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On the one hand , the dependence of having identical job can bring many disadvantages. ( topic
sentences)
The first and foremost case is that employees do not have professional ability to complete high-
quality mission. ( cause1)
Therefore, workers should cultivate theoretical knowledge, independent thinking, analysing
skills and problem-solving ability to adapt new environment. (solution1)
For instance, fashion designers always create original ideas to make striking clothings for their
collection. ( ví dụ 1)
Apart from it, operatives do not get enough strength to labour on a task. (cause2)
For this reason, wage earners should adapt themselves to work conditions in different
circumstances. (solution 2)
For example, employees get used to a light piece of work such as writing text on a typewrite,
doing clerical work, to name just a few. Consequently, they feel exhausted when they experience
collar-work.
( ví dụ 2)

On the one hand , the dependence of having identical job can bring
many disadvantages. The first and foremost case is that employees do
not have professional ability to complete high-quality mission.
Therefore, workers should cultivate theoretical knowledge, independent
thinking, analysing skills and problem-solving ability to adapt new
environment. For instance, fashion designers always create original
ideas to make striking clothings for their collection. Apart from it,
operatives do not get enough strength to labour on a task. For this
reason, wage earners should adapt themselves to work conditions in
different circumstances. For example, employees get used to a light
piece of work such as writing text on a typewrite, doing clerical work, to
name just a few. Consequently, they feel exhausted when they
experience collar-work.