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STEAL THIS BOOK!

MILLION DOLLAR SALES LETTERS YOU CAN LEGALLY STEAL


TO SUCK IN CASH LIKE A VACUUM ON STEROIDS
By Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D.
FOREWORD
© 2006 Harlan D. Kilstein. All rights reserved.
by John Carlton
No part of this publication may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, mechanical
or electronic, including photocopying and recording, or by any information storage and retrieval system,
without permission in writing from author or publisher (except by a reviewer, who may quote brief
passages and/or show brief video clips in a review).
T his is the ultimate indignity. I’m writing the foreword to a book from a copywriter who
has based his entire career on swiping my work.

Harlan Kilstein has been a prolific member of my Insider’s Club and has thoroughly
digested the lessons in my “Kick-Ass Copywriting Secrets of a Marketing Rebel”. He has used
ISBN: 1-933596-49-X (Paperback) these secrets to create a small library of successful ads on the Internet and in direct mail. He’s
ISBN: 1-933596-72-4 (eBook) one of mine, and I’m proud of him.

His success didn’t happen overnight, however. I’ve noticed that about the writers who
Published by: really make an impact — there is always a bit of struggle finding the right path. I’ve watched
Harlan’s skills grow exponentially from the first letter he submitted to me... which was painful
to read. He did almost everything wrong. I shredded that first letter (and tried to make him
cry with my critique.)
Knowledge Exchange Press
An Imprint of Morgan James Publishing, LLC My advice was brutal, but based on what I know actually works in advertising. After
1225 Franklin Ave Ste 325 twenty years in the front trenches of the business world, I’m not guessing anymore about what
Garden City, NY 11530-1693 it takes to write a successful ad. Even so, not everyone who comes to me for advice likes what
Toll Free 800-485-4943 they hear. Few follow it through to the bitter end.
www.MorganJamesPublishing.com Harlan was one of the few, and this collection shows how well his determination to get
good has been a success. He’s gone through one of the shortest and most intense learning
curves I’ve ever watched... and after initially not quite knowing what to make of this hard-
working “just get ‘er done” writer, I now consider him a friend and colleague. That’s huge.
There are writers out there who’ve been at this gig for a decade who haven’t earned that kind
of respect from me.
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I’ve been called the most ripped-off copywriter online and one of the reasons is because
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Harlan is out there in the lead. Ripping me off. I’ve actually encouraged it — the world is
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starved for good copywriters, and I’m one of the few trying to rectify that situation. Guys like
Heather@GraphicsByHeather.com Harlan keep me on my toes, and prove that you can go from rookie to pro as fast as you allow
the teaching to take you there. He is without doubt my top student, and now one of the very
few writers I recommend to clients.

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I always urge rookies to study my course, if you want to learn the same shortcuts Harlan
used to get so good, so fast. However, if you want to see what a pile of already-written, hyper-
successful, fortune-making sales letters look like, this collection of proven winners is a good
place to start. He’s copied my stuff ruthlessly, but he’s also developed his own voice and style,
and it shows.
RAVE REVIEWS
This is good stuff.
“Any time you have an opportunity to acquire a private collection of proven, highly-successful
sales letters, you should grab it with both hands. Such is your rare opportunity here.
John Carlton “I don’t believe I’ve ever met a more dedicated student of direct marketing than Harlan.
John Carlton His sales letters are templates you can use repeatedly to sell a wide variety of products,
Reno, NV merchandise, services… anything. As such, they are as close as you can legally get to
www.MarketingRebel.com having the combinations to vaults full of money.”

~ Gary Bencivenga, www.BencivengaBullets.com

“When I met Dr. Harlan Kilstein in 2003, he was virtually an unknown in the world of profes-
sional copywriting. What most people didn’t realize, however, was that he had already run a
multi-million-dollar business and had systematically studied with nearly every great marketer
and copywriter in the world.

“One of them, Jay Abraham, good-naturedly complained to him: ‘You ask more questions
than anyone else I’ve ever met.’ Quite a compliment, actually, from the Master of
Penetrating Questions himself. Mr. Abraham must have been impressed with the intelligence
of Harlan’s questions, though, because once Harlan launched his copywriting career, Mr.
Abraham recommended Harlan as the copywriter of choice to all his clients.

“I certainly understand why. Harlan is a good friend and colleague. I’ve provided a little help
along the way as Harlan achieved his meteoric rise to his current status as one of the best
copywriters in the world.

“In case you were wondering how a copywriter is ranked, it has to do with the results of the
copy he or she writes. Harlan has made millions of dollars for his clients. When he told me
recently about a promotion that had sold out a $440,000 seminar in four minutes, he was more
surprised about it than I was. I inherently know he’s just that good.”

~ David Garfinkel, Founder, World Copywriting Institute


www.World-Copywriting-Institute.com

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“There are some fascinating promotions in this book, and they are well worth studying. But “I hate staring at a blank screen before writing copy! Now Harlan’s new swipe file helps
then, I find just about everything Harlan writes to be profitable reading.” put an end to that. It’s a nice mix of all sorts of categories of copy so you can find the
examples to ‘rip off ’ for your business.”
~ Bob Bly, Direct Response Copywriter, www.Bly.com
- Yanik Silver, Creator, www.InstantSalesLetters.com

“Harlan, I thought I would quickly skim through this, but I wound up spending a good part
of the afternoon with this magnum opus. It’s not only packed with dozens and dozens of great “Harlan Kilstein is the fastest zero-to-sixty copywriter I know of — he went from a student
samples to learn from and be inspired by, but it also contains some terrific insights and advice in introductory seminar to highly paid gigs in one year. That’s impressive. Add to that a
about copywriting. I intend to spend a lot more time studying it over the new few weeks.” Ph.D. in education and a stint as a principal at a prestigious private school, the guy knows
a thing or two about teaching as well. Earlier this year I asked for his input on a very
~ David Deutsch, Copywriter and Author, “Think INSIDE The Box”
important sales letter, and got some excellent suggestions.
www.ThinkingInside.com
“They must’ve been good, because it sold over $80,000 in the first 24 hours.
“Harlan Kilstein is one of the top copywriters in the country. I recently cornered him at a “So can a Jewish Rabbi teach you how to put persuasive words on paper? You bet — he’s
seminar and picked his brain for close to a half hour. The ideas I got from him are going to certainly got my vote of confidence. And if you’re really good... maybe he’ll take you to
create boatloads of additional revenue for my clients and me.” his favorite Kosher restaurants in NYC, too.”
~ Parris A. Lampropoulos, Copywriter ~ Perry Marshall, www.PerryMarshall.com

“Harlan, you are my main man of copy. Ever since that Jay Abraham letter, you’ve been
“We contacted Harlan Kilstein to write a promotion for us with our backs against the wall.
churning out winning sales letters for us. The people who read this book are in for a
We needed to send out an email within 36 hours to our list and had never hired a copywriter
special treat because you’ve chosen to include some of the sales letters you did for me in
before. We had also never sent out a long email but used to send out short html ‘postcards.’
your book. (Smile). God bless.”
“When Harlan submitted his copy to us, we wondered if we were doing the right thing. He
~ Stephen Pierce, www.SecretsOfCreatingWealth.com
encouraged us to mail and...it was a pinch hit grand slam home run. Since that time, Harlan
has written many projects for us that have given us a huge ROI and launched us as a serious
Internet powerhouse.
“Harlan Kilstein gets attention through his words that are both written and spoken. He’s
my online marketing rabbi and a real ‘mensch.’ Read, listen and pay close attention to “Very often, one of our authors will object to Harlan’s hard hitting style and will try to rewrite
what he has to say because he knows the path of least resistance when it comes to boosting his copy. In every single case, Harlan’s copy has crushed the competition.
the pulling-power of your sales copy.
“We are excited to be included in his book and expect you have more killer examples if he
“When it comes to copywriting, Harlan knows how to structure a winning, highly responsive comes out with volume two.”
sales letter. I can’t wait to get my hands on his new book ... and recommend it to my best
students and colleagues. You will too!” ~ Scott Martineau, www.ConsciousOne.com

~ Alex Mandossian, Traffic Conversion Strategist and Info Publisher,


www.AlexMandossian.com

vi STEAL THIS BOOK! MILLION DOLLAR SALES LETTERS YOU CAN LEGALLY STEAL RAVE REVIEWS
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“Harlan, thank you for all your work and all of your advice. Your sales letter for Creating
Power increased our overall revenue and sales significantly — I only wish I had asked you
to revamp my letter sooner.

“Your advice has simply been invaluable. A simple suggestion increased revenue by $30 INTRODUCTION
thousand this year. Your other tips are still bringing in more revenue and I continue to test
your ideas everyday. Anybody thinking about working with you should make no hesitation
and jump at the chance.

“Not only do you take the time to help — them you guarantee your work and will do every-
T he number one question I get from people I meet is: How did you get started as a direct
response copywriter? Most assume that I have a background in sales, a background in
marketing, that I went to business school, and that my entire life was spent studying what
thing you can to make sure we succeed. Thanks a bunch, Harlan. Keep up the great work.” makes people buy. In fact, nothing could be further from the truth.
~ Karim Hajee, President, www.CreatingPower.com I’m actually a graduate of Rabbinical School, an Ordained Rabbi, and, after I got my
master’s and doctorate degrees, I headed out into the world of education. I was the principal,
headmaster, Dean of various schools and became a recognized expert in the world of educa-
tion. Working in private schools there was a constant battle back and forth between the
desires of the lay board and the vision of the educational leadership.

One year I was selected to attend a prestigious program at the Principal Center at
Harvard’s Graduate School of Education. And while I was at this program there were a lot of
experiential activities and on the last day of the program we were given a sheet of paper and
an envelope and we were told to write a letter to ourselves. I wrote the letter, handed it in
to the teacher, addressed it and promptly forgot about it.

Midway through the school year it was time for me to leave education. I had had enough.
Two days later I decided to embark on a career combining my skills as an educator and my
background in hypnosis and neuro-linguistic programming by opening a hypnosis center.

I spent the last few months of my career as a headmaster of a school really doing two
jobs. Preparing for my exit from education as well as finishing up the year strong and
making sure that my school would be handed over to the next administration in the best
academic position possible.

As I was packing up my office on one of the last days, I received a letter in the mail.
Oddly the handwriting was familiar. As I opened it up I recognized what it was. It was
the letter that I had written to myself a year before. I had forgotten completely about it.
And the letter said, “So, did you finally get up the nerve and the guts to quit education
and open that hypnosis center?”

When I opened the hypnosis center I was part of a chain and one of the drawing aspects
of being part of this chain was that they provided successful advertising and they, in fact, did

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provide full-page ads. Advertisement after advertisement, full-page ads that we gave to the studying the work of the masters. I studied the writings of Jay Abraham and as many of his
newspapers and the newspapers would run and our phones would ring. But I began to notice ads as I could find. I began studying the works and detail of people like Carl Galletti and Dan
something that even though I gave detailed instructions to the newspaper on what the ad was Kennedy. Then, something exceptional happened.
supposed to look like. Time after time they were messing up the ads and then disclaiming all
responsibility for doing so. So I had to learn Quark to submit the ads in such a way that the Rich Schefren invited me to go as his guest to Dan Kennedy’s last copywriting boot camp.
newspapers couldn’t possibly mess it up. It was an incredible experience listening to Dan talk about copywriting, my mind went on
overdrive. There were numerous exercises throughout the day and I found coming up with
I discovered that, within the chain, there was an office in the New York area that was headlines and writing copy to be extremely easy.
doing exceptionally well. At our annual conventions they would have people stand up and
say how well they were doing. One office would get up and say, “I did $10,000 last week.” A few months later I was able to reciprocate and I invited Rich and my friend Jim Van
Everyone would cheer. Another person would stand up and say, “I did $25,000 dollars last Wyck to Gary Halbert’s seminar. And it was at Dan’s seminar and Gary’s seminar that I was
week.” Everyone would cheer. introduced to someone who would later become my mentor and that was John Carlton.

Still another person would stand up and say, “Well, I only made $5,000.” Everyone I joined John’s insiders club and never looked back. From that point on I studied as much
would stand up and cheer and encourage them and say, “Well, maybe that was because you copy, worked with as many mentors, attended as many seminars, bought as many CD’s and
were in a smaller area.” Then, Rich Schefren stood up and they said, “Rich, how much did DVD’s, began accumulating a huge swipe file, cracking the code of copy. I would send my
you make last week?” and he said, “$90,000.” Our mouths dropped. Next, they said, “And, letters to John. He would shred them and back I would go.
Rich, did you follow the system as everyone else did?” He nodded and said, “Yes.” But, I began working with a great copywriter, Carl Galletti. Carl was also brutal. When I was
however, a year later I knew the truth. writing my own ads, I would just write. With Carl, however, I couldn’t just write. There had
Rich wasn’t using the ads that the company provided; Rich was writing his own ads or to be a reason for what I was writing. Carl did not accept, “I’m just writing that paragraph,
hiring professional copywriters to write them as well. My brother collected Rich’s ads and I’ll get to something.” Every word and every sentence had to count, and I was grateful to Carl
would send them to me week after week and I studied those ads and I began to use them in for revealing to me how to tighten up my copy.
my own business. My sales doubled, my sales tripled, my sales went from $50,000 a year to My training soon came into the hands of David Garfinkel. David, an amazing copywriter
$1.2 million a year using these new style ads. And studying these ads Rich soon became a and marketer in his own renown, taught me some tricks of the trade that I’m just not going
friend and soon began introducing me to the world of copywriting. to reveal. They’re too valuable. They keep me way ahead of the rest of the pack. As far as I
I decided to try my hand at writing my own ad. Having met countless people that came know David hasn’t shared them with anyone else. So I am just going to hoard those to myself.
in to my clinic and told me that their doctor had told them they needed to lose weight, I And, with all of these people, I launched my career and became an overnight sensation
wrote my first ad. The headline was “Has Your Doctor Told You To Lose Weight?” and there in the world of direct response copy.
was a picture of a woman talking to her doctor along with an article talking about the benefits
of losing weight by way of hypnosis. When that ad worked, my phones went crazy! What you’re going to see in this book are actual sales letters that I wrote for different
individuals and companies on a number of different subjects. What these sales letters have
I shared that ad with other offices and they had a tremendous response as well. I decided in common, however, is that each one was a huge success and brought in big money for my
to take that same ad and change the picture and the headline. The new headline was “What clients. These sales letters are genuine models of what works in direct response copy.
will happen if you don’t lose weight?” and the picture was looking up from an operating table
into the eyes of a surgeon who was peering down at the person on the operating table. It was I invite you to study these sales letters and apply the principles that you will learn as you
a frightening picture, but even more people started coming to my center. go through this book in your own sales letters.

I got into a groove where once every few weeks I would sit down and write an ad. In the
beginning, I really didn’t know what I was doing, but I began learning and studying. I began

x STEAL THIS BOOK! MILLION DOLLAR SALES LETTERS YOU CAN LEGALLY STEAL INTRODUCTION
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Dedication
Every book requires a dedication. Since I dedicated my dissertation to my family, I’m
going to dedicate this book to my teachers in the world of direct response marketing, four
of them in particular.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
To John Carlton who graciously wrote the forward to this book, thank you for all of your
guidance your savvy and the hours of work that you’ve obviously put in critiquing my work Foreword . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .iii
and encouraging me how to think act and write like a world class copyrighter.
Rave Reviews . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .v
To CarlGalletti, who spent an incredible number of hours on the phone teaching, guiding
and holding me accountable for every word that I wrote.
Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .ix
And to David Garfinkel for freely sharing of his marketing savvy and being available to Dedication . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .xii
talk out questions or problems I came up with when I write.
CHAPTER 1: How To Steal A Sales Letter Without Running The Risk Of Plaguarism . . . . .1
And finally, to someone who has become another teacher of mine recently and that
is the incredible Gary Bencivenga for the time that I spent with him, and for his opening
CHAPTER 2: Personal Improvement Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .17
up his treasure trove of copy and revealing the secrets that people were dying to get but
never had access to. Sylvia Browne . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .22
Vocal Power . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .28
I want to thank all of my teachers for their friendship, their fine referrals and for all of
their kind words. Conversations With God . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .38
The Psychic Navigator . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .46
Sonia Choquette . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .53
Wayne Dyer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .58
The Power of The Dark Side . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .64
Getting Started In Persuasion . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .75
Speed Hypnosis Book . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .83
Creating Power . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .91
Golfer’s Mind . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .109

CHAPTER 3: Financial Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .121


The One Minute Millionaire . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .123
Harv Eker . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .138
The Bull Hunter . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .153
The Decision Bar . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .160
Amazing Trading Plans . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .177

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CHAPTER 4: Marketing Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .189
Ultra Underachiever . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .191
Greatest Direct Mail Sales Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .216
John Carlton’s Internet Strategies . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .227
Alex Mandossian’s Conversion Strategies . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .255
Jay Abraham Internet Strategies . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .262
Stephen (and Thomas) Pierce on Blogging . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .285
Stephen Pierce on Wealth . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .294

CHAPTER 5: Health Letters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .305


Hypnosis Check . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .307
Acne Secrets . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .318
Maternity Card . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .328
Overnight-Copy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .336

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HOW TO STEAL A
SALES LETTER
WITHOUT RUNNING THE
RISK OF PLAGIARISM
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HOW TO STEAL A SALES
LETTER WITHOUT RUNNING
THE RISK OF PLAGIARISM
“To take someone else’s idea and claim it for your own is stealing. But to
take ideas from two or more sources and combine them — that’s creativity.”
Oliver Wendell Holmes

S ince the title of this book is Steal This Book, I felt it’s only appropriate for me to help you draw
the line between stealing and plagiarizing a sales letter. Many people don’t understand that
there is a significant difference. So, in this section we’re going talk about what ethical swiping
and plagiarism really are. I hope you’ll pay attention to the differences between the two.”

Many of my successful sales letters were born by ethically swiping other sales letters.
There is a difference between an ethical swipe and plagiarism.

I think that one of the best ways of explaining it would also be by showing you how to
steal a sales letter.

Now, when you’re swiping a letter, the most important thing to know is that every
successful sales letter has a rhythm to it. And you should try to stick as close to the rhythm
that you really want.

This is the prehead, headline, and subhead from a John Carlton golf letter:

It’ll take you just 10 minutes to learn, too!

How A Skinny Little Golf Genius From


California Accidentally Started Hitting
425-Yard Tee Shots!

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“It’s so simple, it’s embarrassing,” he says... and he INSISTS So, I’d like to point out that, just like the title says, you are free to steal this book.
he can quickly teach his simple secret to YOU... instantly However, make sure that you are ethically swiping the letters and not blatantly stealing them.
adding up to 70 accurate yards to every tee shot you hit from If you do, you may one day be on the receiving end of one of those brilliant legal letters telling
here on out for the rest of your life! you (or your clients) to cough up all the proceeds of what you have sold.

And, if you do deliberately steal from one of my own sales letters, your lawyers will need
Here’s what I did with it: lawyers of their own to defend you. Besides, as you go through the sales letters, you will
discover many, many excellent examples from numerous places that you can copy while
The most amazing part is you can learn it too! remaining free from the charge of plagiarism.

How A Near Fatal Road Collision Please swipe ethically and combine my letters with other sources. Enjoy your trip through
my million dollar sales letters treasure chest. Because I’m not a lawyer, you may want to
Accidentally Gave A Boston Man The obtain legal advice before swiping a letter. And, remember, you’ve been given permission to
Ability To Communicate With Those swipe — not plagiarize — the letters in this book.
Who Have Passed On! At the end of this book, I will recommend some resources on learning copywriting and
“It’s so simple, you can develop your own psychic abilities,” ethical swiping. I suggest you check them out.
he says... and he INSISTS he can quickly teach his simple As a special bonus, I’d like to share something that has been very rarely seen. I’d like
secret to YOU... overnight you can increase your sensitivity to introduce to you one of the most successful sales letters ever written (but you won’t
and improve your relationships, receive intuitive guidance recognize it...yet.)
on important decisions in your life, be connected to your
loved ones who have passed on, and become more in touch This letter was written in 1919.
with nature and the universe.”

You can use a sales letter for inspiration but you cannot directly copy it. If you do, you
The Story Of Two Men Who Fought In
can expect to receive some very fascinating legal letters in the mail, but you won’t have a leg The Civil War
to stand on because what you will be doing will be in violation of the law. From a certain little town in Massachusetts two men went to the
Civil War. Each of them had enjoyed the same educational advan-
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for a fact because that’s how many of these letters were created.
catch hold after the war.”
My friend and teacher, John Carlton, calls himself the most swiped copyrighter online and
But the other man did not “lose his grip.” He seemed to experience
that may very well be the case. And certainly, that puts me to the head of the class because
no difficulty in “catching hold” after the war.
I’ve probably swiped his letters more than most people. But what I’d like to point out to you
is there is a difference, once again, between swiping and copying. The differences in the two men was not a difference of capacity but a
difference in decision. One man saw the after-the-war tide of expan-

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For many years, copywriters dreamed of producing a sales letter that could beat Conroy’s
control for The Wall Street Journal.

Every record is destined to fall. And in 2002, Malcom Decker finally toppled the Conroy
control with this version.

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Notice the similarities between all three letters? When Mal Decker set out to beat the
control, he did it by paying homage to the Martin Conroy letter. Decker used Conroy’s
letter as inspiration which he acknowledges. But note the many differences including
length and use of graphics.

Decker’s letter includes the use of color, and it is positively worthwhile to study his
other sales letters which can be found at www.MalDecker.com. On his website, Decker
makes the entire new control available. It is worthy of serious study.

In a moment, you are about to discover how I used the Wall Street Journal Letter in an
entirely new market — with fantastic results.

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PERSONAL
IMPROVEMENT
LETTERS
PERSONAL IMPROVEMENT
LETTERS

Sylvia Browne
T his letter was the first sales letter I wrote for Conscious One. They were just getting
started on the Internet and were not familiar with long copy direct sales letters. In the
past they had only used HTML “postcards.”

They had a holiday themed email that needed to go out and they had a 36 hour deadline.
I had never heard of Sylvia Browne and hit the ground running.

Most copywriters will recognize this letter as an imitation of the famous Martin Conroy,
“Wall Street Journal Letter” which was one of the most successful direct mail letters of all
time. In fact, the WSJ letter was itself a swipe of a much earlier letter that I’ve traced as
far back as the late 19th century!

And here, I adapted a little bit of the tone of that WSJ letter as well as the goal of
moving them in the direction of spirituality.

The WSJ letter was written to men and this letter was written to women so the
language reflects the effort of writing to the female audience.

My training as a copywriter began with my studies of neuro-linguistic programming


(NLP.) Many people have written about NLP as applied to writing but they are gener-
ally referring to extremely manipulative embedded commands such as “of course, you
want to order right now don’t you?”

That’s the kind of NLP use that gives it a bad name.

I’m all for the elegant use of NLP and let me introduce you to one of the concepts used
in this letter; it’s called nested loops.

This methodology comes from the work of famed psychiatrist Milton Erickson who used
a technique of embedding stories within other stories.

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Here is a sample structure of nested loops: dropout, people click to see what you’re selling but then disappear. Because this is such a
common problem, it’s absolutely necessary to resell them on the second page. That is why,
Begin Story A on the second page, I use a concept that I learned from Jay Abraham called future pacing.
Future pacing lets them know exactly what they’re going to get and lets them know exactly
Begin Story B how it will impact their life. Consequently, future pacing is a very valuable thing.

Begin Story C I’ve also included a sales page — an order page. On the Internet it’s very important to
understand that there is a concept known as “shopping cart dropout”. In shopping cart
Begin Story D dropout people click to see what you’re selling but then they disappear. Because that’s such a
common problem it’s very necessary to resell them on the second page. And on the second
Give Instructions
page, I’m using a concept that I learned from Jay Abraham, which is future pacing them
End Story D letting them know exactly what they’re going to get and letting them know exactly how this
is going to have an impact on their life. Future pacing, then, is a very valuable thing.
End Story C
Now this letter has been sent out and revised. It was sent out with revisions for Mother’s
End Story B Day, especially when Sylvia came out with a book called, Mother God and it has had different
incarnations. This one went out very timely for the holiday season. So you’re seeing the
End Story A
original letter that went out. If you look at it on the Conscious One site you will see that there
have been minor changes to the letter. It’s been a huge success for Conscious One. It gets
mailed again and again to their list and to other spiritual lists.
The use of this technique masks the fact that you are giving instructions. If you leave
some of the loops open, you can create amnesia and the person will forget the instructions
you want them to follow.

So you need to close your loops. As you read the Sylvia Browne letter, pay attention to
the loops as I open and close them. (Of course, none of this is in the original WSJ letter.)

One of the things I’ve done in this letter is introduce controversy. If you’ll go through
the letter to How You Can Invite Blessing Into Your Life, you’ll see the section about, the
accountant and bookkeeper won’t talk to me and how they don’t think that this deal is too
good and, therefore, it’s a very limited deal.

This letter did very well. However, a little bit of a technical problem occurred when
Conscious One heard from the Hay House publishers that they didn’t want the letter
going out with Sylvia Brown’s name on it. So, the first thing we did was change the signa-
ture to a female staff member at Conscious One. Now, the letter goes out with Scott
Martineau’s name on it. Scott is the president of Conscious One. The change in signa-
ture has had NO impact on sales.

I’ve also included a sales page — an order page. When working on the Internet, it’s very
important to understand a concept known as “shopping cart dropout.” In shopping cart

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Each day, people like you attain their fondest dreams, true love, health and abudance
Sylvia’s Letter
when you need it most.
Dear Spiritual Seeker: And today I am really excited because you can help my dream come true as you open up
On a beautiful late spring afternoon, twenty-five years ago, two young women graduated the door to a new life.
from the same high school. They were very much alike, these two young women. Both had
been better than average students, both were likeable and both -as young women are — were A Opportunity For You Unlike Any Other
filled with ambitious dreams for the future.
Right now my fondest dream for you to let me take you by the hand and personally guide
Recently, these women returned to their high school for their 25th reunion. you through the spiritual maze to the pot of gold on the other side.

They were still very much alike. Both were happily married. Both had beautiful children. What’s in your pot of gold? Is it true love? Is it health? Is it wealth and abudance? Is it
And both, it turned out, had similar careers and even lived in their old neighborhood. a more spirit filled life.

But there was a difference. One of the women felt alone and unloved. The other had every My personal promise to you is that I am going to give you the opportunity to open your
single one of her heart’s desires. eyes and your heart to the other world — to the world where all your dreams become real.

I have created a special course for you. I call it God, Creation and Tools for life. My
What Made The Difference? teachings have three voices. Of course my own is present, but I also have two communicating
spirit guides, Francine and Raheim, who are the major contributors. Francine’s voice is
Have you ever wondered, as have I, what makes such a dramatic difference in people’s
audible to me but, as you know, relaying her information orally is not the most efficient form
lives? It isn’t always money or talent or hard work. It isn’t that one person wants success and
of communication. By special arrangement with God, I am able to allow Francine and
the other doesn’t.
Raheim to take control of my body so that they can communicate directly with you.
The difference lies in how attuned each person is to the spiritual forces around them and
how they can tap into that power to have a more abundant life. Only You Can Make My Dreams For You Come True
The difference lies in how you open yourself up to your personal angels and spirit guides Think of your deepest desire right now. The one that only you and your angels know
and allow them to bless your life. about. You know the one. We’re about to set out on a journey to fulfill that dream.

And that is why I am writing to you today during this holiday season. While most people In your unique course, I have given over hundreds of hours of spiritual energy to be your
are busy shopping and getting caught up in all the excitement, the real purpose of this period guide, your teacher, and your confidant. Through state-of-the-art technology, we will talk
is getting connected to the powers of the universe. Discovering the ability to tap into the and you will share your feelings. My meditations will guide you to that special place where
source of ultimate power, meaning, happiness, love and fulfillment. all your dreams come true.

With your permission, I would like to share those closing of a prayer that I begin this
My Wish For You For The Holiday Season course with: “We will truly be a light in a lonely desert that enlightens many.”
You see, people like Montel and Larry King often ask me. Sylvia, what do you really want
Would you like to be that light to shine on the lives of those around you as I have?
out of life. And I always answer the same way.
Remember those two women that I talked about at the beginning of this letter. Their lives
My life’s dream is that you be as open as I am to the Spiritual world around us. That you were so similar and yet so different.
become in touch with your guides and that you learn to trust them to lead you to the magical What made their lives different? The ability to sense the richness of the Divine in all
life that awaits your call. creation. Come with me now on this journey.

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Click here to join me on this journey You see, each of the elements in the package is worth so much more spiritually.

But you really are going to have to act quickly before they make me withdraw this offer.
A Life of Promise Awaits You — Now.
Right now, I want you to listen to the voice inside your heart that is telling you to do this.
This course has taken all of my energies. It is filled with special audio mediations that
will speak to you on your computer. Each time you listen to them, I transfer some of that If you hear the call, order it now. If you only hear the whisper of the angels wings on the
psychic energy to you. breeze outside, you really need this to open yourself up to the abundant love that awaits you.

I have included some of my very favorite video clips. We will explore fear and betrayal, Which of those two women do you want to be?
illness and loneliness. And finally, we will graduate together to soul mates and love.
Click here to join me on this journey
You see, I would not be a very good teacher if I didn’t prepare you for the different times
of your life now, would I? The Conscious Guarantee: We are willing to take ALL the risk of your participation in
this system. Take the Tools for Life course and follow the simple steps, the exercises, and the
My life’s gift to you is the opportunity to join me in this course.
action plan we have put together for you. If for any reason you feel this course does not deliver
Francine has a gift for you as well. She wants you to have my new book, Contacting Your much more than the value you paid for it, then simply let us know within 90 days and return
Spirit Guide. In it is a beautiful CD with a meditation on contacting your spirit guide. the book/CD set and the cards and we will refund your money, no questions asked.
Francine wants you to succeed at every step of the way on our journey together.
The only reason we can make such an ironclad, 100% money back guarantee is because
Finally, Raheim has a gift for you too. He wants to be part of your life as well and he wants we know that the information you are about to receive will help you impact your life.
to give you a beautifully illustrated Heart and Soul card deck. And I want you to know
Love, Light and Abundant Blessings
something that a deep secret. If you prepare your heart and choose a card, your own spirit
guide will provide your answer.
Sylvia Browne
Click here to join me on this journey Sylvia Browne

How You Can Invite Blessing into Your Life


Right now, my accountants and bookkeeper won’t talk to me. When they heard what I
wanted to do they were very upset. But then I told them how special you are to me. So the
deal is on for just a short while.

For just 15 cents a day, you can have the spirit filled life of your dreams. That’s all it takes.
Your life with be enriched. Your prayers will be answered.

Of course, if you called me by phone, it would cost $700 an hour (when I’m available and
there’s usually a waiting list.)

But, until December 25, I’m am going to let you have our gifts for you this season for just
$59. That’s what has my accountants so upset.

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 Most importantly, at the end of the course you will have completed a specially
Sylvia’s Order Page
designed journal, each step of the way, giving you opportunity to unleash your
A Message from Sylvia: psychic abilities and claim your new life.

“I want to take you on a journey you will never forget, a journey that I experience Please send me Francine’s gift as well:
every day as one of the world’s most renowned psychics. I have created a course that will The new book, Contacting Your Spirit Guide. In it is a beautiful CD with a meditation
allow you to go deeper into the world of spirituality and the world of abundance than ever on contacting your spirit guide. (It’s one of my favorite meditations!) I’m so excited you are
before. It’s just for you.” getting it.
Yes Sylvia, I want to join you on this journey! I want to be the woman of abundance. Please send me Raheim’s gift as well:
Please send me the gift course you designed for me: God, Creation, and Tools For Life: The beautifully illustrated Heart and Soul card deck. I can’t wait until my spirit guide
helps me answer life’s toughest questions.
 A step-by-step online course, with 10 lessons developed by Sylvia, Francine and
Raheim to specifically give you the blessings, love, and light that you need. Thank your bookkeeper and accountant for letting you go through with this offer. I’m
glad that the angels moved them to send me a screen saver as well.
 Listen to Sylvia with audio that coaches you through the process:
I can’t believe the whole package is just 15 cents a day or $59. Never has so much been
 Discuss the twelve levels of your soul. I am going to recognize all twelve in the
made available for so little.
people around me too.

 Use the 7 schematics as a tool for our finite minds to understand creation. It’s I know that I am protected your generous Conscious Guarantee.
going to be so real to me when I understand the plan of the universe.
The Conscious Guarantee: You are willing to take ALL the risk of your participation
 Define soul mates, twin souls and kindred spirits and discover who they are in in this system. Take the Tools for Life course and follow the simple steps, the exercises, and
your life and how to hurry up and meet them in this lifetime. the action plan you have put together for me.

 Learn about dark entities and white entities and how they sometimes conceal If for any reason I feel this course does not deliver much more than the value I paid for it,
themselves. then I can simply return the Book/CD combination and the cards within 90 days and you will
refund my money, no questions asked. I can even keep the Screen Saver.
 Explore the Seven Lower Levels of Creation — fairies, elves, dragons and all
manner of human thought creations. I know that you can’t offer this special much longer.

 Experience reaching out to others and seeking knowledge as the path to spiri- For immediate access to my course I want to pay by credit card: (Put all the stuff on this
tual growth. I’ll be ready to share my love with the world. page if you can! Try not to have them click on to a third page!)

 Explore her videos to impact your learning. Her teachings will allow you to truly I need to pay by check or money. I am going to print out this page and mail it to:
understand creation. (mailing info would go here)

 Gain the ability read her, see her, and hear her talk about the philosophy and most
important aspects that helped her develop psychic capability. Now there is nothing
stopping you from opening up your own psychic skills.

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Now, notice that, by this time, I’ve done something in Conscious One that I’m no longer
Vocal Power saying — “Click Here.” Now when I want someone to do something, instead of “Click Here,”
I’m giving them a command like, “Get me started right now.” Also, “You can uncover your
Our second letter is also for Conscious One. It was a huge homerun. This letter is for
inner voice,” “We take all of the risk,” and “I’m ready to transform my voice.” Notice also
Arthur Joseph, who is a vocal coach. And it is well worth seeing the layout that this letter
that there are no “buy” links until you get really into the meat of the letter. We’ve learned
was formatted online. (www.ConsciousOne.com)
not to let people click until you have them sold.
I’d like you to picture three columns. On the left-hand column and the right-hand
The vocal power letter has been a huge seven figure success. Study it and reproduce this
column you are looking at, in the format, of just names of famous actors and actresses as
model of the letter and you’ll have a success as well.
you go down the letter. These are all giving proof.

