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IELTS General Training Task 1 Writing model answer 11

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your local museum has asked for feedback on your recent

visit. Write to the museum. In your letter

• Tell them what you liked and what you didn’t like
• Make some suggestions for improvement
• Describe some other exhibits you would like to see

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear…

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Johnson,

I have been asked by your office to write to you regarding your museum with some points
of view about my recent visit.

I would like to say first of all that I think you have done an excellent job modernizing the
place, and I have recommend it as a day trip to a number of friends. The layout of the
building is bright and inviting, and the items you have on display are well laid out.

However, I do feel that some of the exhibits could have been more clearly labeled, with
some additional details about where they were discovered and what they would have been
used for. Some of the displays my son and I were looking at were a little confusing.

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I would also be very interested to see artifacts that may be available from other cultures. I
am particularly interested in Egyptian history, for example, and would certainly come again
if there were any displays like that.

Thanks for your interest in my feedback.

J Hollings

(173 words)

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