Type 1 (Bad answer)

In 1960, X disease incidence stood up at 100 cases. In 1965, X

disease incidence remained stable. In 1970, X disease incidence
increased to 200. In 1975, X disease incidence skyrocketted by 300.
In 1980, X disease incidence stayed constant. In 1985, X disease
incidence fell to 350. In 1990, X disease incidence dropped by 350.

Type 2 (Good Answer)

The line graph explains X disease cases in Someland from 1960 to

1995.
In 1960, X disease incidence stood up at 100 cases. This number
remained stable in 1965. In 1970, the cases slightly increased to
200 before skyrocketing to 500 cases in 1975. Ten years later, X
disease incidence stayed constant at 500 cases before falling
slightly to 350 cases in 1985. In 1990, X disease incidence
significantly dropped by 350 cases.
To conclude, the highest rate of X disease cases in Someland were
in the middle of the period, while in the end of period, the
incidence dropped dramatically to zero.
IELTS Writing Task 1 (3 paragraphs)
Writing structure
1. Introduction
2. Body
3. Conclusion (to conclude / in conclusion)