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The

Hitchhiker Lucille Fletcher

CAST OF CHARACTERS
Orson Welles Girl
Ronald Adams Operator
Adams’s Mother Long-Distance Operator
Voice of Hitchhiker Albuquerque Operator
Mechanic New York Operator
Henry, a sleepy man Mrs. Whitney
Woman’s Voice, Henry’s wife

Welles. Good evening, this is Orson Welles . . . of that dear old phosphorescent1 foolishness that
(music in) Personally I’ve never met anybody people who don’t like ghost stories don’t like,
who didn’t like a good ghost story, but I know a then again I promise you we haven’t got it. What
lot of people who think there are a lot of people we do have is a thriller. If it’s half as good as
who don’t like a good ghost story. For the benefit we think it is you can call it a shocker, and we
of these, at least, I go on record at the outset present it proudly and without apologies. After
of this evening’s entertainment with the sober 20 all a story doesn’t have to appeal to the heart—
assurance that although blood may be curdled it can also appeal to the spine. Sometimes you
on this program none will be spilt. There’s no want your heart to be warmed—sometimes you
10 shooting, knifing, throttling, axing or poisoning want your spine to tingle. The tingling, it’s to be
here. No clanking chains, no cobwebs, no bony hoped, will be quite audible as you listen tonight
and/or hairy hands appearing from secret panels to The Hitchhiker—That’s the name of our story,
or, better yet, bedroom curtains. If it’s any part The Hitchhiker—

1. phosphorescent (fJsQfE-rDsPEnt): glowing with a cold light.

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(sound: automobile wheels humming over concrete Mother. I know. But you’ll be careful, won’t you.
road ) Promise me you’ll be extra careful. Don’t fall
(music: something weird and shuddery) asleep—or drive fast—or pick up any strangers on
30 Adams. I am in an auto camp on Route Sixty-
the road . . .
six just west of Gallup, New Mexico. If I tell it Adams. Of course not! You’d think I was still
perhaps it will help me. It will keep me from 70 seventeen to hear you talk—
going mad. But I must tell this quickly. I am not Mother. And wire me as soon as you get to
mad now. I feel perfectly well, except that I am Hollywood, won’t you, son?
running a slight temperature. My name is Ronald Adams. Of course I will. Now don’t you worry.
Adams. I am thirty-six years of age, unmarried, There isn’t anything going to happen. It’s just
tall, dark, with a black mustache. I drive a 1940 eight days of perfectly simple driving on smooth,
Ford V-8, license number 6V-7989. I was born decent, civilized roads, with a hotdog or a
in Brooklyn. All this I know. I know that I am at hamburger stand every ten miles . . . (fade)
40 this moment perfectly sane. That it is not I, who (sound: auto hum)
has gone mad—but something else—something
utterly beyond my control. But I must speak (music in)
quickly. At any moment the link with life may 80 Adams. I was in excellent spirits. The drive ahead
break. This may be the last thing I ever tell on of me, even the loneliness, seemed like a lark. But
earth . . . the last night I ever see the stars. . . . I reckoned without him.
(music in) (Music changes to something weird and empty.)
Adams. Six days ago I left Brooklyn, to drive to
California . . .
Mother. Goodbye, son. Good luck to you, my
50 boy . . .
Adams. Goodbye, mother. Here—give me a kiss,
and then I’ll go . . .
Mother. I’ll come out with you to the car.
Adams. No. It’s raining. Stay here at the door.
Hey—what is this? Tears? I thought you promised
me you wouldn’t cry.
Mother. I know dear. I’m sorry. But I—do hate to
see you go.
Adams. I’ll be back. I’ll only be on the coast three
60 months.
Mother. Oh—it isn’t that. It’s just—the trip.
Ronald—I wish you weren’t driving.
Adams. Oh—mother. There you go again. People
do it every day.