So on the left hand column I’m looking at names such as Sean Connery, Kathy Lee
Crosby, Bruce Davison, Faye Dunaway, Linda Evans, and on the right-hand side I’m
looking at names such as Heather Locklear, Sylvester Stallone, Steven Segal, Joe
Namath. As you go down the list you see all the people that he has worked with.

When I structured this letter, I piled on the benefits in the headline. This is an
amazing secret weapon. People like to believe in secret weapons. It’s been hoarded. It’s
kept away from you by the movie TV starts, the singers, the business leaders and politi-
cians and it does all these things. It skyrockets your self-esteem, it transforms your voice
in minutes a day, it eliminates your fear of public speaking, commands instant respect from
the people you meet. That’s what people want.

Conscious One’s incredible graphics team designed the HTML email in such a way so that
when it hit your Inbox, you saw an incredible testimonial. I think the original testimonial
you saw in this letter was, “My name is Bond, James Bond.” It was a testimonial from Pierce
Brosnan. It currently has, at the top, a testimonial from Tony Robbins.

The letter that you see, the original letter, has the testimonial from Arnold
Schwarzenegger, has a subhead called I’ll Be Back, which is, of course, Arnold’s term from
The Terminator, but Conscious One got a phone call or a love letter from some lawyer saying
that the term I’ll be back is a trademark term and that they couldn’t use it. So they took out
I’ll be back and now it says, Grow, Range and Power.

Remember, I’m showing you the original letter that was submitted. We have no interest
in violating anyone’s trademarks. This letter has gone on to make a fortune for Conscious
One. It has done extremely well, not only on their own list, but in joint venturing and
sending this out to other lists. It’s been a huge, huge homerun.

As you go through this letter pay attention to the bullets. Focus on just how simple this
is all made to seem.

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Vocal Power’s Letter “Chicken Soup for Your Voice!”
“…Arthur Joseph’s proven techniques will make your voice heard and get
Want to change the way people respond to you? This could be the key to what’s been you where you want to go!”
holding you back your entire life... ~ Jack Canfield, Co-Author, Chicken Soup For the Soul Series

Amazing Secret Weapon Hoarded By Movie and


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Now for the first time, you can discover:

“My Name Is Bond — James Bond”  The one mistake even professional singers make that drains the power from their
“Arthur Joseph started as a teacher of mine years ago. Over these years, he voice... and the secret pencil trick that shortcuts your way to a voice that
has become a good friend whose teachings of Vocal Awareness have commands respect.
become a constant in my life. He enlightens with compassion and under-
 How to master your natural voice in the shortest time possible... while you improve
standing of the human spirit and above all else, it works.”
your level of communication with everyone you meet! (You’ll learn everything those stars
~ Pierce Brosnan, Actor paid thousands of dollars for!)

His name is Hollywood insider’s secret. His phone number is memorized by every Broadway  Why “beginners” are able to use these simple techniques to quickly surpass more
actor. Singers, TV announcers, Broadcasters, and Politicians vie for his time...because they experienced professionals... even if you sound like the Wicked Witch of the West!
respect his power.
 How an ordinary pillow helped all-pro linebacker Dick Butkus transform from
Arthur Joseph is a modest and soft spoken man whose private client list is a “Who’s Who” of football star to television analyst. (Not one voice coach in a thousand even suspects
the entertainment world. For 33 years, Joseph has investigated the connection between the power of this simple technique!)
language, breath, and psychological response. His research is startling...
 A stunning secret revealed by singer Mel Torme which offers an insight into his
lifetime success.
“I’ll Be Back!”
 How to instantly diagnose mistakes in your voice — so you’ll never have a commu-
“Arthur’s Vocal Awareness techniques continue to help enhance my vocal
nications problem again. No one will ever mistake what you are saying.
stature. The orderly step-by-step exercises give me usable tools to repeat-
edly grow in voice, clarity, range, and power.”  How Lucie Arnaz overcame an allergic reaction in which she her swollen larynx and
~ Arnold Schwarzenegger, Actor and Governor of California vocal cords would not let her vocalize and used an instant mind-body secret to sing
like a nightingale!
“In everyday communication, only 8% is based on the words we speak. 38% is based on
 How you can dictate your own identity to the world — as you want it to be — and
the sound of our voice, 54% on body language.” When you consider the time spent on
not have it dictated to you.
the phone, 92% of the information is communicated by the sound of our voice.

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“The Secret to Unlimited Power!” The Most Sought-After Voice Coach In The Country!
“I was able to learn an incredible amount about my voice and about how to
have a great impact with more pleasure and less pain.” Quite frankly, Arthur could have gone on teaching his exclusive group of Broadway and
Hollywood stars. The corporate world could hire him to work with their CEO’s and hot
~ Tony Robbins, Success Coach
shot executives, but Arthur believe that everyone should have an equal chance to forever
change the way people see you. And best of all, you can experience the dynamic changes
Isn’t it frustrating? You speak as clear as a bell and people misunderstand what you say. Even the pros line up for...
worse, people misjudge you for no apparent reason!

People spend thousands on Lasik surgery to improve their eyes, tens of thousands to change You Can Uncover Your Inner Voice —
their nose, cheeks, and breasts, yet not a penny to change the way they sound. But for the Absolutely Free! (link)
first time ever...
In a special relationship with Conscious One, Arthur Joseph has agreed to a deal — possibly
You Can Transform Your Life in Minutes A Day! even better than some of the biggest stars enjoy.

Arthur Joseph is prepared to use all of his wizardry and spill the beans on all the insider secrets Here’s what this is all about: Arthur is going to let you harness the power of your inner
... and you’ll experience the magical power that your natural voice commands. voice and boost your self esteem as your life transforms in just minutes a day by partici-
pating in the Vocal Power program.
But it’s not magic at all! You see, what you’ll discover from Arthur has almost nothing to do
with traditional voice coaching... and everything to do with the amazing techniques he has
“Discover the Sound of Your Soul”
developed over the years. He calls it “Vocal Power”, and has used these techniques to provide
an instant boost to the careers of Hollywood’s most famous and now, he’s doing it for you! “If you’re searching for the power within, through Vocal Awareness, you can
find the sound of your soul.”
Conquer Communications Challenges ~ Quincy Jones, Musician, Composer, Producer

Look, would famous singers like Pat Boone and Pete Seeger work with anyone but the best?
Would Yale University invite Arthur Joseph as a visiting artist if not for the proven track This is an extremely limited offer so you’ll have to act quickly ... but we’re taking all the risk.
record he has developed over the years? Would corporate giants like Disney and Toyota let
their executives work with the second best? No way. I’m Ready to Transform My Voice!
You will master techniques to eliminate common vocal communications problems including: You’ll participate in 2 fascinating teleseminars calls with Arthur Joseph. (And we can’t reveal
fear of public speaking, use of a weak “little girl” or “little boy” voice, remove hoarseness and which stars are already besieging our offices seeking to get on the lines.) In these 90 minute
tension, and enhance your body language. calls, Arthur will coach you to a more powerful, commanding, natural voice. These calls are
valued at $250 — which is far less than Arthur charges his Hollywood clients.
Never Have to Raise Your Voice Again!
You’ll participate in the powerful online Vocal Power course. Just log in to the Conscious One
A number of years ago, Arthur performed an incredible demonstration for Tony Robbin’s site and participate in 9 steps to transform your life. You’ll work with Arthur via video
trainers. He walked down a long hallway while maintaining the level of his voice. Even throughout the course and keep record of your astounding transformation. Through break-
though he walked quite far from the trainers, his voice never wavered — effortlessly. His through techniques, you work with Arthur in your home of office, wherever you access the
natural voice projected a long distance. He is perhaps... Internet. Sneak previews to this course have produced rave reviews. This course is a $75 value.

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You’ll also get a copy the Vocal Awareness video so you can view up close the techniques
that will forever change the way you interact with the world. This video is in the homes
Give me the Hollywood Voice Makeover!
of actors and broadcasters, now it can belong to you. Packed into this amazing video is Are these stars any different than you? No, they are not. They represent professionals,
exactly everything you need to know to master the Vocal Awareness program in the amateurs, beginners and people committed to lifelong personal growth.
shortest time possible. Nothing has been left out... you get the same instructional format
that Arthur uses for his hyper-expensive personal lessons... with the added advantage that The only thing they did was to put their doubts aside... and give Vocal Awareness a try. For some
you have it all on tape, so you can rewind and go over any part you like until it becomes of them, it cost several thousand dollars in personal lessons — and was worth every penny.
second nature! This video is a $29 value.
If you, too, can simply put your doubts aside for a short time, you can hear for yourself just
But we’re not finished yet. We have a copy of Vocal Awareness of cassette for you so you can what it’s like to use your voice like a Stradivarius violin... speak with commanding authority...
take it with you in your car or on a plane before your next important meeting. This set reveals and eliminate people misunderstanding what you say.
all the secret techniques the stars line up to learn. Now, they are yours in this package. This
cassette set is valued at $59. Even Better, You’ll Get The Same Vocal Power Techniques
And there’s more: You also get a copy of Arthur’s Vocal Power book. It details the entire For A Fraction Of What Everyone Else Had To Pay!
Vocal Awareness System to integrate your mind-body-spirit awareness. Scattered throughout
are stories of Arthur’s work with Arnold Schwarzenegger who learned to transform the only Listen: A lot of big shots all over the world are going to be furious with us for sharing
“weak muscle” in his body. This book is a $20 value. their “secret weapon” with you... (and I am not looking forward to tangling with “The
Terminator”) especially since you won’t be paying even part of what they had to shell out
You’ll also get a wisdom flash and motivational screen saver to keep you focused on your goal. for one lesson!

Get Me Started Right Now! But that’s just too bad. It’s been a secret for too long. Oh, it’ll take a while for this
program to become so common you’ll see it taught in all schools and colleges — but you’ll
All in all, this package is worth over $433 but it may be worth much more if it uncovers have it right now.
what’s been holding you back in your life.
So let me tell you what the deal is: So if you are ready for a risk free life transformation and
you’re ready to experience the power of your inner voice, you’re ready for Vocal Awareness.
“Uncover the Champion Within!”
“They always say that what comes out of your mouth is who you are…well, This special Conscious One price wouldn’t even buy you 15 minutes with Arthur at his
Arthur is going to make it sound great and make t mean something.” regular fees — the thousands of dollars that people have been giving him for over 30 years for
~ Pat Riley, NBA Coach personal lessons. Yet, when you consider the value of transforming your life... with this
comprehensive program, the price isn’t a drop in the bucket.

But you won’t pay anywhere near that price. First, we want you to experience it for 30 days
absolutely free. And after your 30 day vocal makeover, we’ll charge you just $197. Get Me Started Right Now!
If people aren’t astounded by your transformation, you never pay a dime. That, my friend, is the bargain of a lifetime for someone who wants to transform their life for
new vistas. What’s more, there’s no risk because you get to try it free.
If people don’t treat you differently, Arthur doesn’t want your money.
Now I’m looking a list of top professionals who are proud to call Arthur Joseph their coach.
If you haven’t transformed the relationships — business or personal — in your life, gather I’m looking forward to seeing your name join that elite list.
everything up and send it back.

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Sincerely,
Vocal Power’s Order Page
Scott Martineau
Scott Martineau
 YES, Arthur, I Want My Voice to Command
President the Respect of a Hollywood Movie Star!
Conscious One
Here’s What I Get With My Order
P.S. Please order right now, while you’re still reading because quantities are limited. (and I know I get to examine it for Free!)
There’s no risk, no reason at all not to try this amazing package for yourself... and yet this
deal may never be offered again!  Two Teleconferences With you to guide me to My Natural Voice.

PPS. When you order right now, I’ll throw in the list of all the stars Arthur has worked with.  The Vocal Awareness Audio Set (On Audio). This will be my introduction to the voice
It’s fascinating reading and unlike the tabloids, it’s absolutely true. makeover I’m going to get.

 The Vocal Awareness Video which will enable me to see step by step what is going to get
I Want to Boost My Vocal Power! me to my goal. And I know I get to rewind and listen as many times as I like.
PPPS. Yes, it works on teenagers too! You’ll be astounded at how they respond to you!
 An online course entitled “Vocal Awareness” including audio, meditations, and a
personal journal.

 Your book Vocal Power which details the insider’s guide to personal change through
my voice.

 A beautiful Wisdom Flash and screen saver designed to motivate me to personal change.

 A secret list of Hollywood, Broadway, and Television insiders who have trained with
you. I’ll have hours of fun going through their old movies to uncover when they
started to work with you!

I understand that there will be a small charge of $xx.xx to my credit card to cover shipping.
After that, I will receive my materials for Vocal Awareness. I will have 30 days to use the
online course, wisdom flash and go through video, audio, and book. If for any reason — or
for no reason at all — I want to return the materials. I can do so without penalty and without
paying a dime.

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From tragedy to triumph...
Conversations With God
Okay, the next letter that we’re looking was one of the early one’s for Conscious One. We First He Spoke With God...
wanted to personalize that but we weren’t able to do that on the Internet. And first there was
the tremendous headline, First He Spoke With God, Now He Wants To Talk With You, which
Now He Wants to Talk With You
was an absolute show stopper if ever there was one.

This is a story of Neale Donald Walsch, who wrote the best selling series Conversations Dear First Name,
With God. Now here’s an interesting point you can learn from. When you look at the letter
online, (www.ConsciousOne.com) you’ll see on the right hand side there’s a picture of the An auto accident broke his neck and nearly ended his life. He needed a year’s rehab to
book. Against all instructions, the programmer at Conscious One made that what’s called learn to walk again. Not one but four failed marriages. Living on the streets homeless. His
a hot link. And because that was a hot link, people clicked on it expecting that they would health declined. He was behind on his bills. He was collecting cans and bottles to return
get more information. It took them to an order page and, unfortunately, it was too early for them for the deposit. He was at rock bottom.
them. That was the last time that we ever had a link, that one snuck by. We never allow
links that early in the sales message. “What does it take,” he angrily scratched across a yellow legal pad, “to make life
work?” It was a spiteful, passionate letter, filled with angry questions. (Those might even
Here, I spent a lot of time getting into the tone and understanding that the audience be your questions.)
was primarily women, which makes it a very, very gentle tone. It’s talking about connec-
tions. It’s connecting with Neale and it’s connecting with God as well. So, lines that are Now most people know that prayer means talking to God. But today, nobody talks with
significant are, “Neale will be providing answers to your questions. You’ll laugh, you’ll cry God. That kind of stuff doesn’t happen right? At least not to you and me.
and your life will change in the blink of an eye.” I wasn’t really going for the rhyme there,
Now well chronicled and widely talked about, it was this questioning letter that received
but I was going for the sensitivity.
a Divine answer. Neale Donald Walsch says that he heard a voice, soft and kind, warm and
Lines such as, “Neale brought light, love and laughter into their lives. He wiped tears from loving, that gave him an answer to this and other questions.
their eyes and cheeks. He eased their pain and made them smile again. He has filled their lives
Awestruck and inspired, he quickly scribbled these responses onto the pad. More
with meaning and now he’s ready to talk to you.”
questions came, and, as fast as they occurred to him, answers were given in the same still soft
Neale Donald Walsch introduced a teleseminar series that was 12 calls long. One of voice, which now seemed placed inside his head. Before he knew it, Neale found himself
the things we discovered was that 12 calls, spaced out over a year, was way too much for engaged in a two-way on-paper dialogue. He continued this first “conversation” for hours, and
most people. I thought we were building value here, however, the letter would’ve done had many more in the weeks that followed, always awakening in the middle of the night and
better with just three phone calls from Neale. The program is being released again with being drawn back to his legal pad.
all of the recorded material included.
Neale’s verbatim handwritten notes would later become the best-selling Conversations
with God books. He says the process was “exactly like taking dictation,” and that the dialogue
created in this way was published without significant alteration or editing.

Conversations With God was a runaway bestseller. It was on the New York Times
Bestseller list for 2 1/2 years! It’s been translated into 34 languages. Industry insiders discuss
Conversations With God as a world wide publishing phenomenon. But more essential than
all that, what I’m going to tell you is so important...

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It Can Transform Your Life! Your Life Makeover
Overnight, thousands of people swamped Neale with questions. Patiently, Neale brought Every time Neale speaks publicly people respond. Some smile and rejoice inside. Other
meaning back into the lives of millions of people who... shed cleansing tears of joy. So many people want to make contact with Neale and it has hurt
and frustrated him that he couldn’t reach, teach and inspire them all.
 Didn’t believe God exists or believed God exists but believed a God that offered
nothing to help themselves or help humanity. You see, Neale is driven by his mission — changing the world, one person at a time. And
his service won’t be complete, unless you’re walking and talking with God too.
 Wanted desperately to talk with God
After a great deal of searching, Neale got the message to use the amazing tools of modern
 Had unanswered questions.
technology to communicate with people the world over. And that’s why Neale got in touch
 Had challenges in their lives. with us at Conscious One to make his dream a reality. Conscious One is using the breath-
taking power and immediacy of the Internet to extend Neale’s reach into the hearts and
 Wanted direction in their lives. minds of his readers. You’ll be able to make contact with Neale and get the toughest
questions of your life answered from the comfort and security of your own home.
He became an international sensation. Everywhere he went, people had unanswered
questions. From Peru to Japan, from Red Square in Moscow to St. Peters Square in Vatican Neale is looking for people who want the message of God to change their lives. Who want
City to Tiananmen Square in China. And everywhere he has gone — from South Africa to to live inspired lives and help transform the entire world. If you have ever had a desire to
Norway, Croatia to The Netherlands, the streets of Zurich to the streets of Seoul; Neale has touch other people with a message that could alter their lives, this program is for you.
found a hunger among the people to find a new way to live, at last, in peace and harmony.
And you’re invited to a series of life transforming telephone calls with Neale. These calls
Neale brought light, love, and laughter into their lives. He wiped tears from their eyes and are not lectures or talks. This is a sincere opportunity for dialogue and growth. These calls
cheeks. He eased their pain and made them smile again. He has filled their lives with meaning. are Neale’s response to all those who thirst for more.
But he couldn’t make contact with all the people who wanted to talk with him. And each Neale will be providing answers to your questions. You’ll laugh. You’ll cry. And your life
book that he penned to answer his reader’s questions prompted even more readers who will change — in the blink of an eye.
wanted to get in touch with him in return. It was a source of frustration to him — until now...
Making the Connection
A Life-Changing Opportunity
Here’s Neale at his best taking your questions and answering them. And remember; only
What would happen to your life if your most difficult questions melted away in the words spoken from the heart enter directly to the heart.
warmth of an answer that touched your heart? And your heart began to feel real joy inside.

Most teachers reach the brain. Only the rarest teach the brain and engage the heart. Conversations With God — Connecting With God
Now, an incredibly rare opportunity has arisen as author Neale Donald Walsch the one Each call will be loosely planned around these topics. Because this will be like a conversation
teacher in our generation who can reach inside and touch your soul, is providing the contact with a good friend, each call may suddenly head in a totally new and different direction. And
his readers have long desired. the questions that lay heavy on your heart — possibly for years — may be lifted in an instant.

But as a great teacher once said, only if you are ready to bring answers into your life.  January — What Does God Want From You In 2004?

So this is an extremely select group. It’s not for everyone. But if you’re interested in  February — It’s Valentine’s Day — Where’s The Love?
developing yourself spiritually and as a person, it’s right for you.

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 March — Why Do Bad Thing Happen to Good People? Just 48 hours after each call, the entire call will be posted on our website. You will be able
to listen to each call on the website when it fits YOUR schedule.
 April — God, Love and Sex

 May — Making Your Life A Conversation With God


Or replay the parts where Neale responded to
YOUR question for your friends to hear.
 June — Which Religion Is True?

 July — The Most Powerful Way to Pray


May I Invite God Into Your Life?
Neale’s mission will not be complete unless you are part of this historic process. He was
 August — The Reason for Suffering in the World
so concerned that as many people as possible participate in these calls that he asked
 September — Prophecy for the Future Conscious One to design three levels of membership.

 October — What Is the Most Important Election of All Time?


SILVER MEMBERSHIP — Entitles you to a priority position on each call and access to
 November — Back to the Garden of Eden the call via the Internet following each call.
 December — When All Religions Unite SILVER BONUS — A free online course Conversations With God Book I

Now you are the one in the driver’s seat. And you can’t get lost because Neale will be Make Your Entire Life A Conversation With God! This is the first experiential online
there gently guiding each call. course specifically designed to embody the Conversations With God philosophy. Change in
our world starts one person at a time. We believe that the deep changes you can experience
How Does This Work? from this course will allow you to be the change you wish to see in the world.

Once a month, Neale will invite you via email to attend a conference call with him. We Silver membership is priced at just $9.00 a month. Sign me up right now!
will also post the schedule on our web site. You will be issued a special phone number and a
unique secret identity code. (Only one person can use the code during a call so no one can GOLD MEMBERSHIP — Entitles you to a priority position on each call and access to
take away your spot.) the call via the Internet following each call.

And then it’s a unique dialogue with Neale. Each call will last around an hour. When GOLD BONUS — 2 free online courses. Includes Conversations With God Book I and
Neale gets on a topic, a clock is the furthest thing from his mind. Communion with God

Each call is unique and transforming. During the call, you’ll be engaged and involved. At Most people believe in God, they just don’t believe in a God who believes in them.
its conclusion you’ll be energized, happy, and filled with new directions. Well, welcome to a course that will make you a believer. In order to do so, you must look
beyond the Ten Illusion of Humans. When you recognize these Illusions, you can change
Remember, these calls are not canned or lectures. You will interact spontaneously the way you think. This course discusses the experience of Oneness with the Divine and
with Neale. describes a path to that experience, a pathway through our illusions (the Ten Illusions of
Now we understand that sometimes life gets in the way. It’s your anniversary and you’re Humans), to ultimate reality.
going out for dinner. You’re being presented an Academy Award and you need to receive your ADDITIONAL GOLD BONUS — each call will be sent to you on a CD for your perpetual
Oscar in person. Your daughter just got out of bed again and you need to sit with her until listening and growth.
she falls asleep. Not to worry.
Gold membership is priced at just $19.00 a month. I Want to Go For the Gold!

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PLATINUM MEMBERSHIP (This is for the serious spiritual seekers only) — Entitles you I’ll be looking for you to join with Neale on this incredible journey.
to a priority position on each call and access to the call via the Internet following each call.
Welcome to 2004 — an entire year of spiritual growth for you.
PLATINUM BONUS: Two additional calls with Neale Donald Walsch for Platinum
members only. (One in the Spring and the other in the Fall.) Sincerely,

ADDITIONAL PLATINUM BONUS — 3 free online courses. Conversations With God Scott Martineau (Bold Signature in Blue Please)
Book I and Communion with God plus Abundance Scott Martineau
President
In the Conversations with God Abundance Course, you will gain a deep understanding
Conscious One
of how the benevolent universe works to provide us with the abundance that is naturally
already ours. Through the study of each lesson, meditative practice, journal entries, prayer, P.S. So many people have contacted Neale over the years to ask him questions that we put
and a weekly action, you will uncover Who You Are and the power to create anything you together this opportunity for you to transform your life. It’s a new year. Claim your new life now.
desire in your reality.

ADDITIONAL PLATINUM BONUSES: I Want To Develop More Spiritually This Year!


 each call will be sent to you on a CD for your perpetual listening and growth. P.P.S. Remember, there’s absolutely no risk here. Listen to the first call and get all the
benefits. Take 30 days to make up your mind, no pressure at all. If you decide that this isn’t
 each call will be transcribed and sent to you as a keepsake of each call. the path for you, we’ll refund your money. No questions asked.

Platinum membership is priced at just $29.00 a month. I’m ready to transform my


life right now!

Talking With Neale — Making Your Life A Walk With God


This is something you’ll want to get in on right away to make sure you don’t get closed
out. Remember, when you are issued your own secret call in code, you can access the call
from anywhere — even your portable phone.

I’m so positive that these calls are going to transform your life that I’m going to make you
an offer straight from the heart.

Sign up for the membership level you prefer and participate in one of the calls. If you
have any second thoughts about your membership at all, I’ll gladly refund your money.

You can even cancel your membership along the way.

But my heart tells me these calls are going to be the wake-up call to more than one drowsy
soul. It could be yours. And the more you think about it, the more certain you become that
this could be the biggest change in your life.

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The most amazing part is you can learn it too!
The Psychic Navigator
You are looking at a letter that did not go out as it appears here. How A Near Fatal Road Collision Accidentally
The artist didn’t like my letter at all so he rewrote it his way and the good folks at Gave A Boston Man The Ability To Communicate
Conscious One did a split test. Let’s just say the artist no longer fancies himself as a With Those Who Have Passed On!
copywriter. It ended up being a massacre not just a test.
“It’s so simple, you can develop your own psychic abilities,” he says… and he
Here you see how my work with John Carlton paid off. Studying John Holland’s INSISTS he can quickly teach his simple secret to YOU… overnight you can
materials, I came up with the hook linking the road collision and his ability to communi- increase your sensitivity and improve your relationships, receive intuitive
cate with the dead.
guidance on important decisions in your life, be connected to your loved ones who
I am following the Carlton mantra here — simple, quick, and easy. have passed on, and become more in touch with nature and the universe.”

You can see the actual live letter at Conscious One’s site but this is the one I wanted to
mail. I have created a secret website just for owners of this book. It’s located at
Hi Conscious One Member,
www.overnight-copy.com/secretpage.html.
How much would you enjoy suddenly having a reputation as a “human GPS system?”
Your user name is Overnight and your password is Copy. When you log on, I’ll point
Have you been in a car with a GPS system yet? Connected by satellite, these devices pinpoint
you to a really important discussion about writing for artists. If you are considering writing
your position and give you step by step directions to your destination. When you use a GPS
a sales letter for someone else, you need this information before you get started.
system, it’s impossible to get lost. What does this have to do with being able to communicate
with people who have passed on? I’ll get to that in a minute.

I’ll tell you, as much as I love learning about people harnessing their own inner abilities...
my biggest thrill is still watching someone like John Holland at work. As television programs
trying to expose him have learned, he is so dead-on accurate with total strangers you can’t
help but wonder...how does he do it?

That’s where you really earn your respect in this field — when even people who don’t
believe come to recognize there is some special about you. And that’s why I believe you’re
going to LOVE hearing about this.

Here’s the story: Some say the heavens opened up that night dumping torrents of water
on Los Angeles. Add a pitch black night and windshield wipers so tired they could barely
keep up with the deluge. That’s when it happened.

As the car began to hydroplane, John Holland knew he was about to die. His car lifted
off the road rocketing for a steep incline when it happened. The car began spinning and
skidding when the white light appeared and engulfed the car. One minute, the light was
there...the next minute, it was gone.

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Some people think the light rearranged the electrical system inside John Holland’s Think about it... when you have the ability to tap into your psychic nature... your life
body — at least that’s the explanation they gave on CBS television’s Unsolved Mysteries. will expand in totally new dimensions and people will be lining up at your door.
After the accident, John felt his body surging with energy and that’s when he began to
notice something unusual. When he began to communicate with people, he began to tell Gosh... It’s just possible you may be featured on Unsolved Mysteries too or people will be
them what was happening in their lives. Something inside of him just clicked and he eagerly seeking YOUR advice when you discover...
began to see other people’s pasts and their futures clearly.
You’re A Psychic Navigator Too!
Until he learned to harness his powers, he was out of control. When people would call
to ask how he was after the accident, he would ask them about events in their lives. “Why How does a regular guy from Boston constantly astound people with his stunning power
did you call Rick when you said you would never speak to him again?” and accuracy? Turns out... you don’t need to be born a psychic to get in touch with the inner
ability most people have. You don’t even need to have any special abilities to give and receive
People were shocked. But he was always on target — even if people tried to deceive messages from the other side. It’s all in the training.
him. His readings were so accurate; he earned the title of the “human GPS system” because
he was literally, never off target. Now John’s natural psychic powers were activated after his near-fatal accident. He saw he
could not escape his destiny as a psychic medium and began to explore his field in earnest.
So you can imagine the shock and dismay among the people who don’t believe in But one of the most influential growth periods in his life took place when John enrolled in
psychic powers when John walked up to them and read their lives like an open book...and what he now calls “Psychic Boot camp” in .England. That’s where John began to receive
pretty soon, television crews began to track him and tried to catch him but the hardest international recognition of his abilities.
skeptics soon became raving fans.
And it just dawned on him one day. Everyone has the same innate abilities to get in
And because John Holland has been dealing with believers and skeptics his whole life, touch with their psychic self (perhaps you already sense this) but just doesn’t know how to
he insists you put him to the test... get started. It’s so simple, really. In fact... if you had the right teacher, you could get a
jumpstart with your own abilities.
And Watch As You Discover Your Own Psychic Abilities!
Introducing: Psychic Navigator Boot Camp
John Holland is one of the world’s leading psychic mediums. Although he lectures
publicly around the world, he is booked for private session some 18 months in advance so if To be psychic or intuitive is a natural process, but first you will need to know exactly how
you were thinking about a one on one session with John, you can pretty much forget getting it works and how to access your abilities. So John has teamed up with Conscious One to
one. He has a documented ability to locate and communicate with loved ones who have produce his Psychic Navigator Boot Camp.
passed away. In fact, very often he will tell people he doesn’t know who on the other side
wants to come through with a message. Relax; you won’t have to do a single push-up in this boot camp. All you need to do in
look inside yourself and...
But what’s REALLY shaking up the psychic world... is the unsettling fact...
You will discover how to:
John Says He Can Quickly And Easily Teach ANYONE How  Appreciate what Psychic really means. Hint, it’s not what you see on television.
To Tap In to Their Own Psychic Abilities!
 Determine the difference between Clairvoyance, Clairaudience, and Clairsentient and
I tell you... you haven’t seen anything until you’ve reached the level where — upon uncover which ability is the strongest with you, by using different techniques and exercises.
meeting someone for the first time — you just get a sense telling you someone is trying to
 Using your body as a psychic antennae to tune into answers for yourself.
come through from the other side. And the more you trust and sharpen this ability, the more
you will be able to pinpoint exactly who it is and what their message it.  Use various meditation and visualization techniques to expand your abilities.

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 Discover your Chakras, or energy centers which correspond to the endocrine glands of the “Your loved ones are just a thought away.”
body and run up along the spinal chord.
~ John Holland
 John reveals how to interpret the chakras and read their signals.
Here’s what this Psychic Navigator Boot camp is all about: We’ve put together a
 The seven major energy points, and their location in the body
program to teach you how to tap in to your own inner abilities. It consists of four parts.
 The Colors and meanings associated with each chakra.
You’ll get a copy of John’s Psychic Navigator book which includes its very own Psychic
 Balancing our own chakras Meditation CD. It’s a step by step guide to getting started as a psychic medium.
 How the chakras affect the body You’ll be enrolled in John’s Psychic Navigator On Line course which he designed especially
for people who want to get started right away in harnessing their own psychic energies.
 Breathing techniques to help you expand and get your energy moving!

 Detecting the blaze of color that surrounds our bodies, can be seen using your clairvoyant vision. You receive a new specially designed CD containing the right Meditations so you can
bring out your hidden talents and reveal your psychic skills.
 John will demonstrate the techniques to both sense and see auras their colors and interpretation.
And this could be the best part...
 How to read the Auras
You’ll be enrolled in a 3 part Teleseminar series where John will personally take you by
 Opening & Expanding your Aura the hand and reveal exactly how he does all the amazing feats he performs and show you how
 Using your Aura to detect spirit in your presence to do it too.

 Psychic etiquette and Safety techniques And because John knows there’s a part of you that is curious about your own abilities...and
there’s probably a smaller part that’s still skeptical...John is ready to shoot over a copy of his
 Reaching beyond the five senses Psychic Navigator Boot Camp to your door before you even pay a dime.
 Psychometry (reading objects)
I Want To Tap In to My Own Psychic Abilities!
 Dreams & Symbology
But the cost isn’t the issue here at all as you discover...
 Reading for yourself and others
You Really Have Suddenly
and most important of all...
Developed the Psychic Skills You’ve Wondered About!
When To Apply Your Psychic Abilities To Spread And if you are not delighted with astounding people with your new skills, simply return
Good Throughout The World. the set, and I’ll see that your credit card is never charged.

You’ll look smooth and relaxed... and, in fact, you’ll BE in complete control as you begin Even better... take a full 30 days to evaluate your own Psychic abilities.
to reveal your newly uncovered abilities. But... at a time and place of your choosing, you’re
going to just UNLOAD and ASTOUND your friends, neighbors, and relatives. I Want To Tap In to My Own Psychic Abilities!
Let me tell you, it feels good to help people when they’re in trouble. It feels like MAGIC... I can afford to be so generous... because I know the exciting TRUTH. You see... this secret
especially when people sit down to watch “Medium” on television and say, “Oh, we know really does work! It’s amazing, it’s like magic, it shouldn’t BE this easy and simple... but it is.
someone just like that...when that someone is YOU!

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Look, you know there have been times when someone’s called on the phone or rang your
doorbell and you knew who it was in advance. What if you could turn that ability into a Sonia Choquette
continuous source of inspiration? The most interesting part of this sales letter for Sonia Choquette is what you do not
see here. You’re looking at the actual sales letter that went out, but in this case
Just imagine the television crews heading over to your home to reveal your abilities to the
Conscious One and I did something for the first time that was new to their list and that
world. Or the police consulting with you in a missing person case. And imagine them solving
was warming up the list.
the case — with your help!
Conscious One had done fairly well by selling Sonia’s Psychic University One which
Here’s how to get into the Psychic Navigator Boot Camp: You can use your credit
was a much smaller, lower-priced package and now they were coming out with Psychic
card. It’s just $xxx.xx plus shipping and handling and like I said, you don’t pay a penny for
University Two.
the program until a full month has passed. You don’t risk a penny. (And never forget you’re
dealing with Conscious One, and our international reputation is solid gold with over a When we began working up the list by sending them emails reminding them about
hundred thousand folks like you.) Psychic University One and letting them know the new package was coming and they
should look for an email.
There’s just one little thing: John is going to come under an immense amount of
pressure from professional psychics for releasing this program. They don’t enjoy the fact Then there was a period of a few weeks when we did not hit the list at all and Conscious
that John is going public and revealing that everyone can have these abilities. And if John One started getting emails and phone calls asking if they had missed the Sonia Choquette
is forced to give in to this pressure, I doubt you’ll see another program like this one for ... offer, because we had indicated that it was going to be a limited offer, people were willing to
maybe 10 years down the road. buy site unseen just to get their hands on this package.

