Name: Ana Pullutaxi Element 4: Writing of FCE Level: 6C Date: 29/07/2021 Essay
Own idea: means of transport
Are there more advantages of living in a city or country?
Living in the city is better and has numerous advantages than resides in the countryside. (Living in the city is more advantageous than living in the country.) ( Furthermore)Infrastructure design, career prospects and means of transport can be some benefits that human beings have when they dwell in a town. Firstly( in fact ), the infrastructure design of houses, buildings and schools are controlled by experts.(Theremore) architects and designers have the responsibility to monitor what materials, tools and colors should be used to build these edifices. Secondly(Therefore) , people can choose in what school or university they want to study, thus improving their career prospects. In urban areas, individuals can find each two blocks a different school according to their needs. They can be big or small, private, or public. In addition, the means of transport can be found the quick way, any hour the users need. No matter if the town is not touristic, people always can wait for a taxi, bus or truck at the stop or from the door of their houses. In conclusion, staying in an urban area, people can find many things that they need in a faster way and efficient. Grammar 2 Spelling 2 Punctuation 2 Coherence 1.5 (Try to use sentence connectors more appropriate to the level of English.) Fluency 2 Total 9.5