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Adams. Crossing Brooklyn Bridge that morning Mechanic. Certainly, sir. Check your oil, sir?
in the rain, I saw a man leaning against the Adams. No, thanks.
cables. He seemed to be waiting for a lift. There (sound: gas being put into car . . . bell tinkle, et
were spots of fresh rain on his shoulders. He was cetera)
carrying a cheap overnight bag in one hand. He
was thin, nondescript, with a cap pulled down Mechanic. Nice night, isn’t it?
90 over his eyes. He stepped off the walk, and if I Adams. Yes. It—hasn’t been raining here recently,
hadn’t swerved, I’d have hit him. has it?
(sound: terrific skidding) 130 Mechanic. Not a drop of rain all week.
(music in) Adams. Hm. I suppose that hasn’t done your
Adams. I would have forgotten him completely, business any harm.
except that just an hour later, while crossing the Mechanic. Oh—people drive through here all
Pulaski Skyway over the Jersey flats, I saw him kinds of weather. Mostly business, you know.
again. At least, he looked like the same person. There aren’t many pleasure cars out on the
He was standing now, with one thumb pointing turnpike this season of the year.
west. I couldn’t figure out how he’d got there, but Adams. I suppose not. (casually) What about
100 I thought probably one of those fast trucks had hitchhikers?
picked him up, beaten me to the Skyway, and let Mechanic (half laughing). Hitchhikers here?
him off. I didn’t stop for him. Then—late that
140 Adams. What’s the matter? Don’t you ever see any?
night, I saw him again.
Mechanic. Not much. If we did, it’d be a sight for
(music changing)
sore eyes.
Adams. It was on the new Pennsylvania Turn-
Adams. Why?
pike between Harrisburg and Pittsburgh. It’s 265
miles long, with a very high speed limit. I was just Mechanic. A guy’d be a fool who started out to
slowing down for one of the tunnels—when I saw hitch rides on this road. Look at it. It’s 265 miles
him—standing under an arc light by the side of long, there’s practically no speed limit, and it’s a
110 the road. I could see him quite distinctly. The bag, straightaway. Now what car is going to stop to
the cap, even the spots of fresh rain spattered over pick up a guy under those conditions? Would
his shoulders. He hailed me this time . . . you stop?
Voice (very spooky and faint). Hall-ooo . . . (echo as 150 Adams. No. (slowly, with puzzled emphasis) Then
through tunnel ) Hall-ooo . . . ! you’ve never seen anybody?
Adams. I stepped on the gas like a shot. That’s Mechanic. Nope. Mebbe they get the lift before the
lonely country through the Alleghenies,2 and turnpike starts—I mean, you know—just before
I had no intention of stopping. Besides, the the toll house—but then it’d be a mighty long ride.
coincidence, or whatever it was, gave me the Most cars wouldn’t want to pick up a guy for that
willies.3 I stopped at the next gas station. long a ride. And you know—this is pretty lonesome
country here—mountains, and woods . . . You ain’t
120 (sound: auto tires screeching to stop . . . horn honk)
seen anybody like that, have you?
Mechanic. Yes, sir.
Adams. No. (quickly) Oh no, not at all. It was—
Adams. Fill her up. 160 just a—technical question.

2. Alleghenies (BlQG-gAPnCz): The Allegheny Mountains, a range extending from northern Pennsylvania to
western Virginia.
3. gave me the willies: made me nervous.