I Want To Tap In to My Own Psychic Abilities! Sonia has always been one of the most cooperative artists with Conscious One and will
let us write anything and say anything. She has a huge number of fans and this package has
Skeptics in the media have been won over in just seconds. Now, it’s your turn to tune in done exceptionally well with the Conscious One audience. Conscious One started out by
to your own powers that have been there asleep waiting for you to awaken them. wanting to reach spiritual people and this package is aimed exactly at their audience.

Sincerely, Pay attention to the language here. We’re talking to their hearts desire and the language
is written almost entirely to the female audience. One of the things that occurred early in my
Scott Martineau (Bold Signature in Blue Please) training is that John Carlton told me that I wasn’t very good at writing to women and, as a
Scott Martineau consequence, had me subscribe to Oprah Magazine and to read some Danielle Steele novels.
President He was actually quite surprised to find out that I did it and the result you see here in this
Conscious One package. I can’t say that I became a Danielle Steele fan but, nonetheless, this was a highly
effective letter for Conscious One.
P.S. One last thing — John insists — and he’ll talk about this throughout the Boot Camp;
you use your powers ethically and with consideration for others. When the voices from the
other world become as clear to you as your own thoughts, you may be tempted to share every-
thing you hear and discover, but there’s a sense of responsibility that comes with this. John
will teach you everything you need to know to harness your powers once you enroll in his
Psychic Boot Camp. And let me say, I know you are going delighted with your results.

Get Started Right Now!

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Everything You Have Wanted in Life Begins Here... “Sonia Choquette is the most authentic person in psychic phenomena I have
ever encountered.”
What Is Your Heart’s Desire? ~ Dr. Wayne W. Dyer, bestselling author of 10 Secrets
for Success and Inner Peace
Whether you are seeking true love, financial stability, a
new job, or health, you are about to acquire a simple
You have joined my quest in your own personal journey into sixth sensory living when you
secret to creating life … as your heart desires it to be.
signed up for the first online course in Psychic University: Level 1 — Awakening Your Psychic
Sense: Basic Training for Sixth Sensory Living.
Dear Spiritual Seeker,
Now, it’s time you invite you to the next level...
Right now, your heart is calling out to you. Your hopes, your dreams, and your joy are
waiting ahead of you. Creating Your Hearts Desire
Are you ready to claim what your heart already knows is yours and turn your dreams Even as a child, I discovered the truth that we are the creative architects of our life experience.
into reality?
No matter what your heart’s desire is — whether large or small — you can make it happen
As many of you know, it has always been my heart’s desire to start a psychic revolution by following the recipe to your dreams that I am going to reveal.
and lead us out of the dark ages and into the light and peace of sixth-sensory living.
Should I tell you the story of Alicia who tried for five years to have a child? She suffered
I am on a mission to make it possible for everyone who is interested to learn to awaken the pain and suffering of three miscarriages. Then she opened her heart to these principles,
the voice of their soul to do so, no matter where they live, and on their own schedule, at their became pregnant within months and gave birth to a beautiful baby boy.
own pace and in a way that is affordable.
Heidi’s story is remarkable as well. For years she tried to shed the extra 75 pounds she was
This is all part of my personal soul assignment to help balance lives and heal the planet. carrying around. Her self-confidence was done to zero. She embraced these principles and
shed fifty pounds (so far) and she became her true self.

“With every word, Sonia’s gift to simplify the seemingly complex and arcane Here’s the path to creating your own heart’s desire...
‘hidden world’ of inner wisdom brings truth closer to the heart. Trust her vibes.”
~ Billy Corgan, singer, songwriter, and founder of the Smashing Introducing Psychic University Level Two.
Pumpkins and Zwan Many people start at the beginning — they really don’t know what their heart truly desires.

As you progress you will...


“For more than 14 years, Sonia Choquette has been a trusted advisor and  Discover how to tune inward and dial down outside distractions in your life so your
tour guide of my life. Her vision gives me confidence in myself and what lies can open up to the messages calling from your heart.
in store for me. When Sonia shares her amazing gifts with you, doors you’ve
never seen before start to open right before your eyes.”  Ask yourself questions to bring yourself in alignment with desires you didn’t even
know you had.
~ Wendy Miller, Emmy Award winning producer and writer
 Rapidly and easily sort out real desires from misguided hopes and wishes. You’ll rapidly
distinguish between the voice calling from your own heart and the demands made

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 You’ll be able to focus on exactly what you want out of life and eliminate all obsta- And then, we get together in a small intimate teleconference where I lead you to your
cles keeping you from your dreams. heart’s desire! I’m going to give you “homework” on the call (This is a University!) to move
you along the path of your dreams.
 You’ll make the right decisions without ever second guessing yourself. For many
people this is one of the most important principles they’ll ever learn. And here is the very best part; you can have them
for free (make a graphic!) for 30 days.
You Already Have Complete Control Over Your
Heart’s Desires... Allow Me to Unlock Them. Get Started Right Now in Pursuing Your Hopes and Dreams
This course is a combination of on-line and off-line learning and best of all... I’m Going The total cost of this spectacular opportunity to obtain your Heart’s Desires is $449.95.
to Personally See You Through From Beginning to End! This is in itself a bargain because currently, a reading with me is $650 an hour and I’m booked
ahead for the next two years.
Here’s What Is Going to Open the Doors of Your Heart For You.

 Three Teleconferences With Me to Guide You to Getting In Touch With Your Heart.
“I love Sonia Choquette. She’s a beautiful, sweet soul with a Divine connec-
Normally, a live teleconference call with me costs $99 each.
tion. Her book Diary of a Psychic shows how you, too can connect with your
 Creating Your Heart’s Desires Audio Set (On Audio or CD’s). This will be your introduc- own psychic abilities. In my world, Sonia is tops!”
tion to the Principles for Living The Life You Really Want. This set sells for $69.95. ~ Louise L. Hay, bestselling author of You Can Heal Your Life

 A Guidebook with exercises to sharpen the messages from your heart to your mind.
The general public will pay $327 for this package, but because you took the Psychic University
 An online course entitled “Creating Your Hearts Desire” including audio, meditations, I course, your tuition for Psychic University II is only $175. (Plus shipping and handling.)
and a personal journal. This has a $69 value.
But best of all, you don’t pay a cent until you’ve
 A beautiful Wisdom Flash designed to touch your soul.
received these materials and had a month to put
 A Principle Card with The Nine Principles of Creativity set out on a convenient carry them to use in your life creating your dreams.
with you card.
These materials are not for everyone. But if you are ready to set aside yearning for your
 An alchemy box that will serve as your symbolic messenger who will deliver your desires dreams and ready to start living them, I want you to get started right now.
to the universe along with the magical materials you need to make it your own.
I am anxiously looking forward to speaking with you shortly.
 A candle which will light up not only your surroundings but the recesses of your soul.
Wishing that your fondest heart’s desires come true,
 The first 500 to register will also receive a copy of my book Your Psychic Pathway to New
Beginnings which sells for $14.
Sonia Choquette (Sign in Blue Please)

I Want to Get In Touch With My Heart’s Desires Right Now! Sonia Choquette Ph.D.

When you enroll in Psychic University II, you will receive immediate access to your on PS. The good folks at Conscious One have put in a request that I am anxious to grant. I
line course and wisdom flash. Then, in a few days, a large package from me will arrive will be doing a reading for several of you who join on the call. I am going to ask you some
containing your materials in a special Heart’s Desire Package. specific questions when you register for Psychic University II.

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“Change the way you look at things and the things you look at will change…”
Wayne Dyer
The next letter that we are looking at was for Wayne Dyer. This letter was timed to How to Change Your Life with the
coincide with the publication of his new book, The Power of Intention. One of the things
that undoubtedly made this letter a success was that this was released approximately the
Power of Intention
same time that Wayne’s appeared on his annual PBS program. And getting a hold of that
schedule and releasing the book the same week made a huge amount of sense for Conscious “In the universe, there is an immeasurable, indescribable force which
One and this was a fairly successful letter. shamans call intent, and absolutely everything that exists in the entire
Now the interesting thing. As I said, this was a fairly successful letter. One of the reasons cosmos is attached to intent by a connecting link.”
for its success, as Conscious One discovered, was the more times they went to their list, the ~ Carlos Castaneda
more their list would pay. And, I believe that this was a relatively inexpensive package for
Conscious One. It was just $59. Conscious One has been able to get significantly more When Wayne Dyer read those words many years ago, he had no idea how long a journey
money out of that list. So, this letter sold well to a number of different lists but the price point would be until the release of his latest book, The Power of Intention.
was much lower than what Conscious One is accustomed to.
This new work is being featured on Public Television this month.

His extensive research has revealed intention as the force in the universe that allows
creation to take place.

His book teaches you how to access the field of energy called intention to begin co-
creating your life.

“To me, this is the best of all Dr. Dyer’s books. He takes all he has been
teaching to a higher and clearer dimension. This book is life-changing, life-
saving. Have been searching for a long time — like the Emily Dickinson
quote ‘Not knowing when the Dawn will come, I open every Door.’ This new
book by Dr. Dyer is a Door — the ultimate Door as far as I am concerned. It
is a ‘Door’ to the Infinite, a path to connect to our Source, a ‘Door’ with Light
flooding through. It spoke to me at a time when I had almost given up the
search for truth. For me, it has been a healing as no other book has been.”
~ Cathy, Philadelphia

It’s a simple 10 step program designed to make intention your reality.

 You’ll first discover what the field of intention is and what it means to be
connected to it.

 Wayne helps you to understand the feel of intention and offers a new mantra: “I

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want to feel good!” You’ll get valuable advice for bypassing obstacles so that inten- “When they say ‘the best is yet to come’ I must say it has arrived in Wayne
tion can flow in your life. Dyer’s new book The Power of Intention. If everyone read this book and took
it to heart, it would be a beautiful world.”
 You’ll learn tips for overriding the ego in order to align with your Source.
~ Karen L. Hopson
 Wayne discusses the active/inactive sides of infinity and offers action steps for
moving to the active side. You’ll learn the importance of getting past your fears to
see yourself as an infinite being. I Want to Learn Wayne Dyer’s Secrets!
 Discover the seven faces of intention: creativity, kindness, love, beauty, expansion, But that’s not all.
abundance, and receptivity. You’ll learn the value of practicing nonresistance
thinking and saying “yes” to life. Because it is important for you to know the peace of Spirit in your life, then our online
course by Wayne Dyer will be vitally important for you.
 Immediately learn how to put intention to work for you. Dr. Dyer provides step-by-
step instructions for applying these principles to your daily life.
“If you are looking for a book that will help you see exactly how to manifest
 And finally, learn what impact intention has on others when you become
the life you have always wanted, then ‘The Power of Intention’ will be a
connected. You’ll learn how to change the way you look at things, and discover the
valuable and wonderful tool to help you BECOME who you really are, from
things you look at change.
the inside out, and THEN, you will see your entire life turn around.”
Here are the characteristics of people who are connected with the power of intention: ~ Barbara Rose

 They never rely on luck. When they decide to do something, they The course is 10 Secrets to Success and Inner Peace. Wayne has distilled the essence of
make it happen. his life-transforming work.

 They refuse to think about what can’t happen. Instead, they focus on In this course, he elaborates on ten principles to success and inner peace, which, if
what will happen. mastered and practiced on a daily basis, will guide you to an inner sense of tranquility.

 They place their thoughts on exactly what they want. The ten secrets in this course are valuable for anyone who has decided to consciously be
on their life path. Each of us makes that choice depending on our individual time clock. For
some, it’s early in young adulthood; and for others, it happens in the middle or mature years.
Once you own these characteristics, it’s all automatic. And Wayne’s new book tells you The secrets apply whether you’re just beginning your life path, are nearing the end of it, or
step by step how to make this part of your life. are on the path in any way.

These ten secrets allow your spirit to guide you. Read these secrets with an open heart.
“It is an outstanding book. The months of waiting for it to be published Apply the ones that resonate with you, and discard those that don’t.
seemed long at times but were certainly worth the wait.”
Listen to Wayne’s dynamic lessons delivered with audio:
~ Diane E. Keith-Williams
 How to avoid feelings of inadequacies!
Now I’d like very much for you to get these secrets as soon as possible. I consider this  Help you feel the peace of God that truly defines success!
book the culmination of Wayne’s life’s work.
 Living free from the good opinion of other people!

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 Being in command of your conduct rather than letting your past dictate your Sincerely,
way of being!

 Consciously planning each day using the 10 Secrets daily planner!


Scott Martineau (Bold Signature in Blue Please)
Scott Martineau
 Teaches you that you are capable of manifesting miracles in your life! President
Conscious One
 Grounding your day with morning and evening meditations!
PS. If you missed the Wayne Dyer special on PBS, please check your television schedule
 Find the peace that you crave in your daily life!
because it will be repeated. It is worth seeing (even more than once!)
 Brings you to the knowing that any problem can be solved with a spiritual solution!
PPS. Remember, you can be started on changing your life in under two minutes. You can get
 Because you can read, see, and hear Wayne Dyer talk about the actions you are started right now.
about to take, you get more than just a book or an online course, you get guidance
from the “Father of Motivation”.

 Most importantly, at the end of the course you will have completed a specially
designed journal, each step of the way, giving you a chance to put Wayne Dyer’s 10
Secrets into Action for Yourself

And you can get started in less than two minutes!


The book and online course is just $59. It’s an incredible opportunity to learn from the
Father of Motivation, Dr. Wayne Dyer.

Millions of people have changed their lives because of Wayne Dyer’s teaching.

Before there was a Tony Robbins...

Before there was a Dr. Phil...

There was one and only Wayne Dyer. Get his new book and online course now!

My partner at Conscious One grabbed our copy of The Power of Intention first and
couldn’t put it down. He can’t stop raving about this book.

Grab Your Copy Now!


As always, this offer comes with our Conscious One guarantee. If you are unhappy for any
reason, just send us back the book and get a quick refund. Take up to a full month to read
the book and go through the online course and watch your life change.

Please let me know your results.

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release destructive patterns so he’s releasing these patterns so you’d know how to defend
The Power of The Dark Side yourself against these patterns.
This letter, The Power of the Dark Side, had a huge response. This was the first letter that
He lists the patterns one at a time. Here are The Dark Side patterns that I will be
I wrote for former business partner, Kenrick Cleveland, and this letter was just a grand slam
sharing. Forgive me that I cannot say more in an email and just lists the patterns that are
homerun out of the park. Not only did I write the letter but, in fact, I even worked with
inside with relationship dissolver, compulsions installer, the claw, the suicide pattern, the
Kenrick on structuring the package.
migraine pattern, the ultimate values destroyer. People would see these things and say, my
When Kenrick came to me, his idea was to sell two of his tapes for approximately $400, gosh these things sound horrible I need to get a hold of these things.
and he told me that he thought it would sell very well. I began talking to him about building
One of the most unusual things is that this course does not have a money back
up the size of the package. Dan Kennedy refers to the “Thud Factor” as a technique where
guarantee. Now everybody knows that when you want to sell something, the more
you make the package so heavy that it lands on the floor with a THUD. That’s exactly what
generous the guarantee the more the sales. Kenrick did not want to give a guarantee here
we did. We built in the Thud Factor.
and we had to make that an actual benefit.
The story behind this letter is that we began adding more and more elements to the
A huge number of bonuses were included here and the sale went on. I’m not showing
package, ended up pricing it at $1,277, and then cut it to $1,077 if they ordered within a short
the order page here but on the order page you had to promise to use these patterns
period of time. This was the highest priced package Kenrick had sold at the time, and sales
ethically before you could use them.
went through the roof. I believe, in a six week period, he did something like $186,000 in
sales. Needless to say, he had never seen anything like it, and struggled to fulfill it.

There are a lot of interesting things that we’re doing here in the letter and let’s go through
them one at a time. The first thing is the pre-head. It’s the hottest, most highly requested
material I’ve ever developed. And then a really unusual headline beginning with a take away,
“You can’t buy this material unless you promise not to use it.” Now that really makes people
stop. Why would I buy the material unless I promise not to use it? It begs that you go on and
try and understand it and then we come to The Power of The Dark Side. And, of course, The
Dark Side is probably a reference to the dark side of the force which came out of the Star Wars
movies, and I, in fact, refer to that throughout the letter. And later on when the Revenge of
the Sith movie came out we did a re-release of The Dark Side and it did very well.

Okay. Now going through this we begin with the story of the origins of The Dark Side and
go through it to his dilemma. And the dilemma is, in fact, part of the hook that he doesn’t
know whether to release these patterns or not. And the letter goes back and forth tugging at
the emotions of greed, but that he doesn’t know that this is going to go out and saying the
line like, “It’s easy to cause serious harm with these patterns.” And then we alluded to the
people who don’t want these patterns out, the professional persuasion community that are
furious that these patters are getting out.

So now we have the huge controversy going between Kenrick not deciding whether he
wants these patterns out and the persuasion community that doesn’t want him to do this.
And, it goes through and lists the patterns but it turns everything on its head. Now the
whole idea here is that these patterns are very, very destructive patterns. He could not

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It’s the hottest, most highly requested material I’ve ever developed… Weeks passed. His life was a shambles. He couldn’t work. He lost all of his friends. He
learned the power of the Dark Side — against his will.
You can’t buy this material unless When “The Dark Side” patterns are used — it not only can change an opinion, it can
you promise not to use it! destroy and totally obliterate a mind. And it stays in operation until you get it fixed or until
you slowly, over time, put the pieces back into place. But for some people, that will never
No. I haven’t lost my mind. But you’ve never happen and the devastation is total.
been exposed to…
What’s this got to do with you? Everything... if you want to protect yourself from the
hidden power of these techniques. And start becoming aware of how they are being used.
“The Power of the Dark Side” My trainings are comprehensive. I teach everything you need to know about persuasion
from power-rapport tactics, to criteria elicitation, and language patterns. If you master the
Dear Fellow Persuader, techniques I teach you, you become a powerful persuader.
You are reading a letter that I never thought I would send. However, the number of calls But although the “Dark Side” can be used for persuasion, in most cases I have encountered,
asking me to allow them to purchase the Dark Side set keeps growing. It is the hottest, most people are using it for destructive purposes. Lives are being destroyed — like mine nearly was.
powerful set of persuasion tools I have ever produced. But I never thought I would ever let
them out of my possession. My Dilemma
They call me a master of persuasion because I can teach persuasion skills more quickly and Here’s the problem I face: Once you learn these powerful patterns, you can rapidly and
more simply than anyone alive. But there is one set of skills that I never wanted to share with easily recognize when someone tries to use them on you. These patterns are getting out in
others for a very important reason. I believed they were too powerful and — quite frankly — the worst possible way. A few trainers are using them just to be nasty and vindictive. Notice,
too dangerous for the general public. I’m hearing about the patterns being used here, not denials. So right now, the only way to
learn about these patterns is to be on the receiving end with obvious consequences.
It was a number of years ago when one of the “founders” of NLP used a technique on me
that absolutely devastated me. It’s EASY To Cause Serious Harm With These Patterns!
Back then I had no clue what it was or what it was called, but it was so powerful, it took I know most guys just refuse to believe that this type of power and ability exists. But
months to recover from it’s use on me and to get my senses back. It took away my identity and that’s like defending yourself using the “Ostrich” strategy — hide your head in the sand and
even blurred my purpose for living. It was nasty to say the least. you’ll only get your butt kicked.
Today, I call it The Scramble. Only later did I learn that this was my first exposure to And remember... I CAN’T be pulling your leg. The entire professional persuasion
“The Dark Side.” community is watching.
In recent years, I have received emails from people detailing how a select group of NLP They are furious that I want to make these patterns public.
trainers have used these patterns on them — with explosive effects. I have been hearing more
and more of these reports. The reason they are furious is that this is a well kept secret of the “elite” in this field.
The few that know it that they aren’t about to release it under any conditions to anyone.
Someone who had taken an NLP training in Europe just called me. In the course of the
training, the student had a disagreement with the trainer. To get even, the trainer used one The only way I know it is that I was personally taught this by the same person that did it
of these destructive patterns on him. to me a few years after I “snapped out of it”. I was taught the pattern and directed to use to
use it on a person the trainer was upset with.

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Well, listen up. You can start noticing these patterns in your life and protecting yourself I boiled 60 tips down to their most powerful, most deadly — the ones that if you don’t
from them overnight. What’s more... know of their existence they absolutely will kick your behind if they are used on you.

 It doesn’t matter if you’ve read the latest new hot sales or seduction technique. I also choose them in terms of their usefulness in other areas. Some of these or the strate-
gies behind them can be used for good as well. But it’s in the understanding of how they can
 It doesn’t matter if you’ve been certified in NLP...
be used so viciously that you will understand how to use them for less destructive things.
 And... it doesn’t matter if you still think these patterns don’t exist.
In the end, I had just 17 patterns. Just 17...
Nope. The ONLY thing that matters... is your desire to start noticing when someone starts
to use these devastatingly powerful patterns on you. But That’s All You Need!
I taught them at my Max Persuasion seminar in South Beach in January 2003. You
Spilling the Beans in Public
could have heard a pin drop in the room as I went through these patterns. But that was
I’ve decided to break ranks on this one and reveal these patterns so people can protect just the beginning.
themselves appropriately. Moreover, some of these techniques can be harnessed for good and
Since the seminar, not a week goes by without a slew of emails hitting me and asking
can boost your persuasion skills.
when I am going to release the Dark Side patterns. And I’ve been struggling with it. Quite
But what you don’t know, you can’t use. frankly, I deliberately kept them off the market. Until now.

Remember, I had these patterns used on me — that’s how I know what it is. Then it was It was that call I took from Europe that really bothered me. Here was a person completely
explicitly taught to me for the purposes of having me “take someone out” mentally. distraught. His self-esteem could be counted in negative numbers. He couldn’t function. He
could barely dress himself. I later learned someone had used the submodality self-esteem
Then, someone came out with a pattern so vicious that I was stunned (the door pattern). destroyer pattern and had combined it with powerful suggestions that ruined the most
Then I began to look for all the other ways this material could be used negatively. personal and intimate aspects of this man’s life. I decided to take action.
I started getting people sending me material from around the world and I began compiling it. Frankly, I’m worried that person using the Vapor Invasion might learn too much about
someone they want to date and become obsessed.
ALL these skills require expertise and verbal agility. They are advanced. This is not for
beginners. In fact, if you don’t have a copy of Max Persuasion or have not trained with me
live, you aren’t going to get them either. Protect Yourself Against the Dark Side
I have an entire section on ethics in Max Persuasion. And no one is going to get the Dark You can “install” these skills into your life almost overnight. Just listen to these aston-
Side materials without the proper frame to put them in. ishing recordings... and then you’ll be ready if someone ever tries to use these patterns against
you. Then when they try to use these patterns against you...
The Dark Side can be seductive. If you are not well grounded in the techniques and strate-
gies I teach I worry you will fall victim to their seductive power. You’ll be ready to defend yourself! (And quite frankly, at that point,
you’d be justified in using them to defend off your attacker.)
Luke Skywalker had to battle the dark side as each one of us does as we go through our
lives. This material is not for the weak minded or squeamish. These patterns are extremely powerful. But they’ve been held for too long in the hands
of people using them for vicious purposes. And that’s the problem.
You see I’m worried. What worries me is if someone uses the Partner Destroying pattern
to simply eliminate someone’s husband/wife or boyfriend/girlfriend so they can have the Listen: When you are suffering and in pain because someone has just used a slick version
person for themselves. of the migraine installation pattern on you, and damn it, the pattern worked. As soon as you

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discover that it was a Dark Side pattern that made you suffer, you’ll wish you had grabbed this  Compulsion Installer
set during the limited time period that it’s being made available.
 Relationship Disolver
Or, let’s say you are going to make a sale and you find yourself folding before a negotia-
 The squash
tion even began, chances are the other person used one of these patterns on you.
 Drug Addiction
No one buys life insurance and looks forward to using it. These patterns are your insur-
ance. One day you will be thankful you recognize and know how to use them.  Dreaded Future
 The Cage
The Dark Side is now available for a limited time.
 No Longer True
That means exactly what it says. I am so torn about the release of this set. I am only
prepared for a limited release at this time.  Self Esteem Destroyer

Here’s what I mean.  Smurfing


 The Claw
I am afraid that some of the people who get a hold of the Dark Side Patterns are going to
use them to cause harm to others.  Impotency Installer
I’m worried about someone being passed over for a raise or a promotion and using the self  Fast Frigidity
esteem destroyer to get even.
 Vapor Invasion
I’m not interested to see if I can turn you into a monster on the streets.  The Suicide Pattern
And here’s the big secret no one else will tell you: Just by listening to this amazing  The Missile
audio course... you will learn five or six tips that will turbocharge your persuasion skills
(without affecting anything else) with more PURE POWER than you ever believe you  The Paranoia Pattern
could have. That’s another benefit right there.  The Migraine Pattern
You’ll also learn the simple secrets of never being taken advantage of again. How to  A Secret Relationship Controller Pattern
quickly and easily find your OWN best approaches to dealing with someone using Dark
Side Patterns against you.  The Void
 The Ultimate Values Destroyer
I’m worried that you will decide that it’s more fun to simply strike at someone with a Dark
Side pattern when you don’t get what you want instead of simply walking away.
Special Announcement
Even better... you’ll find you’re completely safe from these patterns now because you will
be able to identify them before they can do any damage at all. Just watch their face when This set is very unique. And it is available until January 31, 2004. At that time, it goes off
your Patriot missile slams into their Scud. the market. If you are one of the thousands of people who have benefited from one of my
programs, you know that one thing is true — I mean what I say.
Here are the Dark Side Patterns That I will Be Sharing
So trust me, I’m as serious as a heart attack. You will not see this program after
(Forgive me, but I can not say more in an email) January 31, 2004.

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This program is being sold under the following conditions. Can you accept that a competitor won the business you wanted and leave with a
handshake and a determination to become better at persuading?
You must fill out the form on my website agreeing to use the patterns only in the appro-
priate manner. IF you can genuinely answer yes to these questions (as well as the other ones that popped
into your head as you were reading these) then you have the type of mentality that can
Bottom line — no one gets this program unless you agree to use it for defense only. withstand knowing these powers.
If your version of a good defense is a good offense, you must take full responsibility for it. I was still torn about letting this material go public. Finally, my wife Angela suggested
1. This course does not have our usual money back guarantee. In fact, you may not something.
return the course for any reason. We will replace damaged or defective media for “Kenrick, people know the quality of your work. The right clients will use this in the spirit
you at no charge, of course. you intend. They’ll recognize the value of it. And they’ll be grateful that you made it public.”
The reason we have taken this unusual approach is that the only people that Well, that did it for me. If this stops even one person from suffering mental and physical
should be purchasing this course are those that already own Maximum Persuasion. harm, it was worth it.
If you have, you know just how good our material is and you probably can’t wait
to get this course.
Can You Be Ethically Bribed?
This course is simply nitroglycerin. The temptation for people to do most anything
I believe that the Dark Side is one of the most important works I have ever released.
to get it will be very high. Our no return policy on this course insures we are
Although relatively short in length (it’s about two hours long), pound for pound, there is
keeping the material away from those unscrupulous enough to try it.
serious power packed in this package. But there is far more included.
I’m worried about a person using the No Longer True pattern to eliminate resist-
BONUS ONE:
ance to any suggestion the persuader will ever suggest in the future.
I am including a video of the Dark Side patterns. This special video plays on your
If you don’t have it and purchase this course anyway, that’s fine just understand computer. It’s an MPEG file that plays on Windows Media Player. The video enables you to
that you can not request to return the product. You also need Maximum watch the visual anchoring that I am doing while demonstrating the Dark Side patterns.
Persuasion to understand this course. You’ll want to study this video again and again.

This material is priceless. No doubt about it. And it is worth its weight in gold. BONUS TWO:
I am including a transcript of the Dark Side. I’ve never included a transcript before
I watched as the mood in the class I taught these skills went from being high and in any of my trainings but this time, the stakes are too high. If you are going to be able
excited to down right scared and stunned. They couldn’t even imagine that such power was to protect yourself against these patterns, you need to be able to take them apart by
being put into their hands. yourself and analyze them.

In fact, it’s the people who were at the training who are the one’s clamoring for its release. BONUS THREE:
I am also going to include a bonus of The Dark Side applied to rapport. I can’t think of
Do you have the ability to find the way to use this material for good? a better compliment to the Dark Side material. This was recorded at January 2003 South
Do you have the ability to resist the temptation of just smashing someone covertly just Beach Maximum Persuasion Seminar.
because you have the power? This bonus conclusively proves that you can use the Dark Side materials with good
Can you walk away from a beautiful person you met while at a friend’s house because you intentions and results.
know that the relationship will not work out?

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BONUS FOUR:
(And this one will take your breathe away!) Because you need a thorough background in Getting Started In Persuasion
Maximum Persuasion, I am including THE ENTIRE 2003 SOUTH BEACH MAXIMUM The next sales letter is also for Kenrick Cleveland. This was for a low priced package.
PERSUASION SEMINAR! It has all of the latest updates to Maximum Persuasion. Every Most of Kenrick’s sales materials are over $1,000. This one was for a $97 package and essen-
single aspect of the original Maximum Persuasion has been updated. tially it was sound bytes from a seminar that I did with Kenrick called, Kenrick’s Breakthroughs
and Persuasion, which we did together in Miami, Florida in January 2005.
I’m doing something here that I thought I’d never do. Many people have asked me to
release Maximum Persuasion in MP3 Format I have decided to do exactly that. Now, you This letter is called, Getting Started In Persuasion. Basically, its purpose was to introduce
can transfer these MP3s to your portable player to listen to me while you travel by plane or people to Kenrick’s products for a very low price and then to up sell them to other products.
work out in your local gym. This letter sold extremely well to his list and to other lists as well. It got people who had
never bought anything before to buy this package. The interesting thing about this letter
This is the ONLY way to get hold of the 2003 Maximum Persuasion Seminar. So, for all
was that it was a download and there were no fulfillment issues.
of you who have been asking, the time to act is now.
Up to this point, Kenrick had not done very much work with testimonials. Therefore,
You can get your copy of The Dark Side (plus all of the bonuses) for $1297 until January
the actual letter you see on his site, www.MaxPersuasion.com, has testimonials that have
31, 2004. Until December 31, there is a $200 holiday discount to bring the cost down to
not been included here.
$1097. But there’s an old saying, you snooze, you lose. Order it and save today.
The idea here, (or big hook in copywriter lingo) is how to double your closing rate in 30
Please give me feedback on how you have found ways to use the dark side in positive ways.
days or less using these closely held techniques. I then write in the sales letter about two
And please also report ANY use that you discover of ANYONE using these Dark Side strate-
elements of basic NLP, one being rapport skills, and the other referring to the use of criteria.
gies in a negative way.
The letter rants about other trainers warning about people who rip off Kenrick’s materials
Here’s how to order...
and sell seminars at blue light special prices. These competitors, the letter says, imitate of
Warmly, his oldest techniques while his clients, since they’re up-to-date, they are driving the Ferraris.

Kenrick Cleveland The subheads are extremely powerful throughout this letter. And for those who knew
Kendrick’s materials when he was talking about $2,577 as a sale price they knew that, that
P.S. Remember that before we process your order, you’ll need to fill out a form on our website was the norm, so releasing a package for $97.77 was just a really great value. Despite the fact
promising only to use these strategies for defensive purposes. there was no guarantee, we still sold many hundreds of this program immediately.

P.P.S. Remember that when you order, you receive the Dark Side on CD’s, the video, the
transcripts, the Dark Side of Rapport, and the entire 2003 South Beach Maximum
Persuasion Seminar.

P.P.P.S. If you are serious about your persuasion skills and order the Dark Side and attend the
January 2004, Unconscious Persuasion Seminar, I will work with you outside of the training
showing you how you can combine the two.

P.P.P.P.S. Remember, the time to order the Dark Side is now. The price goes up in two weeks
and I am taking the set off the market at the end of January. Of course, if I hear that someone
is misusing the patterns that I teach in this set, I may halt the sale sooner than that.

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Master Persuader Reveals… My name is Kenrick Cleveland and I’ve been called the world’s greatest persuader. My client
list is a who’s who of top corporations, people making seven figures on commissions annually,
How to Double Your Closing Rate in 30 Days (or online and offline marketing gurus, as well people spanning every profession imaginable from
financial advisors to real estate investors, from insurance agents to corporate headhunters.
Less) Using These Closely Held Techniques
I get fed up every time I get an email like this one:
You’ll gain magnetic rapport with the people you meet, uncover the
magic hot buttons which force them to buy, and discover how to “My boss is convinced that when I’m in front of my sales manager, I
get inside your client’s head and uncover the hidden triggers which should be like a tape recorder with the record button on. Then, when I
get them to whip out their credit cards and check books and buy. manage to get in front of a client I should simply hit the “play” button and
regurgitate my sales manager’s pitch...
You’ll Know EXACTLY What Your Client Wants From You...
This approach assumes that if I can “spew” features and benefits long
And How To Sell Them In Less Than 3 Minutes.
enough, sooner or later your client will give up and say, “Hey, I want that!”
No Other Persuasion Training Is As Simple...Or As Effective
Kenrick, is there another way?”
Take all of your books on selling and toss them in the trash bin. Enough of the old
sales techniques so ineffective, you couldn’t use them to persuade your own mother to buy Well. Instead of guessing what motivates your client, there’s a way to laser in on their real
lemonade. It’s time to bury the Ben Franklin, Puppy Dog, and Assumption close and go needs and wants. Follow my simple instruction, this technique is so quick... it’s so
in an entirely new direction. efficient... You won’t have to guess and that makes it extremely powerful.

