CAPITAL Scoresheet 2021

Name Structure (15) Aesthetics (15) Deal Analysis (20)
15 14 17
Priya
14 15 17
Vighnesh Hari
13 13 18
Divyank Shekhar
Gajji Mohan Kumar 14 14 16
12 14 16
Anmol Jain
12 13 17
Isha Baheti
Shweta Iyer 13 13 16
Ashutosh Singh 13 12 16
Aadarsh Basotia 13 12 16
Ayushman Trivedi 13 12 15
11 13 16
Shabeeb
11 13 16
Rushali Shome
Mansi Mittal 12 12 16
Satyapriya Khanna 13 12 15
Abhinav Pokhriyal 15 10 14
12 13 14
Navya Sodhani
Yash Jha 12 13 14
B Atheeth 13 10 15
Ayush Chaubey 13 10 15
Yukta Mishra 13 12 13
Akhil B Anil 12 11 15
Yash Pimpalkar 12 10 16
Aparna Singhal 12 10 16
Prashant Saxena 12 12 14
Sounak Deb 12 10 15
Vikas Poman 12 11 14
13 14 10
Nihar Dighe
Luv Kapruwan 10 12 15
Gautam Vishnu M. 12 11 14
Sonal Singh 13 9 15
Utsav Daga 12 11 14
11 11 14
Durga Bagri
10 12 14
Sucheta Rout
Mohit Manwani 10 11 15
Nitin Chaudhary 12 10 14
12 11 13
Krushal Patel
11 12 12
Dhruv Goyal
9 12 14
D. Vamsi Krishna
10 12 13
Pratishtha Banerjee
11 14 10
Amritanshu Swaroop
Sarthak Ranasaria 12 11 12
Sankalp Tandon 10 10 14
Adarsh Srivastava 11 10 13
Tanika Yetre 10 10 14
Surabhi Bajaj 11 10 13
Rithwik Nediyedath 11 10 13
ROHIL HAZRA 12 7 15
Kapil Arora 12 10 12
10 5 18
Ashok Jangir
11 9 13
Bharat Maniam
Kodela Nikhil 12 10 11
11 9 13
Harshad Mohod
Vaibhav Mehta 10 9 14
Riya Choudhary 11 10 12
Tanishq Kansal 11 10 12
Shreya Bansal 11 11 11
Afreen Fatima 10 10 12
Yash Jha 10 10 12
9 13 10
ANSHUL AGRAWAL
10 11 11
Souvik Roy
Prerna Bansal 11 9 12
Krishna Priya Gandikota 10 9 12
Suneethi Venkat 10 11 10
11 9 11
G Vijitha Rani
9 10 12
Mayur Gupta
10 11 10
Kanika Sharma
Yukta Mishra 10 10 11
Yogesh Yadav 11 9 11
Nikhil Bansal 10 9 12
Apurv Shekhar Jha 11 7 13
Kunal Mahajan 10 6 15
Monika Singh 12 8 11
Unnati Tanwar 11 9 11
Kuldeep Singh 11 10 10
10 10 11
Nikita Kishan Kumar Das
Apoorva Patni 10 10 10
Mahima Das 10 10 10
12 10 8
Rashika Raina
10 11 9
Vedika Agrawal
Harsh Bafna 10 10 10
10 9 11
Ajitesh
DEBJEET BASAK 8 9 12
9 10 10
Chayanika Das
11 10 8
Azhar Hassan
10 10 9
Sushmita Chitranshi
10 10 9
Pritika Arora
Nehal Patankar 9 10 10
Shubhankar Tomar 11 9 9
Ananya Aggarwal 8 8 12
Muskan Garg 8 8 12
9 9 10
Chetan Sharma
HIMANSHU MITTAL 9 9 10
10 10 8
Muskan Garg
10 10 8
Sanyam Garg
9 9 10
Subhapriya N
Shashwat Singhai 10 9 9
Vishal Vinayak 8 10 10
Ashwini Palan 9 8 10
Ayan Chakravarty 9 9 9
Shalini Pathak 9 9 9
8 9 10
Amrita Mandal
10 8 9
Dhruba Bora
9 10 8
Rahul Nain
9 10 8
Shah Alam Mazumder
9 7 11
Varnika Goel
Rahul Sajja 10 7 10
Gokul Balakrishnan 8 8 10
Abhinav Jain 8 8 10
KARTIKEY JAIN 8 8 10
10 7 9
Samartha Uday Kulkarni
8 7 11
Rohit Yadav
8 10 8
Sai Tejaswy Mylavarapu
9 9 8
Sagar Ranjan Biswal
9 6 11
Akanksha Kudalkar
9 8 9
Aravindh Prabhakaran
8 9 9
Aditya Anandkar
Lokesh Roongta 8 8 10
Himanshi Dua 8 8 10
9 8 9
Asmi Khandelwal
Shivangi Tiwari 9 8 9
Lokesh Roongta 8 8 9
Shubham Mahajan 10 7 8
9 7 9
Sheena Mattu
9 8 8
POULAMI DWIBEDI
9 8 8
Kritika Bhatnagar
8 9 8
Saumya Chaturvedi
8 8 9
Nannaparaju Naishadh
8 9 8
Rajat Kumar Jindal
8 9 8
Nikhil Raj
9 8 8
SWARANJALI AGRAWAL
8 7 10
Mrinal Mukherjee
Ayan Sachdeva 9 8 8
Apurva Jain 9 7 9
Pranshu Sinha 8 7 10
Shivang Dahake 7 8 10
Enakshi Mondal 9 7 9
Gaurav Jindal 9 8 8
8 5 11
Aditi Bhatt
Surbhit Rungta 7 7 10
Tanya Mittal 8 7 9
Tanmay Gera 8 7 9
Tanay Madhukar Borkar 8 7 9
Rajashree Mahanty 8 8 8
8 6 10
RAMM BAHETI
9 6 9
Sindhu Vanaparthi
9 6 9
Bhavya Nagpal
8 8 8
Spandan Chaturvedi
8 8 8
Pande Prasanna Prakash
7 8 9
Rohit Joshi
9 7 8
vikhyath v
Eeshan Malhotra 7 8 9
Yatin Kumar Singh 6 8 10
SOUVIK SINGHA 9 6 9
Abhishek Kumar 8 8 8
Parth Chawla 8 8 8
Panchal Akshay R 8 7 9
Vibhav Sharma 8 8 8
Akanksha Jhandai 7 7 9
Rishabh Saxena 8 6 9
CHANDAN KUMAR JHA 10 6 7
8 7 8
Akanksha
8 7 8
Meghna Choudhary
8 8 7
Nakul Suresh
7 8 8
Prateek Batham
8 7 8
Ashutosh Raj
Pankaj Kumar 7 9 7
Shreyash Sinha 7 7 8
7 6 9
Sakshi
7 8 7
Akshay Bhardwaj
7 7 8
Ashwini Singh
8 8 6
Himanshu Parihar
8 7 7
Abhishek Acharjee
8 8 6
Shubham Kumar
7 8 7
Diya Dhanik
7 8 7
Rupali Chandra
8 6 8
Aayush Seth
8 7 7
Laboni Dutta
8 7 7
Avirag Verma
4 7 11
Siddhi Kansal
sumeet chaurasia 8 6 8
DHRUMIL 8 6 8
Gursimran Singh 7 6 8
Rithvik Saxena 7 7 7
7 7 7
SPARSH JUNEJA
7 7 7
Ashi Agarwal
7 7 7
Mitul Mehrotra
7 7 7
Parvathareddy Sai Bharath
7 7 7
Aditya Karmakar
7 7 7
Heena Sethi
7 7 7
Mandge Abhishek
7 7 7
Aishwarya Badgujar
7 7 7
Rashika Khandelwal
7 7 7
om prakash
8 7 6
Ashish Kumar Gouda
7 7 7
Aakriti Ubriani
7 7 7
Mazumdar Manisha Upalal
7 7 7
Ishan Mohan
9 5 7
Lokesh Jat
7 7 7
MODI RUTVIK SANJAYBHAI
8 5 8
Avinash Somisetty
7 7 7
Pochampally Vinod Rahul
5 7 8
Parth Parswal
7 7 6
Bhalamurali D
7 7 6
Chirag Batra
7 7 6
KANUPRIYA CHOWDHARY
9 6 5
Suyash Gupta
7 6 7
Indu Yadav
7 6 7
Ashwani Kumar Gautam
7 6 7
Abhishek Yadav
6 7 7
Smrithi Viswanathan
6 7 7
Rao Preeteshwar Singh
6 6 8
Krishna Prasad N
6 6 8
Sanaatan Misra
5 7 8
Steify Mann
5 7 8
Ankita Sethi
8 6 6
Raghav
Sandeep Singh 7 6 7
6 5 8
Puneet Maheshwari
6 6 7
Bijay Das
6 6 7
Ashwin Kuruvilla
6 7 6
Anik Subhra Saha

