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Commentating and Reporting
Commentating and Reporting
Commentatingandreporting
Acommentatortalksaboutaneventasi tishappeninginthepresenttense.
Areporterwritesaboutaneventafterithashappened,inthepasttense.
Forexample,
‘Thecarsareliningupo nthestartinggrid.Thenoiseo ftheengineswellsupintoa
roar.Thestarterraiseshisflag.Asitfalls,thechampionisawayfirst.”
“Thecarslinedupo nthestartinggrid.Thenoiseo ftheirenginesswelledu pintoa
roar.Thestarterraisedh isflag.Asitfellthechampionwasawayfirst.”
A) Readwhatthiscommentatorissaying.Heusesverbsinthepresent.
Writeo utthereporter’saccount,usingverbsinthepasttense.
“Hundredso fpeoplearestillpouringintothestadiumastherefereeb lowshis
whistleforthestarto fthegame.TheburlyJimSmithk ickso ffandthewaveo f
whiteshirtssurgestowardsthegoal.Themovebreaksupwhenred-shirted
WayneGibbsthrowshimselfforwardandh eadstheballdown.Hispartner
runs
freeo fhiso pponentandcentresintothegoalmouthwherethegoaliec atches
theballandthrowsito uto fthedangerarea.”
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AdaptedfromSchofield&Sims
MillieWhizz Grammar
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B) Thiscommentatorisdescribingafashionshow.Sheusesverbsinthepresent
tense.Writeo utthereporter’saccount,usingverbsinthepasttense.
“Asthesoundo fsoftmusicdriftsthroughtheroom,wes eethatthemodel,
Karen,iswearingaturquoisedress.Shew alksgracefullytotheendo fthe
platformwhereshes tops,turnsandpauses.Sheholdso utthefoldso fthe
dressandwenoticethesheeno nthematerial,whichg ivesaddedglamourto
theo utfit.Sheiswearingamatchinghatandc arriesahandbagandgloveso f
thesamecolour.”
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AdaptedfromSchofield&Sims