Once upon a time in a galaxy far, far away, two brothers named Luke and Leia lived happily

with their parents. One day without warning the father was killed by a bounty hunter.
everyone in the family was devastated by the sudden event. Their father was of noble family
in the caretaker of Naboo which this meant when dying this as inheritance to them had left a
considerable amount of money to them.
 
Luke and Leia fell into a deep depression which slowly consumed them and fueled their dark
emotions whether it was anger or pain. two years after the success they both decided to run
away from home and with him they decided to travel to Cloud City which this place was
recognized for meeting a large number of gamblers and to call it familiarly “easy life” there
Leia and Luke managed to make fame as the greatest gamblers in the entire galaxy
managing to steal even the most recognized bounty houses. One day like anybody in a
careful cloud, one of the greatest smugglers in the galaxy, better known as Joel, arrived, who
was recognized for his arms deals. Leia and Luke as scammers learned that Joel could give
them information about a bounty hunter believed to have murdered a banker in Naboo,
without missing a chance the two of them pushed on the search for their father's possible
assasin…………….
 
(if you want to know all of the history is coming soon HAHAHAHAHAHA)

Santy! I am missing title of the story... but good idea for a topic! :)

Funny ending but (!) that is not how the story should end... :) → I’ll be waiting!

Next time: WORD ORDER – start with shorter sentences a slowly develop them – many of your
sentences are too long for a story and really confusing. As a result – you make more word form
mistakes

Check rules for capital letters in Eng.

Emotional reactions...?

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