7 6 6
Aditya Jaiswal
7 6 6
Manan Sharma
Mayank Agarwal 6 6 6
Sounak Chakrabarty 5 5 8
6 6 6
Vineeth N Kowshik
6 6 6
Ankita Patil
6 6 6
Venkatesh Kariappa
5 6 7
Shubham Patidar
ameya bapat 5 5 7
5 5 7
Navneet Gupta
6 5 5
Asmita Das
Nishant Soni 7 4 5
Vimesh Prajapati 5 5 6
6 5 4
Ila Shyantani das
Prerna Pandey 5 5 5
5 4 5
Ashish Pandey
5 4 5
Omkar Kumbhar
4 4 5
Faozia Quraishi
Faozia Quraishi 3 3 4
Namit Gadge 0 0 0
Vibhuti 0 0 0
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Excellent work on deal analysis including points like haircur on debt and reduction in delivery times for Jiomart. Barriers were
1. Brilliant aesthetics and presentation of information. The research is evident and hence appreciated
2. Could have used breadcrumbs to show a flow
3. Special appreciation for slide 4 (Synergy: Value creation and complimentary capabilities)
4. Good use of financial information
1. Good presentation, it's aesthetically pleasant. Kudos!
2. Well researched, you could have added the IB banks involved in the deal. Also, usage of breadcrumbs would have been app
Very professional PPT. Kudos on touching upon margin and eps accretion. Great job!
1. Appreciate the use of breadcrumbs
2. Your ppt is text heavy, however the content is good.
3. Some parts are copied but good effort, aesthetic ppt
An ideal presentation
Just one thing - you could mention the name of the investment banks handling the deal
Great job! Few formatting errors (27513 CR what? INR USD) that’s all. Also don’t increase the font size of the text you want to
1. Very good work 2. The structure is good, do keep in mind the colours you choose, they are too flashy and impacts the reada
Good job on the PPT. Catchy color scheme and good in depth content.
Submission was to be made in ppt and not pdf. Yur submission could have been rejected if it were a corporate competition.Go
1. It was clearly mentioned that the submission should be a ppt. Follow the instructions
3. Your ppt is text heavy however the content is good.
4. Good effort
1. Your ppt is aesthetically pleasant.

2. Use of breadcrumbs is appreciated
3. When you mention a figure in text, don't mention it again in a graph, its redundant
4. Good effort
Good job on the content. Can improve the aesthetics a bit. Your slides look haywire. You can do better by structuring it better
Good attempt. The effort put shows. Good structure followed, could have explained about the companies more, more financia
Great work.
1. The presentation looks really good aesthetically, good job with the infographics and breadcrums are appreciated
2. Should always write the full name of the club on the first page
3. Appreciate the "Effect" slide
4. The font is uneven throughout the presentation - shouldn't happen. The style should be the same and the size same atleast
5. The charts on slide 6 and 7 have overlapping objects
6. Should write FY21E and not FY21e (industry standards)
7. Should have included your own opinion of the deal
Good effort! Aesthetics are very pleasing. Can improve content on first slide: Deal overview. Can go into more in depth analys
Good work on deal analysis part. The timeline could have been extended further till July abd what are the supreme court orde
Submission was to be made in ppt and not pdf. Yur submission could have been rejected if it were a corporate competition. G
Good work on the deal analysis part and synergies. Didn’t understood the significance of ARPU of Jio in relation with Rel-Netm
1. Good work 2. Work on formatting graphs, use smartart to convery text heavy information 3. Barriers can be potential barrie
1. Decent effort, good structure and content 2. Improve on aesthetics and formatting, some slides are text heavy
Good attempt, You have touched upon a lot of good points, strategic divestment, GMV, deep discounting, etc. aesthetics can b
Good attempt at the exercise. A few pointers: some slides look extremely haywire like the synergies and the barriers, try to str
Could have discussed a bit about ubereats failure in indian markets which might have led to that cheap valuations. Good point
Didn't understand the chart on page 1 very well with the data labels.Apart from that good work. Make sure that logos don't cu
1. Good use of infographics, the ppt is aesthetic
2. Avoid typos, in slide 5 instead of 'data', date was mentioned.
3. Good effort, try to give your opinion on the deal analysis
1. Good work on the analysis and visual representations 2. Submission format was clearly mentioned to be PPT
Multiple Submissions (-1) 1. Good effort, content was well covered 2. Synergies should show how the combined entity is bette
Good attempt. Could improve aestheics. Charts are snipped, a little text heavy in some slides
Decent job. Could use more inforgaphics, and more detailed slides in the end. Slides 4,5 are very bland.
1. Its Capital - The Finance and Investment Club, not the other way round
2. Could have used breadcrubms and better alignment for the infographics
3. Looks good aesthetically otherwise, and appreciate making the charts and not using a snip
4. The text has uneven spacing - should not happen
1. Good use of breadcrumbs, aesthetically looks really good

2. Appreciate the financials, but could have dug deeper with synergies in respect to numbers
3. Inconsistent font colour and alignment. The barriers slide is text heavy, could have used bullets
4. There is a table in slide 3, but no mention of what those numbers are: EPS, share price, or whatever it is. Should mention in
5. Should write own opinion as well
1. Decent content, but text heavy presentation 2. Never start new headersin the middle of a slide 3. Structure the content bett
Good that you touched upon the key drivers of Zomato, and good job on the first two slides. However I feel you could have us
Good that you explained the market as well in the first slide. Good effort, but please use more infographics instead of text wal
when you transcribed it
2. Avoid typos, there should be space between investment and club in the first slide
3. When you talk about deal analysis, you should talk about the valuation and how much premium was paid as well and justify
4. Try covering all the mentioned pointers, for instance, I couldn't find future roadmap
5. Presentation skills were decent, try using more graphs and charts instead of text
6. When you mention debt, try to find out the source, for instance Wipro raised bonds and see how that will impact the existin
1. Don't make ppts so text heavy

