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    * Explain how some overcome certain dire situations

    * Intro has a large quote, clouds the paper, and also needs correct
    citation * Last sentence in intro does not tie the ideas together, thesis
    is lacking power * In the body, expand on the girl from Rwanda in your
    class * Another body paragraph would do the essay well; possibly
    explain how some overcome traumatic obstacles they face * Not very
    well organized

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