DICTION: The us army does not want revenge, it is thirsting for revenge. The writers words choice is in describing and portying of how the door was shut. He used the word "thuds" to bring out the sound of the door shutting. It was a sunny day and | spent most of my time laying in my green garden. Suddenly | felt something slithering back of my foot like a snake and my reaction was transfixed.The writers word choice is in describing and portraying the real picture of the movement of the snake on his feet. He uses the words like "slithering" to show the movement and "transfixed" to show the reaction/feeling he got. VOICE: The writers voice was a full of fear and shocked. He uses the words like "slithering" to show the movement and "transfixed" to show the reaction/feeling he got. [ Admiration, respect, praising, anger, hatred, full of fear, shocked, happy,SYNTAX: The writer has used bad English and the words are not arranged properly. Eg: Abdiweli not good today. The writer used Good English and the words are arranged appropriately. Eg: Abdiweli is feeling good today. EERECIE The story made me very knowledgeable about somalia. The story reminded me of when | was still young and my mom did not let me go outside to play.The story was very humourus and made me laugh. The story makes me understand of how unfair the law is.