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Rivers Project 2 Final Draft
Rivers Project 2 Final Draft
Paige Rivers
ENC2135, Spring Term
Amy Gulick
19 March, 2021
Second Draft, 1501 Words
Throughout the past twenty years, Business critics have questioned whether work
degree’s past reputation of a quick, direct pathway to success quickly faded due to a large gap
between the program curriculum and graduates’ ability to translate the managerial skills into a
work environment. Since then, corporate professionals and recruiters have begun to place a
higher value on job experience over the degree itself. Valuing work experience over the degree
remains a pressing issue for students currently in an MBA program and degree holders regarding
the hiring process, placing their employee status equivalent to non-degree holders despite the
immense amount of time, money, and effort spent earning the degree. Two artifacts, an online
video, Is an MBA or Master’s Degree Hurting Your Job Search?- Coaching Moment, and an
Based Management (EBMGT) Systematic Review (SR), offer opposing views as to whether work
experience or an MBA should be superior. The online video explains how an MBA can favor
degree holders from a career coach’s perspective; in contrast, the research essay statistically
explains why work experience becomes the deciding factor during the hiring process. The
following analysis will compare and contrast how the two different artifacts use genre, tone,
The first artifact, an online video published by Work It Daily, explains why an MBA
prevails over work experience and how degree holders can change recruiters’ hesitancy
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regarding employment considerations. Like the video, a digital story describes narratives using
digital tools published on public websites like YouTube. The composer incorporates specific
digital features like displaying public comments that exemplify the struggle in finding well-
qualified jobs for MBA holders. Other features include responses or commentary and contrasting
backgrounds and video angles whenever the speaker emphasizes a key idea or advice. In the
video, a career coach, J.T. O’Donnell, briefly explains that business recruiters may not hire an
MBA graduate because “some employers do not believe that all those case studies you may have
learned will actually help” (Work It Daily, 2018). Because of this, industries look for candidates
who can demonstrate managerial competencies through credible experience, not as much through
a textbook. When O’Donnell commented on the recruiter’s perspective, the colorful background
changed to a dark gray color. Changing the color of the background added another form of
Just as O’Donnell explains the current issues among employers frowning upon MBA
graduates, she also offers advice to overcome those challenges. In the digital story, she
emphasizes, “Do not immediately go straight into an MBA program” (Work It Daily, 2018). By
refraining from the urge to directly enter into an MBA program and earning internships or job
opportunities, graduates can gain some experience to better strengthen the managerial
competencies through an MBA program employers expect. O’Donnell later comments, “By
entering an MBA program a little later than initially planned, you combine your experience with
what you will learn from the curriculum” (Work It Daily, 2018). Earning some experience, then
following through with the MBA curriculum, will effectively prepare graduates to master their
skills and succeed compared to those who just earned work experience. Jarie Bolander, a famous
writer in The Daily MBA, defends O’Donnell’s argument when he elaborates, “The ‘sweet spot’
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may be when the person has enough relevant work experience to fully engage in coursework, but
plan on working after they earn their degree so they can take full advantage of the potential
professional benefits'' (The Daily MBA, 2014). Like O’Donnell, Bolander argues that earning
even a year’s worth of work experience, then receiving an MBA, will set degree holders apart
and valued higher in the eyes of recruiters, unlike those without the degree, despite having more
work field experience. When O’Donnell shared her advice, the screen color and camera angle
changed as another form of emphasis on the content. Including different digital features establish
a clearer vision of the current conflict between work experience versus earning an MBA.
The second artifact explains the opposing view of why work experience outweighs an
MBA. An informative report uses research and data analysis like surveys, bar graphs, and charts
to argue the current issue. Dr. Randall D. Fisher, a research professor at the University of
Maryland University College, exposes the lack of MBA graduates’ ability to master the
managerial skills employers expect. In doing so, he appeals to the rhetorical approach of logos in
MBA Degree. Within his research, the author surveyed over sixty MBA students and industry
recruiters regarding nineteen managerial skills employers look for, such as leadership, critical
thinking, networking, collaborating, etc. Out of the nineteen skills, only six were considered
mastered (Fisher, 2019). Due to the graduates’ inability to model the expected skills, the degree
becomes less valuable to other deciding factors, like learning the same skills in a workplace
setting. Fisher also tested a sample of MBA graduates to determine the impact of an MBA
degree on job performance. The scale measures 0-4, 4 referring to “Very High Impact” and 0
referring to “No Impact” (Fisher, 2019). After testing, the category “Competence” measured
2.95, “Commitment” measured 2.84, “Caring” measured 3.05, and “Credibility” measured 3.20,
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all of which fell under the scale of “High Impact” (Fisher, 2019). Though the data lists these
strategies as highly impactful, the job performance level, which employers also very much value,
measures much lower because of their inability to show their skills. As a result, employers want
fewer MBA graduates because of this prevailing flaw in the degree curriculum. Therefore, those
with more practice in a corporate environment who become proficient in the same skills.
Although the two artifacts portray opposite sides to why corporate employers value work
experience more than an MBA or vice versa, they use similar rhetorical approaches to defend
their arguments. Both composers target MBA and non-degree holders, employers, and Business
undergraduates who may be interested in earning an MBA, all who form the audience. O'Donnell
and Fisher convey similar diction, using common business-related terminology and a formal tone
to exemplify confidence, professionalism, and credibility. For example, throughout the video and
research paper, the author and narrator often use terms and phrases such as “MBA, job
performance, advanced degree, case studies, theoretical scenarios” to keep the viewers and
readers on the same topic and mindset. Using unrelated terms could confuse audience members,
leading their focus and understanding astray and ultimately creating the wrong idea the
composers did not expect. The authors also incorporate ethos to appeal to the emotional aspects
of the struggles behind earning an MBA and then either succeeding or failing to obtain a
sufficient job position in return. In the video, O’Donnell introduces her job position and past
experience as a career coach to establish authority in the following content, offering viewers
reassurance and validity in her advice. She also reveals aspects of ethos through her clear and
encouraging tone. The way she implores readers to hear her creates a trusting relationship as
well. Simultaneously, the writers incorporate logos through scientifically approved statistics and
data to evaluate the success or lack of ability to transfer skills employers value enough to place
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the degree higher than work experience. Even though the artifact composers use similar
rhetorical approaches, both succeed in effectively offering two opposing sides to the issue of
employers struggling to determine whether work experience or an MBA should be valued more
regarding the hiring process. Students who graduate with just a degree and minimum work
experience than those without the degree but have many years of work experience create a rising
issue for business employers for the past twenty years. Through his peer-reviewed statistics and
research, Dr. Randall D. Fisher proved that recruiters nowadays prefer work experience over the
degree due to MBA graduates’ lack of effectively demonstrating the managerial competencies
they were supposed to learn through the program curriculum. They believe applicants with more
work field experience learn and master the same skills as MBA students for fewer consequences
and risks. However, J.T. O’Donnell counters Fisher’s arguments through her professional,
persuasive explanations and advice as a career coach. She emphasizes that if degree holders can
clearly show their accomplishments and techniques that make themselves more valuable to the
company, employers will choose the MBA graduates over the others. The struggle to determine
whether work experience or an MBA is more significant than the other, and ultimately the
Works Cited
Bolander, J. (2014, January 15). Why You Need Work Experience before Enrolling in an MBA
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assessment-the-value-of-an-mba-degree-an-evidencedbased-management-ebmgt-
systematic-review-sr-8043.html
Work It Daily. (2018, July 16). Is an MBA or Master’s Degree Hurting Your Job
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