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✔ Write your Journal Entry about the poem. In your journal entry, include the following:
why you liked this poem; how it made you feel; the message you got from it; and how it
affects your appreciation of the past and the present.
✔ The rubric for the journal entry are the following:
● 50% Content
● 30% Organization
● 10% Mechanics
● 10% Completeness
JOURNAL ENTRY 02
The poem talks about the experiences of the
people in the time of martial law particularly the point-
of-view of the child. I like the poem in a way that it
provides a glimpse of what martial law was like back
then. You could say that the poem is dark because in
every line of it there is a hidden meaning. But still, it is
nice. Just like what the father and Apo's relationship, the
persona and his father's relationship is like. You could
say that violence is not the thing that is rampant at that
time, there are other values as well. Power, respect,
loyalty, and bravery are just some of the values that the
poem showed us. Lastly, I like the poem because of the
way the poem is conveyed which is through the child, of
what the child sees, heard, and thoughts. A child's
perspective is way different from an adult's. The child's
perspective of martial law is that people are disciplined.
Another one is that Martial Law is a scary time because
of Marcos himself and the people who are in authority.
This poem caught my attention and made me feel ambiguous because
of the different perspectives or sides on Martial Law. It brings mixed
emotions to me. Satisfaction, anger, and grief are among the emotions
the poem has brought to me. Well, I felt satisfied because the people
are disciplined back then. People are respectful toward the authorities,
not like the present that people think they are more powerful than the
authorities. It even comes to a point that by discipline people are
scared toward the people in authority because some authority abuses
their power. I felt anger because of the brutal things that happened
behind the curtains of discipline. There is a great abuse of powers by
the people in authority. To emphasize, great abuse of powers. The way
the authorities disciplined the people is very wrong and inhuman. The
tortures, murders, and persecutions are the way authorities used
toward the people. These immoral conducts are the reason why people
are scared toward the authorities and eventually, discipline, an
obligatory kind of discipline. I felt sorrow or grief towards the people
who are being tortured without any legal basis. Imagine yourself being
tortured or murdered by the authorities just because you are
expressing your disappointment in the government.