“The Striders
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° INTRODUCTION
It is one of the most oft-quoted poem by A.K. Ramanujan. It is fairly
representive also of his themes and technique. It was the title poem of
Ramanujan’s first anthology published in 1966. It is marked by complex and
multi-layered imagism. Its outward simplicity is deceptive. It has literal,
figurative as well as spiritual connotations and therefore the poem has an
open-ended nature, with a number of possible readings and interpretations.
The rime and rhythm pattern add to the artistry which envelopes the intricate
meaning of the poem.
TEXT
And search
{for certain thin-
‘stemmed, bubble-eyed water bugs.
See them perch
on dry capillary legs
weightless
on the ripple skin
ofa stream.
No, not only prophets
walk on water. This bug sits
ona landslide of lights
and drowns eye-
deep
into its tiny strip
of sky.
EXPLAINATION (LINE: 1-8) ‘The poem seems to celebrate the here and now,
the present. It emphasizes the importance of particulars. The poet under the
influence of the imagists, presents the image of striders floating on top of the
ripple skin of a stream. The description of the striders is most picturesque.
They have been described as “thin-stemmed” and “bubble-eyed”. Their legs
are like dry capillaries. The surface of the stream has been described as
“ripple skin”. The opening is quite abrupt and dramatic in the manner of a
typical metaphysical poem. The speaker asks us to search for “striders” and
watch how, with their thin legs, they sit with remarkable felicity on the waterysurface of a stream. The juxtaposition of motion and stasis isremarkable : the
fixity of the water bugs contrasts very clearly with the movementllike a ripple
of the surface of the water. This inherent opposition in the images, enlivens
the whole picture in the readers’ mind.
EXPLAINATION: (tines 9-16)
. -In the second stanza the whole image in the first
part—of the striders fixed against a rippling background—acquires a rich
density of meaning with suggestive parallels and implicit allusions. At the
surface level, the idea is that like prophets, these water bugs are also capable
of walking on water. The obvious parallelism fuses the real and the spiritual.
This strider, sitting on the “landslide of lights”, drowns or dives “eye-deep”
into water which reflects the sky. “This bug” is capable of sitting on a
“landslide of lights” (divine light) and of drowning. The allusion to the
Hindu god Vishnuis obvious. Vishnu stands still in the fluxand his devotees
dive or drown into his depths. Set against this background, the act of drowning,
by thé water bug (which may be taken to stand for the poet-persona) into the
depths of water (which may be taken as symbolic of Lord Vishnu) would
scem the literary equivalent of the endeavour of the devotee tomerge with the
divine. The stanza can be taken to stand for the act of transcending the
immediate world and entering into the divine.