2. How can you make a finance ppt without any charts?
3. Please try to use breadcrumbs
4. Your ppt should be grammatically correct
5. The transaction is already completed. Also, we are in July, so when you mention expected to complete in June, you should l
6. Your points are good, kudos on that!
1. Really appreciate the slide aesthetics and breadcrumbs
2. The second slide is relatively empty, the space could have been managed better; third slide is text heavy
3. Didn't have financials and own opinion
1. Appreciate the aesthetics and the colour scheme difference for both the companies
2. Should use breadcrumbs
3. Good focus on the current status of the deal, but no absolute financial data in the presentation. Could have looked into EPS
4. Should include your own opinion on the deal
Good effort. Text heavy slides, can be improved. In the last slide, you could have avoided including data after 2023 because it’
Good work on zomato's overview. Funding from investors is not earnings for a company. It is something the companies use fo
Good work on compay overview and describing each business segment. Good work on deal analysis. Need to work on present
1. Decent work 2. Need to work on PPT skills
1. Good work 2. Barriers weren't mentioned 3.Could have analysed the deal better and talked about numbers
1. Decent work 2. Text heavy, try putting in graphs and infographics 3. Font needs to be consistent throughout
Good structure, dark color choice use ligher colors, logos and images have been stretched. Charts have been snipped
Good effort. Use png logos to remove white bg, aesthetics could be improved. Weird chart drops in the first slide (it is because
Good work on deal analysis especially why did Ubereats fail in India. If you are copy pasting from source like financial express,
for historical use FY20A rather than 2020
Very Good structure. Could improve on Aesthetics. Don’t just blindly copy from the sources. Zomato is focussed on fine dining
Who is 'he' in here?
Good work on deal analysis. Presentation could have been better
2 Your ppt is aesthetically pleasant. However, when you use images off the internet make sure they are of good quality; some
3. Complete the sentences, on slide 4 you have a sentence ending as "SEBI banned....(FCRL) from accessing the".
4. Future roadmap should incorporate your take on what Reliance should do next with the synergies to establish itself as a ma
5. Good effort
1. Need to work on PPT skills and aesthetics 2. Content was decent but limited 3. Barriers were missing
1. Need to work on PPT skills 2. Deal anaysis and synergies research are surface-level
Structure is a bit messed up and not clear, you have mentioned gains in the second slide then again you have mentioned syne
1st slide: can do away with ceo commentary and could have included more important data there like financials or some chart
Could have discussed a bit about Ubereats failure in Indian market. The idea of evolution of foodtech was not that clear.
Could have discuused about Amazons case in depth with the most recent happenings as well
1. The overview slide is aesthetically pleasing, however all the other slides aren't
2. Please spell check your ppt, avoid typos, spelling of Mukesh Ambani is wrong. Please use 1st letter capital for proper nouns
3. While making charts, ensure that your text fits in the chart
4. Your content was good, however it would be better if you added a bit more on the financials
1. Appreciate the financials and use of icons
2. Deal overview slide could have been less text heavy
3. Lack of infographics; the references slide is poorly formatted
Good try. Improve on aesthetics and presentation skills. Shareholder data can be better presented in a pie.Could use more inf
Good work on deal analysis especially regarding EPS dilution and accretion and EBIT margin. Could have done better in future
Good work with the company overview slide. The increase in revenue might not be 100% attritubutable to the deal as there m
1. Try using infographics, the ppt shouldn't be so text heavy, be brief and concise
2. Structure of the ppt was good
3. Avoid typos for instance FYY19, also try to get the latest values of revenue and cost
4. When you mention forecast period in the suggestions, what is the forecast period? 2 years 3 years? Mention the duration
5. When you copy deal overview, try to make sense, the last line witnesses $3-4 per order, what do we make out of this, is it in
6. Try not to repeat information, you mentioned the valuation of Zomato twice in consecutive points, try to combine those an
7. Try using breadcrumbs in your ppt.
8. In the future roadmap slide, there's nothing mentioned wrt future, so try adding in some points related to that
9. What was the rationale behind giving away x.xx% stake? Try looking at the valuation of the companies.
1. Use consistent headers

2. Your ppt shouldn't have grammatical errors
3. It's good that you went through some broker reports, don't simply copy data from there. Give your opinion of what that dat
what did the ratios signify?
4. Your ppt is text heavy
5. When you talk about deal analysis, you should talk about the valuation and how much premium was paid as well and justify
6. When you mention debt, try to find out the source, for instance Wipro raised bonds and see how that will impact the existin
7. This deal is already completed, again don't blindly copy paste data from reports, at least try to find out if the deal has closed
1. Capital is a club and not a cell
2. Should have used breadcrumbs to show flow of the ppt better
3. Aesthetics and data presentation is appreciated
4. Lack of financial data
5. You should try and keep the font size on individual slides consistent
6. The last slide doesn't have a proper title anywhere and there are no bullets as well. Not sure what was the purpose of the tw
1. For the deal analysis, you could have delved into more details 2. Need to improve PPT skills
1. Decent work on the presentations 2. Barriers were not mentioned 3. When we talk about synergies, we focus on how the co
1. Content was okay, barriers and other perspectives were missing. 2. PPT was very text heavy, it has to be visually appealing
1. The content was fine 2. Text heavy presentation 3. Content on thank you slide is a big NO
the pre post analysis was good. But very poor aesthetics. Should have detailed synergies
Good effort. Charts should not be snipped!!! Use lighter colors and use crisp texts with headers to make it easy for the reader
Walls of text. Use more inforgraphics no one will read it, good touch on margin accretion.
Use more infographics, sources on each page not at end, Could have gone in depth on financials of the deal
First slide: you need to explain what FE, FC, FR, etc. reader would not know (although you have mentioned it on the second sli
needed. Decent effort on the rest of the content tho.
Need not mention company ethos in company over view. Please check facts before putting on slide. Netmed was founded in 2
For the first slide, try and show the operting metrics for the companies apart from what is done. Operating metrics involve rev
1. When you are trying to put in ratios, try mentioning a one liner on why you are mentioning it
2. Your ppt is well structured
3. Be consistent with where you are trying to put the header for the slide, and try using breadcrumbs
4. Work a bit on financials, read broker reports regarding the deal
5. You don't speak on behalf of the company, you can say 'RRVL can invest' not 'RRVL shall invest'
6. Future roadmap would be your inputs on the deal not something copied.
1. Appreciate the use of infographics and breadcrumbs. Looks aesthetically pleasing

2. There are three different fonts on one single slide (Synergies). The font should always be consistent throughout in the prese
3. In the Future Roadmap slide, you have used 5 bubbles in the lower half of the slide - there is no heading, so its hard to figur
4. Lack of financial data supportive to the facts and own opinion pertaining to the deal
5. You haven't put references
I see what you have tried; Go for more simplistic designs, never use black bg. Good that you touched on the entire market det
Good that you touched on "Comparison Worldwide and Road ahead" and "Impact on shareholders". Why have you given so m
Could have discussed a bit more about ubereats failure in India. Could have improved on Aesthetics.
1. Appreciated the use of breadcrumbs

2. You are adding the market size, growth forecast for FY25/24, from which reports are you picking it up?
3. You have used infographics but the ppt isn't aesthetic. Work on making ppts aesthetically appealing
4. 4th slide is very text heavy
1. PPT is structured well.

