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Storytelling That Moves People: A Conversation with Screenwriting Coach Robert McKee cp hyol et Slike » ws ee Harvard Business Review Reprint noxo6e Firs Storytelling That Moves People Forget about PowerPoint ‘and statistics. To involve people atthe deepest level, you need stories. Hollywood's top writing consultant reveals the secrets of telling them. 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Ing fr Bs PD. fa nema tsa the Universit ehigan He een aught at the Unversity f Sethern Calor IS Scho of Cine an elislon efor forming he own company Two ‘Ae ote lectures onthe tof soryellingwerdvide to an aucence of wees decors, poduces 2c, fndenerainment eects. eka dents have writen, d ect nd produced hundteds of hit ‘msg Foes Gump ra Broek nit The Cao Parle, Can Hons thon andthe Holy Gri Sees in ‘Stale, To Stay and Neo. Tey hase ‘won 16 Academy Aves 109 Ey ‘oad 9 Wakes Guilt Asad an 16 Dieters Gul of aera fovaede s tmmy Avard winner Brian Cox por teas Make Inthe 200 fl Apt tion whieh lotta fe os een ‘wer eying f0 adapt the book The Orchid hig Meee also serves 252 pojecteansla to mand tevin production companies sich as Disney, Pres and Parmint a wel a or expontonsinciding Meet eh replayed hel ete rea als tons eet, eke belo that escties n ngageltenetsona whol newlaelt hay toss thee PowerToie sdes and Icomta el good trier intend ns besten book Sr: subtney Se tr, Sand the Prinape of Secon. ving, published in 1997 by Harpe Colin eke seuss thts 2 protund harem ned to rtp the DuterasIvg=noe mela. elect! exec baie avery pet sonal erina experience" What lonsisanetedand abide tanscit cf ttae'sconaration with HBR. sos ceo ora manage pay ‘big partofa CEO's ob sto mothate ‘prope toreatheeraingslsTodothat, heer she must engage thei emetons, ad the hey to tele hea Is try ‘Thee are two waystoperade people. “Te fist sb wing conventional het ove which what most executes re Tene in yan fntectal proces, inte usnes rl weal eon fltsota PowerPoint de preentition fnvtih yous Here Gourcompany’s Daze challenge, and hee Isat te ea to d to prosper” An yo bul your es by ing ais and facts nd utes fom authors Bu there ‘re to prdles wth metric Fist, the poope youre talking fe hit ‘msetof authors arse. ard ex parle While youre ting to er Sade hem they ae aigulg with ou feta bends secon, sou dosuceed Inpersadng tem, ou dones000ly ‘nan let ats Thasnot got enough beens pooper nat nied toxcty eon aloe. “Tne the way persue people and ultiately 2 RUE ox owe ‘ ‘eay-Lsby uingan idea with aneme- ton-Thebewnaytodotbatisy tng compel sory. 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