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see how examples can be integrated into the paragraph we have written.
‘On the other hand, studying at home might leod to social isolation. The students will be
clone ot home, without the company of other students. As a result, they may feel lonely and
depressed. In addition, studying in isolation prevents students from developing social skills
such as listening to others, following rules, or getting along with others. They will not learn how
to behave in the compony of other people and deol with different social situations.
'S PRACTICE
following is a topic for composition taken from the Bagrut exam of winter 2015.
Deo you think i's « good idea for leenagers to have an after-school job?
‘Write « composition giving reasons for and/or against working after school
Complete the table by writing down as many ideas as possible why you might disagree with having an
after-school job.
Brainstorming
Agree Disagree
having a job forces you to manage your
time more effectively» you do more in the |
short time you have
stable cosh flow —pno dependence on
porents > being able to buy what you re
want without osking for money
gaining work experience —peasier to find «
job in the Future
developing useful skills (commitment, time
management, organization, customer
service and so on) —> beneficial in social
life and working career
learning the value of money (students
learn how much work is necessary to earn
the money to purchase things they want] >
they are careful about the way they spend
money/they learn to save