It’s time to slice through all the bull where you try to make small talk with the client There’s no manipulating involved. You’re giving the person exactly what they want. And
and then subtlety — or not so subtlety — switch gears and get them to pay attention to if that sounds simple, it really is.
your product or service.
And the funny thing is, my techniques are probably copied more than any other sales trainer
It’s time to give the old heave-ho to the lists of features and benefits and share with your in history. My ideas have been stolen and repackaged and former students who have studied my
clients exactly what they want to hear. And it will seem like magic when you start to close introductory level materials have gone on to become sales gurus in their own profession.
more sales than you ever dreamed of...but it’s not.
Many people played the game of telephone as a child. In the game, one person starts with
Forget about wondering how you are going to “break the ice” — I’ll show you simple and a message and passes it on to the other. Of course, by the time the message gets to the end of
irresistible techniques to achieve magnetic rapport — in seconds. the line, it’s no longer recognizable.

Wipe out of your mind everything you ever learned about determining what your client wants. Like playing the game of telephone, my teachings have been diluted, distorted, and
I’m going to show you a fool proof technique to uncover your clients’ hot buttons and reveal a way diminished. And that makes me madder than an angry hornet. Here’s why.
for you to push them like crazy until your clients beg to buy your product in just minutes.
My seminars and products are for the persuasion elite. People regularly pay $2577 to
And you can just forget about buyer’s remorse or saying no to your services; it’s not going attend my live trainings and pay as much as $1277 for the recordings. If that sounds like a
to happen again...if you follow these simple steps. lot of money to you, let me share the fact that people who purchase from me once come back
and purchase from me again and again or join my Persuasion Elite coaching club.
Discover the most simple, elegant technique to get inside
But these rip-off artists are offering seminars at “Blue Light Special” prices and tape sets
your client’s brain ever devised. featuring imitations of my techniques from twenty years ago — long before the newest

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research in brain development and my latest cutting edge breakthrough research. They want “And so Mr. Prospect, if you think about how hot it’s been for the past two weeks, you’re
to sell the Model-T at a Matchbox prices while... probably beginning to wonder about whether you need more life insurance.”

These are the tried and true old-school sales techniques. And they don’t work. And being
My clients drive the Ferraris.
enthusiastic doesn’t help. And repeating positive affirmations before the meeting doesn’t work
These programs are coming from people who once trained with me, jotted down notes of if the tools you have to work with are from the 1800’s. Instead, you should be using...
every word I said, followed me into seminars — even when I taught persuasion training for
Jay Abraham and people paid $15,000 a person to set foot in the room. They tried to recon- Magnetic Rapport Skills
struct virtually every important strategy, breakthrough concept and mindset factor I revealed
to my high paying clients until I discovered...  Yes, You Can Learn How To Read People In A Split Second — use this
technique to judge the effects of your persuasion and then turn it up or down
as needed. This goes WAY beyond anything you’ve ever heard. Yet, I make it
The shocking truth
so simple; you can master it right away.
They were releasing “Reader’s Digest” versions of my persuasion training techniques at
 How To Develop Magnetic Rapport Even In A Crowded Room — even if you
literally pennies on the dollar.
never get to talk to your prospect. They’ll be eating out of your hand before
When I first heard one of these sets, I was horrified to hear my teaching so distorted and they ever meet you!
used for manipulative reasons. Even worse, they had the audacity to claim they discovered and
 How to Gain rapport with anyone as soon as you meet them; you’ll have them
formulated these techniques by themselves. But here’s the funniest part, people were listening
swooning for your product before you even mention it.
to these dollar-store imitations and still got better sales results. Incredibly, my techniques were
so powerful that even if these rip-off artists mangled my teachings, they were still powerful. These techniques are explained in simple step by step, easy to follow directions. Just
listen to each section and practice the exercises. And let me tell you something, these
That’s when I decided to take action and release a completely up to date presentation of exercises are fun. And when you discover just how powerful they are...
my techniques directly to you. No childrens’ game of telephone. No distortion. No
nonsense. Just hours after hours of...
You’ll Be Nearly Unstoppable
Pure Persuasion Dynamite And that’s just the appetizer. Now you are ready for the main course. This next part
is the reason I am the most ripped-off and imitated persuasion trainer in the world. This
In January 2005, I emerged from my persuasion laboratory to deliver one of my most is why people fly in to see me from the Far East, Europe, South America, and even
powerful trainings ever. I revealed patterns and techniques I’ve never shared with even my Australia. At a recent seminar, one man flew in all the way from the U.K. Another from
personal inner circle. Let me put in bluntly, this stuff is mega-hot. Israel. Two came from Kuala Lumpur (near Malaysia). Do you have any idea what a plane
This is not a watered down version. This is not a trick. This is your personal invita- ticket from Kuala Lumpur to Fort Lauderdale costs? And on top of that, he bought every
tion to uncover two cash-engorging secrets my inner circle knows. And using just these single one of my products in sight. Because it doesn’t take a rocket scientist to use them
two proven strategies will unleash a flood of new clients and double your closing rate in or discover their power.
under a month. It’s for this next section that people pay me the big bucks. It’s called The Magical Criteria
Here’s the old way of getting rapport with your client. You walk in the door and begin Elicitation Technique. You see, people know there are something called “hot-buttons” but
chatting away with your client. You talk about the weather. You glance around the office or they never exactly tell you how to locate them or what to do when you have them.
home to find something to break the ice with...baseball, fishing, or the economy and you But all that isn’t important because when you follow my simple instructions, you’ll be able
desperately try to steer the conversation toward your product. to use Magical Criteria Elicitation the right way in less than three minutes (with no more

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than 3-4 questions), your prospect will detail exactly how you must sell him and they will liter- Magnetic Rapport consists of nearly 2 1/2 hours of step by step instructions of how to get
ally go into a feeding frenzy. rapport with anyone in moments. That alone, is half the battle. But take a deep breathe and
come back for round two with:
It’s fascinating and beautiful to watch!
Magical Criteria Elicatation. I’ve packed the latest know how based on brain research in
You see, they have absolutely no clue they have just laid out their exact buying strategy persuasion. You get 3 1/2 hours of absolute killer material. Now, I’m not sure what the first
for you. And you’re going to laugh at how simple this is...all the way to the bank. In fact, words out of your mouth are going to be when you hear this section. I’m sure “Wow!”
within a few minutes of learning these techniques...you’re going to unleash... “Amazing!” and “Awesome!” are going to be high on the list.

A Sales Explosion You may even want to “high five” total strangers because you’re going to be exposed to...

No if, ands, or buts. No tiny print disclaimers saying you need to have a PhD in Martian A Diamond Mine of Persuasion Techniques
anthropology to use it. If you want to be at the very top of the persuasion dog pile, you need
to order my “Getting Started in Persuasion” set right away. Now here’s where I’m going to break ranks with the rest of the marketing community. You
know, they’re always promising you can get your money back if someone doesn’t like your product.
I’ve taken two huge chunks out of my high priced seminar and edited them and
compressed them so they can be downloaded via the Internet. And I’m going to price them That’s not the case here.
at a level everyone can afford.
I value my work highly. And I know once you are exposed to these secrets, you’re going
Now, if people paid $2577 to attend this seminar why would I let you have such a strategic to become a raving fan.
part of this set for less than a penny on the dollar.
In fact, when you discover just how easy it is to skyrocket your success as a trainer, you’ll
The answer is two-fold and I’ll be real up-front and honest here. be absolutely furious no one revealed these secrets to you before.

First, I want to put an end to cheap imitations. I’m sick and tired of getting emails And instead of a guarantee, I’ll do something even better. The first 100 people who
from people who’ve never been exposed to my products telling me they’ve tried everything respond will get a one-on-one half hour Persuasion Audit with my top trainer (who used my
but still can’t make a sale. techniques to generate millions of dollars in sales.)

Second, when you’ve listen to and used my “Getting Started In Persuasion” set, you’ll But on the other hand:
be back for additional products and seminars. As sure as the sun rises in the morning and
sets in the evening, you’re going to want to know more. And once your sales skyrocket, This set is NOT for you if you have a conscientious objection to making serious money
the regular cost of my products won’t be an issue for you at all. in persuasion.

Because once you listen to this program, This set is NOT for you if you think just downloading it is going to make you wealthy.
You won’t increase sales one drop until you listen to and practice these simple techniques.
You’ll Be On Your Way to the Top! This set is NOT for you if you think selling or persuasion has got to be hard.
Here’s what this is all about... And finally, this set is not for you if you’ve taken a vow of poverty because you are about
“Getting Started In Persuasion” consists of two parts: Magnetic Rapport and Criteria to break that vow as you climb to the very top.
Elicitation. These techniques are both so simple; you’ll be enraged no one revealed them
to you sooner. Get Started in Minutes

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My recent Unconscious Persuasion set sells today for $1277. And, despite that price tag,
people waited on line to order this set. And it gets rave review. Speed Hypnosis Book
The next letter that we’re looking at was for a speed hypnosis product. This is one of my own
But I’m not going to let you buy this set for $1277. Nope. And I won’t let you buy this
products. It was based on a public domain product that I found, was impressed with, and went
set for half that price.
after on the market. You can see the actual sales letter at my site www.EricksonianHypnosis.com.
In fact, if I let you buy this set for a penny on the dollar it would come to $127.77. But On my site, you can also see some of the other sales letters written for the hypnosis market which
that’s still too high for me. have not been included in this book. This letter sells exceptionally well online.

Grab your copy of Getting Started in Persuasion today for just $97.77. I have never ever The story is based on a true-life story of watching my wife get hypnotized instantly when
let people purchase one of my products at that price. It’s simply amazing. we were out at a formal dinner. I could not believe just how rapidly someone was able to intro-
duce transient to someone, found out about it and decided to put out a product for it. The
This copy is an immediate download in mp3 files so you can take them anyway you go on product has been extremely successful and I introduced the mystery of the two words and take
your mp3 player. them through the letter until they find out what the secret two words are, which is the author’s
name and you can get started right away. I certainly found that this letter was a big success.
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Have you learned this astonishing technique yet? hypnotize someone in a split second. (No looking at the swinging watch and saying “You
are getting sleepy...”)
“The Amazing Lost Secrets Of A Master Hypnotist If I hadn’t seen it myself I never would have believed it. My wife Sharon and I were at a
That Lets You Instantly Hypnotize Someone Into formal dinner. You know the type. Anyway we’re sitting around and I’m talking to a friend
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I’m saying to myself, “Yeah right. Instant hypnosis. Sell me the Brooklyn Bridge too...”
“The Fastest, Easiest, Most Powerful Hypnotic
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This is the only site on the Internet where You’ll Learn the Amazingly Powerful
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Meanwhile, Sharon emerged from her catnap and jumped into the conversation in mid-sentence.

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With Instant Hypnosis Skills, You Can:

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 Attract the hottest dates! These two words led me on a journey through dusty stacks of out-of-print book stores.
Finally, I was able to say “Eureka!” I had found the Holy Grail of hypnosis. Those two words
 Persuade Your Boss To Give You The Raise You Deserve! gleamed at me on the cover.
 Effortless Negotiate Better Deals!
I went through that book faster than a teenager goes through a Playboy. I memorized
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 Get Your Children to Listen to You!


Who Else Wants to Apply Instant Hypnosis Skills in
 Have clients carry out all your therapeutic techniques. the Business World With Shocking Effects
 Have your friends do your every bidding.
From that day forward, I began using these techniques on a daily basis. I was able to
purchase newspaper advertising space at a rate lower than any of my competitors due to these
From: The Desk of Harlan Kilstein techniques. My landlord lowered the rent on my office space — that never happens!
Date: Tuesday, October 28, 2003 Every salary negotiation, every upset client, and every critical discussion becomes an
Miami, FL opportunity for you to discover

Dear Friend,
Why Instant Hypnosis Your Key to Successes...
I never thought I was going to share these techniques with the public. In the wrong
My name is Harlan Kilstein and what you’re about to learn will change your life forever.
hands, this stuff is dynamite. Yet in the right hands, this stuff is provides powerful therapeutic
You see, I’ve discovered the mother lode of hypnotic techniques that lets even an amateur

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interventions. I was going to have to take my chances that the right people would be able to A woman recently came to my office suffering from a terribly embarrassing dysfunction.
help others easily and rapidly change. She was unable to have an orgasm. She came from a rigid Catholic background and had been
taught that sexual pleasure would lead to promiscuity. Forty years after parochial school, her
I made a shocking discovery. Modern hypnotists have no idea that these techniques even life was miserable. She had stopped dating because dating led to marriage. Marriage led to
exist. The only way I could prove that these techniques existed was by demonstrating them. sex and sex lead to frustration and humiliation. With the help of these techniques, she was
Everyone who sees these techniques wants to know how to learn them with the same able to add sexual fulfillment to her life in just minutes.
speed and ease that I command. And to each of these people I whisper the same two words. This example isn’t here for bragging rights. It’s just to let you know a regular hypno-
But more and more people are coming back to me and telling me that the book was out- tist with some uncommon techniques is getting superstar results. And most importantly,
of-print, unobtainable, or some guy on the net wanted nearly $200 for a copy of this book. YOU CAN TOO.
And that’s when I knew it wasn’t fair that I had the ability to...
What I’m Doing Here Will Probably Get Me Banned...
Create Instant Effortless Change What I’m doing here is very controversial. In fact, it will probably get me banned
I’ve been working as a hypnotist for 25 years. I’m the one that people call when they from the hypnosis community and branded as an ‘outlaw’. The reasoning is simple. All
can’t get to first base with clients. People refer their hardest cases to me for one reason these hypnotists understand how powerful these skills are and don’t want them released
only — I get kick ass results. But the truth is, until I learned these secrets, my results were to the general public. They want it so that only an inner circle of psychologists and
not all that extra-ordinary. But once I learned the secret of these two words — my success doctors can use hypnosis. To me, that’s a bunch of nonsense. There’s no point restricting
rate went through the roof. these techniques to the therapeutic realm because they’re power extends to many other
areas. I’ve proven it. My private students who I’ve taught these astounding skills have
Why am I telling you all this? Because I want everyone to have access to the same proven it over and over again. So I’m tentively and timidly testing the release of these
secrets that propelled me to greater success with clients. I can under stand if you’re skills to the public.
skeptical when someone claims to have great hypnotic techniques. As you continue read
this letter, you’ll quickly find that your doubts vanish entirely. And you’ll want to add these I Will Offer The Course To A Select Group Of
skills and techniques to your bag of tricks. People. Do You Qualify?
Since these skills found in The Instant Hypnosis Techniques are so powerful, I’m not
WARNING: letting just anyone snag these secrets. I’m not an idiot. I won’t hand a powerful weapon to
a dangerous criminal nor will allow these secrets to pass into the hands of someone who is not
If You Are the Kind of Person Who Believes Thinking Is Against Your
responsible. Everyone who purchases this Instant Hypnosis package has to agree to use these
Religion, Please Do Not Buy This Book.
techniques for moral purposes only.
If You Can Not Take the Techniques and Dream of New And Powerful
In fact, if I discover people abusing this technology and using these Instant Hypnosis skills
Applications Without Being Spoon-fed, This Book Is Not For You.
inappropriately, I will immediately refund your money and insist that you return this material.
Having Said That, If You Want To Discover Devastatingly Powerful
Here is a small taste of what you’ll discover in your private copy of “The Instant
Hypnotic Techniques, I Invite You To Continue.
Hypnosis Techniques”:

 The overlooked state of mind that virtually guarantees acquisition of these skills.
My Instant Hypnosis Skills Cured A Lifetime One you have this locked in place, people will eat out of your hand.
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 How to build the confidence to use these skills instinctively. You find yourself
The Mysterious Two Words
automatically using Instant Hypnosis skills in every aspect of your life getting what
you want under circumstances you thought impossible. The two words that my friend whispered to me after using Instant Hypnosis on my wife
Sharon were Harry Arons. Trained in hypnosis by his grandfather, Arons used secret
 The real secrets behind instant inductions with complete strangers. (After
hypnotic techniques that were passed down by the infamous Rasputin, the powerful hypno-
practicing this, your hypnotic skills will instantly double while you bind people to
tist-advisor to the family of the Czar. These Russian secrets are what Harry Arons passed on
do your will without question.)
to the public in his teachings.
 How to make those old seduction tricks seem prehistoric. Guys will be jealous when
Issued in the 1950’s, Arons trained doctors, dentists, therapists, law enforcement personal,
you live a party with a gaggle of girls wanting to spend time with you alone.
and ordinary people in the power of hypnosis. But he did not allow the techniques of Instant
 The trick to getting the most difficult people to come completely under your Hypnosis to become widely known. In fact, his book on Instant Hypnosis was so controver-
control. They will look forward to fulfilling every suggestion that you make. sial that it has lain hidden away ... until now.

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plant ideas into your subject’s mind and have them think it’s their own idea. And
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these techniques may become addictive. You’ll love the power that comes from being able to
 Why studying language patterns isn’t important for instant inductions. In fact, hypnotize people — even total strangers at will.
the fewer language patterns you know, the better you’ll do and the quicker your
clients will respond. The same forces that opposed Arons will certainly mobilize against the sale of this book.
Don’t be surprised if you check back with this website in a few days and find it down.
 An instant amnesia technique that you can use on people so that they forget what
they were talking to you about. If they were upset, they won’t remember what they The hypnosis community simply can not allow these techniques to go mainstream. So
were bothered about. what that means my friend is that you need to act now.

 A secret trigger that you can use to bring back the Instant Hypnosis at will. You’ll On the rare occasions that this book surfaces — it goes for $65-$200. (I was quoted more
even be able to induce this state over the telephone to use at your will. by a bookstore on Manhattan’s Upper East Side.)

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never know what you did as you boost your sales rate.
The first time you instantly hypnotize someone and compel them to do your will, you will
 The secret finger-tip induction that is so powerful that even onlookers with be have the power of Rasputin in your hands. Use it wisely.
impressed with its simple elegance and power.
I Guarantee Your Success
 How to build expectation in your clients so they will get powerful changes and keep
coming back to you again and again. The procedures in this book are spelled out in such detail that a five year old could apply
them within minutes. But I want to take all the risk away. I won’t even consider this sale final
And the list goes on... until 60 days have passed. In fact, if your follow the text and fail to accomplish everything I
have described, I insist that you notify me for a complete refund.

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Because this book is an instant download, you can be using these Instant Hypnosis The next letter was one of the early Internet sales letters that I did for someone who has
techniques within a minute’s time. Simply look at the pictures and follow Arons’s captions gone from a client to also being a good friend as well. He has developed a huge Internet list
and you will get incredibly powerful results. but it all started with this sales letter that I did for his product called, Creating Power.

Special Bonus He had a long-form sales letter. It just wasn’t converting very well and I redid the letter and,
in particular, got benefits up in the headline. I followed the formula of putting at least three
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As you go through the letter, I’d like you to pay attention to my introduction of the
Hypnotically, Amanda story and personalization of the letter, which gives everyone a specific person
who they can identify with.
Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D. C.Ht.
In my copywriting, I often make use of a fascinating psychological technique based on
PS. It can’t get any easier than this. Just click on this link and be using these techniques in
The Thorndyke Effect. When written properly, The Throrndyke Effect takes you right into
a minute’s time. You won’t believe the power...or the simplicity.
the story you are reading, and puts you in the middle of the situation. So when people were
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of science, make some really big promises and the result was a huge success of a letter that
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fact, I like this (and some others so much) I have arranged a special page on the “Owners
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When I started the program, I had only 8 clients a week. Now I am seeing 20 clients
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Get ready to Claim the Life you want. After you order, circle the date on your
calendar because years in the future, you are going to celebrate this date. Golfer’s Mind
This letter is one of my first-ever Internet sales letters. It was also the first direct mail
I look forward to working personally with you.
letter where I sold my own product. It’s called, Golfers Mind.

Sincerely, I got the idea of doing a golf product at a Gary Halbert seminar where I heard John
Carlton for the second time. Gary introduced us to the concept of PWM, players with money,
Karim Hajee and told us that’s who we should be writing for. I immediately decided that I should be
Karim Hajee writing for the golf market even though I didn’t know the first thing about golf.
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That’s how I introduced myself to John Carlton, by writing these letters. I put my heart
PS. Look, there’s no risk in ordering this program. You have three full months to test-drive and soul into them. John just massacred those early drafts. And after the fourth attempt
this program. In fact, if Creating Power doesn’t OUTPERFORM, OUTMOTIVATE, and he just said, “Stop it! Harlan, before you write me another letter why don’t you learn
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you doing here? Go talk to some golfers.”
I’m Ready For Creating Power Right Now! And I began actually talking to some golfers. I took some golf lessons and found
PPS. Remember, this is the only program on or off the Internet where the author takes friends I didn’t know who were golfer nuts and on the way to a success with this letter I
personal interest in your success. I know you’ve failed in the past. I won’t let you fail again. became a golfer myself.

So this letter you can see on my website www.GolfersMind.com. The interesting thing
Let’s Create Some Power Together! was I created the letter before I created the product.

I’ve already mentioned my background in neuro-linguistic programming or NLP. So, once


I created this letter, I went into the studio and created the product. The product is actually an
excellent product. I have just tons and tons of testimonials. If you go to the website, and I
recommend that you do this, you’ll see the layout which has testimonials up and down the sides
and through the middle as well. Tons of testimonials because the product really works.

But now a little bit about this letter. As you go through this letter, and as soon as we
get into Mr. X, you’ll see that this letter is based on the famous Jay Abraham, Mr. X letter.
As you go through the letter you’ll see the controversy similar to Jay’s Mr. X letter and of
the guy who stole Jay’s ideas and wanted to sell them, we followed the exact same pattern,
of course, this letter’s about golf not about marketing ideas. And we use the proven
formula and this letter works.

Depending on the list, it sold from 1% to 2% through the mail. On the Internet, because
I could attract a more targeted audience by choosing the right keywords to advertise through,
this letter often sells 7% of all first-time visitors a $49.95 product.

The most interesting thing about the letter is that as you go through the stats on a
site, you can tell how long people stay on a website. Most websites keep people online

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for just about six or seven seconds. The average time on this site is 12 minutes. Finally, you can drop six strokes from your game
Therefore, when people come to this site, they stick around and read it. And, that’s what overnight without practicing — guaranteed.
I would recommend to you… read this letter. Again, it’s a really effective letter that is
based on the Jay Abraham letter. “The Amazing Secret that Tiger and other Pros
Also I’m going to recommend that you go to www.GolfersMind.com and look at the order Use (But Want to Keep Regular Golfers from
page. I am using a concept that I learned from Jay called, future pacing. You’ll also hear me Learning) that Adds Yards and Accuracy to Your
using audio generator on that site.
Drives, Eliminates Hooks and Slices, Sinks Your
Study that order page. It’s extremely effective and if you want to cut down on shopping Impossible Putts… And Puts Your Game on
cart bailout you should have an order page exactly like that one.
Autopilot Consistency in Just Two Hours!”
It works like magic but almost nobody knows about it.

You’ll ask yourself, how can something so simple be so powerful…and so


secret — That’s the way the pro’s like it.

This story is a bit embarrassing… a little funny — and an incredible opportunity


for you to…

 launch a golf ball with the speed and accuracy of a laser targeted missile

 hit your fairways and greens shots with complete precision

 effortlessly sink those impossible putts

 play with the iron-clad confidence that the pros command

Mr. X was the typical golfer who spent a fortune on golf equipment and lessons. He bought
every device known to man that was supposed to improve his swing and add yards to his
drives. He subscribed to every golf magazine in existence. The only channel he watched on
TV was the Golf Channel. And yet, his game was incredibly inconsistent.

One hole he would drive two hundred yards up the fairway with the accuracy of a PGA Pro.

The next shot would go sailing into the rough.

On the front nine he might nail all of his putts.

On the back nine, he would get the yips and triple bogey.

It drove him insane. Every time he shot a round, he never knew what to expect. All
the pros told him that if he could only control his swing, his game would improve. He

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bought their gadgets, paid for their lessons, and spent hours on the driving ranges and the Now, I know you probably never heard of me — and until “Mr. X.” came along and stole
putting green to no avail. my secret teachings. I was content to stay in the background (like the rest of my colleagues)
with my small but elite group of students.
That’s when he called me and now. Those days are over...
Virtually all the PGA pros use our services. They know that controlling the mind is the
You might never notice me at a golf tournament... but I am there. My colleagues and I are key to great golf. Never before has anyone spilled the beans and revealed the mega-effec-
at the Masters, US Open, St. Jude, and Pebble Beach. We go wherever our elite clients go. tive mental secrets of the PGA Pros. Until now...
We rarely appear in public and we never reveal our secrets beyond a circle of pros and For example, before Tiger Woods takes a shot, his eyes open and close repeatedly.
seriously dedicated golfers who can afford our outrageous fees. So normally, we are not for
everyone. That’s why most golfers don’t have any idea... That’s not a blink that Tiger is doing. It’s a self-hypnosis induction. You see, ever
since Tiger was a youngster, his father Earl knew that his son would have to conquer the
 Why your mind can ruin your game or make you a winner...with just a few simple tricks. mental game of golf. He hired Dr. Jay Brunza, a sports psychologist and hypnotist, to train
Tiger and caddy for him all through his Junior and Amateur events. He even caddied for
 Why you play so well in practice but blow it on the course.
him in the Masters. Brunza established a trigger for Tiger to enter the zone at will. It’s
 How to control your nerves at the tee. the blinking of his eyes.

 How your scores can become consistent hole after hole. Tiger is typical of the best professional golfers. Great golfers need to control their mental
game and hypnosis is proven to be the easiest, quickest, and most proven way to great mental
 Why you play so badly when you try to impress someone. golf. That’s why every PGA pro has a coach to work with him on the mental game of golf —
 How you can shave 6 strokes from your game even if you don’t have time to practice. the surest path to consistency, confidence, and lower scores.

 Why your game always gets worse when there is money riding on it. But while the pros talk in public about the importance of controlling the mental game...
they never reveal the secrets of how they do it. Pros and amateurs in the know use these
 Why the advice that every pro gave you about how to treat the hazards on the course mental shortcuts to amazing golf.
was dead wrong.
Here’s how “Mr. X” let the cat out of the bag...and you are the winner.
When I am not working with a pro, the typical golfer I work with becomes incredibly
confident on the links, hitting every shot as if you are destined to win. Each shot goes Although most of my clients only need to see me once, “Mr. X” became a repeat customer.
precisely where you intend. Your inconsistency completely disappears. It seems like magic. He dropped six strokes overnight after my first session with him. But he didn’t want to stop
there. I helped him add 50 yards to his driving game. Consistency to his chipping. And
But it’s not magic at all! totally eliminated a lifetime of putting yipps. He was serious about improving his golf game
and didn’t care how much it cost him. All-in-all, he saw me nearly a dozen times and sent
You see, what my clients learn and master is what the great golf teacher, Jim Flick once me a lot of referral clients.
said, “Golf is 90% mental... and the other 10% is mental.” They learn to control their mind
and — as a result — improve their golf game overnight. One day he said he’d decided to take the hours of hands-on education and instruction I’d
personally given him and create a “tell-all,” “teach-all”, “knock-off” version of my very expen-
My name is Dr. Harlan Kilstein and I have been called one of the top hypno-coaches in sive one-on-one sessions. He said that his material was better organized, better presented,
the country. People travel from all over the world just to train with me. People routinely pay better clarified and better explained so more people could apply my methods of improving the
me up to two thousand dollars an hour to perfect their mental game one-on-one. I’ve taken mental golf game more successfully and easily.
the most difficult cases and turned them around in just one session.
I thought, at first, that he was kidding. But I found out he was not.

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Mr. X was dead serious. He took the project upon himself almost like a crusader on a  How to stay completely focused during your round exactly like the pros! The secret
mission. But, he did it behind my back. is knowing how to relax, and WHEN to relax...so that the back nine are as enjoy-
able as the front nine.
As I learned later, Mr. X spent almost one solid year reviewing the notes of every meeting
he had with me, listening and transcribing every minute of every tape of my $2,000 an hour  How to empty your mind as you tee up — the instant Zen secret that allows your
sessions, and he analyzed nearly every quick-fix consultation I’d performed for a wide range body to hit with more accuracy and power than you ever dreamed of.
of private golf clients.
 How a “secret” 30 second change in your addressing the ball guarantees your ball
He made notes, he called people and followed up on results. He reconstructed virtually will hit the sweet spot! (The teaching pro’s don’t want you to learn this one.)
one every my important breakthrough concepts and mindset factors that I’d taught him that  Why sometimes you play in the zone and sometimes you triple bogey!
contributed to his personal golf success. He quite honestly dissected me at a level of expla-
nation and analysis I’d never taken myself to.  Why the secrets that will take your mental abilities from an amateur to a great player
are only an hour away.
Then he dropped the bombshell!
 How a little known secret sets your golf game on automatic pilot.
I regularly sell consultations for $2,000 an hour. My customized golf success secrets have
 How to instantly trigger confidence and concentration on your putts — even if
never been available to the public.
you’re playing for money and even if one of the competitors tries to distract you.
Mr. X, as a friend and former client, had been given copies of all my materials. And he decided
 The truth behind setting up your shots — and why 99% of all golfers completely
to sell his abridged “short-cut” version of my golf secrets to the market for a mere $87. blow it before they even hit the ball!
You couldn’t buy three minutes of my time for that amount.  How to eliminate the yips...for ever!
I was horrified that my secrets would get out — yet in a funny way, I actually admired the It presents my best-reasoned, most effective golf ideas and strategies in such a pragmatic
ingenuity and resourcefulness of what he’d done. And then I got my hands on a copy of the and progressive way that it’s virtually impossible not to become much more successful by
tapes. It was hours of my best teachings and is filled with the best golf secrets that Mr. X following it. In fact, the more problems you have on the course, the more these secrets will
distilled from me. There isn’t one minute of fluff. Not an ounce of filler. Or one word of fat. radically improve your game overnight.
I got concerned that that these bootlegs would undermine my own golf consulting activ- Ironically, some of my clients who know Mr. X. and got a copy of this set from him
ities so I called Mr. X up and — well let’s say “politely persuaded” him that clashing swords on have called to tell me that Mr. X’s set helped bring all my ideas and concepts together for
this matter wouldn’t produce a happy outcome for either of us. them and bring it all home.
I’ll leave out the gory details but I acquired the rights and all his inventory of this key to
overnight golf success remaining in existence. It’s called . . .
My Dilemma
So here I am with the rights to an invaluable but unacceptably under-priced set that 400
The Amazing Mental Secrets of Professional Golfers
people have already been able to purchase publicly. My intent was to take them off the
(A No-Nonsense Guide to Great Golf)
market — or reproduce them at a $1,000 — $2,000 price tag (remember this set thoroughly
The set is good. Damn good! Mr. X did a superb job of reproducing my best teachings: explains and embodies the “core essence” and the key elements of nearly every key that is
keeping you from the best golf game ever).
 A secret one-second tactic used by the best golfers to instantly erase all negative
thoughts — especially the nagging grief over all previous bad shots and lock your What I discovered is that many of the 400 people who purchased this set have called me
mind into the shot at hand. to schedule one-on-one sessions with me. “Mr. X.” turned out to be an incredible stroke of

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luck. People who never heard of me are buying bootleg copies of this set on the Internet for Three Super Gifts As Your “Ethical Bribe” & Take-Action Bonus:
way above the purchase price.
As a “priceless” bonus for quick action... I want to gift you with 3 “super gifts” that could
Also, it doesn’t seem fair to charge you $1,000 if some unknown golfer “off-the-street” was easily be worth many times more to you than the price of the set itself.
able to purchase a copy for just $87. So I decided — for a limited time — to extend to you
the chance to purchase one or more copies of Mr. X’s set before I restructure its contents or Bonus #1: The Mental Mastery Secrets of the Pros Revealed!
dramatically raise its price. (I already took Mr. X’s tapes into the studio and had the digitally Inside their heads: A Totally Different Slant On Golf Success
recorded on two CD’s in my own voice. After all, it is my teaching on these tapes.)
The first “super” bonus is a secret report that is not available at any price in which I reveal
If you’d like one or more (maximum 3 copies per customer) of The Amazing Mental the metal tricks that the pros use. I fearlessly tell you who is using which techniques on the
Secrets of Professional Golfers (A No-Nonsense Guide to Great Golf) by Mr. X, I’ll sell course. You will never watch professional golf the same way live or in person. And just
them to you for a mere $87 per copy. Three copies for $250. (plus $8 shipping, FL sales tax). imagine the results on your game when you start applying these techniques.

I can promise you that this set is easily worth 10 times the $87 I’m asking of you — You will learn the secrets of Bobby Jones, Ben Hogan, Sam Snead, Gary Player, Arnold
and it summarizes and explains nearly $24,000 worth of my teachings. But, I want to make Palmer, Jack Nicklaus, Seve Ballesteros, Fuzzy Zoeller and Tiger Woods, that they never
this offer irresistible for you to take action now — so... thought would be revealed.