2. When you say, "Board has said that the company is set to grow 10x in the next five years - profits have come on the back of
3. Please don't mix company names, when you can't write why Uber failed, the company is Uber Eats!
4. Please work on financials, include charts and graphs
Good use of breadcrumbs- appreciated; Slide is text heavy - cut that down to using numbers instead of words;
Use third person format for writing instead of 1st and 2nd person unless you are wuoting someone;
Aesthetically soothing presentation; the PPT looks like a copy paste of data from the internet - you are required to be more o
Distrubute synergies in multiple types with brief points
Lack of financials throughout
What is the purpose of the deal anlaysis if you dont mention fundamentals or basic valuations of the deal
1. The submission was supposed to be in ppt format and not pdf
3. The font isn't consistent throughout the presentation
4. Lack of financials
Decent attempt. CEO comments on half slide was unnecessary, Can do: infographics, financials, add sources
Decent structure, but 3 slides are just walls of text, no one will read it. Also you have used snippets for charts and logos, please
Didn't understand the need of impact on swiggy in the synergy slide? Better representation would have been possible. Could h
Could have discuused in depth regarding why reliance would want to enter the e-pharmacy market? Good work to show the im
Submission was to be made in ppt and not pdf. Yur submission could have been rejected if it were a corporate competition.Th
swiggy's revenue and losses in the synergy for zomato & ubereats deal? Barriers slide could have been presented in a better
Good work on barriers by classifying it inot social and legal vbut presentation could have been better rather just putting text b
1. Use of breadcrumbs is appreciated. You could have used it from the first slide itself, you can one set of breadcrumbs for the
2. Your ppt is aesthetically pleasing.
3. When you mention that the graph shows the CAGR, kindly mention the source there itself
4. Please don't ever use all caps in the ppt text, it's a big no no!
5. You haven't spoken about synergy at all
6. Concentrate on financials a bit more, ppt lacks research
1. Aesthetically, your ppt is decent

2. The assignment isn't given so that you simply copy paste the data, as a management graduate you are expected to have you
3. 'Large acquirers acquire a smaller company so as to provide speedy and efficient services at a lower cost.' - We know why M
4. Future roadmap would be your inputs on how Zomato should utilize the synergies from this deal, you could have written ab
5. Try using breadcrumbs and work on financials
1. The logos used for companies as well as Capital are wrong

2. Appreciate the use of breadcrumbs, icons and infographics
3. The text is not fitting well in the infographics on second slide, the colour scheme could have been a little better and closer to
4. Synergy is supposed to be supported by financials, which is not the case here
1. Only mentioned headings and no details for synergies 2. Also should have mentioned the impact of regulatory barriers rathe
Good looking ppt but lacks content. What is the point of the first slide????? Its just a big paragraph, not good. Good points in s
Work on Synergies and unit economics was good. Could have improved on the color scheme of the presentation. Proof-check
A brief overview about both the companies at the start would have been great. Could have discusse dbaout the debt levels of
good work on why ubereats failed in india. Avoid writing paragraphs. Try using charts and infographics. For example you could
1. Keep consistent headers, the position and size of font for the header should be same
2. PPT isn't text heavy and you have used infographics but try to keep infographics associated which would look good with the
3. In the roadmap ahead, one point was good which was copied, when you mention revamp and reimagine their model, menti
4. Avoid spelling mistakes in ppt, this is basic hygiene
5. What was the rationale behind giving away x.xx% stake? Try looking at the valuation of the companies. That is the purpose
1. There are no financials present

2. Please go through broker reports for this deal
3. Good usage of share price movement chart post the SEBI clearance
4. Future roadmap should include with some timeline on what RIL should do post the acquisition, your ideas on how they can
5. Do give a read on what synergy is and try to figure out what the synergies could have been for Reliance. It should be specific
6. Your ppt wasn't text heavy but it lacked research
1. Your first slide could have looked better, otherwise the ppt is decent aesthetically
2. Your deal overview should contain valuation and analysis
3. Please make 1st letter capital for names of companies at multiple places you written "amazon" and "future retail"
4. When you mention "The retail market in India is supposed to grow to US $1300 by the year 2024 from US $883." as per wha
5. Please avoid typos, your ppt should be grammatically correct!
2. In your future roadmap, you mention, "This deal will help Zomato achieve its long term goals and act as the biggest player in
we need your opinion!
4. Your barrier slide is simply copy pasted
5. Your future roadmap slide has a lot of blank spaces.
1. Well structured PPT

2. Weak financials and lack of reserach
3. Copy pasting from a report is not helpful until you give an insight
4. Please add figures, charts to support your statements - looks like a very mere copy paste from multiple websites.
5. Use better aesthetics, breadcrumbs and less text to mention points
6. Keep uniformity in mentioning links - you have mentioned it in the end as well as in between slides
Decent attempt. Could have improved first slide which has a lot of empty spaces. Sources to be mentioned on each slide and n
Good work on giving industry and company overview prior to deal analysis. Need to improve on aesthetics. Font changing rand
In the deal overview section, adding EBITDA directly isn’t appropriate. There might be cost synergies which might lead to impr
Good work on the deal analysis part and how much each entity of Future group will get. Need to work on presenattion and for
1. As a management graduate, you should have your opinion on things. The assignment is not given so that you copy paste fro
2. There are broker coverage reports available for this deal, please try to go through them to understand the valuation and syn
3. Working with templates isn't an issue but when you submit the ppt, ensure you remove any extra pages and you can add re
4. The issue between Reliance and Amazon is one of the barriers in this deal, you can give a summary for that, you don't have
5. In the future roadmap, we need your take on what the outlook is for the deal and how will RIL proceed
6. PPT is text heavy, use charts and infographics
1. Please work on your ppt skills, know what color goes with what and try to make the ppt aesthetic
2. Be consistent in where you position the references throughout the ppt
3. When you mention the revenue, EBITDA etc please give an inference along with it. What should the readers interpret from
4. The issue between Reliance and Amazon is one of the barriers in this deal, you can give a summary for that. You don't have
5. There are broker coverage reports available for this deal, please try to go through them to understand the valuation and syn
2. Your ppt is aesthetically appealing
3. Zomato is coming up with an IPO, do you think this deal would impact that?
5. Try to use more charts when you are making a finance related ppt
2. Please work on the financials, you could have added the swap ratios, etc in the financials
3. When you mention India retail sales growth projection, mention as per which report
4. Your future roadmap, has no insights from your side, as a management graduate we expect your opinion not something wh
5. Please make 1st letter capital for names of companies; you written "amazon". Maintain basic hygiene
6. Try to read on broker reports on this deal and also read on synergy
1. More research needed especially in the synergies section; breadcrumbs; have better aesthetics, ppt structured nicely but ha
2. Weak financial data - merely mentioning figures wont help, you need to put in the sources as to where they are being finan
3. In the future road map, include the current status as of now as well,
4. You are also expected to form an opinion of your own about the deal
1. PPT looks like a copy of a brokerage report, you are expected to mention your opinions and keep it brief with only importan
2. Timeline looks good but back it with better aesthetcs, use breadcrumbs in the PPT
3.'Time taken to complete the deal' section does not include any time line
4. The PPT looks very blank in certain spots and over filled in certain spots - please improve aesthetics
1. Appreciate the use of breadcrumbs, though they are going out of the slide in slide no. 4. Always do a hygiene check before s
2. No financial data used and no own point of view stated
3. The chart on slide 2- the title says "Chart title". Poor hygiene
4. Slide 4 and 5 - the infographics used are much larger than the amount of text you have put, and hence this feels like you jus
1. Not much research done 2. Strcuture-wise, the flow seems to be missing in the submission 3. Presentation skills need work
1. Incorrect naming convention 2. Structure is haphazard, you should start directly discussing the synergies of the deal 3. Need
first slide has no content, blank spaces. Half slide CEO comment is not needed. In the last slide you have written few gassy poi
increasing shift towards foodtech
You have written "Deal will close in June 30, 2021" whereaas that date has already passed. take care of such things when you
Avoid writing big paragraphs and try using infographics and charts to depict the information. Company overview slides at the s
Very Text Heavy PPT. Good point regarding JIO mart. Can improvis eon presentation skills using infographics and charts
1. If you are mentioning data in tabular form, why would you mention the same data in a chart?
2. When you are copying the data regarding turnover and P/L, what is your take on it? What should a person looking at the pp
3. Be consistent, if you are mentioning figures in infographics in the first three boxes, the last two shouldn't be empty
4. Assignment doesn't mean you copy paste everything, we need your take on the deal not something copied from the news a
5. Use of infographics was decent
6. Should have mentioned all the references
1. Please mention the figures accurately. What is "With the acquisition, Combined entity may corner more than 50-50% marke
2. There should be consistency in your headers, this is basic hygiene
4. Using too many colors in a ppt as an analyst for an M&A deal doesn't look good. Try to understand what is the essence of th
6. Please try to be specific with synergy, this deal had several other benefits than just giving a competitive edge
7. If you are mentioning that the players have started working towards sustainability, mention how. Don't vaguely mention a p
8. Lack of research; read about the CCI probe on this deal
2. What does this b mean? "RIL would take 13.1% stakes in Future Enterprise Ltd. after the slump sale by paying Rs. 28b in two
3. Too many blank spaces on your slides!
4. Your ppt should be grammatically correct!
5. Your ppt lacks research
6. Please go through some broker reports for this deal
1. Please avoid making grammatical errors. Spell check your ppt.