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Mechanic. I see. Well—that’ll be just a dollar (sound: car starts with squeal of wheels on dirt . . .
forty-nine—with the tax . . . (fade) into auto hum)
(sound: auto hum up) (music in)
(music changing) Adams. After I got the car back onto the road
Adams. The thing gradually passed from my again, I felt like a fool. Yet the thought of picking
mind, as sheer coincidence. I had a good night’s him up, of having him sit beside me was somehow
sleep in Pittsburgh. I did not think about the unbearable. Yet, at the same time, I felt, more
man all next day—until just outside of Zanesville, than ever, unspeakably alone.
Ohio, I saw him again. (sound: auto hum up)
170 (music: dark, ominous note) 210 Adams. Hour after hour went by. The fields, the
Adams. It was a bright sunshiny afternoon. The towns ticked off, one by one. The lights changed.
peaceful Ohio fields, brown with the autumn I knew now that I was going to see him again.
stubble, lay dreaming in the golden light. I was And though I dreaded the sight, I caught myself
driving slowly, drinking it in, when the road searching the side of the road, waiting for him to
suddenly ended in a detour. In front of the barrier, appear.
he was standing. (sound: auto hum up . . . car screeches to a halt . . .
(music in) impatient honk two or three times . . . door being
Adams. Let me explain about his appearance before
unbolted )
I go on. I repeat. There was nothing sinister about Sleepy Man’s Voice. Yep? What is it? What do you
180 him. He was as drab as a mud fence. Nor was his 220 want?
attitude menacing. He merely stood there, waiting, Adams (breathless). You sell sandwiches and pop
almost drooping a little, the cheap overnight bag here, don’t you?
in his hand. He looked as though he had been Voice (cranky). Yep. We do. In the daytime. But
waiting there for hours. Then he looked up. He we’re closed up now for the night.
hailed me. He started to walk forward. Adams. I know. But—I was wondering if you
Voice (far off ). Hall-ooo . . . Hall-ooo . . . could possibly let me have a cup of coffee—black
Adams. I had stopped the car, of course, for the coffee.
detour. And for a few moments, I couldn’t seem Voice. Not at this time of night, mister. My wife’s
to find the new road. I knew he must be thinking the cook and she’s in bed. Mebbe further down
190 that I had stopped for him. 230 the road—at the Honeysuckle Rest . . .
Voice (closer). Hall-ooo . . . Hallll . . . ooo . . . (sound: door squeaking on hinges as though being
(sound: gears jamming . . . sound of motor turning closed )
over hard . . . nervous accelerator) Adams. No—no. Don’t shut the door. (shakily)
Voice (closer). Halll . . . oooo . . . Listen—just a minute ago, there was a man
Adams (panicky). No. Not just now. Sorry . . . standing here—right beside this stand—a
Voice (closer). Going to California?
suspicious looking man . . .
Woman’s Voice (from distance). Hen-ry? Who is it,
(sound: starter starting . . . gears jamming)
Hen-ry?
Adams (as though sweating blood). No. Not today.
Henry. It’s nobuddy, mother. Just a feller thinks he
The other way. Going to New York. Sorry . . .
240 wants a cup of coffee. Go back into bed.
200 sorry . . .

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Adams. I don’t mean to disturb you. But you see, occasional log cabin, seemingly deserted, broke
I was driving along—when I just happened to the monotony of the wild wooded landscape.
look—and there he was . . . I had seen him at that roadside stand; I knew I
Henry. What was he doing? 270 would see him again—perhaps at the next turn
Adams. Nothing. He ran off—when I stopped
of the road. I knew that when I saw him next, I
the car. would run him down . . .
Henry. Then what of it? That’s nothing to wake
(sound: auto hum up)
a man in the middle of his sleep about. (sternly) Adams. But I did not see him again until late next
Young man, I’ve got a good mind to turn you over afternoon . . .
250 to the sheriff. (sound: of railroad warning signal at crossroads)
Adams. But—I— Adams. I had stopped the car at a sleepy little
Henry. You’ve been taking a nip, that’s what you’ve junction just across the border into Oklahoma—
been doing. And you haven’t got anything better to let a train pass by—when he appeared, across
to do than to wake decent folk out of their hard- 280 the tracks, leaning against a telephone pole.
earned sleep. Get going. Go on. (sound: distant sound of train chugging . . . bell
Adams. But—he looked as though he were going ringing steadily)
to rob you. Adams (very tense). It was a perfectly airless, dry
Henry. I ain’t got nothin’ in this stand to lose. day. The red clay of Oklahoma was baking under
Now—on your way before I call out Sheriff the south-western sun. Yet there were spots of
260 Oakes. (fades) fresh rain on his shoulders. I couldn’t stand that.
(sound: auto hum up) Without thinking, blindly, I started the car across
the tracks.
Adams. I got into the car again and drove on
slowly. I was beginning to hate the car. If I could (sound: train chugging closer)
have found a place to stop . . . to rest a little. But 290 Adams. He didn’t even look up at me. He was
I was in the Ozark Mountains of Missouri now. staring at the ground. I stepped on the gas hard,
The few resort places there were closed. Only an veering the wheel sharply toward him. I could

