Storytelling That Moves People:
A Conversation with Screenwriting
Coach Robert McKee
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Storytelling
That Moves People
Forget about PowerPoint
‘and statistics. To involve
people atthe deepest
level, you need stories.
Hollywood's top writing
consultant reveals the
secrets of telling them.
A Conversation with Screenwriting Coach
Robert McKee
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