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RECORDING FEEDBACK

Name: Carlos Salamanca

Week: September 6- Try something new for 30 days

What you said…… What you should say……


I know it is a strict sport I know it is a tough sport
This ted talk mention story from Matt This ted talk mentions the story from Matt
It is interesting what can I achieve in a month It is interesting what I can achieve in a month
Therefore decide to follow the steps from Therefore he decides to follow the steps from
Matt try to take photos Matt tries to take photos

Comments: Hey Carlos good work, your answers were good, however there are some
grammar mistakes to be improved included on this chart.

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