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hear the train in the distance now, but I didn’t Adams. Hitchhike much?
care. Then something went wrong with the car. It Girl. Sure. Only it’s tough sometimes, in these
stalled right on the tracks. great open spaces, to get the breaks.
(sound: Train chugging closer. Above this sound of car Adams. I should think it would be. Though I’ll
stalling.) bet if you get a good pick-up in a fast car, you can
Adams. The train was coming closer. I could hear get to places faster than—say, another person, in
its bell ringing, and the cry of its whistle. Still another car?
300 he stood there. And now—I knew that he was Girl. I don’t get you.
beckoning—beckoning me to my death. 340 Adams. Well, take me, for instance. Suppose I’m
(sound: Train chugging close. Whistle blows wildly. driving across the country, say, at a nice steady
Then train rushes up and by with pistons going, et clip of about 45 miles an hour. Couldn’t a girl
cetera.) like you, just standing beside the road, waiting for
Adams. Well—I frustrated him that time. The lifts, beat me to town after town—provided she
starter had worked at last. I managed to back up. got picked up every time in a car doing from 65
But when the train passed, he was gone. I was all to 70 miles an hour?
alone in the hot dry afternoon. Girl. I dunno. Maybe she could and maybe she
(sound: Train retreating. Crickets begin to sing.) couldn’t. What difference does it make?
310 (music in) Adams. Oh—no difference. It’s just a—crazy idea
Adams. After that, I knew I had to do something. 350 I had sitting here in the car.
I didn’t know who this man was or what he Girl (laughing). Imagine spending your time in a
wanted of me. I only knew that from now on, I swell car thinking of things like that!
must not let myself be alone on the road for one Adams. What would you do instead?
moment. Girl (admiringly). What would I do? If I was a good-
(sound: Auto hum up. Slow down. Stop. Door looking fellow like yourself? Why—I’d just enjoy
opening.) myself—every minute of the time. I’d sit back, and
Adams. Hello, there. Like a ride? relax, and if I saw a good-looking girl along the side
Girl. What do you think? How far you going? of the road . . . (sharply) Hey! Look out!
320 Adams. Amarillo . . . I’ll take you to Amarillo. Adams (breathlessly). Did you see him too?
Girl. Amarillo, Texas. 360 Girl. See who?
Adams. I’ll drive you there. Adams. That man. Standing beside the barbed
Girl. Gee!
wire fence.
Girl. I didn’t see—anybody. There wasn’t nothing,
(sound: Door closes—car starts.)
but a bunch of steers—and the barbed wire fence.
(music in) What did you think you was doing? Trying to run
Girl. Mind if I take off my shoes? My dogs4 are into the barbed wire fence?
killing me. Adams. There was a man there, I tell you . . . a
Adams. Go right ahead. thin gray man, with an overnight bag in his hand.
Girl. Gee, what a break this is. A swell car, a decent And I was trying to—run him down.
330 guy, and driving all the way to Amarillo. All I 370 Girl. Run him down? You mean—kill him?
been getting so far is trucks.

4. dogs: a slang term for feet.

