antagonist. This is an extremely obvious start of the trope of a villain to hero
arc, but even more interestingly, he does not go on it. All throughout the story he continues to be
the antagonist, even while saving and helping the protagonists. He falls in love with the
protagonist, and yet still goes against her. He finds out that his dad is in fact an evil tyrant yet is
still trying to do his princely duty. Magic runs through his veins, yet he is still trying to destroy
it. This constant shifting in his character is just one of the examples of continuous flux in
character mindsets. These dynamic viewpoints of multiple characters give them in depth layers
that the reader must unfold piece by piece, character by character, giving this book an additional
edge. To summarize, the characters that Adeyemi creates are constantly changing, making the
In conclusion, Adeyemi’s ability to write beautiful characters that are realistic and
dynamic makes her book, The Children of Blood and Bone, absolutely captivating. She was able
to write out characters that are always changing and growing in unpredicted ways that hold the
reader’s attention. The characters were also written to be both unconventional and conventional,
allowing them to reach out to a larger audience and be more believable. Tomi Adeyemi’s work
Works Cited
Adeyemi, Tomi. The Children of Blood and Bones. New York: Henry Holt Books for Young