2. When you mention, "The food and grocery industry is currently valued at $545 billion"; always specify as per which report
3. Please read on synergy and then read broker reports on this deal. Try to understand what other synergies they have gained
4. Read about the valuation, how much was to be paid for debt and how much cash? Work on financials.
5. Future roadmap would be your inputs on the deal not something copied.
1. Your PPT is very text heavy

2. COmpany Overview is blank
3.Put brief points for legal barriers and also focus on other barriers such as operational and environmental
4. You are expected to provide insights of your understanding rather than simply mentioning why the deal took place.The PPT
5.Dont put similar backgrounds in all slides, make it more aesthetic and use droppers for better colours relative to the deals
6. Use timelines in the ppt as to how and when the deals occured
7. You could mention if/whether this deal helped Zomato launch an IPO in a certain way, or if this was a key acquisition for the
8. Atleast copy paste with some effort - your pros and cons chart is a mere copy paste with the least of effort
1. Aesthetically pleasing presentation with effort in the 1st and 2nd slides
2. Good use of breadcrumbs but still needs a lot of improvement
3. A lot of info is cut copy paste - avoid that if you have to deliver successfully
4. Create a small writeup of your own opinion- very important
5.Overall a decent and neat effort with a lot of scope for improvement in presentation and research skills
6. Mention sources
7. Poor financials but well tried
1.Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

2. timeline needs to be crisper for the events
3. Where is the analysis? valuations? all of what you have mentioned is just another ppt that is available online..how do you st
4. add a personal opinion to the slides
5. Use better aesthetics for presentation
6. Where is the data for your ppt? Lack of basic hygiene in PPT's
7. Use of breadcrumbs is apprecaited, Give instances of what has happened post deal? Legal issues with the deal etc
8. Decent try for a 1st time ppt, please improve on presentation skills
9. Promoter image not required
1. Could have used breadcrumbs and better infographics
2. The image in the third slide is out of alignment; heading of all the three slides have different font
3. The ppt is text heavy and doesn't have any charts or graphs
1. Appreciate use of breadcrumbs

2. No use of financial data anywhere in the ppt
3. There is no need to put images of founders and CEOs in a finance ppt
4. You have not put your own opinion anywhere
1. Work on PPT skills- there is no readability of text 2. Clear instructions were given to not snip graphs 3. Please mention sourc
Simple, could have been more detailed and more infographic. Empty spaces, no detailed synergies
Although it looks like you've put some effort into this, the food photos don’t make sense on each slide, text walls could have b
Average. Please run an f7 spell check before you submit ppts. There are spelling errors. Could have touched upon so many mo
Below average. The text is unreadable. Even if the content is good, no one will read it. You need to work on it
can give some commentary for the order volume pie chart. Otherwise it makes no sense to include it along deal overview. Mis
Presentation was not that good. There were some horizontal and vertical lines on the slides which were overlapping with the c
with the deal? Did ubereats have any cloud kitchens which zomato could directly acquire?
Text heavy PPT. Don’t just copy paste text from sources. Make tables and graphs and no snippets (1st slide)
Comprehensive analysis was not done. No mention about any barriers
Don't copy paste snippets from news articles. Make chart and tables in the powerpoint only. Avoid writing big paras.
Need to improvise on presentation skills. Good point regarding ubereats customer shifting to swiggy as well which can be a ch
Abrief overview of the companies at thestart would have been better. One of the major reason for Zomato to acquire ubereat
1. PPT is text heavy, please work on making it aesthetic

2. Assignment doesn't mean you directly copy paste from a report, you are expected to give your opinion as well
3. The transaction is already completed. Also, we are in July, so when you mention expected to complete in June, you should l
4. When you write about financing, try to see where the funds are coming in from, for instance Wipro raised bonds, try to see
5. Try to quantify things, when you say new BFSI clients added, how many are added?
6. When doing deal analysis, you need to look into how much premium is paid, what was the valuation of Capco and how muc
7. Try looking at broker reports for Wipro just post the deal was announced since its a public company.
1. When you use images off the internet try using good resolution images, the image in the ppt slide 4 has distorted pixels
2. You have mentioned there were no regulatory barriers. At the time the deal was done, they didn't face barriers, but they sti
4. Don't leave incomplete sentences
5. Your future roadmap states, investment in innovative startups, Zomato has a negative EBITDA, how do you propose for it to
6. Firstly, assignment doesn't mean copy pasting. If you are copying, at least change the wordings, "acquiring the local leaders
7. What was the rationale behind giving away x.xx% stake? Try looking at the valuation of the companies.
3. Don't repeat points in the ppt
4. When you talk about Zomato seeking funding, it's also going for an IPO, you should be precise regarding what funding.
5. Overall the ppt was decent aesthetically, work on the content though
1. Your 3rd slide has a lot of blank space, please use infographics and make the ppt decent aesthetically
2. When you've already mentioned data in the form of text why put the same data as chart?
3. Why are two charts showing the same data on two different slides? You just had to put a chart for the sake of it?
4. There is a CCI probe on this deal. Your ppt lacks research!
5. Your future roadmap contains nothing about any measures the company can take in the near futur, no timeline nothing!
1. Choose colors from color palette to see what colors go along

2. Synergy doesn't mean simply adding up the revenues and EBITDA
3. When you look at synergy, it could be operational, integration with exisiting business, etc. Please read up on synergy.
4. Please maintain hygiene, you font size can't vary from one slide to the other!
5. Work on financials, read broker reports on the deal
1.Consistent empty spaces in 2nd,3rd and 4th slide; can use aesthetics in a much better fashion; use breadcrumbs; quality of r
2. DO not copy paste from a report, you are expected to give your opinion as well
1. Should use breadcrumbs and keep the font consistent