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Adams. He’s a sort of—phantom. I’m trying to 410 Girl. You know what I think you need, big boy?
get rid of him—or else prove that he’s real. But Not a girl friend. Just a good dose of sleep. . . .
(desperately) you say you didn’t see him back there? There, I got it now.
You’re sure? (sound: door opens . . . slams)
Girl. I didn’t see a soul. And as far as that’s Adams. No. You can’t go.
concerned, mister . . . Girl (screams). Leave your hands offa me, do you
Adams. Watch for him the next time, then. Keep hear! Leave your—
watching. Keep your eyes peeled on the road. Adams. Come back here, please, come back.
He’ll turn up again—maybe any minute now.
380 (excitedly) There. Look there— (sound: struggle . . . slap . . . footsteps running away
on gravel . . . lowing of steer)
(sound: Auto sharply veering and skidding. Girl
screams.) 420 Adams. She ran from me, as though I were a
monster. A few minutes later, I saw a passing truck
(sound: Crash of car going into barbed wire fence. pick her up. I knew then that I was utterly alone.
Frightened lowing5 of steer.)
(sound: lowing of steer up)
Girl. How does this door work? I—I’m gettin’
outta here. Adams. I was in the heart of the great Texas
prairies. There wasn’t a car on the road after the
Adams. Did you see him that time?
truck went by. I tried to figure out what to do,
Girl (sharply). No. I didn’t see him that time. And how to get hold of myself. If I could find a place
personally, mister, I don’t expect never to see him. to rest. Or even, if I could sleep right here in the
390 All I want to do is to go on living—and I don’t see car for a few hours, along the side of the road . . .
how I will very long driving with you— 430 I was getting my winter overcoat out of the back
Adams. I’m sorry. I—I don’t know what came over seat to use as a blanket, (Hall-ooo) when I saw
me. (frightened) Please—don’t go . . . him coming toward me, (Hall-ooo), emerging
Girl. So if you’ll excuse me, mister— from the herd of moving steer . . .
Adams. You can’t go. Listen, how would you like Voice. Hall-ooo . . . Hall-oooo . . .
to go to California? I’ll drive you to California. (sound: auto starting violently . . . up to steady hum)
Girl. Seeing pink elephants all the way? No thanks. (music in)
Adams (desperately). I could get you a job there. Adams. I didn’t wait for him to come any closer.
You wouldn’t have to be a waitress. I have friends Perhaps I should have spoken to him then,
400 there—my name is Ronald Adams—You can fought it out then and there. For now he began
check up. 440 to be everywhere. Whenever I stopped, even for
(sound: door opening) a moment—for gas, for oil, for a drink of pop, a
Girl. Uhn-hunh. Thanks just the same.
cup of coffee, a sandwich—he was there.
Adams. Listen. Please. For just one minute. Maybe
(music faster)
you think I am half cracked. But this man. You Adams. I saw him standing outside the auto camp
see, I’ve been seeing this man all the way across in Amarillo that night, when I dared to slow
the country. He’s been following me. And if you down. He was sitting near the drinking fountain
could only help me—stay with me—until I reach in a little camping spot just inside the border of
the coast— New Mexico.

5. lowing: mooing.

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(music faster) (music strikes sinister note of finality.)
450 Adams. He was waiting for me outside the Navajo 470 Adams. I was beside myself when I finally reached
Reservation, where I stopped to check my tires. Gallup, New Mexico, this morning. There is an
I saw him in Albuquerque6 where I bought 12 auto camp here—cold, almost deserted at this
gallons of gas . . . I was afraid now, afraid to stop. time of year. I went inside, and asked if there was
I began to drive faster and faster. I was in lunar a telephone. I had the feeling that if only I could
landscape now—the great arid mesa country speak to someone familiar, someone that I loved,
of New Mexico. I drove through it with the I could pull myself together.
indifference of a fly crawling over the face of the (sound: nickel put in slot)
moon.
Operator. Number, please?
(music faster)
Adams. Long distance.
460 Adams. But now he didn’t even wait for me to
480 Operator. Thank you.
stop. Unless I drove at 85 miles an hour over
those endless roads—he waited for me at every (sound: return of nickel; buzz)
other mile. I would see his figure, shadowless, Long-Distance Opr. This is long distance.
flitting before me, still in its same attitude, Adams. I’d like to put in a call to my home in
over the cold and lifeless ground, flitting over Brooklyn, New York. I’m Ronald Adams. The
dried-up rivers, over broken stones cast up by number is Beechwood 2-0828.
old glacial upheavals, flitting in the pure and Long-Distance Opr. Thank you. What is your
cloudless air . . . number?

