CHANDRA ERICK MPLG

Paragraph 1 : Introduction
Paragraph 2 : (Why/How) Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an
unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. (Stressing ‘best’)
Paragraph 3 : (Why/How) Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. (Stressing
‘better’)
Paragraph 4 : Opinion, such as reasons, relevant examples
Pargaraph 5 : Conclusion

At present, many individuals are sure that receiving an uncertain circumstance is the wisest decision. It
is mostly the lack of money and low performance in working. However, some societies convince that
running and enhancing life is more acceptable. Is it trusted that money and job bring phenomena of the
problem? This essay will explain two perspectives with several reasons and examples.

If the matter is low performance and lack of finance, we should face a firm commitment, which is a life
cycle. Furthermore, people respond wisely to overcome the issue with several real solutions. They
decide to create the steps to recovery the circumstance. There are some alternative ways in which
individuals could identify the root cause of the problem. After that, how to tackle the situation is
imperative things. For instance, due to social distancing, physical distancing and health protocol, citizens
should obey the rule. They remain in the home and work from home. If citizens disobey the restrictions,
the widespread of coronavirus will increase significantly. Therefore, it is the most pleasing way just to
face and to wait also to see condition.

On the second view, some have an opinion that to observe and to enhance efforts life is better actions.
For example, because of the coronavirus pandemic, many workers have schedule work from home. It is
estimated that the company pays low salaries to the employees, so they have trouble in finance. The
condition is unusual. However, every person realizes the inevitable situation. They think and take
chances to have their own businesses, such as selling masks, faceshields, handsanitizers, and
thermometers. Subsequently, they make a profit. That action could tackle the situation in a more
acceptable way. If the workers just wait and see the circumstance, the opportunities will hardly come
again. It is most likely a temporary term.

I suppose that it is better to have a secondary option. I should have the foresight to strive carefully and
to have reasonable consideration. It should be gauged upside and downside.

It could be concluded that the most population undergo the first side because it is safe action for
sustainability of life. They suppose that to receive the condition is the most careful.

COMMENTS
 Ini contoh dari planning bagus tapi eksekusi jelek karena mindset yg belum sepenuhnya
disesuaikan dg permintaan IELTS. Mindset di sini masih focus terlalu besar pada aspek Bahasa
terutama vocabulary, sehingga ditemukan banyak kata-kata high-level tapi salah konteks
penggunaan. Dampaknya adalah maksud kalimat menjadi sulit dipahami (LR band 5.0).
 Saran saya, lebih baik kendalikan nafsu utk pakai kata-kata high-level krn saya yakin Anda hanya
‘hafalan’, bukan ‘pemahaman’. Lebih baik kata-kata biasa atau sehari-hari saja dulu agar maksud
kalimat lebih mudah dipahami (LR band 6.0).
 Jika ingin pakai high-level vocabulary, kasih saya bukti bahwa Reading IELTS Anda sudah 7.0 atau
lebih berdasarkan tes resmi.
 Berdasarkan assessmen saya, berikut prediksi nilainya: TR (5) CC (6) LR (5) GRA (6) = 5.5