Professional Documents
Culture Documents
1
destroy
Not Needed
To become a
2
Good Point. Include eg. of RTI
Good
Overall suggestions: Improve Grammar, Include more examples, Do not repeat sentences with
similar meanings, Write short sentences and improve the logical flow. Address the issue of
success of democracy due to above points
3
Quote not very relevant to the topic
You can start with an anecdote like Trump leaving Paris treaty or Indian
states not taking responsibility of cleaning river water but want their
shares
Good
4
have
s
ly
5
Good point
Overall Evaluation: Improve Grammar, You have written problems for 2 pages and solutions for 1
page which is not the ideal way ahead. Include more solutions. Including quotation is good but
only when it is relevant.