I am going to shamelessly bribe you into action… and guarantee you will get “The game of golf begins in your mind, more than athletic ability, more than
results like these: technique, more than practice or ability or anything else. The mind-set you bring to the
game determines not only the enjoyment you desire from golf but also the level of profi-
“After just one session with Dr. Kilstein, I sank the three longest putts in my career. ciency you will achieve.” Jim Flick on Golf.
My short game has forever changed. Goodbye yips! Now, my 90’s game has gone
into the consistent 70’s. I’ve never played better golf.” Ron Kriete, Florida. You will learn what the pros talk about when the public is not around. Hey, it’s common
knowledge that Tiger uses hypnosis but until very recently, he never admitted it in public.
“Until I met Dr. Kilstein, I thought that the way to recover from a bad shot was to pound
my club on the ground and let out a few choice words. Not anymore. A bad shot doesn’t Here’s what Tiger finally revealed in Golf Digest, (December 2002) page 158:
spoil my day. I am confident of my success on the course.” H Rosen, Tennessee.
“Woods’ ability to produce peak performance by ‘willing myself into the zone’ is
“My biggest challenge was maintaining my concentration for so many hours on unprecedented... And at age 13, Tiger began mental training with Dr. Jay Brunza,
the course. After working with Dr. Kilstein, my handicap went from a 7 to a 3 a family friend and psychologist... Among the techniques Brunza used were sublim-
in just 8 weeks. I am amazed. All of my buddies are dying to know my secret!” inal tapes and hypnosis. ‘The first time Jay hypnotized Tiger, he had him stick his arm
Jeff Wilens, Florida. straight out and told him that it couldn’t be moved, ‘Earl [Tiger’s father] says. ‘I tried,
but I couldn’t pull it down. [Tiger says hypnosis is] ‘inherent in what I do now.’”
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couldn’t wait to come down to Florida for a session. Overnight, my golf game went I had to think long and hard about including this CD as a bonus in the set. I’ll explain why.
on automatic-pilot. I started doing all the things the pros had taught me but I never
put into practice. I no longer have a problem with hooking or slicing my tee shots!” Just think about it. Golf has changed drastically in the last twenty years. The clubs have
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clubs and the shafts have changed. Even the golf ball has changed dramatically. There are course, if you will, for the next 90 days, totally at my risk — NOT YOURS! And if you
great debates on which inner core travels the farthest. Today it’s easy to analyze your swing have not lowered your score and shoot with more confidence on the course, just return your
via video and there are gadgets galore designed to improve your game. And yet, there is no product to me and I’ll refund every penny you paid, including shipping! (And there’s no
appreciable difference in an average golfer’s score — until now. one out there who will make that kind of guarantee! Hey, you can even send me a check
and post-date it for a month.)
Golf is the most complex sport in existence. You need to control your breathing, stance,
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golfers never come close to.
Act now to take advantage of this rare opportunity to possess this material (two extraor-
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This CD teaches you how to make your golf success automatic. I am putting my best
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teachings on a hypnosis CD and releasing them to the public. If you are one of the people
use your credit card when you call. Or, if you prefer, mail a check or money order to.
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One of the neat things Mr. X. did for himself is transcribe my teachings from “Amazing back for a refund — you may keep the three bonus gifts: The Mental Mastery Secrets of the
Mental Secrets...” into print. He reviewed, organized, and indexed my materials so that when Pros Revealed! Inside their heads: A Totally Different Slant On Golf Success, Automatic
he wanted to know in an instant what I taught about a specific topic, it was at his fingertips. Golf Success!, How You Can Lower Your Score Overnight and the transcript — for your
I guarantee you that in a short time, this will become the most used item in your golf library trouble and effort. I ask only that you don’t take undue advantage of the situation.
while — at the same time — your golf handicap drops faster than a lead balloon.
I can’t be any fairer than that. This is a massively better offer than I originally made avail-
All Free — As My “Time-Sensitive” Incentive To You… able. I only hope you act quickly — to assure you get the 3 “super gifts” for taking action
within the next 10 days. I also reserve the right to cancel this offer at any time after the
I want you to have a copy of The Mental Mastery Secrets of the Pros Revealed! Inside
their heads: A Totally Different Slant On Golf Success, the Automatic Golf Success! initial 10 day period if it appears to adversely affect my golf consulting practice.
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P.S. — If after using “The Amazing Mental Secrets of Professional Golfers (A No-
ethically) entice you to give “The Amazing Mental Secrets of Professional Golfers (A
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mental training material advice you’ve ever encountered in your life... if you’re not certain
that you’ll be able to lower your score by four, six, even ten strokes simply by applying a few
of the ideas you learn... you may return it for a full refund of your purchase price any time
within a full 90 days after receiving it. And I will even refund the shipping costs. No
hassles. No questions asked.

P.P.S. — Remember... you have a full 90 days to decide whether or not to keep the manual.
Plus — the 3 “super gift” Take-Action Bonuses are yours to keep even if you decide to ask for
a full refund. At $87, this set and the 2 bonuses are an incomprehensible golf opportunity.

P.P.P.P.S. Yes, to anticipate your question. I am NOT available for private consultations
in my Florida office. I’m booked solid until November. You might see me at a PGA event
or two. But you won’t ever catch me working with a touring pro in public! They are
very particular about secrecy in their coaching contracts. And for the kind of money
these boys can pay, so am I.

FINANCIAL
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T his letter was done for ESI Offers. ESI Offers has a coaching program and they study
their acquisition cost quite carefully. Their sales letters are a lead generation program
for people to come take their coaching program. They offer a huge guarantee which is
typically as much as double your money back guarantee.

They’ve done coaching programs with many, many people, including Donald Trump,
Jay Abraham and Robert Allen. And here there was a coaching program for Mark Victor
Hansen and Robert Allen based on their book, The One Minute Millionaire.

ESI had a control letter and I was asked to beat the control. I looked at the control letter
and thought to myself, “I should have no problem beating this, whatsoever.” ESI went ahead
and tested it. They came back a week later and said that, although it was extremely close, I
did not beat the control. I could not understand it because I had thought that they were
getting people coming to their site through pay-per-click; but, in fact, there was an email that
was bringing people to the site and the email ended with, “You may think we’re nuts…”

In NLP there’s something that’s called rapport. And rapport means matching what the
other person has done. Since their email ended saying, “…you may think we’re nuts”, I
actually began the letter with a new pre-head which said, “yes you may think we’re nuts but
here’s your personal invitation.”

Then we went into the exact same headline which was, retire this year and set your
income on autopilot or they will pay you, which is a bold guarantee and since they
guarantee anywhere for any reason the refund, I was happy with that. Later on they
watered down the headline.

You’ll see I used some graphics in the letter. One of the most effective things that ESI
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that the use of the clock increases the buying response so that’s something that you might
want to do on your sites as well, introducing of one-hour countdown.

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Please note the graphics of circling certain key sections throughout the letter. These
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graphics had a big effect on my eventual beating of the control.

The other thing is that they did not have an order page. Once we added the order page, Yes, you may thing we’re nuts but here’s your personal invitation…
which you’ll see following my sales letter, I believe that my letter beat the control by 125%.
Best selling authors Mark Victor Hansen and
Since there were royalties tied to this letter, I’m waiting for my royalty check.
Robert G. Allen swear under oath to help you…

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Dear Future Millionaire, Our names are Robert Allen and Mark Victor Hansen. Between us we’ve written 58
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financial state is totally dependent on the messages and even if Lady Luck stopped by to pay Debt Free And Stockpiling Money
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money and return miserably to status quo. It’s not that they have bad luck or their born under ~ Daniel Donaghy
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them) of wealth, it’s only a matter of weeks or months before they lose it all.
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within a few short years. Their internal thermostat is permanently set to “rich.” If they go ~ Robert Hall
broke and are temporarily in an unnatural state (to them) of poverty, it’s only a matter of time
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~ Catherine Hallock DEBT and my net worth is about $225,000 and growing quickly! Thank you, Harv!”
~ Carl Proskin, Business Manager, Group Telecom

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T. Harv Eker Makes It Simple to overcome the settings of your financial thermostat that were placed on you to
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~ Debbie Filippelli, Sutton Group Realty
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The investments Dan Denning to sell anything to. But I doubt that. For one,
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you alternating between being glued Asians and the Chinese people themselves.
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the stocks and ETF’s he recommends. But secondly, even in a global bust, China will still
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Are You Sick and Tired of All The Lies Coming From Wall Street?
The Decision Bar Are You Fed Up With the Corporate Insiders Growing Rich and Fat At Your Expense?
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Honest Stock Information Is…
Using this package it is possible to make a considerable amount of money. I looked at the
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you can trust for stock advice is yourself.
In the past few years, the “powers that be” on Wall Street have perfected the art of screwing
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Although this letter is performing profitably, I am in the middle of redoing this letter Or the latest trend...the blatant attempts to manipulate the price of stocks. Think it’s
and it will appear in the future. difficult to commit stock market fraud? You better think again. In September 2000, the
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reporters and the SEC he was just doing what all the brokers were doing.

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and again for independent and objective advice, their primary goal is to make commissions.

“People think brokers are investment advisers, but they are essentially commissioned sales-
people,” says Thomas D. Saler, a former stockbroker and author of Lies Your Broker Tells You.
Saler proved brokerage-house stock picks usually underperform the market. But the brokers
don’t care because they get paid by commission regardless of whether you make any money.

Look, many brokers are just salespeople given elementary training. You’d probably do
better to throw darts at the Wall Street Journal and pick the closest stock than trust their
advice. But stick with me here because I’m going to show you a method that’s guaranteed to
fill your bank account with cash.

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But I have to point out, you really need to watch out for people who are... CEO of Cisco John Chambers publicly issued a rosy forecast for his company...BUT HE
DUMPED 2 MILLION SHARES OF CISCO JUST EIGHT DAYS LATER AND
Making False Recommendations POCKETED $45 MILLION DOLLARS.

And scamming the little guy is what some of the biggest firms in the business do to make Bill Gates predicted publicly Microsoft’s new operating system, codenamed Longhorn,
big money. In December 2004, Edward D. Jones & Company — one of the oldest and most was the most ambitious advance they have in their system. And guess what — can you detect
trusted companies in the business — agreed to pay $75 million to settle federal regulatory a pattern here — HE DUMPED 3 MILLION SHARES THE SAME WEEK FOR A TOTAL
charges that it failed to disclose hundreds of millions of dollars of revenue-sharing arrange- OF $77 MILLION DOLLARS.
ments. Translation...they took money to screw the average investor.
So when a 15 year old kid does the same thing in an Internet chatroom, he gets nailed by the
And just four months later, The National Association of Securities Dealers recommended SEC, but when the big boys do it there are no protests. So it leads to a very obvious question...
another $1.75 million dollar fine against this same company for...recommending the wrong
mutual funds to its customers. Here’s Why You Should Still Invest In The Market
And they’re not the only ones... Even though investing on Wall Street is a high stakes game, the possibilities of the upside
are staggering. In fact studies show that 95% of all millionaires own stocks and devote signif-
You Buy While They Sell icant portions of their wealth to the market.
While big executives are History has proven investing in stocks yields higher returns than any other form of
Don’t Believe A Word They Say
whipping small investors into a growing your wealth. And with more and more baby boomers reaching their peak spending
hot and sweaty passion for their You can’t trust a word coming from Wall Street. Heck, years, experts are predicting the Dow could double within the next 3 years. (Of course, you’ve
you can’t trust a word of what you hear on television… got to be in the game to cash in on these profits.)
stocks, they are quietly
everyone is getting paid off. In a rare interview, Lauren
dumping billions of their own Bacall, the movie icon, appeared on the NBC “Today” The stock market zig zags all the time but all historic studies show investors have made
companies stocks. show, telling Matt Lauer about a good friend who had serious money in the market. But today, just like the casinos in Vegas, the rules are bending
gone blind from an eye disease and urging the audience
in favor of the house.
Think I’m talking about small to see their doctors to be tested for it.
time operators here? Not a chance. Let’s face it, you can still make a pile of money by investing in the market but you can’t
“It’s just — it’s frightening because it — it can happen very
These are the big boys: Bank of believe a single word the experts say.
suddenly,” she said. Ms. Bacall then mentioned a drug
America, Cisco, Microsoft and
called Visudyne, a new treatment for the disease known as
dozens more. Here’s proof: macular degeneration. She never revealed that she was Have You Seen These Scams Yet?
being paid to tell the story, and neither did the network, NBC.
CFO of Bank of America James
You get what looks like a financial magazine in the mail. It touts unseen opportunities in
Hance predicated a bright future for his Or even sneakier is what Kathleen Turner did when she
the market and suddenly inserts the name of a stock into the article. Various experts come
company because of strong demands for appeared on “Good Morning America” on ABC to talk
about her rheumatoid arthritis. Ms. Turner did not disclose
forward to swear this stock could be the next Google. Pages and pages urge you call your
consumer loans. In other words — he
that she was actually being paid to promote a new drug. broker and get in on this stock right away. It’s all a fraud.
was broadcasting a strong “buy” signal
to the general public...BUT HE Without saying the name of the drug, Ms. Turner told Diane There are so many scams waiting to trap you the Securities and Exchange Commission
DUMPED 50,000 SHARES OF Sawyer that the”new medications” were “extraordinarily warns you about the new “Pump and Dump schemes.” Here’s the way it works. You receive
BANK OF AMERICA IN THE effective” and did not have any side effects. She also an email or a direct mail letter touting a stock. It sounds too good to be true. It probably is.
SAME WEEK AND POCKETED $3.8 referred viewers to more information at a Web site which
The scammers have bought this stock at a low and post notices about the stock in Internet
MILLION DOLLARS. was “coincidentally” run by the company paying here.
chat rooms or in a direct mail campaign. A number of people fall for the swindle, the stock

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price rises, and the scammers dump their stocks and pocket the money. Small cap stocks are You’ve worked too hard to get where you are to help some greedy “expert” practically steal
especially vulnerable for this scam. Be very wary. Young people who know the ins and outs your lifesavings from you! But at the same time, you can’t afford to let them push you out of
of the Internet are especially good at this new technique of stock manipulation. the market and leave the real money to the big players.

When you invest in the market, you’re playing a high stakes game with the big dogs. You have got to get into the market, but you can’t rely on brokers, touts, or newsletter
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At any given moment in time, there are stocks that are poised to soar in price while others
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for you...only to find that his “sure thing” with the impressive profitability, was really an You see, companies use sleazy accounting gimmicks to legally lie by providing you with
accounting gimmick that dressed up bottom line earnings and signed off by an accounting artificially low P/E ratios. So your broker, who wants to make the next payment on his Jag,
firm now under investigation. mumbles his way through a nonsense recommendations.

You know the kind...the ones that conveniently “forget” to mention that their quoted But I’m happy to report there is one person who won’t accept gimmicks, mumbling, or the
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It’s a smoke screen that hides the real numbers. And in fact that sickly “winner” your broker Introducing The Human Computer
recommended probably couldn’t pump up a healthy profit if the Dow tripled overnight!
Let me just take a moment to tell you my story.....Now, you’re probably wondering why
The discouraging fact is, over 50% of the S&P 500 have been caught red-handed, whipping people call me the human computer and why I’m going to reveal a way for making you tons
their earnings into an artificial frenzy for their stockholders by as much as 23% or more! of money in the market. I’ll get to that in just a minute.

Even worse, the breakdown of honest has reached such outrage is an epidemic levels My name is Les Schwartz. At one time I was a manager for a large corporation. Then,
among large corporations that red flag alerts all over the financial world. And you should be because of some legal problems, the company I worked for was forced to sell, and I was told
especially outrage the reason that the numbers are being alleged is because the salaries and the new ownership no longer needed me. Gone in a flash were 17 years of hard work, dedica-
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rate thieves don’t hesitate for a moment to change the rules in the middle of the game.
It took me 6 months to find another job, and that job was at half the pay I was used to
It’s a sad fact of life that small investors, who rely upon corporate earnings reports as their getting. There was no way I could pay my bills on the salary I was now making. So I did what
only tool to evaluate stocks are being taken for a ride. So the average investor, who never many other people do, I buried himself in credit card debt — borrowing and borrowing,
sees the real facts, gets taken for a ride. digging deeper and deeper.

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Your Own Financial Destiny!
enjoyed. Therefore, I decided to find a way to make my own money and then give other

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You won’t become an overnight investment psychic, or suddenly be able to predict world
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financial events. Nobody can do that, and we would never presume to make such an outlandish
their fortunes with bulletproof safety.
claim. You see — we’re in the investment game for the long haul. I’ve poured my lifeblood,
Look, I could have easily attained guru status as a stock market expert, but I’ve always sweat, and more than a few tears into helping regular people like you become savvy investors.
shuned publicity. In fact, I’m not at all comfortable with the greedy, money hungry attitude
found on Wall Street today. I may be one of the last of a dying breed: a highly principled, Over the years I’ve built a loyal following of investors who eat, drink, and breathe my
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now you have a chance to be a big part of that. Because frankly, when you succeed, I do too!
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tool that shortcuts your way to wealth and protects you from being taken by crooked account-
to make yourself financially independent.
ants, deceitful brokers, and lying insiders.
You need to have a passing knowledge of the financial markets to benefit from Decision
And the best part is — it only takes about 20 minutes to learn. Here’s what it’s all about...
Bar Trading. You need to know how to buy and sell stocks. And you should know how to
Decision Bar Trading is a step-by-step surefire systematic strategy for trading stocks. It is read bar charts and candlestick charts. (It’s simple. I’ll show it to you in a video.)
the absolute best way to profit in today’s uncertain times.
Because you can’t trust the information coming from Wall Street, you will need a world-class
Armed with this breakthrough technology, you’ll easily anticipate market moves, giving quote and charting system. I’ve designed Decision Bar Trading to be used with eSignal because
you the potential to swoop in and capture big deals. you will need real-time quotes, and charting abilities. eSignal is the best system available. Heck,
I’ve even gotten them to throw in a 30 trial free so it doesn’t cost you a cent to subscribe.
It’s incredibly simple to trade with Decision Bar Trading. Finally, you’ll have the
potential to profit from the “golden ratio” of my algorithms almost instantly — even if Look, I’ve seen the same “red-light green-light” infomercials as you have, in fact I even
you failed high school math. bought a copy myself to compare it to Decision Bar Trading. Let me tell you, Decision Bar

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Trading beats the $3995.00 software hands down flat. People who have seen both have told Decision Bar Trading tells you when to trade and what direction to trade. The decision
me they’d rather pay to hear me mumble in my sleep than trust one of those products. bar tells you to do two things:

And here’s the best part: you must forget all of the nonsense the brokers and gurus have 1. Close out any open positions that are not in agreement with the current decision bar. In
told you about trading for markets. In just about 20 minutes, you’ll be trading like a pro. other words, protect your money.
Decision Bar’s Strategy Indicator will alert you when a potential trade is about to occur. And
Decision Bar’s Risk Oscillator will help you determine whether or not to make a trade. 2. Decide if you should take the indicated trade. The Risk Oscillator will tell you if the
trade as a good chance of success.
How Decision Bar Trading Works Naturally, not every recommendation is going to be a winner. Let’s be honest, when you
invest, losses are always possible. Here’s the real key to success...
Successful traders follow just a few stocks at any given time. Every stock offers a contin-
uing stream of trading opportunities. There’s no need to scan thousands of stocks for “the
With Decision Bar Trading Your Wins
opportunity.” Most stocks will offer you as many as five or six day trading opportunities in
the course of the day and two or three swing trading opportunities in the course of the month.
Will Vastly Outnumber Your Losses
Look, none of the gurus will tell you the whole truth. I’m going to be blunt here, but
You don’t need to identify patterns, waves, retracement levels or any other mumbo-jumbo
I’m going to be brutally honest. You are going to lose trades. You have to accept that fact
to be a successful trader. Decision Bar Trading does all the work for you.
and understand it.
Remember, if just one other trader is trying to make the same trade as you are, it could
Michael Jordan does not sink every basket he attempts. Babe Ruth led the major leagues
push up the price of the stock. On a thousand shares a difference of just one penny, means
in strikeouts. Tiger Woods does not win every tournament he plays; in fact, he frequently
you’re paying an extra $10 for the stock. If you try to make the exact same trade at the same
makes bad shots. But what makes Tiger a great golfer is his ability to put his bad shots behind
time as a hundred other traders, it could cost you thousands of dollars. Stay away from the
him and follow them up with great shots.
information in chat rooms and offered by trading services and you’ll make a really big money.
A built-in strategy indicator alerts you automatically when a decision bar occurs. You will
The Only Two Things You Need to Know soon come to love that sound. When you hear that alert you need to make a decision. But
now there’s another decision, you need to make...
When a stock reaches a price where investors think it’s too expensive traders who bought
the stock will try and take profits and flood the market with supply. A lack of buyers will push
Are You Ready to Become Wealthy?
the price down. This is often called resistance.
Imagine the pride and satisfaction you’ll feel when you successfully conclude a series of
When the price of its stock becomes so cheap there is simply a run on the stock in
successful trades. When word gets out around the neighborhood that you’ve conquered this
increased demand and the stock price begins to rise. This is often called support.
pinnacle of investing, your life will never be the same!

They’ll be flocking around you at backyard barbeques, because you’ll be viewed as a


knowledgeable expert. You’ll enjoy a higher level of self-confidence, and quite possibly a
dramatic increase in your income too.

When the number of successful trades you make increases dramatically, so does your
ability to rapidly grow your wealth.

So forget the Water Cooler Indicators, Poker Game Advice, or Brother-In-Law Theory!
With Decision Bar Trading to guide you, you’ll quickly laser in on real trades in no time flat.

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And let me be absolutely crystal clear...I won’t waste your time or fill your head with  A secret formula to control risk. Discover why the advice the gurus give about
unnecessary information. You don’t need two decades of history, rambling ponderings on the placing a stop order is worse than playing high stakes poker with your cards face
future, or books of stock trading theory. up on the table!

You don’t need to know diddly squat about Fibonacci arcs, Elliott waves, fans, or spirals.  Why trading should really be simple and how you can unnecessarily complicate your
Don’t get me wrong...it can be interesting stuff...and if you want you can search the Internet life or follow a simple short-cut to success.
to your heart’s content for every last factoid. But that’s not what Decision Bar Trading is
 How to identify six characteristics of simple trades that yield high profits.
about. In fact, the less you know — the easier it will be to teach you...
 How to keep your trades as simple as possible yet ensure the highest yields.
What you need right now is a simple functional tool you can put to work immediately to
make real money.  How to manage your money to trade without fear.

 Why you can skip all the garbage you hear on CNBC and CNN and trade real leads.
See How Powerful It Is for Yourself!
 Why there’s money to be made in every market...if you know where to find it.
Countless schemers have capitalized on investor confusion by promising enormous returns
in a short period of time.  An amazing journey to double your money . Wouldn’t you like to increase your
money by a factor of 100%?
And some gambler types jump in blindly with both feet, looking for the high that goes
with a successful trade.  What a beginner must do before getting started .

There is some risk, and you should never invest more than you can afford to lose. And  How to control your risk. The pros should teach this but it’s not their money.
aside from the obvious problem of believing a fairy tale that you’ll get rich overnight, are the
 What you can expect in a flat versus volatile market.
emotions that can get in the way of making thoughtful investment decisions.
 “The trend is your friend” is something well known. How you tell when the trend
That’s why Decision Bar Trading is crucial to your financial success. Because this is over and you’re not left holding an empty wallet.
proven program removes all the guesswork. All you have to do is turn it on, listen for
the alerts, and get real results.  A close to perfect, easy to follow, nearly automatic trading system.

Quite simply...
Start Trading like an Expert
There has never been an easier way to trade. It doesn’t matter if you are a raw rookie or a seasoned trader.

Here’s what you’ll get with your Decision Bar Trading package... Wherever level you’re at in your investment program, putting the simple steps of Decision
Bar Trading to work for you today will boost your trading skills and accuracy.
 When to buy a stock and more importantly when sell at its peak.
You don’t have to be a financial wizard, human computer, or a mathematical genius like
 How the rules apply to long trades and short trades and how to identify trades of any
me. You don’t need to spend years grinding your way to the top.
time frames.

 Selecting entry, exit, and target points with iron-clad confidence. Decision Bar Trading will give you the boost you need, so you can put jumpstart your
investing potential. It’s an unfair advantage with secret access to the inside scoop of the
 Why 99.9% of the people trading in the market are clueless and how you can be the stock market!
.01% who consistently makes money.

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And once you’ve felt the power yourself, you’ll wonder how you got along without it! You
might even be able to sleep better at night, when you experience the ease of your smart
investment decisions.

Don’t Take My Word for It, or Anyone Else’s Either


— Here’s Concrete Proof

This is a weekly chart of General Motors (GM). GM is a stock held in many IRA’s. Even
if you can’t or don’t “Short” stocks, your trading account will a lot healthier is it doesn’t have
to absorb losses like this 20 point loss from that Sell Signal at Point A (March 2004) to that
Buy signal at Point B (May 2005). DecisionBar trading will let you grow your IRA or trading
account faster by keeping you out of non-performing stocks.

Made $4000 Dollars In A Few Hours!


Here is a sequence of trade issued by our DecisionBar Strategy Indicator for Research in
Motion (Symbol: RIMM). RIMM is a popular stock among traders because it makes big
moves. Most traders lose a lot of money trying to trade RIMM successfully.

At point A our Decision Bar Strategy Indicator issues an Exhaustion Buy Signal (We
explain the different types of signals in our Decision Bar Trading Manual). RIMM is
trading at $68.10. At point B our software issues a Sell Signal. We sell RIMM for $77.34
for a profit of $77.34-$68.10=$9.24 per share of stock. If we bought just 100 shares of
RIMM at point A we would have made $924.

At point B we decide to “Short” the stock. Without going into detail, shorting stocks is a Want to be a Day Trader? Only DecisionBar Trading catches the big moves, like this trade
method of profiting dollar for dollar when a stock goes down. At point C we get another Sell on Research in Motion (RIMM) on June 22, 2005. We bought at point A at $74.46 and sold
Signal which tells us to hold our short trade. With Decision Bar trading you catch the BIG moves. at point B at $78.46, for a profit of $4.00/share in just about 4 hours. That’s a profit of $400
if you are trading just 100 shares of stock and a profit of $4,000 if you are trading 1000 shares.
At point D we get a Buy signal and close out our “Short” trade fro a profit of $10.76/share
of $1076 on just 100 shares of stock.

We “Go Long” or Buy the stock at point D and Sell at point F for another winning trade
and a profit of $13.47 per share or $1347 on just $100 shares.

That’s a total profit of $3347 or almost 50% in under three calendar months.

Or here’s a case where Decision Bar Trading saved your wallet some serious cash.
Check this out...

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Short term or “swing traders” will love how DecisionBar ignores the noise of a choppy Take 30 Days to Try It, Put It to
chart and allows them to capture the entire move, like the five point swing form point A to
point B, and the six point swing from point B to point C on this chart of Boeing. Remember
Work, And Start Trading like a Pro,
all signal are posted in real time as they occur! Without Risking One Red Cent!

The most amazing thing about Decision Bar Trading is you can go from rank amateur to I’ll take all the risk so you won’t have to. You’ve got our famous, tried and true...
seasoned pro at lightning speed.
100% 30-Day (That’s A FULL MONTH FOR YOU TO BANK HUGE
The only way to know for sure, is to try it. Put it to work from the very first day. PROFITS)-Love-It-Or-Leave-It, Risk-Free, Money Back Guarantee!
Use it for trading stocks, futures, or forex...whatever rings your chimes. But no matter how You don’t have to make a lifetime commitment to get started with Decision Bar Trading.
you use it, we’re absolutely confident that we’ll explode your profits with Decision Bar Trading. Just give us a fair chance. And I’ve even arranged for you to get eSignal

You Owe It to Yourself to Check out This Opportunity In fact, I don’t want you to believe me at all. I just want you to set aside your disbe-
lief for a few moments.
Here’s the deal...
Worst case scenario? If you don’t like it, if you can’t handle it, if you don’t make some
I’m sure you’re aware that breakthrough software programs like Decision Bar Trading this serious bucks... send it back anytime in the next month!
have thousands of dollars of research invested in them.
I don’t care if it’s five minutes to midnight on the 30th day. My word is my bond. Pack it
You could easily pay hundreds of dollars a month for personalized coaching and advisory up, send it back, and I’ll promptly buy it back from you for every dime you paid.
services. (Last year, I took in just under $485,000 in consulting fees.)
And after the 30 day trial is up, any time at all you feel Decision Bar Trading isn’t the
But if you’re dead serious about the possibility of being able to trade like a pro in minutes, easiest, fastest, and most reliable way for you to make more successful trades than you’ve ever
having the opportunity to kick your profits to exciting new levels, and controlling your finan- done in the past, just let me know and we’ll stop all charges and deactivate your software.
cial destiny...now is the time.
But first put the amazing “golden ratio” to work on your trading. Because I’m confident
If you enroll within 10 days of receiving this letter, I’ll guarantee you the incredible that even before the full three months, your caution will turn into a “full speed ahead!”, and
bargain price of $99.95 (plus overnight shipping charges to get you started right away.) I won’t be able to pry Decision Bar Trading out of your fingers with a crowbar!
And then each month there’s a charge of $99 which includes all software updates and a very
special bonus indicator I’ll tell you about in a moment. As a matter of fact, I’m going to throw in two exclusive bonuses just for you...

Now think about this for a moment. If you consider that you can load your Decision Bar I’ve got to warn you, this isn’t for the faint of heart. You’ll be on the fast track, able to
Trading software and start trading in 20 minutes—what do you think your potential to make pick the brain of other high level Decision Bar traders for every tidbit of their cutting edge
back your investment is, maybe even on the very first day? trading strategies, as well as have immediate access to Ron’s in-depth personal advising in a
private forum.
And not only that...let me repeat. Decision Bar Trading is a unique, rigorously tested
software program. That means once you’ve installed it on your computer, your opportunity And of course I do expect you to honor our “forum family” code of ethics, and not
for new levels of precise trading is literally at your fingertips 24/7. reveal the discussions to any outsiders.

So if you’re still debating whether or not Decision Bar Trading will work for you... let Considering that my personal consulting fee runs $500 for just one hour of my
me make it even easier. time...and that you’ll have unlimited keys to the kingdom...this bonus alone is worth 10
times the monthly charge of $99!

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And the second bonus is my new Profit Protector Indicator. Look, as I said earlier,
the Wall Street Fat Cats — or sometimes those 15 year old kids, can throw any stock a Amazing Trading Plans
curve with false information. This bonus software sniffs out unusual patterns and behav- The next letter was a letter that I did for Stephen Pierce, who is not only an Internet
iors so you can protect your hard earned money. mogul but also a huge financial trading mogul as well and he asked me to write a letter for his
Amazing Trading Plans book.
So buckle your safety belt, and put your trading skills into overdrive with Decision Bar
Trading today. You’ve got absolutely nothing to lose, and everything to gain. It was interesting at the beginning because I asked Stephen for a copy of his book. He
didn’t understand why I needed a copy. In order to write the sales letter, I had to push to get
You’ve got my word on it,
a copy of the book. Stephen thought that I could just snap my fingers and a sales letter would
Les Schwartz (Bold Signature in Blue Please) appear. I actually did the sales letter during a Jay Abraham seminar that I was attending. I
was online using wireless and I kept emailing the letter to Stephen a page at a time. He kept
Les Schwartz saying, “Great! Keep going, keep going, keep going!”

P.S. How excited would you be to start trading like a pro in your first 20-minutes with Some changes were made to the letter to boost its response but this is the core of the letter.
Decision Bar Trading? Order this new breakthrough program today, and get started right
Notice that the wide use of testimonials here since we didn’t have any testimonies for the
away. Because without it, you’re just at the risk of the Wall Street liars and cheats.
book, we used testimonials for other products. It was a very, very effective sales letter.
P.P.S. I want to be crystal clear about this...Remember that this is not a cheesy downloadable
Amazing Trading Plans had a huge success going right out of the chute and became one
information product. Decision Bar Trading is a state-of-the-art software program, shipped
of Stephen’s most successful products.
directly to your door in sturdy software packaging. You’ll have top notch trading potential
at your fingertips.

P.P.P.S. Just a quick reminder... my limited time low pricing of $99.95 to get started and a
monthly fee of $99. Right this very minute we are market testing Decision Bar Trading for
as much as $997. You’ll be kicking yourself tomorrow if you let this incredible opportunity slip
through your fingers today! And with our overnight shipping, by this time tomorrow you can
be sitting in front of your computer with a smile on your face.

Make a smart financial decision


and get started now!
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Whether there’s a bull or a bear loose, you can still So what I’ve decided to do is share my knowledge with a select group of insiders. Here’s why.
cash in… if you know the right secrets…
 Most people sharing their ideas or making recommendations have very little
background in trading analysis. Many of just salespeople plain and simple.
The Shocking Huge Lie Professional
 Commercial analysis produced by the big companies is pretty much worthless. If you
Traders Will Never Admit buy and sell based on their recommendations, you are probably losing money fairly
consistently and wondering what’s gone wrong.
Here’s the Inside Scoop on How to Protect
Your Investments From Their Greed  How often do you hear a “sell” recommendation as compared to a “buy” recommen-
dation? Not often. So while most people are walking around wondering what hit
December 20, 2005 them, real insiders make money no matter what happens.
From: Stephen Pierce
 Analysts make huge bonuses if their company makes bonuses. I have yet to hear of
a single person receiving a bonus if their clients make the money.
Dear Investor,
 It’s really underhanded but often the commission structure rewards is often higher
Sometimes I get so angry about the nonsense traders have to put up with. In the past few
with riskier investments. They are paid less for the safest recommendations.
years, “trader” has become a dirty word. Everyone is told to avoid them as if they have the
plague. And if you add the adjective “day trader,” you are in for special insults and warning. It should be clear why I’m furious. These games have been structured and manipulated so
Why? Because good traders soak up information like a sponge on steroids and the big wigs the rich get richer and the little guy gets shafted. And unless you like being the lamb tossed
in the industry are afraid you’ll find out something really important... in among the wolves, up until know, there hasn’t been a whole lot of choice.

Most consultants in the industry don’t have a clue what their talking about. When they What’s the ordinary investor to do?
make a recommendation, they very often have stake in the outcome. Their goal is not to I believe wealth should be shared. Ever since I started dispensing my trading information,
advise you properly but to make money — possibly at your expense. They don’t give a hoot my only goal was to even the game out for the ordinary investor.
whether you succeed or not. They just care if you follow their recommendations.
My Swing Trading ebook was a breath of fresh air for the investor. Hey, I told you
Of course, they hope this doesn’t get out and, for sure, they’ll deny it if it does. But this
when I made money but also, I was the first to openly and honestly report losses too. I
gets me furious and I’m going to let you in on a secret.
told you what worked, what didn’t work, and the logic behind it. I equaled the stakes for
the little guy. And you responded.
The Best Revenge is Building Massive Wealth
My name is Stephen Pierce. And I believe anyone, with the right training, can quickly “Hi, Steve. It has been an excellent experience trading your RF Swing Trader. I don't know
and easily make money in training. For years, I’ve been spilling my guts on how people can how you do it, but it is fantastic. Over $3.000.00 in one week with a small account, can't
succeed at wealth building through trading. And without having my hand in the cookie jar, complain! Keep it coming and God bless you and yours.”
I’ve been dispensing advice broadly through the Internet. ~ Hilario Vieira, St. Catharines, Canada

And I call it however the cards fall. I’ve bought every software program, gone through every
“Anyone who trades commodities knows that it is impossible to pick winners 100% of the
trading course, studied every advisory, and devoured every single book to find out what really
time. What I especially like about RFST is the way losses are contained and held to small
works. And even though it was often easier to find a diamond hidden in the clay, we did find
amounts, while winners tend to be large, and all the way up to huge! Whatever you're
some trading plans which were incredibly powerful, profitable, consistent, and easy to implement.