6. Albuquerque (BlPbE-kûrQkC): a city in central New Mexico.

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Adams. 312. Mrs. Whitney. Yes.
Albuquerque Opr. Albuquerque. Adams. Where’s my mother? Where’s Mrs.
490 Long-Distance Opr. New York for Gallup. (pause) Adams?
New York Opr. New York. Mrs. Whitney. Mrs. Adams is not at home. She is
Long-Distance Opr. Gallup, New Mexico calling
still in the hospital.
Beechwood 2-0828. (fade) Adams. The hospital!
Adams. I had read somewhere that love could Mrs. Whitney. Yes. Who is this calling, please? Is it
banish demons. It was the middle of the morning. 530 a member of the family?
I knew Mother would be home. I pictured her, Adams. What’s she in the hospital for?
tall, white-haired, in her crisp house-dress, going Mrs. Whitney. She’s been prostrated7 for five days.
about her tasks. It would be enough, I thought, Nervous breakdown. But who is this calling?
merely to hear the even calmness of her voice . . . Adams. Nervous breakdown? But—my mother
500 Long-Distance Opr. Will you please deposit three was never nervous . . .
dollars and 85 cents for the first three minutes? Mrs. Whitney. It’s all taken place since the death of
When you have deposited a dollar and a half, will her oldest son, Ronald.
you wait until I have collected the money?
Adams. Death of her oldest son, Ronald . . . ?
(sound: clunk of six coins) Hey—what is this? What number is this?
Long-Distance Opr. All right, deposit another
540 Mrs. Whitney. This is Beechwood 2-0828. It’s all
dollar and a half. been very sudden. He was killed just six days ago in
(sound: clunk of six coins) an automobile accident on the Brooklyn Bridge.
Long-Distance Opr. Will you please deposit the Long-Distance Opr. (breaking in). Your three
remaining 85 cents. minutes are up, sir. (silence) Your three minutes
510 (sound: clunk of four coins) are up, sir. (pause) Your three minutes are up, sir.
Long-Distance Opr. Ready with Brooklyn—go (fade) Sir, your three minutes are up. Your three
ahead please. minutes are up, sir.
Adams. Hello. Adams (in a strange voice). And so, I am sitting
Mrs. Whitney. Mrs. Adams’ residence.
here in this deserted auto camp in Gallup, New
550 Mexico. I am trying to think. I am trying to get
Adams. Hello. Hello—Mother? hold of myself. Otherwise, I shall go mad . . .
Mrs. Whitney (very flat and rather proper . . . dumb, Outside it is night—the vast, soulless night of
too, in a frizzy sort of way). This is Mrs. Adams’ New Mexico. A million stars are in the sky. Ahead
residence. Who is it you wished to speak to, please? of me stretch a thousand miles of empty mesa,
Adams. Why—who’s this? mountains, prairies—desert. Somewhere among
520 Mrs. Whitney. This is Mrs. Whitney. them, he is waiting for me. Somewhere I shall
know who he is, and who . . . I . . . am . . .
Adams. Mrs. Whitney? I don’t know any Mrs.
Whitney. Is this Beechwood 2-0828? (music up)

7. prostrated: in a state of mental collapse.

