You wrote: General public are greatly influencing by promoting bu...

Feedback: This is a redundant phrase. Consider using just "public".

Suggestion: Public

You wrote:...ithin a tiny minute from variety social medias where commercial
companies continuously promo...
Feedback: It looks as though you have tried to make "medias" plural by adding an -s to
"media." The word "media" is already the irregular plural form of "medium." Revise your
spelling: "media".
Suggestion: media

You wrote:...nuously promoting their products there. Therefore they have plethora
opportunities to cho..
Feedback: forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb
Suggestion: Therefore,

You wrote:...ng cost any sitting at the home only by surfing internet. These facilitate
their lives to deal w...
Feedback: In English, since there is only one that everyone knows about we normally
use a definite article. Revise: "the internet".
Suggestion: the internet

You wrote:...-life by saving time and cost moving by ownself for purchasing. On the
contrary, pred...
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Suggestion: own self

You wrote:...nd actual information brings a terrible consequence to the general public’s
lives, especially ...
Feedback: The usual prepositions to use after "consequence" is "of" or "for" not "to".
Did you mean "consequence of" or "consequence for"?
Suggestion: consequence of, consequence for
You wrote:...on brings a terrible consequence to the general public’s lives, especially
children because of...
Feedback: This is a redundant phrase. Consider using just "public".
Suggestion: public

You wrote:...ted by exaggerated advertising. Namely, best seller milk company “Dano”
contains a life-tak...
Feedback: This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
Suggestion: best-seller, bestseller