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doing Stephen, don't stop now. With your help, my goal of building my account an “Stephen, I've been looking at your new Fibonacci Secrets Course And the first words that come
additional 10% per month should be easily attainable. Many thanks.” to mind are: Wow! Incredible! Hot! Amazing! AWESOME! This is definitely State of the Art
~ J. Gerlach trading education material. Anyone who is looking for pinpoint trading signals Will become a
better trader from your new course on Fibonacci. As we all know, knowledge is the Golden Key
“Hello Stephen, This week was the first time that I ever made a Futures Trade and I followed to trading success And this is filled with some of the best trading information I've seen. It is first
your recommendation for Cotton which gave me a profit of $725 in just 3 days. I am anxious class in every way and extremely professional Well I could go on, but I think you can tell I think
to see what you have to offer in the coming week that can help to add to my profits.” it's a hit I'm looking forward to using your Fibonacci information in my trading And THANKS! for
sharing your secrets. Thanks again and again and again! Thanks again and again and again!”
~ Paul Shoemaker, Woody Point, Newfoundland
~ Jim Robinson, ProfitTrading.com
“Stephen obviously knows what he is doing, look at the results, but on top of having incred-
ible results… he CARES about you as a trader, and a person.(email him a question, and learn But you demanded still more. People begged. We want to do what you do, Stephen. And
for yourself!!) For the price of RFST, it will pay for itself many, many, many times over!!!!” we want to understand what you do.
~ Keith Aitken, Toronto So we started out desktop analysis group where you start out the day with fresh informa-
tion, keen insights, and penetrating analysis.
I was more than up front. I posted my phone number, took your calls, and answered your
calls, emails, and faxes. And judging by your reaction, you were shocked someone under- “Stephen, the chart info is right on target, getting out of a short position in Canadian $
promised and over-delivered. Over 5000 savvy traders purchased, downloaded and pored yesterday for a profit. Great job on the meats for several thousand in profits in just a few days.
through every word in Rapid Fire Swing Trading. Keep up the good work. Your service is outstanding and your technical expertise is fantastic.
Your charts have really helped me to fine tune my trading and I am truly grateful. If there is
Then I published Fibonacci Secrets and people really began to take notice and make profits. ever anyway that I can be of assistance or service to you, please do not hesitate to ask.”

“The Fibonacci Secrets trading course from Stephen Pierce is really the first practical training ~ Roger Jensen
course we've seen that simplifies these concepts and takes you step-by-step through
applying the theory to actually trading the markets. Through a comprehensive manual, many “The Charts really are exceptional and, in fact, the best charts out there as far as I am
chart examples and the innovative use of videos you can play right on your computer you'll concerned. I have cancelled every other advisory I was with, except for one option writing
learn how to apply Fibonacci Secrets in your trading. This finally takes the theory and turns advisory. Many thanks once again and no response is necessary but you can be certain that
it into a complete trading methodology. Ideal for trading commodities as well as stocks for after 17 years of trading, I am thankful for the edge you provide with your service.”
both position, swing and day-trading. Add this course and tools to your trading arsenal.” ~ Andre Belair
~ Mark Soberman, NetPicks.com
But I’m only getting started. Now I want to invite you to...
“Hey Stephen! You have done it again! Your Fibonacci Secrets is a superb trading course
explaining exactly how to use technical analysis to identify key support and resistance levels.
Profit Along With the Trading Insiders Without
The instructional videos clearly show how to use your techniques. These alone are worth the Getting Nailed For Insider Trading
asking price alone. Never mind the bonus software, work book with color chart trade
Look, we all know insider training is illegal. But we all know it goes on all the time. For
examples and other goodies. If someone doesn't understand how to use technical analysis
every Martha Stewart caught, hundreds go unpunished.
after taking your course, they shouldn't be allowed to trade. Thank you my friend!”
~ Rich Creal - Founder, Trade With Success, LLC Imagine you had inside information from real trading insiders. How long do you think it
would take for you to double your money?

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Rich Creal (www.TradeWithSuccess.com) Lasers In On How to Trade the
Introducing: Amazing Trading Plans Markets Successfully
I’ve had access to the top professionals in the trading world for years. I’ve asked them
 Why 99.9% of the people trading are clueless and how you can be the .01% who
many times to share their secrets with you. They’ve always said no.
consistently makes money.
But this time, they said yes. But there’s a catch. (I think you’ll like the catch.)
 Why trading should really be simple and how you can unnecessarily complicate your
I’ve gone to the five top figures in the trading world and gotten them to spill their best life or follow a simple short-cut to success.
secrets with you. And the most interesting part is not one person repeats what the other does.
 Five characteristics of simple trades that yield high profits.

Here’s Your Dream Team of Trading:  How to keep your trades as simple as possible yet ensure the highest yields.

Jim Robinson (www.ProfitTrading.com) reveals the Ultimate Trade Setup.  How to avoid trading with scared money and why it’s a guarantee of failure.

 How Bolinger Bands find the best trends in a low volatility market. You discover  How to manage your money to trade without fear.
Million dollar trades before they happen.
 How to prepare to handle multiple time frames and how to handle the famous
 How Bolinger Bands caught the explosion in soybeans in August 2003. No other rule of 5s.
tracking tool caught this move.
 The four criteria for day trading. Not one person in a hundred even knows these
 When to enter a market and more importantly when a stop sign is showing. rules much less follows them.

 How to read a squeeze and how to avoid getting caught following the crowd.
Zoran Confesses The Zoran Plan (www.TrueTrend.com)
 When a volume indicator really adds value and when you’re just spinning your wheels.
 The two types of markets and how to read between the lines.
 A step by step description to make the Bollinger Band system work for you and how
to insure your trade.  How to read through all the garbage you hear on CNBC and CNN to find a real lead.

 Why there’s money to be made in every market...if you know where to find it.
Mark McRee divulges his Simple Profit Trading Method (www.TradingForBeginner.com)
 Why the Forex market offers maximum profit potential. There are 3 key reasons you
 A simple four step formula often discussed but rarely combined. It’s amazing simply must know.
something so simple and so obvious can be so powerful.
 An amazing journey watching how $5000 rapidly becomes $73,000. Wouldn’t you
 Which Fibonacci Rations are the most useful and why you focus on just two like to increase your money by a factor of 1360%?
numbers for your retracement calculations.
 Why leverage can be your best friend and biggest enemy at the same time.
 How the rules apply to long trades and short trades and how to identify trades of
higher time frames.  What a beginner must do in Forex trading which trends you must be aware of.

 Selecting entry, exit, and target points with iron-clad confidence.  Why where you live should contribute to which markets you trade in.

 How moving averages work and determine the present nature of the market.

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Michael Johnson’s Unique Signpost Trading (www.Three-Bears.com) Finally, I licked my wounds and agreed but put in two conditions of my own:

 Applying the Three Bears trading plan for smoothing and warning signals. 1. This is the price for the next 30 days only and then I get to raise it to my original price.

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MARKETING
LETTERS
MARKETING LETTERS

Ultra Underachiever
T he Ultra Underachiever letter was released in December 2005 and sold out completely in a
matter of hours. Marketing the Underachievers program was designed by Frank Kern and
Ed Dale and the original sales letter for Underachievers was done by copyrighter Michel Fortin
and sold the Underachiever Mastery Program.

Essentially, the Underachievers program is about finding a definable niche on the Internet
and selling products in that niche. You’re not looking for a homerun here; you’re looking for
a single. You are looking for a site that is going to make you a couple of hundred bucks a day
and then doing 10, 20, 30 or 50 of these sites to make serious numbers.

The Underachiever Mastery Program was sold out, but Ed and Frank had active forums
and active blog. Finally, they came up with the idea of doing a monthly newsletter called,
Ultra Underachievers. The big news was that Ed sold a bunch of his sites for $5 million and,
therefore, decided to teach other people how they could do it as well.

The hook came from Frank Kern as we talked it out…Lazy fat boy from Australia sells his
puny niche sites for $5 million cash even though he didn’t actually create the sites, make the
products or even write the sales letters. And, below is my original headline: Discover How
You Can Write Your Own Blank Check For Business Success. Locate Savvy Investors Who Are
Interested In Buying Your Websites While Someone Else Does All Of The Work.

One thing you need to know, back and forth, is that there is a lot of banter between Ed
and Frank teasing one another and it’s so interesting that even outsiders jump in and start
insulting one another, getting in on it, taking sides in the Ed/Frank wars. And actually, Ed
and Frank are very good friends. They are also extremely smart businessmen.

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Forget trying to flip properties, risking your money in the Stock How The Underachieving System Works
market, or outsmarting the casinos, when you can conquer the
virtual real estate market and really cash in… Let’s say we discover a raging niche market for bass fishing and we create a website and
sell a digital book called “Secrets of Catching Really Big Bass.”
Lazy Fat Boy From Australia Sells His Let’s go on and assume we price this book at $29.95 and set this site up.
Puny Niche Sites For Five Million Dollars Here’s our radically different formula. We are not looking to make a killing on just one
Cash …Even Though He Didn’t Actually site. And that’s where some people bail out. They’re too busy perusing the big payoff to pay
attention to what happens when you work your Underachiever magic.
Create The Sites, Make The Products, Or Unless you’re like my good buddy John Reese, you’re not going to make a million dollars in
Even Write The Sales Letters! one day. But following the Underachiever formula, Ed Dale snagged a five million dollar pay off.

Read on to discover the how you can write your own We’re not interested in just one site that works around the clock totally hands off gener-
ating money. We want dozens and dozens of them.
blank check for business success; locate savvy investors
who are interested in buying your websites while
someone else does all the work. Number of Sales Day Number of Sales Month Number of Sales Year

December 20, 2005 $29.95 $898.50 $10,782


From: Frank Kern
If we sell just one This would be the This would be the
book a day. income for a month. income for a year.
The payoff was so incredible, if it wasn’t my friend and partner, Ed Dale, talking to me via
Skype, I would have thought he was full of crap. “Go to your fax machine, mate,” he
commanded as it began to ring.
Ed sold 38 of his sites recently to a sharp businessman. Here’s the math — even if those
Pretty soon, page after page of a contract began to appear. And, other than crossing sites sold just one single book a day this is what your yearly income would look like.
out the buyers name and some nitty-gritty details, Ed wasn’t pulling my leg; he was five
million bucks richer.
Number of Sales Year For One Site Number of Sales For 38 Sites
(Picture Proof)
$10,782 $409,716
Here’s how he managed this feat.

Just about a year ago, Ed and I revealed our personal strategy for creating wealth on the Now once these sites are set up, they run like clockwork totally hands off and that’s
Internet; we called it the Underachiever Mastery system. Over 11,000 people tried to get precisely why people want to buy them.
their hands on a copy but we pulled it off the market when just 700 sets were sold.
When you have websites like Ed did that can produce this kind of income day after
If you missed your chance a year ago, you lost out on a great opportunity. The day and year after year, people want to buy them for continuous income without any
Underachiever System is about creating multiple niche sites and selling digital products. This significant effort.
system is radically different from any other program on the Internet. Here’s why...

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If the real estate bubble finally bursts — your sites keep on producing.
The State of Niche Marketing Today
If the Stock market takes a nose dive — your sites continue to chug along.
While the imitators were muddying the waters, Ed and I continued to work and at
If the price of gold doubles, gas hits $5 a gallon, or another hurricane hits, your sites develop the Underachiever System. There’s some good news and bad news about niche
continue to make that “ka-ching” sound. marketing we want to share...

In fact, I personally pulled in $2,992.56 per day with my sites during the month of The Bad News is that the niche marketing ‘game’ has changed quite a bit. Partly as a
September ...despite the fact the entire nation has been glued to the TV all month result of the saturation of the market, it became more challenging to find a profitable niche.
watching Katrina stuff. And all of my sites are selling downloadable stuff ...some just
The other bad news is that Google Adwords has become known to gigantic corporations
promoting affiliate programs. None of them have to do with “marketing”. All of them
and they are driving up bid prices. If you use the example I gave earlier of “bass fishing”, you’ll
follow the same Underachiever formula.
find out the two top bidders are two multi-million dollar corporations.
(Picture Proof)
So a lot of people saw Goliath invading their niches and turned tail and ran. Not us.
So the first example of good news is that we just got smarter and learned some savage
Success Brings Cheap Imitators Google street fighting techniques that not only keep our sites profitable, we increase our
profits every month.
This is the era of the instant expert. These are the people who watched our
Underachiever Mastery System and ran out and crowned themselves niche experts. In In fact, we Google recently changed its pay-per-click rules and sent many marketers
their rush to imitate the Underachiever System, they blatantly copied some elements and into a panic, I released a guerilla technique that forced Google to reactivate most keywords
ignored others. and — in many cases — at a lower cost per click. This bare knuckle strategy kicked
Google’s butt and enabled our sites to chug along unharmed while the imitators bailed.
Tons of copycats came out of the woodwork selling similar courses, software, and other
tools for niche ebook marketing. Many people got burned because they bought these cheap The other good news is that while other marketers are going down swinging, we have
knock-offs only to find themselves not making any money. continuously improved upon our proven system to deal with the challenges of a saturated
market. The result...
The “niche marketing” concept became saturated and soon many people stopped
thinking of it as a viable online business. Ed and I didn’t complain about this at all; they While our imitators are waving the white flags over their sites, our Underachiever sites
left plenty of low hanging fruit for us. are now more profitable than ever! And once we’ve shared some of these sneaky changes
with others, once unprofitable sites have become insanely profitable for them as well.
While the market was becoming saturated from all the copycats, Ed and I continued
to work hard on their own niche businesses because we truly believed in them — and But now there’s even better news...
they did something very few other marketers that were praising niche marketing, we
practiced what we preached. If Ed Dale can make money developing and selling Underachiever sites, I believe anyone
can. Because, to be perfectly honest, Edwardo is as lazy as a slug. I mean this is a guy who is
By following the same system we released to the public, I grew my own underachiever a sharp businessman but he is allergic to the concept of hard work.
business from $30,000/month to nearly $100,000/month (and growing).
And when Ed sold a bunch of his sites, my eyes glazed with the possibilities. That’s when
Down Under, Ed continued to grow his own Underachiever Empire and ended up selling Ed made a huge boast...
38 Underachiever sites for $5,000,000.

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“Anyone can build a web business and sell it! In fact, I’m so And if you tweak your sites the Ultra Underachievers way, your numbers get better
and better.
sure of it, I’ll Do Everything For You But Haul Your Cash To The
Bank And Deposit It For You! … Plus I’ll Take It One Step The higher the ROI (return on investment) is on your sites...the more people will pay for
Further: If You Follow My Instructions And Don’t Sell Your your Underachiever sites.
Website, I’ll Buy It From You Myself!”
Who Exactly Wants To Buy Your Underachiever Sites?
~ Ed Dale (Signature) It’s Not Who You Think!

If you pay attention to the financial markets, they’ve been a perpetual yo-yo going up,
When Ed first explained this to me, I thought he’d been sniffing glue or something. down, and sideways all on the same day. The days of guaranteed riches from buying and
holding in the market are over.
It sounded too good to be true.
Stash your cash in the banks? They are paying miserly interest rates these days. You’re
And the fact of the matter is, not everybody can pull this off. not going to see a big increase in cash coming from saving in the banks.

If you think that reading this letter or buying anyone’s advice or anything like that is As the baby boomers get older, the ones who see the writing on the wall know they can’t
going to make rich guys line up to throw millions at you, you’re wrong. depend on Social Security for income when they retire.

The reason someone will buy your websites is because... So, guess what they are doing to make money? They are buying franchises to make money.

You’ve Created A Constant Income Stream Wonder who the genius was who thought of that.

Let’s say you have ten thousand dollars and invest it in a money market account in the Take someone who really wants to retire and settle down and give them a full time job
bank. The current interest rate is a measly 3.5% and at the end of the year, you have with a huge investment, find a location, sign a lease, training, franchise fees, real estate
approximately $10,350. (I know they compound it differently — we’re just using the overhead, insurance woes, finding and training managers and staff, and salary and tax
numbers as an example.) payments out the wazoo.

But, if you take that same ten grand and buy a respectable Underachiever site that That’s Dante’s vision of hell not retirement.
brings a measly one 29.95 sale a day, at the end of a year, you’ve made $10,782 and you Here’s my vision of retirement. I’m on a beach someplace warm and sunny.
are ahead a big $782.
A nubile young nymph brings me a drink. I flick on my laptop and see that my
Here’s where the magic starts... while the bank keeps giving you its measly interest rate, Underachiever sites racked in another 100 grand...in the past month. That’s when I hear,
your site keeps bringing in nearly eleven grand a year. “Mr. Kern, could you please turn over?” and my massage continues.
Is there any question if you were a smart businessman, where you would put your money — My sites churn out cash around the clock while the biggest problem in my life is whether
in a bank that brings you $350 a year or a website that rakes in close to eleven grand? to take my sailboat out for a spin or go parasailing.

Which retirement would you rather have? So the boomers are the one’s we’re going to sell
This is super important, they are not buying websites. They are buying income streams. our sites to. They are not techno-phobes and can appreciate a steady income stream.

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 A little-known fact to help you deal with the web’s rapid changing landscape!
Introducing The Ultra Underachiever System
Discover how the latest isn’t the greatest and what you must do to guarantee
After Ed’s stunning sale of his sites we had a team huddle and came up with an opportu- continued success. Listen to every rumor you hear may earn you the dreaded Google
nity for an extremely limited number of people to discover... ban. We’ll give you a “BS filter” so you follow what’s proven and never fails.

 The “one” word at the core of your online business. If you don’t live by the word,  The biggest “cash drain” on a online business... and... how to overcome it quickly
you’re not really in the game... and you’re making 1/10 the money you could be! and easily! It will bankrupt you if you’re not careful but will make you obscene piles
of cash if you master this simple skill.
 The real secrets for making insane amounts of money in with your website totally
hands off! (Only a handful of “gurus” even know this secret... let alone, share  A secret technique used by the pros to generate website after website without
how it’s really done.) struggle. And even the people who know this trick don’t know how to do it
well. Here’s the secret which separates the success stories from the ones you’d
 The new realities in doing business with Google and Overture today! Master these rather forget.
simple tricks and your competition will eat your dust.
 How to increase response to your pay per click ads by 300% instantly! Follow these
 How to design a web site for maximum sales! (Most of what you hear about simple steps and see the effects in minutes.
designing a web site-for-profit is garbage. Get real on this now... if... you want to
succeed online!)  A simple trick that can up to double the profitability of all your online sales
letters! This can turn a certain loser into a winner... and... a winner into a grand
 How to eliminate online shopping cart or order form bailouts! Roughly 50% of slam homerun!
people who click to order will not complete the purchase unless you know the
inside scoop.  What you must include on your order page to triple your response. You’ll laugh at
all the people who don’t do this as your bank account engorges with cash.
 Why you should never let your web designer be “creative” when designing your site.
This is a beginner’s mistake and more common than you think. You’ll discover the  The secret email that sends your profits soaring! People who use it always spend time
exact page layout to maximize sales. think up ways to do this again and again.

 How to slash refunds to the absolute minimum! This simple technique defies logic
This Is What You Get Every Month
but is used by the smartest online marketers. Your hard earned money stays in your
pocket where it belongs. For the applicants luck enough to be accepted into the Ultra Underachiever newsletter,
we’ll take you behind the scenes and show you exactly how we crank out winning sites one
 How to build a huge email list... you’ll never hear this anywhere else! Only a after the other. We’ll show you the latest tricks of the trade in Underachieving. We’ve never
fraction of people make big money in emails and you’ll discover their tricks. revealed our deep bag of tricks like this before.
 The correct way to send emails for maximum response! Forget everything you’ve
already heard on this subject... there’s a secret way that’s infinitely more powerful
A New Proven Niche Every Month
than any other! And... if you don’t use it... up to 90% or your email will bounce. Forget waking up in the middle of the night wondering if there’s a hot niche market for
monkey clothing. (Believe it or not, there are 11 Adwords campaigns for Monkey clothing.)
 How to keep Google and Overture honest! Very simple to do once you know how
they can empty your bank account faster than a bank robber. You can stop prowling Amazon.com and Magazine.com six times a day looking for hot
new markets.

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And for Pete sakes you can finally stop hanging out in the teenage chat rooms with Ed But I don’t wake up in the middle of the night hoping I’ve got some HTML to code today.
and telling your folks you’re doing market research.
But, like many of you, I’ve discovered there are some pretty strange creatures hanging out
We’re going to use a methodology we’ve never shared to do all the legwork for you. on elance, scriptlance, and rent-a-coder.
And month after month, we’re going to reveal some of the hottest markets that are
screaming for your entry. Like people for who English is their 23rd language or the people who take your copy and
save it in Word as HTML. So the words come out upside down or backwards.
And not only we’ll we provide the niche; we’ll even give you suggestions about working
your niche so you don’t bump into other Ultra Underachievers. Ed got smart and went ahead and formed his own team of coders and keyword researchers,
all these guys do all day is create sites for him.
But the only way you’ll discover these niches, if you are part of our Ultra Under-
achiever group. And since he’s sold 38 of his sites, these guys are sitting around and getting bored. So
would you allow them to do your sites...for free?
It’s a select group and in just a few moments, I’ll explain what you’ll need to do to
claim one of the spots. And the heck with paying hosting fees every month. Ed has his own hosting company
and he’ll host your sites for free if you’re a member of the Ultra Underachiever Program.
Unlimited Thinking Leads to Unlimited Wealth So all you do is come up with the approach for your product and the copy. And we’ll even
show you how to outsource that too!
One of the exercises our good buddy and Overachiever John Reese does is encourage
people to dream up different ways and approaches to work your niche. People who do this Are your greed glands starting to get excited here?
exercise find out how badly they’ve been limiting themselves.

So we’re not concerned that we’re going to share our ideas with a small group. Heck, Let’s Get Down And Dirty Here
some of you may be lazier than Ed and just become a super affiliate for your buddies’ sites.
After a lot of discussion Ed and I have decided to place an upper limit of 300 people
So we’re going to show you how to broaden your horizons beyond ebooks. In fact, we’re who can join Ultra Underachievers.
going to reveal how the smartest online marketers discover their Underachiever sites are only
Now some of you are calculating in your minds so I’ll save you the trouble. We sold 700
the tip of the iceberg and most of the smart money is hidden beneath the surface.
copies of the Underachiever System.
So it doesn’t matter if a small group of you know about a particular niche, there are unlimited
We’ve taught an additional 800 Aussies the “ins and outs” of the system at two
ways to reach, service, and satisfy their needs for your products — no sweat.
mammoth seminars.
We’re going way beyond the standard online tools to find these hungry niches with deep
And thousands upon thousands of people climbed on for a free ride during Underachiever
pockets. And here’s the best part of the whole deal...
open source when he gave away the secrets to success on our blog and forums.

Let Us Do The Grunt Work For A lot of people say things like this to imply scarcity. We’re not doing that here. By now
You...While You Count Your Sales we’ve proven — we say what we mean and do what we say.

I learned HTML before I discovered the wonders of outsourcing. So I did some of my So these 300 spaces will be gone rather quickly and some people will miss out on these
early sites on my own and I may even do a quick fly catcher here and there. exclusives...

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 Special Camtasia videos  We’ll provide an exhaustive list of keywords to use. No more “latest tools” to buy.
every month showing you How To Sell Your Underachiever Sites You won’t need them.
how to stay one up on the
competition. Hey, my recent
The first thing you’ll need to have is accurate  How to take your Ultra Underachiever business in a surprising new direction to new
records. Many Internet marketers speak in gener- audiences of proven buyers. Imagine if you could show your website only to buyers;
video on getting Google to
alities. If you’re not tracking your results, you will can you begin to imagine what that would do to your sales?
turn your ads back on in a
not be able to sell them because you will not be
second brought how much Ultra Underachievers is going to give you more control over your business so you can
able to prove income. Your Clickbank records are
into your bank account? worry less while you earn more.
a good proof of monthly income but remember —
a buyer will want to see the PPC costs as well.
 Special call in days where Ed Plus because this is all about simplifying your business, just about everything is going
and I will be available to take You will have to have an accountant prepare a to be done for you.
your calls. That’s right — financial statement for your business. Be
you’ll talk straight to us and prepared to discuss prospects for future growth in And ultimately, Ultra Underachiever goes in a new direction; you aren’t building a
we’ll give you the inside your niche. Your accountant may want to recast collection of websites, you’ll be building a saleable business so you can sell them just
scoop on your situation. future earnings to allow for future growth under like Ed or he will buy them himself.
new ownership. Also, consider adding in any
 Ed and I will reveal a new
equipment or other assets that would be included “My Clickbank Sales Skyrocketed!”
profitable niche every
in the sale, as well as your availability for
month. No need to worry consulting that make your business appealing.
“My initial Clickbank efforts were pathetic. They drained my bank account.
about whether these are tire Heck, some months, I earned so little Clickbank didn’t even send me a check.
kickers or buyers — we’ve But how do decide upon an asking price for your But those days are over. Now, thanks to Frank and Ed – my Underachiever
done all the work for you. Underachiever sites? sites are drawing close to the six figure mark. And I’ve got more sites lined
up waiting to go. Now, you guys are going to do the work? Me first! Wash
 New ways to work these niche If you hire an agent to sell your business — and your feet guys because I might just kiss them when I see you next!”
topics. We’ve discussed these they take a nasty chunk 10-12% — they will
evaluate for business and propose a price. Make
~ Harlan Kilstein
among ourselves but they’ve
never been part of the sure they have had experience selling websites.
Underachiever System. We
They’ll be most interested in your cash flow. The
feel the Ultra Underachievers “$3500 Bucks And Counting My First Week. Wow!”
constant flow of cash generating from your sites is
are ready to take the next step. “It was easier than connecting the dots. I launched my first site last week
what the buyer wants. So they are going to look
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host them for you free. The higher the multiplier the more you are
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 You formulate the product
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After a lot of discussion Ed and I have decided to place an upper limit of 300 people
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ULTRA UNDERACHIEVER SECRET #1: When a customer buys one of your products,
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Let’s Get Down And Dirty Here “I am thrilled to say I made that first sale on day 38, and many more since
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ground for me to hone my Internet marketing skills and I am soon to venture “In one month we've made a total of 66 sales for a total of $1,921.97 AUD.
into my next Underachiever project.
“Are we happy with that? You bet! After all, it largely takes care of itself
“Thank you to Ed & Frank for all that you offer – you have certainly changed now... we're just fine-tuning. We're planning lots more sites using the same
my life for the better, economically.” system (and tweaking them, of course, using all the little techniques you
showed us to bring in even more income)... and now that we've been
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through the process once, we know it'll be a lot smoother the second time
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specifics of setting up a web business.
“Sales have been ‘steady’, about 2 a day. The cost of my item is $17.77, so “I joined this 1 month challenge expecting to get some great tips, and I
over $35 per day is not bad.”
came out of it with a SOLID business. I have heard Frank talking about his
~ Ron Ruhle sites bringing in $300-400 a month and thought, ‘Yeah, well that’s you
Frank. That’s a big crock for most of us.’
“But, you have proven to me that anyone can do this, even me. Anyhow,
“You guys simply rock. The words, THANK YOU seem highly inadequate. All thanks again guys. I am totally excited and blown away by what you
I can say is if you happen to chance upon the opportunity to participate in have given to me. Best Wishes.”
the Underachiever Open Source learning system (30 day challenge), grab
~ Al Speer, Portland, OR
onto it with both hands and legs, and prepare yourself for the ride of your
life. It is not a magic pill, but it is the closest thing I have seen that resem-
bles it. With my sincerest thanks and regards.”
“In just the last 4 days I've had multiple offline job offers because many
~ Harold Tsiamis, Johor Bahru, Malaysia
business owners think I'm some type of ‘Marketing Guru’. These business
owners are completely baffled at my simple approach to marketing. Too
bad for them, I'm gonna stay home and Underachieve. Real jobs suck…
“We attended both Underachievers Weekends and both Aussie World
“After finishing the 30 Day Challenge I cleared a profit of $137.82 from
Internet Summits. We have both Underachievers Courses that you put out.
my niche product in just the first week. Quickly I started onto my 2nd
These are the only ‘how to’ ones out there that deliver any moolah!
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least 5 times the value that going to college would have given me, and
without you guys. Heartfelt thanks.”
that is no exaggeration.”
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“Since I started Underachieving, I've made the following sales: “We followed the Underachievers system from Day 1. Thanks to the
powerful, ‘no nonsense’ knowledge and advice we received, we went
MONTH SALES TOTALS
from knowing almost nothing about niche marketing to selling an actual
March 5 116.05 product in just 28 days.
April 17 352.87 “We went ‘live’ with our product site on Day 28 of the 30 Day Challenge.
May 37 794.06 We made our first sale 11 minutes after we went live! We could hardly
believe it. Our second sale happened just 4 hours after that! We’ve
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quoted on blogs and websites!”
August 306 7341.83
~ Andrew & Loretta Sernekos, Cherry Hill, NJ, USA
“Total revenue in the past 6 months: $12,093.31
“So far, I only have 5 sites up and running, but I'll have many, many more
in the future! And, they'll all be based on your methods.” “To date, I’ve sold 11 ebooks at $19.95 (it’s only 54 pages), which has paid
~ Randy Pryor, Lake Forest, CA for half of my production costs. My cost per customer is approx $6 with
a profit of about $13 per sale. This is so exciting for me, who made about
$25 on this the entire previous year. What turned out to be even more
fantastic, is I applied all I learned about research, sales letters, keywords,
“I went from zero (no market idea, no product) to my first sale of a
blog-and-pinging, and other Underachiever tactics to my ecommerce
completed product in just 13 days.
site. And it went from page two on Google to #1 in its two main
“Now THAT is impressive. keywords. And my sales on that site went up about 400%.
“Thanks again Ed — nothing beats the feeling of getting an email from “Now I’m working on some new ideas and I know that I can make a living
Clickbank alerting me that I've made a new sale!” at this. And the best part is, I can do it in my Underachiever!
~ John Childs-Eddy, North Sydney, Australia “So I can’t thank you enough.”
~ Jan Oswald, Denver, Colorado

“While working through the 30 Day Challenge, I was able to choose a topic
and get a product and web site up by Day 28. Only 2 days later I made my
“Thanks for everything! My site was up and running in 30 days and I got
first sale. It’s now a month since the challenge ended and I have made
my first sale after being live for only 25 hours. I've now made 10 sales for
$2,387 from sales and Google Adsense revenue thanks to the techniques
you’ve taught me. Focusing on your methods has resulted in my first month a total of $258.20. When I fix my sales letter following your advice the
of positive income on the Internet.” only way is up!”

~ Chris A. Baker ~ Chris Lloyd

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“I’ve been following you thirty day challenge videos and podcasts and created “That’s a total of $13,077.84!
my first underachiever site in 27 days, (Including research and product creation).
“Of course that’s not all profit, my total adwords costs for this period was
“The first sale came 3 days later :-) $2,282.11 leaving a profit of $10,795.74 in just nine months. I still can’t
“I can’t begin to describe the feeling of complete satisfaction and joy one believe it myself.
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Because I was a little busy I had left my site (almost) untouched... but I wrote doesn’t even convert at 1% I just followed your system step by step.
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week and that's without me doing a thing. exceeded that in the second month.

“Now with your help and instructions I know I can easily turn this small site “I can’t thank you enough for sharing this system. It really works.”
into a 1000$ pay my rent (and more) automatic money making machine.
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“But this is not all... I plan on creating at least 2 more sites like this by the
end of this year. Once I learned the process I know I can create other sites
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“You teach the real deal: Add value to get Value. Help people get what they
Coast Seminar I learnt a few things more things and since then I’ve made
want and they will give you what you want. Best Regards.”
451 sales at an average $ sale of $18.08 so that’s US$8154.08 in about 7
~ Nadav Lichter, Tel-Aviv, Israel months at roughly 50% profit.

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it’s not bad for not doing much to make it
“I just wanted to let you know how thankful I am that I stumbled upon your
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would not have been fair.

So the deal is on for right now and by the time you click on the application page, we
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earlier this month. That was making my first dollar online. I know it may
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you’ve learned this, the income really starts to snowball. be placed on the waiting list which we will explain shortly.

“So far, I have had:

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bring in an income while staying at home to raise them. This is the way.
I will repeat what I’ve learned over and over and over again. 7. We’ll give you free HTML service so all you need to do is send us your sales letters and
we’ll turn them into a web page. (And yes, we’ll put in all the links for you too.)
“So, gentlemen, thank you (and I believe my daughters thank you as well).”
~ JoAnne Westcott, St. Louis, Missouri, USA 8. We’ll open up the phone lines each month and we’ll take you’re calls directly. These
calls aren’t supposed to make you feel good; they’re supposed to make you money.

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9. Each month you’ll get a newsletter jam packed with information on creating niche sites You’ll have exclusive access to Ed’s support team that will give you 3 domain names a
and dominating your niche. We’ll explain exactly what you need to do to set your sites month, free hosting, HTML work, special tools we use behind the scenes, and so much more.
up the right way and build your business.
This offer is open ONLY to the first 300 who sign up and if advance word is any indica-
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shoulder and we’ll show you how modern alchemists turn website electrons into gold.
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new markets.
To your success,
You’re not locked in to anything against your will. You may cancel your subscription at Frank Kern
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P.S. Dan Kennedy, one is one of the world’s greatest marketers, says the one thing that
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list and you are out of luck; you can not rejoin.
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Greatest Direct Mail Sales Letters How to turn your business into a
Ken Odiwe was in Yanik Silver’s mentoring program when I wrote this sales letter for him. cash machine overnight…
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Dear Friend:

Have you ever questioned, as I have, what makes a business either a success or a failure?
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The difference lies in how your words grab the hearts, minds, and wallets of the reader.
And compel them to read, believe and buy. Again and again.

Every element of your letter has to work. Copy, offer, and guarantee. Miss just one of
those crucial elements, and kiss your sales letter good-bye.