2. Should use infographics, the slides look a little dull and text heavy otherwise
3. No use of financial data to support synergies and no own opinion mentioned as well
1. Did not follow the basic structure at all 2. Minimal deal analysis 3. Formatting needs a lot of work- Images should be PNG, u
1. No structure in the presentation at all 2. Need to work on presentation skills 3. Charts, graphs, tables should not be snipped
Very text heavy, could definiltely improve the aesthetics of the ppt. Decent analysis but no one will read it
Average ppt, The deal overview slide is haywire. And other aesthetics could be improved
poor strucutre, have not touched upon synergies, deal analysis, barriers. Needs great levels of improvements
The barriers slide was decent, but other slides are extremely bland, a lot of empty spaces. No in depth deal analysis, need to w
Extremely text heavy, you need to include more charts, infographics, better structure the content. Also you need to work on y
Text Heavy PPT. No mention of any swap ratio for shares for Future group companies (FCL etc). Could have done deeper analy
Need to work on presentation skills a lot.the 5th slide didn't have any header.Good work on the need of the deal for both the
Try to be a bit creative while pitching your points.Slides look blank. The higher EBITDA point in synergies was not very clear. N

2. How will customers' benefit by huge discounts impact the company?
4. Please mention the synergies properly
5. Lack in research
1. When you are talking about the amount paid for the acquisition, mention the premium and justify it with the help of synerg
2. Avoid typos, you have $ mentioned twice before the revenue figure, also when you start with mentioning $1.45 billion, keep
3. When you mention financed by debt, what kind of debt? Wipro raised bonds for this, deep dive into the analysis
5. The barriers and roadmap shouldn't be simply copied; you should have a take on this
1. Your ppt consistently has empty spaces, no financials, barely any charts
2. A very laid back apporoach
3. Please go through broker reports for this deal
4. The headers should be consistent in their position; that's basic hygiene
5. In your future roadmap, you've mentioned; "Post deal completion, RIL must ensure these assets are utilized properly, lest it
6. As a management graduate you are expected to have your own opinion about things
1. What are we supposed to make out of the 2nd slide? What is the purpose behind it? Just snippets of news?
2. Your slides have a lot of blank spaces
3. "Zomato eats Uber", do you know the valuation of Uber and that of Zomato? Please don't make mistakes in the names of th
4. Your pie chart in the barriers slide isn't explanatory! At least add the numbers!
5. Please use uniform font size, its basic hygiene!
6. Please use 1st letter capital for names of companies
7. Your future roadmap, has no insights from your side, as a management graduate we expect your opinion not something wh
1. You haven't mentioned the club's name on the first slide but have somehow written "IB Analyst". There is no need for you t
2. The deal overview slide looks clumsy due to misalignment
3. The slides are really text heavy and you have not used numbers at all
4. No own opinion mentioned
Extremely simple, low effort ppt. just text walls, no infograpgics no charts, no financials, no in depth deal analysis. Neat ppt th
Slides Lacked content. In the barriers slide you could have also discussed the social barriers where Ubereats employees were n

3. Your ppt is extremely text heavy
5. Zomato is coming up with an IPO, do you think this deal would impact that?
6. No financials have been mentioned whatsoever
1. Font size is very small, use around 10-14 for the entire PPT, 2. PPT looks like a formality from your end and a mere copy pas
1. Slide 1 -Use breadcrumbs instead of bulleting the outline

2. Slide2 - Keep the timeline very brief in nature- it shoudl not be as large as in the slide - Instead mention the downfall and up
3. Slide 3 - Use better cliparts and infographics, Decent colour coding with content, Text font is very small; Mention the curren
4. Slide 4- the ppt looks like a copy paste from the internet with lack of opinion. You are expected to provide an opinion. Use
5. Slide 5- The pie chart is given as a formaltiy, infographics are misalingned- you are expected to have a more professional ap
environment conscious - be more careful with presentation and revise before submitting
Lack of financials throughout

1. Company overview to brief and to the point, both ccompanies can be done in 1 slide each; background not aesthetically ple
2. Deal overview appears to be a story from both sides- add financials and more valuation data- that is the purpose for the ass
3. PPT is not a note taking document, data for each header has to be supported with actuals and has to be more streamlines in
4. You have not mentioned any valuations- purpose of the assignment has failed - if you need to stand out, start putting numb
5. Use breadcrumbs and a timeline to the PPT
1. We know what an M&A is - unnecessary to mention that

2.Mention some businesses of acquirer and acquiree and the strategy behind the deal
3.Add a timeline to the deals, images of newspaper cutouts is for you to read and get information and not to send us the same
4. Reasons for future group to fail is a simple cut copy paste with no numbers whatsoever
5. Where is the deal analysis? valuations? structures? approach to the acquisiton?
6. Poor quality of images used
7. Images of promoters not required
overall a very laid back approach, you are expected to read through the deal vigourously with a deeper understanding behind
1. Introduction slide has to be less text heavy with brief points of the companies, use breadcrumbs,
2. Pros and cons table is copied - atleast edit it after copying. You are making an IB Presentation- its not a joke
3. Covid Impact of food delivery is a thoughtful point but is too detailed. Keep it brief and more aesthetically soothing
4. Lack of any financials has absolutely failed the purpose of the assignment- you are expected to be more professional and th
5. Very casual and laid back effort
6. Road map has to be supported with numbers. Point 3 has to be supported with data of what nutraceutical efforts. Merely m
2. 1st two slides are decent with effort put, post which its simple copy paste
3. You are expected to put your opinions and frame a decent enough analysis of your research and not this photo cutting crap
4. Atleast copy paste with some effort.
5. add figures, charts, fianancials to support your answer. they are available in brokerage reports, reserach reports. You will no
1. Aesthetics to be improved
2.Images of promoters not required
3.Great effort in copy pasting - instead read and create own sentences in every point
4.Alignment issues in financial synergy
5.COlour coding needs to be improved, use eye dropper
6.Keep barriers crisp and to the point
1. The slide looks really dry and textual. Could have used infographics, breadcrumbs, icons etc
2. You cannot have different fonts on different slides. There should be one consistent font style and size throughout the ppt
3. Should have used IIFT and Capital's icons. You haven't even mentioned the name of the club the assignment is for
4. The fourth slide has two points and then a misaligned snip, rendering the slide essentially empty and haphazard looking
5. Appreciate how you have written the barriers both in the case of deal going through as well as if the deal doen't get approv
6. You should always put your own point of view in such presentations, and use more numbers and financials from equity rese
1. No mention of your name, enrollment number, IIFT or Capital on the title slide
2. Extremely text heavy slide with no financial data whatsoever. Should have used infographics and breadcrumbs
3. In SWOT analysis, just using icons to show different components of the analysis isn't enough. Be clearer with your presentati
4. No own point of view stated anywhere
1. Use the full name of the club and its logo as well
2. You write the slide titles in the breadcrumbs and not Slide 1 Slide 2. Defeats the whole purpose of using breadcrumbs
3. The alignment and font is severely disturbed in your slide 1
4. Deal synergy not backed by financial data at all
5. No mention of own point of view
1. No mention of the club as well as IIFT throughout, not even logos
2. Should have used infographics instead of bullets everywhere
3. Appreciate the use of financial data in slide 5
4. Roadblocks and future roadmap for the deal - these aspects of the assignment were completely ignored. Unprofessional.
5. Should have used breadcrumbs
Just walls of text, extremely poor. No one will read it ever. You need to work on your presentation skills greatly
Just walls of text, extremely poor. No one will read it ever. You need to work on your presentation skills greatly. Zero effort pp
need to work on presentation skills. Avoid putting paragraphs and try to depict information using infographics and charts
need to work on presentation skills. Avoid putting paragraphs and try to depict information using infographics and charts
No mention of swap ratios for shares of diff future group entities or creation of future enterprise limited whose retail assets w
1. Entire PPT is blank - You are not expected to be sending us presentations in such fashion. Unprofessional in nature.
2. As an IB analyst, Adding images of promoters is unnecessary at this stage of time, adjectives such as ' jealous relatives, love
3. Keep uniformity in mentioning sources, use breadcrumbs in presentation
4. Very laggardish work overall, please improve on the content first and then the presentation
5. Score given is overvalued in nature, please use some kind of charts and graphs in a finance PPT
1. Use better aesthetics; breadcrumbs; infographics

