Name: Romero Huiracocha Maria Lisbeth

Date: 02/07/2021

Code: 996644

Teacher: Nancy Inca

• I would have removed the social classes.

• That Jack would not have gotten on the boat.
• That the person handling the boat would have taken more precaution.
• Rose would not have let herself be painted naked.
• I would have removed the scene where Jack is humiliated.
• I would change the scene where everyone drowns.
• Jack could have climbed on the door with Rose.
• I would have put in more lifeboats.
• I would have gone through all the dialogue and made it sound much more
formal, Edwardian, not modern teenage angst.
• I would change the scene where they leave Jack handcuffed to a tube
while the ship is sinking.
• I would remove the scene where they leave the poor people locked in the
bottom of the ship to drown because it is so sad.
• I would put more development in Jack and Rose's relationship because in
my opinion it all happened too fast.