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The Board of Directors of Monarch Books has recommended that the Monarch Books should open cafe in its

store
and reasoning provided is to attract more number customers. On face of it, it might seem convincing to believe
that the consideration supposed would satisfy the given argument but there is more to it than what meets the
eyes. The argument assumes that since Monarch, having been in business for more than twenty years at same
location ,has large number of customers base because it is known for its wide range of books on all subjects could
even enhance their sale through charming people by turning children’s book section into a fancy café , and doesn’t
consider other factors such as backfiring results. Thus, the argument is flawed because it makes certain
assumptions that may not be true, which would than lead to the proposed change having no impact on current
situation but rather can deteriorate the existing condition of Monarch book store .

The Board of Directors of Monarch Books has recommended that Monarch Books open a cafe in its store, and the
reasoning provided is to attract more customers.

On the face of it, it might seem convincing to believe that the consideration supposed would satisfy the given
argument, but there is more to it than what meets the eyes.

The argument assumes that since Monarch, having been in business for more than twenty years at exact
location ,has large number of customers base because it is known for its wide range of books on all subjects could
even enhance their sale through charming people by turning children’s book section into a fancy café , and doesn’t
consider other factors such as backfiring results. Rewrite the sentence

Thus, the argument is flawed because it makes certain assumptions that may not be true, which would lead to the
proposed change having no impact on the current situation but instead can deteriorate the existing condition of
the Monarch book store.

The recommendation of Boards of Directors will only create an impact if opening café by compromising children’s
book section at Monarch book store actually leads to an increment in number of customers and sales with profit
as well. For example ,what if store observes decline in number of customers falling in range of 28 to 38 years old
that is an ideal age of parent of a ten year old or less falls in the range given above. Parenthood being a blessings
arrives with copious responsibilities where parents do not think of theirselves as an individual but act as an
enchanter for their children. From their tactic schedule they visit book store to have knowledge building blocks for
theirs kids where they find a bit leisure and have an eye on the books from adult section and add volume to their
existing collection of pad. Thus, giving chance to store to increase their stock and profit also. Therefore,
Discontinuing the children’s book section might affect the current situation of store and can cease this opportunity.

The recommendation of Boards of Directors will only create an impact if opening a café by compromising the
children's book section at Monarch book store leads to an increment in the number of customers and sales with
profit.

For example, what if the store observes a decline in the number of customers falling in the range of 28 to 38 years
old that is an ideal age of parent of a ten-year-old or less falls in the scope given above. Rewrite the sentence

Parenthood's blessings arrive with copious responsibilities where parents do not think of themselves as individuals
but act as an enchanter for their children. From their tactic schedule, they visit book stores to have knowledge
building blocks for their kids where they find a bit of leisure, have an eye on the books from the adult section, and
add volume to their existing collection of the pad. Thus, giving a chance to store to increase their stock and profit
also. Therefore, Discontinuing the children's book section might affect the current store situation and seize this
opportunity.

Furthermore , the Monarch book store might have high possibility to lose actual customer who used to visit store
for nothing but only for books. Such people may find store overcrowded and could prevent themselves for visiting
again. Through the implementation of this recommendation store may lose its originality and uniqueness of being
one of the most stationary cosmopolitan book stores in the town since past twenty years. Let’s take an example
where number of bibliophiles reverse its peak. Hence, killing the profit margin of the store.

Furthermore, the Monarch book store might have a high possibility to lose an actual customer who used to visit
the store for nothing but only for books. Such people may find store overcrowded and could prevent themselves
from visiting again. By implementing this recommendation, the store may lose its originality and uniqueness of
being one of the stationary cosmopolitan book stores in the town for the past twenty years. Let’s take an example
where several bibliophiles reverse its peak. Hence, killing the profit margin of the store.

Apart from this the current scenario of Regal Books is not mentioned in argument at all. Thus, not providing similar
base for comparison between Monarch Books and Regal Books which weakens the author’s assumption in the
given argument . Take an example if Regal Books do not offer wide selection of books for all categories .So,
observes shortfall of customers which makes it difficult for them earn bread for their families and carry regular
expanses of store. To avoid such condition Regal Books have came with this idea. Else Regal book store might be
build in an area consisted of entertaining units such as clubs, malls, theaters where only café was missing to
increase their profit margin.

Apart from this, the current scenario of Regal Books is not mentioned in an argument at all. Thus, not providing a
similar base for comparison between Monarch Books and Regal Books which weakens the author’s assumption in
the given argument. Take an example if Regal Books do not offer a wide selection of books for all categories. So,
observes shortfall of customers which makes it difficult for them earn bread for their families and carry regular
expenses of the store. To avoid such conditions, Regal Books have come with this idea. Else Regal book store might
be built in an area consisting of entertaining units such as clubs, malls, theaters where the only café was missing to
increase their profit margin.

The Board of Director’s argument relies on certain assumptions that, if weaken would lead to decision making zero
impact on the number of customers. The argument must be supported by possibilities discussed above. Ignorance
of evidences above makes the argument inchoate and lacks the information which if would have been present
could add more convenience add spin to the author’s argument.

The Board of Director’s argument relies on certain assumptions that, if weakened, would lead to decision-making
zero impact on the number of customers. The argument must be supported by the possibilities discussed above.
Ignorance of evidence above makes the argument inchoate and lacks the information which it would have been
present could add more convenience add spin to the author’s argument.

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