2. No financials used - the purpose of the assignment was to help you deliver numbers as an IB analyst
3. Please add figures, charts and graphs to depict the story that you have written
4. Plagiarism Check - 91%
5. Very poor effort, beautifying slides will not help - improve content
2. Slides are aestethic but misaligned at multiple places - deal overview, competition landscape have different fonts
3. NO financials included in an IB presentation - the assignment is given for you to understand teh deal on a more professiona
Clear lack of research indicated in the synergies section
4. Mention sources of funds, where theyve been used, a tentative timeline of how the deal went through

1. Appreciated your use of breadcrumbs

2. Slides are aestethic but misaligned at multiple places - deal overview, competition landscape have different fonts
5. No charts, graphs, data, analysis of fundamentals
1. Not aestheitcally pleasing, PPT with a sincere effort to cut copy paste
2.The purpose of you doing the assignment is to help you understand the deal and what goes on in the finance industry. Simp
4.. Atleast copy paste with some effort.
1. PPT is a formality supported by lack of research, helpful copy pasting of data that too in uppercase
2. Reckless effort to fill slides
3. Appreciate your use of breadcrumbs but quality of the presentation is not befitting an IB analyst.
4. Please support the PPT's with charts and graphs - a must for a finance IB ppt
5. Mention references in the end
6. Font size is very small and alignment issues throughout
7. The name of our body is Capital - you have not mentioned it anywhere
1. Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

2. Timeline has to be brief and limited to the deal itself, no company overview mentioned
7. Good Use of breadcrumbs, Give instances of what has happened post deal? Legal issues with the deal etc
8. Job poorly done, please improve on presentation skills
1. Aestheticallu pleasing, breadcrumbs not properly aligned with the slides - work done in hurry
2.Most of the data is copy pastes- avoid that
3. Frame personal opinion
4.Use brokerage and research reports instead of googling
5.Valuations? CHarts - just one irrelevant chart is there
6. You are expected to add financials in a finance ppt
7. Job poorly done with immense scope of improvement
1. Must use breadcrumbs and focus on keeping the font style and size consistent. There was a lot of extra spaces as well
2. Labelling of the graph was all over the place - the text was overlapping
3. Lack of financials and own opinion.
1. Appreciate the use of breadcrumbs, but they are out of infographic in a few slides
2. Very text heavy, could have summarised the timeline and overview slide a bit
3. The infographics are going out of the slides, should not happen
4. Complete lack of financials as well as own opinion
1. Extremely text heavy, no use of icons and infographics at all

2. Complete lack of financials, charts and graps
3. The alignment is completely botched in future roadmaps slide
4. You haven't put any sources or references
1. Complete lack of aesthetics and infographics.This looks like a word document

2. No breadcrumbs, financials,charts or graphs whatsoever
3. Very text heavy and no own pov
4. Entire PPT is a cut copy paste and lack of basic sincerity towards the ppt
5. Basic hygiene factors missing for the ppt
6. Aesthetically very poor- choice of fonts, alignment, colours etc
1. Capital is a common club for both the campuses, there is no need to mention a campus name
2. Could have used infographics and breadcrumbs
3. Absolutely no financial data used for the analysis and no own point of view as well
1. Should always write the full name of the club
2. Should have used breadcrumbs for better presentation
3. Font size is inconsistent on individual slides - shouldn't happen
4. You should have used bullets/infographics instead of writing in paragraphs (Synergies slide)
5. You have given the heading as Barriers but then have presented a timeline. Inconsistent presentation of data
6. No financial data used at all and no own opinion formed
1. No mention of the club name/logo

3. The font style and size is all over the place. There should be consistency
4. No need to use the management's pictures for the purpose of a deal analysis presentation
5. Should have used infographics instead of bullets everywhere
6. Complete lack of financial data
7. Lack of originality and own point of view
Aesthetically very unpleasing, you need to work on your ppt skills. The initial 3 slides divided by a timeline are not making sens
deal deck.
2. 'Large acquirers acquire a smaller company so as to provide speedy and efficient services at a lower cost.' - We know why M
3. When you copy paste, at least do that smartly. How can you write a proper noun without capitalizing the 1st letter?
5. All the slides are text heavy

7. Use breadcrumbs, Give instances of what has happened post deal? Legal issues with the deal etc
1. PPT is left blank in multiple places, entire ppt looks like a formality to an extent,
2. Source for the valuation chart is not given, no of shares refer to what?, gain in shares refer to? - appreciated the incentive fo
3. Synergies needs to be divided into mulitple genres of synergies
4. Give briefer timelines, where is the valuation analysis for the deal?
5. Poor effort overall and lack of understanding of the deal. As an IB analyst, you could look at brokerage reports
5. No references mentioned
6. 'how will customer lose?' - how does it come up?
1. Please use aesthetically soothing colours, plagirarism check - 72%

2. Give brief industry overview and focus on the deal rather than the literature
3. Your approach is appreciated, but content lacks effort
4. Use better infographics and cliparts
5. Such a huge timeline is unnecessary
6. As an IB analyst you have to add charts, graphs, figures to support your assignment- poor effort
1. The purpose of you doing the assignment is to help you understand the deal and what goes on in the finance industry. Simp
3. Atleast copy paste with some effort.

