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Note :
Pronoun :
It (in the paragraph 2)
Conjunction :
And
However
Between
Although.
2. Conclude whether the paragraph is cohesive or not
In my opinion, paragraph one is not cohesive because in first sentence we can see the subject
disscussion is about the correlation analyses while in the second sentence the subject of disscussion is
about the multiple analysis. But, in the next sentence explain more about two sentences before. Paragraph
2 is the conclusion of the paragraph 1. So, paragraph 2 is cohesive to paragraph 1.
3. Clarify how the author enjoys the cohesive device to connect information
Paragraph 1 is not cohesive because the subject in every sentences is different. In the first
sentence, the subject is the correlation analyses. Meanwhile, in the second sentence, the subject is the
multiple analaysis. I think the author should explain more about the correlation analyses first in detail to
make the paragraph cohesive. After that, the author can disscuss more about the multiple analysis in the
next paragraph and disscuss more about the disadvantages. So, it can make the paragraph complex and
detail.