EE Northgate High School Senior Project Mentor/Expert Critique Dear Mentor/Expert, Thank you for agreeing to critique this paper to Maget Soars With this form, the student should provide the most recent draft of his/her Senior Project paper. Please read the paper for content, keeping in mind it will be revised. The English teacher will critique the paper for requirements, appropriate style, and mechanics. You are to read to ensure that the facts and research are accurate and sufficient. Please make comments on the margins of the draft, answer the questions on this sheet, and feel free to add any additional comments on the back. This paper is a requirement for the student's graduation, so your help is appreciated. 1. Is there any misinformation or has the writer made any factual errors? yes. no, Va Comments: 2. Can you suggest sources for additional research for this topic, such as materials to read or watch and persons to interview? . This paper fs Very well researched ancl Bcc urote, Nice yb! 3. What information can you give to help the student improve the content of the paper (including your own knowledge of the topic)? L wWouldn'+ cha a tb » Excellent Content, Well aN ized. 4, Ihave read this paper and discussed my comments with the student. yes Mentor’ name and qui Mentors signature: Phone number: 4] 125- W747 Mentor's Email Address: sbelsdnnralllam2872e=araal COW Additional comments: