The VMGOP can be described as an example of conciseness and eliminating wordiness.

The
message is clear and this makes this understandable, which is an important quality that a reading
material should possess. I noticed that the vision and mission here is not focusing on the students but on
the institution itself. The institutional objectives are just right because their aim is realistic. While their
philosophy is longer than their mission, vision, and objectives but if I will look at this in the right sense, it
is still concise since this is about discussing what they believe. As I read this, I noticed that per section of
the said material it does not contain wordy sentences nor additional words to make it looks good. We
can observe that it is direct to the point and it contains the important information that they want to
address to the readers.

Ayon sa aking nahinuha matapos kong basahin ang nasabing materyal ay mayroon itong
detalyado at malinaw na pagkakasalaysay. Kung ating papansinin ang paraan ng kanilang pagsulat ay
masasabi kong ito ay mayroong epektibong pamamaraan sa pagpapahayag nang layunin at mga
impormasyon. Ang mission at vision ng nasabing institusyon ay maikli lamang ngunit kung ito ay susuriin
mo, ang nilalaman nito ay puno ng mahahalagang impormasyon at mayroon lamang na simpleng salita
galling sa wikang Ingles. Sa aking palagay ay ginawa ito ng sumulat nito upang hindi mahirapan ang mga
mambabasa sa pag-unawa ng nilalaman nito. Gayundin naman ang kanilang layunin at pilosopiya, kung
mababasa mo ay binubuo ng maraming pangungusap ngunit maikli ito at mayroong tamang nilalaman
na madaling mauunawaan ng lahat. Mapapansin na maikli lamang ang nilalaman ng bawat seksyon ng
nasabing babasahin ngunit ang nilalaman nito ay hitik sa impormasyon na nagpapakita ng magandang
kalidad ng isang sulatin.