The same exact principles work online or off-line. Except that online, research shows
that the average Internet surfer spends 30 seconds on a site before moving on unless it grabs
their attention and holds them hostage through the entire sales and order process.

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Imagine your sales when the top copy writers in history share their thoughts and ideas with
How to ensure that every sales letter out pulls, out you. And they effortlessly display how to write the most effective sales copy for your business.
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 The Wall Street Journal
Don’t invent the wheel. Just clone it for your business.
 Reader’s Digest
Even if you’ve read the books on writing good ads and sales letters and spent months
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 American Express
You no longer need to waste your valuable time staring at a blank sheet of paper. There
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The Greatest Direct Mail Sales Letters of All Time for the Wall Street Journal
This book (include picture of book) is on the shelf of every single great copy writer. This Possibly the most famous sales letter of all time was written by Martin Conroy for the
is where the pros go to get ideas and inspiration. Now, because of an exclusive arrangement Wall Street Journal. Author Denny Hatch calculated that this letter generated $1 billion
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Because you are getting the letters in digital format, you can search, copy, and paste
to produce your own winning sales letters. This is the one case where owning the digital The Wall Street Journal letter has been adopted over the years to sell a widely diverse
is better than a hardcover. (And you’re only paying a fraction of the price — if you can group of products. It has sold weight loss programs, investment courses, and even copy
find a copy.) writing courses.

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The reason people use the Wall Street Journal letter is because it works. If it didn’t sell, Or, make a super huge mistake and try to write it by yourself. Ouch! (Ever try to cut your
the Wall Street Journal would not keep mailing it. If you know the right steps, you could own hair? It may look okay up front but you can’t cut what you can’t see!)
simply adapt this letter and watch the sales pour in.
Who else wants the top direct sales writers in
In fact, if you sign up for our free newsletter, I’ll email you the the world as your personal advisors?
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 Ed McLean who wrote the famous Newsweek “If the list I found your name letter” which
Powerful Persuasive Letters That Sell is the most copied lead paragraph of a letter in history. Warning! If you only copy the
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 Rapidly attract new customers to your business...

 Watch your bank account surge with massive levels of cash...  Walter Weintz whose famous Penny Letter for Reader’s Digest was one of the most
successful mailings in history and generated thousands of paying subscribers. The
 Humiliate competitive businesses... Kingston Boys’ Club build a club house just with the returns of the Penny Letter. You’ll
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 And take your business — from start-up to startling success in a with a dollar bill and watch you results pull.
matter of weeks or month.
 John Yeck, a member of the Direct Marketing Hall of Fame, whose Church organ
And the slightest mistake in phrasing means that even if people come to your site. They
letter is the greatest fundraising letter of all time. It’s sheer simplicity brought forth
won’t buy. It means, they don’t believe you or your offer.
stunning results.
Could You Use Expert Advice to Help Your  William Trembath’s letter for American Express that mailed for more than 8 years and
Marketing Campaign — For Free? led to over a billion dollars in charges for AMEX. Here’s how to bring that kind
success to your business.
Have you ever priced a top copywriter for your site? Typically, they take about $15,000
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result of their letter. You’ll salivate when you read this letter that put it in the copy hall of fame. You can use
this letter with “juicy” results to introduce any new product to a market.
When you hire a top writer, be prepared to pay and pay way into the future.
 Rodale Presses “Grandmother Letter” sent for Prevention Magazine. It’s a masterpiece
Or perhaps, you could find a discount copy writer. Maybe one that’s just starting out and
begging to be replicated.
pay less. But when you pay peanuts, you sometimes get elephants and monkeys.

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 An incredible follow-up letter published by Champion Printing for people who did  How to skyrocket your closing ratio of people who read your marketing piece.
not respond to an initial letter. You’ll add this to your Internet auto responder
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 The famous “Just Suppose” letter that turns tire-kickers into buyers. Jim Kobs masterful
apply to your business!
letter still pulls and pulls.
When you get these sales letters, you’re going to want to start using them right away. Is
 Clark O’Neill’s letter designed to get the attention of busy physicians AND get them to that legal? Can you use them in your business?
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Oliver Wendell Holmes once said: “To take someone else’s idea and claim it for your own
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Click here to order. teleseminars with John offering his perspectives on writing on the Internet.

This was the first letter I followed John’s formula of writing the bullets first. There are
two kinds of bullets: open bullets and blind bullets. Since I wrote the blind bullets first, I
had to explain them to John in an email.

We wrote this letter immediately after we both attended the once in a lifetime event —
Gary Bencivenga’s seminar.

Gary gave a tremendous amount of information in his sales letters to add to the prepon-
derance of proof.

Both John and I signed agreements not to disclose what we learned at Gary’s seminar but
suffice to say — Gary Bencivenga deserves the title of the greatest living copywriter.

In this letter, we conveyed significant information in the sidebars and call outs. We gave
quality information throughout the letter.

Of course, the testimonials are exceptional.

However, the call was not a tremendous success. Why? Because affiliates did not mail
for the program and very few people saw the sales letter.

Still it was an honor to write a letter with John looking over my shoulder and finess-
ing the copy.

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Doubling your online profits is only the beginning as this Because you’re now just a

mega-respected advertising legend shows you how to


small step away from being one of Who The Heck Is John Carlton And
the precious few allowed to finally How Can Me Make Me Money?
put the cash-multiplying magic of “old school” off-line learn the secrets of the laziest,
advertising to work in your online business… richest and happiest online In under a New York minute, John Carlton can
marketers alive. pinpoint exactly where your online business is
“John Carlton Finally Reveals The Once you have these hidden
hemorrhaging money. And if you give him another
58 minutes, he’ll take every aspect of your online
Hidden Breakthrough Secrets That tactics in your pocket, everything business and put it on steroids and have you
Insiders Are Using To Cream Their gets real easy. doubling your profits in record time.

Competition On The Web!” And the money just gets


ridiculous.
John Carlton was known as hotshot freelancer Los
Angeles agencies snuck in the back door to do the
work their marketing gurus couldn't pull off — liter-
The stunning “little salesmen” secret to multiplying response at each step of your If you don’t know who John
ally the most powerful “secret weapon” they
“sales funnel” (page 5 below)... Why rich marketers laugh when online rookies Carlton is yet, you must be hiding
possessed. His reputation as a killer copywriter and
insist “my customers are different” (page 8)... How overlooked old-school persua- in a cave. For over twenty years,
marketing rebel grew exponentially despite the fact
sion secrets force prospects to send you money (page 9)... Breathe life (and cash) he’s been one of the most sought-
he shunned the limelight for years. Insiders spoke of
into your cramped-up sales process (page 11)... Who’s gonna win, and who’s after and high-paid marketing
him in awe and reverence as they greedily counted
gonna lose in the coming Web shake-out (page 14)... Wake up your Inner experts in the advertising world.
the piles of cash he quietly created for them.
Salesman and put that bad boy to work on your bottom line — it’s the ignored (His fees are notorious for making
key to building massive wealth, fast (page 15)... more... clients faint.) You've probably seen his two and three-page "adver-
torial" ads repeatedly in magazines like Men's
More important, he is also
Health, Golf Digest, Black Belt, Men's Journal,
These instant-change secrets can explode sales on almost one of a handful of marketers
Muscle & Fitness, Guitar World or in your local
who has dominated the world of
any website, skyrocket your opt-in rates, and allow you to newspaper. Online, John is known as “the most
direct response — through the
dominate your niche without mercy... even if you’re just ripped-off writer alive”, because of the vast numbers
mail, in print... and, from the very
getting started. Almost no one online has figured out how beginning, online. of sites that owe their success to copying, borrowing
to do this yet — which means you’re about to enjoy an and stealing his stuff. The guy’s got real mojo.
unfair advantage worth a fortune in your market... Until now, the Web has been
limping along — the geeks who He honed his wicked chops working closely with the
understand the technology haven’t greatest marketing geniuses in the field (including
got a clue how to put their Jay Abraham, Gary Halbert, and Dan Kennedy)...
Dear Online Entrepreneur, absorbing their lessons and mastering the secret
marketing on steroids...and the
If you’re the kind of smart entrepreneur who loves to discover easy, simple and super- experienced offline marketers have patterns of compelling persuasion designed to get
fast short cuts to earning massive wealth... then this will be the most profitable and been absolutely frozen by the people to buy on command. And in the process he
exciting letter you ever read. technology of the Internet. created an endless chain of raving fans.

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“John Carlton gets it!... I would pay to be in a room to learn from him.” Fast, simple and easier than you ever dreamed possible.

~ Dan Kennedy, “The No B.S. Marketing Newsletter”


“I urge every player I know to devour John’s stuff. He’s the first guy I call,
myself, when I need serious input on a problem -- we’ve been trading advice
worth fortunes for years.”
“John’s input on my website increased my flow of sales leads by 50%.
Also, his advice to trash my sales letter and start fresh (with very specific ~ Gary Halbert, The Gary Halbert Letter
instructions on how to do it) DOUBLED my sales conversion rate! Those
numbers add up... I tripled the throughput of my sales process, while my
costs stayed about the same. John’s material is not a luxury — it’s a no- “Amazing! My web site conversion rate has nearly doubled, just from what
brainer necessity.” you've taught me. Also following your advice, I tested a much higher price...
~ Perry Marshall, Perry S. Marshall & Associates and the conversion rate was not affected at all. That's free money without
any extra work! Just like you said. Thanks for everything.”
~ Michael Norman, UK
“You inspired me to write a new pitch to my house list... and it generated a
near-DOUBLE response rate (over 203 requests in under 24 hours, at $495 a
pop). Sold out the show. Over all, your advice paid for itself times 9.” “John has created millions in profit for us. We pitted his ads against big-city
~ Ken Calhoun, Daytrading University ad agencies, PR firms, and writers with lots of awards... and he slaughtered
them all. He consistently hits 'home runs' for us — a 20-to1 return in profit is
not unusual. He has saved our butts on several occasions.”
Somebody had to get these two camps together — and unite the Web’s amazing opportu- ~ Robert Pierce, president, Tactical Response Solutions
nities to reach massive cash-heavy markets, with the “old school” brilliance of proven, tested
and mega-experienced marketing savvy.
Here’s the most important point: John Carlton is the only direct marketing guru we
John, though his deep and established roots in both the offline and the growing online
business worlds, has decided it’s high time to share the wealth here. know of who really understands the Internet and can reach into his bag of tricks and give you
an honest, drop-dead-easy change to...
Until now, only deep-pocket “insiders” had any access to John’s skills, services and secrets.

Right now, however — if you act fast — you can be among the first of a select group to
Double Your Online Business
peek into this wealth-maker’s amazing bag of tricks. Overnight
Wait — scratch that. This isn’t a “peek”... it’s like backing up a U-Haul to this You see, most of the well-known marketing experts developed their knowledge offline.
respected and brilliant man’s brain, and loading up every scrap of knowledge, advice Wake them up in the middle of the night and you’ll interrupt a cold sweat about postal rate
and hidden tactic he uses. increases or the prices of magalogs.

This is big. This is something that’s about to shake up the hierarchy of the Web... and If you held a gun to their head and asked a question about email, though, they’d be at a
even raw beginners now have a chance to zoom to the top of the money-making ranks. total loss about what to say.

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On the other hand... most Internet guys are very tech savvy but woefully weak in
classic salesman tactics. Fortify Your Sales Funnel:
Sure, many are making decent money online during this wild “Gold Rush” period of the
Web... but that’s changing fast. “The first step you need to work on is
crafting the sales funnel. That’s where you
And as the Web gets more crowded (especially with the huge new multi-national
bring people into your world, pulling them
corporations who want to control everything)... not knowing how to market effectively
through your carefully-constructed online
means even the current money-making Web entrepreneurs will be leaving more and more
money on the table. experience and maximizing Operation
MoneySuck.
Or, worse, going belly-up as smarter competition eats you alive.
“If you have the goods, it’s your job to make
The kicker is... both groups (the offline “old school” experts and the online tech-savvy
sure each prospect is persuaded as effec-
entrepreneurs) are just too stubborn or too slow to catch on to the amazing money and fame
tively as possible to be sold on becoming a
waiting for anyone smart enough to put these two worlds together.
buying customer. You owe it to him — if you
And that’s where John comes in. He’s going to show you how easy it is to... screw up any of the steps that bring him in,
you’re doing him wrong, because you’ll turn
him off and lose him forever.
Multiply Response
“And that’s the only way to efficiently use
At Each Step Of Your Sales Process: this wonderful Web technology, to nail
down that critical series of steps that
converts looky-loo’s into buying customers.
“When you use the power of classic sales-
The application of classic salesmanship and
manship to create headlines with a wicked-
world-class copy tactics is what sets each
good hook... using scorching attraction and
of those steps on fire.
persuasion techniques... each step in your
sales funnel (pay-per-click, Web page “If you’re not getting the response rates you
description, name capture page, etc.) acts as should (or deserve), then this kind of
tiny little killer salesmen. And as these blueprint will be a huge revelation to you.”
mini-salesmen increase response at each
~ From the same interview
step, your bottom line is going to swell to
dramatic proportions.”

~ John Carlton, during an interview

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I, Rich Schefren, took the classic route (first) to entrepreneur wealth and constructed a
And Create Staggering bricks and mortar money machine.
Overnight Profits: This offline experience helped me understand the need for REAL “old school” business
know-how, no matter what kind of market you’re in. I purchased a failing clothing company
and made it a turnaround sensation.
“Just making sure you have each critical
step of your sales funnel operational will Heck, The Wall Street Journal wrote me up in a front-page story, touting my strategic
thinking and management skills. But that was just the beginning...
change your life. And when you finally get
really good at making each step as powerful I also opened a chain of hypnosis centers using my increasingly-powerful knowledge of
as possible, then the resulting wealth is direct marketing. These centers became Las Vegas style cash machines filling my pockets
beyond your imaging right now. And again, with profits and providing the lifestyle people dream about. New York condos, Caribbean
we’re talking about a fortune in a very short cruises, sleek Porsche, and quality time with my family — whenever I want.
period of time because there are so many Finally, I moved my operations online and teamed up with Stephen to bring about a
people out there shopping on the net. Once powerful combination of two sharp marketers with expertise online and offline.
you make this thing work, the amount of
This synthesis provided the inspiration for a series of “How To Do It Right, Fast, and Easy”
money is just incalculable.”
phone calls with John Carlton.
~ From the interview
Stephen and I have
discovered the greatest Are Your Customers Any Different?
lessons of offline mar-
It’s about time we introduced ourselves and told you why we are personally getting John keters have been lost to “A lot of people insist that ‘my customers are
Carlton to spill his guts for you. the online world. different.’ I hear this all the time. ‘My
customers, they won’t read long copy. They’re
I’m Rich Schefren (use photo — left) and that’s my partner Stephen Pierce (use I mean, offline
companies with annual not going to sit down and read this. I need to
photo — right)... and we’re both interested in maximizing every dollar we can bring in to
our online businesses. incomes in the get in there really quick and I need to be really
hundreds of millions of breezy about this. And I’m afraid to do
As you may know, Stephen has carved out a ridiculously-profitable (and internationally- dollars have perfected anything that smacks of hard selling or
respected) niche in the online trading community. Nobody else comes close. the scientifically-based actually asking for the order because I’m kind
strategies to maximize
He’s launched successful project after project and attracted a serious following of of embarrassed and people don’t respond to
the income from every
dedicated traders and investors. From Rapid Fire Swing Trading to Fibonacci Secrets, The that, anyway. They’ll get turned off.’ Well,
single name on their
Three Bears, and Desktop Market Analysis, Stephen has built an online empire. that’s exactly opposite of what you learn once
direct mail lists.
you get into direct response.”
He’s is also acknowledged as one of the greatest experts in affiliate marketing, search
Yet virtually none of
engine positioning and traffic generation.
these techniques have ~ John Carlton, in an interview
migrated online.

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This guy has done it all — written home run ads for the largest mailers in the world, and
How The Internet Strategies of A Marketing Rebel
helped online entrepreneurs score millions in record time.
Can Change Your Bottom Line...
Sure, John earned his reputation offline, mostly... but from the beginning, he’s been
So this is where John Carlton became the centerpiece for our plan to merge the mega- the Number One choice of smart online marketers who knew they needed to learn
powerful “old school” tactics of killer salesmanship and grab-em-by-the-throat copywriting... advanced selling secrets FAST. (He even wrote one of the first online ads, for a business
and merge that know-how with what we know about the cutting-edge (and fast-changing) opportunity back in the early 90s.)
technological opportunities of the Web.
Though he is by no means a “geek”, he’s been deep in online marketing for years — almost
Here’s what we did: I convinced John to go deep with us, during a short (but super entirely on the “get more sales, faster” side.
intense) series of phone calls. They’re scheduled just a short time away, so it’s important
that you stay with me here. We didn’t have a second choice when it came to who we wanted on these calls.

John is critical to this “merger” of ideas and tactics, because he’s a MASTER at teaching It’s been obvious for a long time that John Carlton is the “Go-To Guy” for putting the
entrepreneurs (people like you and me) how to use the most effective secrets of killer power of offline brilliance to work for your Web money-making efforts.
copywriting to persuade HUGE NUMBERS of prospects to buy from you.
Read the testimonials in this letter. Very famous and respected names here. And they’re
He doesn’t teach theory. He gives solid, breakthrough advice straight from his 20 years gushing about what John’s advice and help did for their bottom line.
in the front-line trenches of the advertising wars. When he tells you something works, that
advice comes from EXPERIENCE, not some book. This is the right guy. At the right time.

John is connected at the hip to the red-hot CENTER of the marketing and advertising You are about to enjoy an unfair advantage over everyone else in your market.
world. Every significant player has John’s secret phone number in their “most used” file. And And, oh my, is it ever FUN when the money starts rushing in.
EVERYONE takes his phone calls, without hesitation.
Best part: You’re going to be able to put what you learn to use IMMEDIATELY.
“I’ll have to call you back. Carlton’s on the other line.”
So the cash register starts dinging before you can catch your breath!
Gary Halbert comes to John for advice (and vice versa). Joe Polish considers John his top
brainstorm connection. Perry Marshall credits John with a doubling of his conversion rate. I’ll tell you how to get in on these calls in a moment... but first, let me tell you more about
Dan Kennedy has relied on John as the keynote speaker for his most-important seminars. what to expect. When Stephen and I grill this brilliant copywriter, it will be super-focused
Michel Fortin’s interview with John is still one of the popular on his site. on stuff you can use right now.

Agora’s copywriting school did an in-depth study of John’s most infamous sales letter. Like:
Rodale begs him to come back to write for them. The top honcho’s at Boardroom and Phillips
Financial consider him a top resource.  The single most important thing you must do before you sit down to write even
one word of your sales message! Do this simple step and there will be an endless
The subscription list to his must-read newsletter (“The Marketing Rebel Rant”) is supply of buyers. Ignore it and you’ll murder your bottom line.
crammed with online players, as well as almost every major “Web guru” you’ve ever heard of.
 How to find out what online buyers desperately want. It’s not flash or cute java
And John’s past-and-present client and “Insider” lists read like a Who’s-Who of the best scripts. In fact, not one business owner in a thousand knows this crucial
Web marketers out there. secret...yet... it’s critical if you want to reap exponential sales with the least amount
of time, effort and struggle on your part.

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 Why you must master the
There’s A Proven Science To Persuasion. You’ll Be Amazed How Easy It Is
message of the starving
crowd. Your entire business To Boost Your Sales!
Smart salesmen learn fast that there is
success depends on how well  The 5 shocking new realities of doing business online today. Yes, things have
actually a step-by-step process to closing a
you understand this key. This
sale. First, you establish credibility. Then, changed, just in the last few months. Master these simple “automatic update”
30 second lesson can ensure
you tease about the upcoming benefits. tricks and your competition will eat your dust even if they catch up first.
your success or condemn you
And you continue, painting a pleasant
to failure. Thousands of  Discover the one thing you should never have on your website. Common sense
abandoned websites and picture in the prospect’s mind about what says “do it” but insiders know it’s a blunder that will devour your profits.
domain names testify to their life is going to be like, after they’ve
those who didn’t learn this become a customer. You add urgency to  How to suck casual surfers into becoming rabid life-long customers! John will
lesson. John will make sure the transaction so they don’t feel they can show you exactly how the smartest marketers alive use stick letters and lift notes
you don’t make the same stop and make this decision later; they’ve to boost your response by capturing people’s attention fast.
mistake. got to act now. You push the prospect
 The four ignored yet brutally-effective secrets for writing a world-class web
toward the final act of taking out his credit
 The one tactic at the core of site. (These are secrets the insiders thrive on but never share.)
card and doing the deal.
your online business that
most marketers ignore... but  How to design a web site for maximum sales. (Most of what you hear about
Now, however, the business world is
which has smart “old designing a web site-for-profit is garbage. Get real on this now...if...you want
crowded with rookies who believe they just to succeed online!)
school” marketers drooling.
reinvented the wheel. They don’t believe
That tactic is testing... and if
they need to understand what the old-  How to eliminate online shopping cart or order form bailouts! Roughly
you don’t live by the word,
school guys before them did. It’s even 50% of people who click to order will not complete the purchase unless you
you’re not really in the
worse on the Web. The new guys think know the inside scoop. You’ll laugh on your way to the bank when you
game... and you’re making
it’s a new technology, and the old rules no follow these simple strategies.
1/10 the money you could be!
John will show you the easiest longer apply. That’s just dumb. True,
 Why you need to use power words in your writing... and the direct
ways to test every aspect of viciously-effective salesmanship hasn’t
connection between power words and reader time on your page. (Higher
your online business. changed since the dawn of time… and reader time equals more sales.)
what the offline salesmen have proven in
 The really stupid, com-  How to hit the passionate “sweet spot” of your reader and literally whip him
direct response and mail and print, also
pletely avoidable reason into a buying frenzy even if he has to max out his credit card in the process!
works online to bring in piles of money.
most websites fail. If you
don’t know this ingredient, This isn’t just idle theory, or guesswork. It’s  The “you’ll never discover this on your own” mindset change you must
you might as well turn in being proven, by smug and wealthy develop to write a world-class website. This is John’s own secret weapon he
your domain name and give insiders, every day online. pulls out whenever he writes. It’s unique to John Carlton and...
up your dreams of success.
John will demonstrate how It’s easy to do, once you get hip, but you
to turn words into money. need a guide.

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You’ll Never Get This Anywhere Else! Building Your Sales Funnel Prepare to Be Amazed!
 Why you should never let your web And Quadrupling Your Income  How to get a flood of eager buyers coming to your website to buy... in
designer be “creative” when designing
fact... almost more than your site can handle! What John will reveal about
your site. This is a beginner’s mistake and We’re going to teach you how to
pay-per-click advertising will have you rushing to change your ads while you
more common than you think. You’ll readjust the way you look at the
listen to the call!
discover the exact page layout to maximize sales funnel. A lot of people
sales. Amazon.com let their creative people don’t understand even the  How to find the killer “hook” to write a great headline! Eliminate wimpy
take over their website and paid the price. basics — it’s not some magical headlines forever. Here’s how to infuse some street-smart sales appeal into your
science, but you won’t stumble headlines for maximum response!
 How to goose your “sales detective” to
onto the secrets on your own.
make sure your site makes maximum sales  Warning: This common tactic is the LEAST profitable way to grow your
from the day your launch it. Put on your Most “outsider” marketers
online business. However, it’s also the “looks right while being wrong” tactic
Sherlock Holmes hat and skyrocket your understand pieces of it, but not
almost every well-meaning business owner uses. You’ll never make this mistake
sales beyond all levels of greed. in a coherent way that guaran-
when you discover this “corrective” direct marketing trick.
tees success. Heck, you can be
 How long your website needs to be... brilliant at step four, but if you’ve  Why you should usually aim to “ruffle a few feathers” with your sales copy!
solved once and for all! (Short or long lost your prospect at step two, If you aren’t pissing at least a few people off, you’re probably not marketing hard
copy? You’ll be surprised at which generates
you’re still gonna go bankrupt. enough to make the big bucks in your niche. (And, when you ruffle those
the most sales!)
feathers... here’s how kissing and making up can make you even more money.)
If you look at the guys who
 How top pros test an email mailing list.
make the big bucks both offline  What your customers really want to buy... and how to give it to them and
Classified info the top marketers are hiding
and online, you discover these receive maximum profits in return.
from you. Only a fraction of people make
guys treat each step as an
big money in emails and you’ll discover  How to increase response to your pay per click ads by up to 300% instantly!
their tricks. organic, living, breathing thing
Follow these simple steps and see the effects in minutes.
with a certain number of
 Lead generation or direct sales? The events that must happen to  A simple trick that can double the profitability of all your online sales
“experts” say you must make this decision close the deal. So you don’t letters. This can turn a certain loser into a winner... and... a winner into a
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you how to do both at the same time. and you close a much higher
percentage. The result: If  What you MUST include on your order page to multiply response. You’ll laugh
 The ONLY way to send emails for
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secret way that’s infinitely more powerful funnel working at maximum
than any other! And... if you don’t use it... capacity. This is how the Big Boys maximize their income, fast.
up to 90% of your email will bounce.

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“If you enter the marketing jungle in search of riches and respect, just be This is advanced stuff, explained in ways that make it all simple to implement, fast.
sure you walk with this man at your side. He is a recognized master of the
Doesn’t matter where you are in the business cycle, either. This is critical, specific knowl-
world’s most effective, ultimate-street-fighter marketing techniques. Do it
edge for rookies just getting started, and for marketers already deep into the game.
right, as he shows, and for every $1 you put into your marketing machine,
you can get $2, $3, even $5 or more back.” Everything is changing, fast, online. Those who are hip to the classic ways to open the
~ Gary Bencivenga, Hall of Fame copywriter for Boardroom, cash pipeline wide — and KEEP it open, even against strong competition — will see massive
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The tactics, specific advice, and proven secrets you are about to learn will instantly make
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Thanks to what I've learned, I was able to quit my cushy six-figure a year job The deadline for signing up for these calls is almost here, so you want to secure a spot
to go full-time in this new business!” right now.
~ Daryl Thompson, Candlestick Forum
Why You Want To Be On These Calls:
John Carlton offers an honest, objective voice in a sea of Internet guru wannabes. His
“Carlton’s simple techniques for recapturing lost customers, or turning marketing bag of tricks goes back decades and has produced millions of dollars in profits for
excess inventory into new revenue, or boosting sales by 50% with a single those smart enough to employ him before his consulting fees soared into the stratosphere.
line of ad copy will blow your mind.”
~ Steve Barwick, Barwick Direct Marketing “He fought hard to get us to mail his sales letter for our new book. He
ruffled so many feathers pushing us past our creative ‘comfort zone’ that
he got himself temporarily blacklisted... until, of course, his piece not only
Here is what’s going on: We’ve arranged for an intense series of three teleconferences knocked off one of our top writers, but also mailed profitably for over 4
with John and Rich and Stephen. years to millions of names.”
The subject is simple: How to put the awesome power of old-school classic salesmanship ~ Sindy Berner, Production Marketing Manager, Rodale Books, PA
to work in your online business.

However, these are NOT your usual “slam ‘em out” calls. This group has spent six months Today, if you want to consult with John Carlton about your business, it’s going to take
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there’s a waiting list.
We’re going to start at the beginning of the proven “sales funnel” that has made so many
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equivalent of a Ph.D. in marketing to succeed on the web. He doesn’t measure his money
And move through each successive step of the sales process... showing you EXACTLY
making recommendations by number.
how to multiply your chances of grabbing more prospects... converting them into paying
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blitz your opposition and grab the lion’s share of profits available in your niche.

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They are easy to implement and will That’s why this upcoming event is so exciting. John Carlton is finally emptying his bag
make your friends insanely jealous once they How To Awaken Your Inner on tricks on the table and...
see your results. Salesman
Revealing The Proven Secrets To
If John has been able to launch one There is a science to persuasion and
marketing success after another it’s because
Maximizing Your Online Profits.
there is an art to it. And the meeting of
he’s honed his bag of tricks with hard-learned the art and the science is where great This is a rare opportunity to harness a thoroughbred champion and put the genius gained
experience from the front lines of the adver- copywriting happens. It can be taught. in his lifelong pursuit of Operation MoneySuck to work for your business.
tising and marketing wars. A lot of jobs he
But as I’ve said over and over, I would
took in the past were for royalties only and if Here’s more of what’s in store:
rather take a near-illiterate street
he didn’t produce stunning upset results, he
salesman with some street savvy and  Sales-producing tricks used by the best marketers when they register domain
didn’t get paid.
teach him to be a copywriter than take names. Forget everything you’ve learning in the past. Use one of John’s power
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triumphs because he’s been able to take the teach him how to be a salesman.
pulse of the market and turn it into a cold,  While most marketers are worrying about how to cut down on refunds, John will
Because the over-educated guy is
hard, pile of cash. push most people to increase the number of products they refund. It defies
going to resist what he considers the
logic and common sense but pays off handsomely at the bank!
He is also now one of the most respected “impolite” or too-aggressive tactics of
teachers of advanced copywriting and a good salesman. But if I can just get  How John’s theory of monogamy translates into increased sales. There isn’t a
marketing. His course on copywriting, “Kick- the street-savvy salesman’s sales single Internet marketer capitalizing on this yet. You could be the first to jack
Ass Copywriting Secrets of a Marketing Rebel”, pitch onto the written page, we can up your prices totally confident of your results.
has been a world-wide best-seller for years now, reach 100,000 people by tomorrow
and launched a thousand new businesses. afternoon, instead of hitting each
 Getting a number one position in Google is an Internet marketer’s wet dream...
unless you make this mistake. John will show you how to avoid it.
prospect up one-on-one. His eyes are
His blog is bookmarked by many of the
going to light up because his inner  Thought you knew how to write a Google Adwords ad? Think again after
smartest and richest marketers alive.
salesman is awake and ready to go. John reveals the missing ingredient in your campaign.
As you can see from the pile of testimonials
here, even a piece of advice from John can For most people in the country, their  There’s a better chance of Michael Jackson becoming the spokesperson for
skyrocket results. inner salesman is fast asleep. And so Fisher Price toys than you making money with your website if you don’t have a
one of the first things you’ve got to killer U.S.P. Here’s the first thing you should do if you don’t have one.
So you can well imagine why this opportu- do is wake up your inner salesman if
nity to go deep with him is causing such a fuss.
you’re going to be a success in any  Why logic is the last thing you should use if you want to sell on the web.
kind of business, whether it’s on the The pro’s know you need to tap into raw emotions and desires. Don’t be that
His style is cut-to-the-chase results-driven
Web, whether it’s retail, whether it’s guy who has to learn this the hard way. Follow John’s simple example to
marketing advice. Follow his advice and make
success and start reaping the rewards right away.
your fortune. Ignore it and your income drops direct mail, whatever it is. But if your
faster than the Dow on Black Friday. These inner salesman is asleep, you’re not  A step by step guide to putting advanced “sales detective” tactics to work for
are advanced black-belt tactics and they are going to get very far. your bottom line. You should never consider starting an online business
not for the squeamish.

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without this crucial step. And if you’ve already started a business and you’re And, as things heat up, even those results are at risk.
disappointed with the results, here’s what you need to do now to turn it around.
Whether you realize it or not. Next month could change everything. There could be 15
It’s okay to be skeptical about all of this. The Web is crammed with self-anointed experts foreign entrepreneurs licking their chops waiting for the chance to get into that market and
who claim to know the answers. That’s why we’ve been sharing what the “real” Internet they’re going to be able to use the same technology you’re using.
marketing experts say about the power of John Carlton’s techniques:
Your only defense will be a wicked-good offense. And the only way to accomplish
that is to get hip to the tactics already proven and tested and used by the best and richest
“Carlton really pisses me off. I collect his ads whenever I can, as professional
insiders in the game.
research on great copy. Trouble is, after reading his stuff, I end up buying
what’s he’s selling. He is one amazing writer. Believe what he tells you.”
Your Website Could Be Targeted Next!
~ Jeff Paul, best-selling author and entrepreneurial guru
This is critical even if you’re really raking it in right now. That just makes you a more
ripe target on somebody’s list.
“ Your headline suggestion for one of my web sites boosted sales by 70%!
If you’re in a hot market and you’re making it work and you’re alone right now... or you’re
This equals an extra $3,000 every month... from one simple change.
beating your current, lame competition... you can’t count on that being the case tomorrow.
Thank you.”
~ Terry Dean, Internet Marketing Coach, New Castle, IN That’s the best argument for learning these cutting edge secrets now, no matter what your
current results are or what your skill level is. You are arming yourself against competition.

John has clients that come to him all the time licking their chops. They say, “Hey, we
“First thing I did after you rattled my cage was re-write a couple of sales found this market with a million potential prospects. And there are only a couple of guys on
letters. Two of the new letters using your methods DOUBLED response. the Web right now going after this market and their stuff sucks.”
At a case average of $2,000, I don't have to explain the impact that is
having on my bank account. Thanks!” So they hire him or another writer who is hip to the top-level secrets of master
marketing... and go out and slaughter the competition.
~ Dr. Matt Welch

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Warning, Rough Waters Ahead on the Net Get on this teleseminar series and put and iron-clad shield around your Internet
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know, GM and Wal-Mart and Hewlett-Packard. then automatically roll over you.

Everybody is starting to wake up and see the potential of the Web. So it’s not just an Just showing that you know what you’re doing, and that you know how to dominate
entrepreneurial medium anymore. your market in spite of competition, is your best insurance for a long, profitable life at the
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Right now, many entrepreneurs are getting what John calls “heartbreak results”... which
is when you know you’re only getting a fraction of what you should be getting.