1. Incorrect Naming Convention

2.Entire PPT is a cut copy paste
3. Aesthetically over colourful, reduce colour ccontrasts
4.Slides are aestethic but misaligned at multiple places - deal overview, competition landscape have different fonts
1. As an IB analyst you are required to mention your own opinioins instead of snip-paste approach you have used
2. Weak Structure without the deal analysis- the purpose of the assignment was to make you comfortable with numbers and d
3. Use financials and valuation data to enhance the quality of the ppt
4. Such a huge timline is unneccesary, keep it short and sweet
5. Mention sources of funds, use of the funds whihc have been used to acquire
6. The PPT should not look like a note or document. Keep it simple.
7. Very text heavy and wihtout numbers - how can you justify this to be a finance PPT
8. Appreciated your use of breadcrumbs, but keep the ppt more aesthetically pleasing using good colour options
3. No breadcrumbs and quality of the presentation is not befitting an IB analyst.
6. Font size is very small and alignment issues throughout the PPT
7. Where is the deal analysis? Valuations? Numbers to support afinance ppt?
1. Why have you not mentioned the club's name on the first slide
2. There is a lot of misalignmnet with respect to the infographics throughout the ppt
3. Lack of financial data supporting the synergies and text heavy slides
4. No own opinion mentioned
1. You have not mentioned IIFT or Capital's name/logo anywhere in the assignment
2. There is a lot of misalignment especially in Deal Overview slide
3. You haven't used financial data at all and not put your own opinion of the deal as well
1. Appreciate the companies' overview slides. Good presentation of data

2. The second and third slides are misaligned
3. You have completely skipped the deal synergy component of the assignment and not used financial data at all
4. The slide "Amazon is fighting against this acquisition" is poorly aligned and fails to show what your intentions were of puttin
5. Should always use breadcrumbs
6. No own opinion stated anywhere
1. No mention of the name of the club or its logo throughout the presentation
2. Lack of financial data, originality and own point of view
3. No breadcrumbs and you haven't put slide headings as well
4. Synergy aspect of the deal not covered
1. No mention of club name/logo

2. Appreciate use of breadcrumbs
3. Text heavy, should have used infographics
4. No financial data used at all. Alignment is all over the place
5. No references
Low effort ppt, you have pasted snippets, no work on proper structure, you need to work on your ppt skills, no in depth analys
Submission was to be made in ppt and not pdf. Yur submission could have been rejected if it were a corporate competition.Th
for reliance and on the same slide you have mentioned Reliance has been on the forefront in bringing organized retail revoluti
1. A mere cut copy paste formaltiy done from your end

2. No charts, graphs, financials to support
3. PPT looks like a note document where you have jotted points
4. Use reference materials like research reports, brokerage reports and official sources instead of news articles and google
5. lack of a proper structure
6. Using MEME images is absolute a no-no and is not allowed in an IB report.
7. 'Effects' slide is an entire story in itself- please use small bullet points
8. No material on analysis or valuations- entire assignment given to you had a purpose to help you understand the finance ind
1.Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

2. Add a very brief timeline for the events
3. No breadcrumbs and quality of the presentation is not befitting an IB analyst.
6. Font size is very small and alignment issues throughout the PPT
7. Where is the deal analysis? Valuations? Numbers to support afinance ppt?
1. No breadcrumbs or infographics, hence poor presentation of data
2. Lack of financials, charts and graphs. Its not supposed to be this textual for a finance presentation, especially one about a de
1. Should always write the full name of the club and use its logo as well
2. Should have used breadcrumbs and infographics
3. The lines used on slide 5 aren't even straight
4. Lack of originality and own point of view
5. No financial data used at all
Do not paste snippets. Create charts in ppt only. No need for for showing value from synergies flow chart. Do not paste news a
Not enough content to fill the slides. Analysis was not at all comprehensive
5. No references mentioned


1. Should write the full club name and use its logo as well
2. Should use club and IIFT logos
3. No breadcrumbs and no slide titles as well. How will the reader know what the slide indicates
4. Text heavy and no infographics used. Poor presentation of information
5. You have written "Thanks You". Poor hygiene
6. Lack of financial data, originality and own point of view
For subsidiaries rather than writing names you can use logos for the same and represent it pictorally. The title of second slide
1. You failed to mention "Capital" and just wrote Finance and Investment Club somehow. No use of any logos anywhere
2. Extremely text heavy presentation, even in a single bullet there is so much text.
3. No proper financials and pov. Have capitalised random words in between sentences for no reason
1. There is no title page. Poor hygiene

2. Wrong naming convention
3. The text is inverted on the first slide. How is that even presentable?
4. Font style and size isn't consistent at all
5. Should have used infographics instead of bullets
6. Poor use of financial data, no support to synergy aspect of the deal
7. No mention of the name or logo of our college as well as the club
1. Poor research. Half of the presentation is copy pasted from one source 2. Presentation is very text heavy 3. Sources need to
Zero effort ppt, so many empty spaces. No more comments
1. Complete lack of aesthetics and infographics.This looks like a word document
2. No breadcrumbs, financials,charts or graphs whatsoever
3. Very text heavy and no own pov
You have simply pasted the snippets from somewhere and have added random logos to fill the space. Extremely unprofession
1. You have directly copy pasted and haven't even changed the font. Extremely unprofessional
2. Completely skipped the deal synergy component of the assignment
3. No financial data used at all and no own point of view mentioned
4. No breadcrumbs and references
1. No mention of the name or logo of the club
2. Wrong naming convention
3. No use of infographics, haphazard positioning of data on the slide
4. Complete lack of financial data and no own point of view mentioned
5. No originality at all, very poor efforts for this assignment
6. You have put "thank you" as a bullet along with the references. Very unprofessional
1. No club and college name/logo anywhere

2. There was no need of first two slides (difference between mergers and acquisitions, advantages)
3. No financial data at all, least effort put for this presentation
4. No infographics, severe lack of originality
5. Synergy of the deal was not covered at all
Extremely dull looking ppt with a lot of empty spaces. Initial two slides just defining M&As and advantages of the same is unne
1. Your entire ppt is blank! Why bother to submit?
Its a one slider- absolutely unprofessional

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Name Structure (15) Aesthetics (15) Deal Analysis (20)

Shah Alam Mazumder

Samartha Uday Kulkarni

Sai Tejaswy Mylavarapu

Sagar Ranjan Biswal

Rajat Kumar Jindal

Pande Prasanna Prakash

Parvathareddy Sai Bharath

Mazumdar Manisha Upalal

MODI RUTVIK SANJAYBHAI

Ashwani Kumar Gautam

Rao Preeteshwar Singh

Anik Subhra Saha

1. Your ppt is aesthetically pleasant.

1. Good use of breadcrumbs, aesthetically looks really good

1. Don't make ppts so text heavy

1. Use consistent headers

1. Appreciate the use of infographics and breadcrumbs. Looks aesthetically pleasing

1. Appreciated the use of breadcrumbs

1. PPT is structured well.

1. Aesthetically, your ppt is decent

1. The logos used for companies as well as Capital are wrong

1. There are no financials present

1. Well structured PPT

1. Please avoid making grammatical errors. Spell check your ppt.

1. Your PPT is very text heavy

1.Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

1. Appreciate use of breadcrumbs

1. PPT is text heavy, please work on making it aesthetic

1. Choose colors from color palette to see what colors go along

1. Should use breadcrumbs and keep the font consistent

1. Appreciate the use of breadcrumbs

1. Your ppt should be grammatically correct

1. Slide 1 -Use breadcrumbs instead of bulleting the outline

Lack of financials throughout

1. We know what an M&A is - unnecessary to mention that

1. Use better aesthetics; breadcrumbs; infographics

1. Use better aesthetics; breadcrumbs; infographics

1. Appreciated your use of breadcrumbs

1. Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

1. Extremely text heavy, no use of icons and infographics at all

1. Complete lack of aesthetics and infographics.This looks like a word document

1. No mention of the club name/logo

1. Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

1. Please use aesthetically soothing colours, plagirarism check - 72%

1. Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

1. Incorrect Naming Convention

1. Appreciate the companies' overview slides. Good presentation of data

1. No mention of club name/logo

1. A mere cut copy paste formaltiy done from your end

1.Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

1. Use better aesthetics; breadcrumbs; infographics

1. Your ppt is very blank with irregular font sizes throughout

1. There is no title page. Poor hygiene

1. No club and college name/logo anywhere

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