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After Reading

Comprehension
1. Recall What is Ronald Adams’s original destination? R3.2 Evaluate the structural
elements of the plot (e.g., subplots,
2. Clarify Why does the repeated sight of the hitchhiker give Adams parallel episodes, climax), the plot’s
development, and the way in which
“the willies”? conflicts are (or are not) addressed
and resolved.
3. Clarify What does Adams learn about his mother at the end of the play?

Literary Analysis
4. Make Inferences What kind of relationship did Ronald Adams have with
his mother? Cite evidence to support your answer.
5. Examine Foreshadowing Now that you’ve read the play, is there anything
you’d like to change or add to the first column of your foreshadowing chart?
Make the adjustments and complete the second column. Which use of
foreshadowing most increased your sense of suspense?
6. Analyze the Radio Play Reread lines 377–384. Tell what actions and emotions
are communicated through stage directions and sound effects. Could
listeners fully understand what was taking place in this scene if these
elements weren’t included? Explain.
7. Draw Conclusions Who do you think the hitchhiker is? Give proof from
the play to support your conclusion.
8. Compare Across Texts What are some similarities and differences
between the characters, settings, and endings of “The Tell-Tale “The Tell-Tale Heart” The Hitchhiker
Heart” and The Hitchhiker? Present your answers in a Venn
diagram.
9. Evaluate Plot Development Now that you have compared the
two selections, pick one and share your opinion of its plot’s
development. Use details from the selection to support your
opinion. Remember that strong plot development is usually
suspenseful, coherent, constantly moving ahead (or, at least,
well-paced), and satisfying.

Extension and Challenge


10. Readers’ Circle Ask one member of your group to reread Adams’s last speech
aloud. Then discuss what might happen as he continues his journey. Make
sure your guesses are based on details from the selection.
11. Creative Project: Drama With a small group, choose a scene from The
Hitchhiker that you think is especially suspenseful. Practice performing the
scene, remembering to include sound effects and to follow stage directions.
Then perform for the class. Afterward, explain why your group chose the
scene you did.

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Reading-Writing Connection W2.1abc

Show your understanding of The Hitchhiker by responding to these prompts.


Then complete the Grammar and Writing exercise.

writing prompts self-check


A. Short Response: Evaluate Ronald Adams A good evaluation will . . .
The play opens with Adams telling the listeners, “I • present an opinion about
am not mad.” On the basis of what you learn in the Adams’s mental state
rest of the play, do you agree with his assessment?
• support that opinion with
Write a one-paragraph evaluation of Adams’s sanity.
details from the play

B. Extended Response: Write a Scene An interesting scene will . . .


What if the hitchhiker Adams picked up went to • include dialogue about what
the police to report him? Write a one- or two-page the girl saw or didn’t see while
scene in which she explains to an officer what in the car
happened and what proof she has for thinking
• show whether or not the
Adams might be mad or even dangerous.
officers believe her

grammar and writing


MAINTAIN PRONOUN-ANTECEDENT AGREEMENT An antecedent is the noun or
pronoun to which a pronoun refers. For example, in the following sentence, the
pronoun their refers to the antecedent they: They took their seats at the café. LC1.4 Edit written manuscripts to
ensure that correct grammar is used.
Be sure to use singular pronouns with singular antecedents and plural pronouns
with plural antecedents. Pair antecedents ending in one, thing, or body with
singular pronouns, such as he, her, she, or his. In the revised sentence, notice
how the pronouns (in yellow) and the antecedent (in green) agree in number.
Original: Adams would ask just about anyone whether they had seen
the hitchhiker.
Revised: Adams would ask just about anyone whether he or she had
seen the hitchhiker.

PRACTICE Correct the pronoun antecedent error in each sentence.


1. Adams first saw someone holding their bag on the bridge.
2. Everyone thought Adams was crazy because they could never see the
hitchhiker.
3. Adams’s scary story would make anybody fear for their life.
4. Nobody could have suspected that they got a ride from a dead man!

For more help with pronoun-antecedent agreement, see page R52 in the
Grammar Handbook.

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