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September 8,2021

Please submit this on September 11,2021

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How big a problem is bullying or cyberbullying in your school or


community?

I think it's funny when someone has bad points about themselves such
as unsightly face, dark skin, ... and especially mocking about family. I
really don't like this at all, because they don't want to, sometimes we
just accidentally but hurt them a lot. Please sympathize with them, share
their concerns, encourage them to be happier

Recheck:

I think it's funny when someone has bad points about themselves, such
as unsightly face, dark skin, and especially mocking about family. I really
don't like this at all, because they don't want to, sometimes we just
accidentally but hurt them a lot. Please sympathize with them, share
their concerns, encourage them to be happier

Comments:

1. You did not answer the questions if “how big the problem is in your
school or community”.

2. You have a bit of grammar mistakes especially punctuation marks.

3. Avoid using (….) when you are writing a paragraph or an essay.


September 6,2021

Please submit this on September 18,2021

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Is online learning as good as face-to-face learning?


September 10,2021

Please submit this on September 25,2021

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Should students be able to grade their teachers?

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