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If you’re a complete rookie, just doing one
Why You Need To Prepare For Competition: thing right in each of these categories is going Advanced Adwords Strategy
to double response, which means you could
Under massive pressure from the
easily quadruple your profit.
drug industry, Google has begun
““ You’re going to wake up one day and
If you’re in that heartbreak category where restricting certain keywords for
realize, ‘Oh oh, there’s somebody else in
you know you’re not getting everything you use only by doctors, pharmacies,
our market and they’re using long copy
should and you know you’re not established and other licensed personnel. So
direct response ads.’ You’re going to need like you should be, this is just going to send if you want to purchase the
to fight to keep your market share. And if you into the stratosphere and help you keyword “stress relief”, for
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If you don’t know what you’re doing, it’s
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‘What do we do now?’ And before you know
July 20 — all Wednesdays — you get to can get a doctor for a small invest-
it, your ship has sunk.”
eavesdrop as Rich Schefren and Stephen ment to put his name on your
~ From the interview Pierce tap into the mindset of the Marketing product. This translates to credi-
Rebel, John Carlton. bility, more sales… and the ability to
gain access to restricted markets.
This mind-blowing, idea-flooding telecon- It’s the simplest thing in the world,
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strategies that can literally infuse your online
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When you join us on this mega hot teleseminar series, you’ll discover we’ve broken business with unheard-of profits.
down this entire sales funnel into four parts. You’re probably going to know a little bit
about each part already, but no one has been systematizing this.
“ You know that new ‘hook’ you insisted I try in my sales pitch? It tripled
We’ll be plunging off into advanced territory, which is nevertheless simple and easy to response! This translates into several hundred thousand dollars in sales
do, where this melding of the classic salesmanship and the high-end, cutting-edge over the coming year. You are on my Christmas gift list for life, dude.”
technology actually makes sense. ~ Terry Dean, Internet Marketing Coach, New Castle, IN

Dominate Your Market


If you ever wanted to multiply and exponentially grow your Internet income...
We’ve broken John’s strategies into four categories — attraction, conversion,
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Then this is one teleconference series you mustn’t pass up! And following the series, we want you to put these simple easy to follow strategies and
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And we will not consider the sale final until you’ve had the chance to may this call pay
If you enroll in this flaming-hot discussion, you will not only hear John Carlton but also off for your own business.
Stephen Pierce and Rich Schefren. We both have a great deal of knowledge to share...
Here’s proof:
... And we were both blown away by our discussions with John!

In fact, as I write this, over 219 “seats” have already been reserved purely on word- Take six full months from the date of the last call to put
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the call at 800 seats.
Put them into every aspect of your practice.
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Up to now, people had to pay colossal monies to tap John’s megabucks business cash You be the final judge!
machine brain.

If his prior clients find out John was “giving away” his time for such a bargain rate, they Where’s the downside? Frankly, there is none unless...
would be more than upset. They’d be on the war path.
You miss out on this call.
This is decision time.
Or even worse...
We’re absorbing all the risk here. Simply enroll in this 3 teleseminar series and follow
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Decisions don’t get any easier than this. “Working with John Carlton is like having a stern, compassionate mentor
surgically guide my marketing efforts. The results? Response rate north
You Must Hurry! of 30% on letters delivered with aggressive follow up.”

This call will be filled to capacity. This is NOT some clever ploy. Based on our ~ Dan Page, Colorado
previous calls with Jay Abraham, we’ll be turning people away simply because the lines
will be maxed out!

There’s only one person on the planet we know of...who has the kind of profit promo ideas “My average order is 50% higher (and more) since I adopted your idea. I love
and fortune building answers you’re looking for. Only one person who can take all the unique your outlook, and your advice cracks me up while bringing in the results.”
problems you’re facing and turn them into lucrative money-making opportunities. ~ Tom Venuto, NJ

It’s John Carlton without question.

There’s no one else out there who’s more knowledgeable at driving traffic, generating “Thanks to your course, my sales letters are now getting an extra 69%
sales, converting prospects and kicking your inner salesman into high gear than John Carlton. increase in response! And my print ads are suddenly stratospheric (and
highly acclaimed). You are a friggin’ international superstar.”
How Much Does It Cost To Become The Next ~ Steve King, London, UK
Internet Success Story? Absolutely Nothing. Either
These Calls Pay For Themselves... Or You Don’t Pay. Years in the future, there will be two groups of Internet marketers — those who were on
this call and those who regret missing it.
Quite simply, NOTHING like this has ever been offered before! If you’re smart, you’ll
grab a spot on this call at the incredible price of just $97 now and $197 right before the third Remember you have six months to prove to yourself the killer strategies John is going to
call. Heck, you’ll already have the opportunity to make back your money ten times over reveal really will blast you off to new levels of success.
(that’s a fraction of the cost of just one hour of John’s time privately. Listen, you better pray
And, if you are still new to the Internet, this is the express train to the top.
your competition doesn’t find out about this steal of a deal.

But that price won’t last. It goes up by another $100 on June 20, and you may miss out I Want to Claim My Spot on the Call Now!
entirely if you delay.
This call might just be the most significant piece of your Internet business you’ve
been lacking.
Join us for this special, one-of-a-kind,
three session event Sincerely,
Stephen Pierce Rich Schefren
I insist that you secure your place right now.
Look, if you stick a pin in John Carlton, tons of solid marketing info is going to come P.S. Read what still another marketing guru has to say about John Carlton:
gushing out.
“I’ve used many of your secrets and techniques in my copy, and find them to be like little psychic
Miss out on this call and you’re not really in the game. vacuum machines that suck money out of customers wallets like magic! For example: I added just one

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of your tactics to a promotion for a client, and sold $65,000 more product compared to the same
promo minus that trick. Over the next 12 months, this added up to $726,000 more profit — a Alex Mandossian’s Conversion Strategies
huge difference, from just ONE little tactic! I could go on and on, but your ego is big enough as it Alex Mandossian is one of my favorite Internet marketers. He is an excellent presenter
is...” ~ Jeff Paul, the genius behind the mega-successful infomercial “How To Make A and always is open about sharing his latest findings with others.
Fortune While Sitting In Your Kitchen In Your Underwear!”
Alex asked me to do this letter for him to sell his Conversion Strategies package.
Reserve My Space on this 3 Call Series!
Alex is a fine copywriter is his own regard but does not normally use long form sales
P.P.S. Hey, this is John Carlton. And I’m personally inviting you — no I’m challenging letters. (It hasn’t stopped him from making a small fortune online.)
you — to apply these simple and easy to use secrets to your online business. This is all new
This letter was very graphics intense. Each graphic illustrated a different concept Alex
and entirely fresh content, and not yesterday’s recycled info.
employed in this program.
I’m letting Rich and Stephen download my 20 years-plus of street smart marketing savvy
The guarantee in the letter was that if you hadn’t gotten at least one killer idea in the first
directly to your ears... but this can happen only if you are smart enough to get on the call!
ten pages, it was time to ask for a refund.

OK, John Count Me In On the Call! Again, for someone reading this book who may not know Alex Mandossian, he is a name
to watch on the Internet.

Anything Alex offers is worth serious study. He has my highest recommendation.

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They work like magic… Every single one of these tactics has been thoroughly tested and monitored. And
Alex holds nothing back. He generously provides the links and walks you through these
breakthrough strategies. In going through this ecourse, Alex will suggest 21 different
21 Simple Tactics to Boost Your changes to make to your website.

Website Conversion
If you haven’t gotten at least one killer idea by the time you get up to
These are the secrets that convert page 10, we insist you ask for a refund. It’s bursting with cash pulling
visitors into buyers. ideas on every page.

Tuesday, December 20, 2005


What you learn will astound you:
From: Matt Gill and Kevin Wilke
SAN FRANCISCO, CA  How to generate thousands of
prospects to your website to opt-in
If you have a website or are planning on launching one, this may be the most important to your list — and convert them
message you ever read. into customers swelling your bank
account with cash.
There are millions of websites on the Internet trying to sell hopes, dreams, needs and
wants. A very few of these sites are winners while most are dead on arrival.  Why these simplified tactics are out
pulling every other approach. And it
The key question you must ask is, “What separates the winners from the losers?” will only a few minutes to start How many secret tactics is
applying them to your website and Alex using in this opt-in box?
A website that is a winner must do just two things. It must attract traffic to the site
noticing the results.
and — most importantly — it must convert visitors into buyers.
You’ll be shocked at what Alex
 How people have successfully used
Into the world of hype and exaggeration that is Internet marketing steps a master of direct learned from Sesame Street
the Internet to pretest products and
marketing. His specialty is getting people to take their credit cards out of their wallets and and how it can increase your
before you invest a lot of money.
buy your product. His name is Alex Mandossian.
Your customers tell you what they opt-in rate.
Alex studies Internet conversions by testing whether a strategy makes more money. He want to buy and how much they’ll
shuns anecdotal evidence and examines the number of website conversions. Alex tracks the gladly pay for it.
winners and shuns the losers.
 How Alex’s wife turned him down for a date but accepted his invitation for
After years of research in marketing, Alex finally cracked the code and has the revealed coffee. Once you understand the marketing principle behind the story, you’ll never
the mother lode — 21 Simple Tactics to Boost Your Website Conversion. look at your website the same way. Can you guess the secret tactic at work here?

Adding a single one of these techniques to your website will instantly boost your conver-  The most important part of your email message. It’s not what you expect. Follow
sion statistics. Add all these proven methodologies to your website and you will leave your this tested technique and you get your email opened. Ignore it and the reader will
competition in the dust looking for the number of the truck that hit them. push the delete key. One major emailer just learned this secret — the hard way.

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 The hottest tactic used today to
boost conversion. In just minutes,
There are three amazing secrets in the
this unorthodox method can make
picture to the left. There are 8 more
your sales skyrocket.
on the site. Want to snag them all?
 One sentence you never thought was
important. It’s causing your prospects to
click away in droves. Change it to these five
words and your opt-ins may instantly double.

I Want to Start Boosting My Conversion!


 One question to ask when visitors opt in that reveals what they want to buy.
They will actually tell you what will get their credit card out of their wallet so
quickly, it can cause whiplash!

 The one Internet marketing model you should try first. It’s so profitable, you may
never need another strategy. It’s also the easiest, fastest way to get started on the net. Alex noticed four reasons why this website was a winner. How
many more sales can your website use?
 The three magic words to tell visitors to your website. This guarantees your
visitors will never forget you.
 Discover what a child’s high-chair can teach you about your web site. Learn this
trick to keep readers from leaving your site. They’ll read every word and head for
Alex reveals why some sites get thousands the order page.
of opt-ins and others get passed by.
 Watch out for this deadly mistake. It cut the time visitors spent on a page from an
Alex analyzes what makes this opt-in a average of 2 minutes to 22 seconds. And they left without buying! Learn the simple
triple winner! secret that reversed the decline — overnight.

Ready to learn what made it so successful?


Even Internet experts need to test
their results. Alex made 2 mistakes
 Add these two words to your website and get 40% more opt-ins. It’s been proven on this site which had people leaving
in repeated tests and you will be delighted with the results. in droves — without buying. Are you
making the same costly mistakes?
 How to double or triple your conversion ratio of visitors who come to your website.

 The single worst word you can have on your website. If it’s on your site, you’re  Every golf club has a sweet spot and so does a web site. Do you know yours?
leaving money on the table.
 This was the year of the government do not call telephone list. So why is one
 How a 19 century English author can boost your email response. Follow his successful entrepreneur asking for phone numbers and what is the result? You’ll
advice and be sure your emails are read and not deleted. immediately dash for the phones.

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These are tested techniques proven in the real world. Alex supplies the proof.
A Lesson In Internet Mastery
These are simple techniques which can be implemented in minutes. It’s that quick.
21 Conversion Tactics is a simple to use ecourse. It comes with
audios and ebook download. You can be using it in minutes... and These techniques will have a dramatic effect on your traffic conversion.
making changes within an hour.

The ecourse costs just XXX but is really free because the first The Remaining Question
technique you get may generate thousands in profits.
There’s only one question left.
This power packed course is so unique it comes with its on guarantee:
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This product is an instant download. You can put these shockingly simple tactics to work
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When you order this ecourse you get 11 mp3s and an ebook. Alex gives you all of the url’s
of the websites he is talking about and there are screen shots of every tactic he reveals. One further thought, when you are inspired to take your marketing to the next step,
please get back to us with your results. Your site might be in the next edition!
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Step by step, Alex walks you through the process of boosting your site’s conversion.
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Here’s What It’s Not! PPS. There’s never been a guarantee like this one. If you don’t find at least one killer tactic
by page 10 of this ecourse, we insist you ask for a refund.
This is not a collection of tricks that will get your site banned by Google.

This is not an in your face technique that will antagonize your clients.

This is not an arm twisting technique to get clients to convert.

Far From It!

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You’ll be shocked and amazed when you discover...
Jay Abraham Internet Strategies
This was the letter that caught the attention of the Internet marketing work. Here’s the
background to this letter.
“How a 55 Year Old Marketing Genius
My good friend Rich Schefren and I used to own large hypnosis centers. Rich was a sharp
Who Can’t Even Use A Computer Can
marketer and introduced me to the work of Jay Abraham. Together, we began applying Jay’s Double Your Online Business Overnight!
business concepts to our work.
— Then Redouble It Again Over The
As our businesses began to expand, the franchise was bought out by a new owner who did
not allow us to run our businesses using direct marketing concepts. He didn’t understand Next 12 Months.”
marketing, direct response, and was used to image advertising. He didn’t appreciate our desire
rapidly bring in cash and we didn’t like the control he placed on our businesses. We closed It defies belief until you discover the name of the person who can
our hypnosis offices and moved online. Rich teamed up with Stephen Pierce to introduce Jay propel your online business to incredible success.
Abraham to the online marketing world.
He’s making you the boldest offer in the history of the Internet.
This letter consisted of two parts, an opt-in “name squeeze page” with seven free reports One that can make you extremely wealthy.
explaining Jay Abraham’s concepts. After opting in, people were taken to this sales letter.
While he takes all the risk.
I was not the first copywriter to write this sales letter. The first letter did not convert well
and I was asked to improve the conversion. In Fact, You Won’t Even Pay Him A
The teleseminar series was drawing close and I needed to get this work done STAT. Rich Penny Until You’re Fully Convinced.
Schefren came and parked himself in my office and stood by me making sure I didn’t move If you have a website, or are thinking of starting one, there are two things you need to do.
from my laptop during the writing of this letter. I stayed at the computer for twelve solid You need to attract people to your site and once they are there, you need to get them to buy.
hours and the letter was done. The next step was sending it off to Jay for his comments.
Let’s amplify that concept. Research has shown that the average visit to a website is
Jay’s improvements on my letter were brilliant.
less than 30 seconds. Bottom line, you either hook your client in those 30 seconds or
My headline was… you’ve lost him.

And once you get visitors to stay on your site, your site must compel them to take their
“How a 55 Year Old Marketing Genius Who Can’t Even Use
credit card out and buy or become a lead for your business. (Did you know Jay Abraham
A Computer Can Double Your Online Business Overnight!” practically invented the concept of lead generation advertising?)
And Jay added…
That’s Internet marketing simplified.

— Then Redouble It Again Over The Next 12 Months. We’re about to introduce you to a marketing genuis who has produced over 13 billion
dollars in increased sales to his elite clients.
The teleseminar series was a huge success. It grossed over $660,000 with the letter posted
for less than three weeks. Study this letter as it was one of the most successful sales letters in His clients are normally the savviest, richest, and most knowledgeable marketing
the history of the Internet. people in the world who willingly pay the highest consulting rates for his advice (we’re

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talking $5,000/hour or $40,000/day... plus a big slice of the profits) and eagerly return
again and again.

His name is Jay Abraham. And now he’s bringing his knowledge and skills to your online
business for a fraction of what his elite clients pay.

And even if you don’t have a website yet, by following Jay’s simple strategies, you will skip
the learning curve that even the most successful Internet marketers have gone through.
Because Jay will reveal the very best, most profitable way for your offline company to use the
Internet to expand your existing business results by a huge margin.

And that translates into hordes of new traffic coming to your website that become
loyal customers.

Jay is so confident of your success with his methods that he doesn’t even want or feels he Jay is so sure of his ability to immediately produce results for your business, that he is
deserves your payment. Therefore, you’ll... taking ALL the risk — so you don’t have to.

And you can surf, scour, and scan the Internet all you want and you will not find a simpler,
Pay Only After You Profit
more straightforward and yet totally comprehensive guarantee. Either the money making
This is a bold and daring approach that Jay is pretty much alone in offering. He is taking secrets Jay teaches you must pay off in spades — or you don’t pay.
all the risks. He’s investing 100% of his energy, knowledge, and faith in your honesty, integrity
and commitment to action. Now Jay Takes the Gutsiest Guarantee
of the Internet and Doubles It!
Most companies don’t think you’ll pay after you reap the rewards but this is another
secret-killer-strategy of Jay’s that has worked for his clients time and again. And it’s your To throw down the gauntlet, Jay is so sure that he immodestly believes that he can
guarantee that Jay is the real McCoy. Just listen to what one of his fans says... immediately out perform and out think any of the Internet gurus out there that he won’t even
allow you to be charged for services until after he has proven that they work. Why does he
Self Help Guru Tony Robbins Exclaims... feel this way? Because twelve of the 15 most successful Internet marketers have come to Jay
for advice or purchased his expensive tapes, or attended his live programs.
“Jay Really Is a Marketing Genius”
And no one has the ironclad confidence in their own abilities to offer you a deal like that.
“Jay has added billions of dollars in combined sales and profit increases to
the bottom line of thousands of businesses and professional practices he
has advised — INCLUDING MY OWN!” “Doubled My Online Sales in 45 Minutes”

~ Tony Robbins “I listened as Jay described the elements of a killer order page. I shuddered
as I realized why people were bailing out of my order page. I took Jay’s
simple concepts of future pacing and dimensionalizing the experience and
Jay Guarantees To Improve The Bottom Line of applied them. It was incredible. A 200% increase overnight. My staff
couldn’t handle the flood of orders! I’m a believer.”
Your Online Business — Or You Don’t Pay!
~ Tony Robbins
One of the strategies that Jay uses is a gutsy guarantee. And he is teaching by example here.

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Once again, Jay outthinks and outperforms the Internet gurus as his strategy could easily
The Father of Internet Marketing
and effectively add massive profits to your bottom line.
(He Invented The Biggest “Online” Concepts 20 Years Before The Internet Even Existed!)

Here’s a key concept you need to understand. Most Internet marketers have a host of Why Listen to Jay When You Can Listen To
tricks or tactics. They may work briefly (or not at all). Other (Often Cheaper) Imitators Instead?
Let me give you an example. Less than two years ago, the hottest topic was pop-ups and Remember as a kid when you used to play “telephone”?
popovers. Soon, almost every site had them. They got to be so annoying that people wrote
It’s where you and your friends stand in a circle, and someone whispers a secret message
software to stop them. Google banned them. Legislators even wanted to outlaw them.
in the ear of the friend next to them, then to the next, and so on... Until it reaches the end.
Pop-ups were a quick fix tactic. On the other hand Jay encourages and promotes long term
strategies that are as valid today as when he invented them 20 years ago. Here’s an example. The last person yells out the message, which often turns out to be totally different than
the original one!
Endorsed Mailings
Unfortunately, Internet Marketing Gurus
One of the concepts that Jay brainstormed was the endorsed mailing before anyone Do The Same Thing.
else ever knew what they were. This killer strategy made hundreds of millions of dollars
for his clients off line. The message gets passed down, gets muddied and thus loses its original flavor... Just like
that game of telephone.
Secretly, Jay revamped this concept when he brought it online. Case in point: Jay used
this strategy in an email campaign to promote one of his books. He sold over 1.2 million Similarly, over time people have diluted, watered down, even misunderstood Jay’s original
dollars of his book in just 3 short months part time just testing out his concepts... And with message. PLUS, Internet marketers inspired by Jay also added their own spin to the mix each
less than 20 emails! That’s more money than some people make in a life time. time which diffuses and diminishes the resulting effect.

While some people have difficulty selling a $19 e-book on line, Jay’s book sold for $377. So eventually, the message lost its original impact, its intended intensity and its proper
45,000 have been sold to date and they keep selling at 1,000 to 3,000 per month. And not application, and most of all, its sheer simplicity. That’s why nothing beats getting it straight
only did he sell out his stock, he had to print a second, third, and forth edition. from the “marketing genius’s mouth!”

WARNING! This disarmingly simple strategy is misunderstood and totally misapplied on


“900% increase in sales from just one technique!”
the Internet. It is not meant for a one time burst of sales activity but a continual stream of
income flooding your business with cash. “After applying just one of his techniques, we sold $643,000 worth of
products in two and a half months! That’s a 900% increase in sales from
Affiliate Marketing just one technique.”
~ Michael Quinn, Simi Valley, CA
One of the authors of this letter is consistently depositing over $90,000 in profits each
and every month into his family bank accounts using a strategy that most people don’t
How would you like to have a single strategy pay off like that?
realize Jay invented.
Jay Abraham is not some flash-in-the-pan web marketer selling some cheap e-book
Jay’s strategic concept of Host-Beneficiary relationships lays out the steps that allow you
online. And people often reluctantly agree to have a phone call with him even though his
to profit while someone else does all the work. Today on the net it’s called Affiliate
regular consulting fee is...
Marketing. But it’s a shadow of the original version Jay invented years ago.

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... More Than What Some People Still Not Convinced Jay Can
Make In An Entire Year From Their Online Business! Skyrocket Your Online Business?
Jay’s regular fee (when he is available and there is typically a two-month waiting list to With all the bragging rights Jay has, no one has ever accused him of modesty. But Jay
talk with him) is $5000 an hour with a two hour minimum or 40,000 dollars a day. tends to not brag about himself — rather he revels about the money he has made for his happy
and prosperous clients. And there are many that he is contractually obligated never to even
Let’s test drive a private consultation call with Jay. By the way, Jay’s incredible guarantee reveal, identify or mention for obvious confidentiality reasons.
applies to these calls as well. And he goes one step further. If in the first half hour Jay has not
demonstrated absolute mastery of the concepts and difficulties underlying your business, the But like a Stealth bomber swooping in undetected, Jay himself has made a “mere” 9.8
consultation call is free. And almost no one has ever backed out of one of Jay’s calls. (And million dollars online in the past 18 months using a single email marketing strategy. And this
he’s done thousands of them.) isn’t even his main focus. He considers it only a fun and lucrative money-hobby.

Jay gets on the phone and in a few short moments he lasers-in and highlights for you In addition, he has another secret email strategy that is netting a “mere” $400,000 a
monster profit opportunities that you never imagined, let alone examined. He shows you month on automatic pilot. And believe it or not, Jay considers this a lead generation program
possibilities you never dreamed of. But they are real and very achievable, you’ll see in a minute. for higher back-end sales.

From the application of Jay’s strategic concepts to your business, a massive surge of cash Jay is going to share key closely guarded marketing and money making secrets that you really
quickly appears in your bottom line. We’re talking increases in the 100%. 200%, even can not find elsewhere. Jay’s a one-of-a-kind. He’s unusual. He’s an idea-a-minute marketing
10,000%. We’re talking wildly profitably. genius. His clients call Jay, “The Wiz.” Forbes Magazine called him, “The Real Thing.”

Here’s How You Can Have a $20,000 Consultation Allow Us to Introduce Ourselves
With Jay for a Fraction of What Others Pay.
My name is Stephen Pierce (use photo). Most people recognize me as the author of the
Jay Abraham is about to unveil and unleash all of his online strategies in a pair of wildly successful program, “Under Oath: The Truth, The Whole Truth and Nothing But The
“Online-Super-Summit” teleconferences. And you stand to unlock the vault at Fort Knox Truth About Internet Marketing.”
and make off with the marketing gold.
The reason this program has become such a hot seller is, I don’t beat around the bush.
And Jay insists that this call either rapidly and significantly adds to your bottom line —
I prefer to teach the real proven strategies and tactics that work. (By the way, that’s why
OR it’s free. You pay nothing.
I’m a huge fan of Jay Abraham!)
You’re not dealing with some Johnny-come-lately Internet marketing guru wannabe.
Am I blowing my own horn? You be the judge.
You’ll profit with...
Here’s an example. After taking only 5 days to write my first book, which was a simple 39-
“Strategies that Make You Millions” page e-book on swing trading stocks and futures, I sold 965 copies in only 49 days for an
“Jay teaches you more workable, tangible, profitable techniques and impressive $47,752.20 in sales.
strategies than you can probably apply in three lifetimes. But what he
All with no affiliates, no resellers and zero paid advertising!
teaches you about mindset is his true gift of wealth.”
~ Michael Basch, A founder of Federal Express I was certified by ClickBank (one of my sales processor at the time) as being among the
top 5% of their highest paid producers... And back then, I was just a one-man show!

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One recent product launch, a video tutorial CD on trading the financial markets using
Your Online Business On Steroids
Fibonacci, cost me under $7,000 to create and made over $400,000.00...
On January 27th and February 10th, 2004, 8 pm Eastern, we’re hosting a 2 session,
... In less than 90 days and with an 80% profit margin to me and my family’s very
private, ultra high level teleconference “SUPER SUMMIT” — with Jay Abraham.
good lifestyle!
This mind-blowing, idea-flooding two teleconference series will share Jay’s most closely
Now meet my online partner...
guarded hardcore tips, money making marketing ideas and fortune building business insights
I’m Rich Schefren (use photo). At age 22, my very first business involved taking over a Jay has NEVER-EVER revealed before — anywhere! We’re talking about potent strategies
failing clothing store, which was, at the time, doing 1.5 million dollars. (The breakeven was that can literally infuse your online business with unheard-of profits!
double that: $3 million!)
This is absolutely NOT about theory. This is NOT about untested ideas. This is on time-
The result? tested, profit certain, result proven facts.

Within 3 years the store was doing well over $6.5 million — with 25% of it dropping And remember, Jay must deliver...and you must profit — OR YOU DON’T PAY!
directly to my bottom line!
Imagine eavesdropping on an once-in-a-lifetime private phone call between Jay
My documented business success doesn’t stop there. My track record portfolio includes the Abraham, and two of his top online disciples who have applied Jay’s strategies to make
music business as well as owning the largest chain of independently owned hypnosis centers millions for themselves. Now, they’re going to be in your court, working to do the same for
in the world with revenues exceeding $7 million! And bottom line profit to die for. you. Unhedgingly...for two wildly profitable sessions.

I’ve been featured in the media for my success, from the front page of The Wall Street If you ever wanted to multiply and maximize your Internet income... And if you ever
Journal (being featured as “an unbelievable retail turnaround story”) and CNN (appearing wanted to discover new ways on how to do it (for only a fraction of what Jay charges the
several times and labeled as an expert in retail marketing)... biggest and best)... This is one teleconference event you mustn’t pass up!

...To Crain’s, Newsweek, Entertainment Tonight, ABC, NBC, CBS, FOX, MSNBC, Click here to secure your spot right now!
Vogue, GQ, MTV, VH1, The Discovery Channel, The Learning Channel, Cosmopolitan,
The Daily News, The New York Post and too many others to list.
What Makes This Two-Call Super Summit
I was one of those people who paid Jay $5,000 an hour for 4 hours, totaling $20,000. Jay
Event So Different, Powerful And Special?
gave me ideas during that consultation that generated close to a half-million dollar profit
windfall in all of six months! If you wanted Jay’s private advice in the past, your only choice was to either hire him at
$5000 and hour OR attend one of his $5,000 to $40,000 per person seminars. Not only that,
I purchased every expensive book, $2,000 — $5,000 tape set, and $5,000 — $40,000
you would have to fight for that opportunity because Jay’s seminars not only sell out but he
training program that Jay ever produced. That’s over ninety thousand dollars of Jay’s own
recently turned away over 100 eager-to-pay-clients because the hotel had no more room.
strategies and every single one has generated mega monster profits for me.
I know this claim sounds unbelievable. But facts are facts. Jay get 650-900 people to his
Fast forward to the present: I own 7 separate online businesses all churning out buckets
major seminars wherever he has them in Los Angeles.
of cash daily. It was easy when I combined Jay’s strategies with Stephen’s. But now in just a
few hours from the comfort, convenience and privacy of your home or office you’re going to To our knowledge, Jay has never before made an offer this appealing. Remember, he’s
get what I have worked years to piece together from my two partners at a fraction of the time made over five million in the last 15 months from the techniques we’ve persuaded him to
and a mere “sliver” of cost that I went through.

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open up and tell you about on the two conference calls. Jay has never allowed Internet experts  How to make your offer proposition so tantalizing and irresistibly compelling, that
to grill him for his online strategies. visitors will go into a buying frenzy. Hint: it’s not your headline or graphics that will
generate new levels of success.
And Jay has never allowed his services to be marketed at a price this low anywhere!
 How to market masterfully — without hype! This segment of the session will totally
“Jay’s Strategies Were Too Successful!” shatter your current thinking about marketing online.

“I used 3 of Jay’s strategies in a recent email campaign. It was so  Jay reveals how to harness powerful principles of human/subliminal psychology, motiva-
successful that our merchant account’s system crashed because they tion and “implied communication” that have the most direct effect on your visitors’
couldn’t handle the surge of orders.” buying strategies. These simple but totally overlooked principles will create instant wealth
~ Jim Van Wyck, Calgary if and only if you apply them as Jay teaches.

 How to integrate, absorb, and incorporate Jay’s key mindset and methods so you can
His Reputation Preceded Him! generate instant (and continuous) applications to your online business. You’ll never
run out of new approaches IF you apply these skills.
In fact, as I write this, over 786 “seats” have already been reserved purely on word-of-
mouth reputation alone — even before I had a chance to post this letter! These are people  How to put these strategies into action within minutes of the calls. Seriously — you can
who clearly know just how powerful this call is going to be — and just how brilliant this double your business with any single strategy. You can redouble and double it again if you
famed marketing genius’ ideas will be. combine one or more strategies. You’ll be in a different league than everyone else you
compete against online.
And what’s funny is that while the really “top” Internet gurus have signed up for the
call, they haven’t clued their lists on to a strategy that is uniquely Jay Abraham’s. I This Call Is All About
wonder why? Hmmm...
—YOU—
Here’s Just a “Taste” of What You’re Going To Get: And Growing Your Online Business
 How to maximize and expand your online profits (once you discover how much money Here’s the neat thing (this is as close to kidnapping Jay and holding him ransom in
you’re leaving on the table, you’ll kick yourself silly for not knowing sooner!)...And exchange for a complete brain dump of his most brilliant money-making ideas). When
you’ll be thankful that you can still humiliate your competition — as long as they don’t you sign up for the early bird bonus, you also get the following at absolutely no extra cost
learn about this call. whatsoever!

 How to cash in on every untapped, hidden revenue stream from every possible source and  You get to ask your most pressing/burning online, offline, email, website, marketing,
every single activity you’re engaged in. You’ll be shocked and amazed at how a simple selling or promotional PROBLEM, QUESTION OR CHALLENGE to Jay. And you
strategy allows you to outperform other online businesses. (We’ll take you through a profit don’t have to pay $5000 per hour for the privilege.
maximizing check list that will absolutely rock your Internet world)!
 Have your question answered live during the call as Jay will organize and select these
 Discover Jay’s unique Strategy of Pre-eminence the profound implications it holds for questions in 2 impressive ways (i.e., the most universal and the most unique). Either
your business, realize this single strategic mindset “shift” has created more millionaire way you win as you track how a one-of-a-kind marketing genius thinks and converts
success stories than all the Internet strategies currently taught today — COMBINED. his theory into situation specific or customized solid action and implementation tactics
on one else could possibly come up with.

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 You’re the one telling us what YOU want to know. YOU will be the driving force! In Here’s How to Make Your Online Business Soar
short — this two session Super Summit will be customized to the real world needs,
requests and issues of you and your fellow online marketer participants. We’ve secured a conference bridge that can only hold 1500 spots. That may sound like a
Specifically, when you reserve your position early you’ll be asked to submit your lot to you — But Jay blew out the lines of an information publication who got 3000 people
greatest marketing question, biggest moneymaking challenge, enigma, concern, on their last call with him. We’ve also secured a web cast so that all the people who want to
situation, fear or what have you, prior to the call. And the sooner you sign up, the get on this call internationally don’t get hit with high long distance rates.
greater your chance that your question will be one selected to build a segment of
the Super Summit around. 786 Spots Gone — Will You Get One Of The Remaining?
 PLUS, you’ll gain direct access to a bonus “after hours” session immediately following Already, Internet marketers in the know have snagged the first 786 spots. On Jay’s recent
the call (but keep in mind that only “Early Birds” are privy to this Q&A session). teleconference that we promoted, people called in from all over the world more than an hour
Stephen and Rich will walk you through every single money-making strategy that Jay early and listened to music on hold — just to make sure that they secured a spot.
gave them integrate and fully translate it into windfall buckets of cash for your business.
But you won’t have to do that on THIS call. Because everyone will be issued their
 AND FINALLY, save yourself thousands of dollars. If you ever wanted Jay to solve own unique code so you can call in 30 seconds before the call and still catch every single
your problem privately, it would cost you $10,000. You have never had the opportunity strategy Jay reveals.
to tap Jay’s mind (live and unhedged)for such a meager price. So you better lock in
Now there’s an important question we must ask you.
your position quick — and pray your competition doesn’t do it instead of you!
How Successful Do You Really Want To Be?
Here’s What It’s Not!
Let’s go back in time over twenty eight years ago. There’s an upstart marketing consultant
But for now, understand that, while some Internet gurus offer teleseminars and who is challenging the accepted norms.
teleconferences, they are usually filled with B.S. from pitchmen. There’s no absolutely
pitching here. Jay has absolutely nothing else he wants to sell you. Just hardcore, million He’s creating revolutionary, evolutionary, never-seen-before, profit accelerating strategies
dollar a minute content. Period. and Madison Avenue is annoyed.

These two highly stimulating and wildly profitable calls are solid, “wall-to-wall,” totally The people who signed on with Jay went on to make millions. Some, even billions.
actionable money-making information that’s 100% fluff-free, fat-free and hype-free... And
Now, history repeats itself and you are offered the same opportunity. But at a pittance
from the moment you call in — until the moment you hang up your phone, you’ll be on the
of the fess all Jay’s private one-on-one clients pay him. The train is about to leave the
wildest, most exciting marketing ride of your entire life. GUARANTEED.
station. All Aboard!

“Little Idea Produces Million Dollar Profit” Jay’s Taking All of The Risk!
“Within six months of trying out our first Jay Abraham-inspired idea, we Pay Only If You Profit!
made something close to $900,000! When the first ‘little’ idea someone
gives you produces nearly a million dollar profit, you tend to take that If Jay doesn’t deliver hour after hour of solid online business strategies that can make you
man’s advice and recommendations seriously! By the way, we racked up millions, don’t pay for this call. Really, it’s that simple.
over ten million dollars more within two years!”
If Jay doesn’t present brilliant, concepts that you have never heard before that you can
~ Vic Conant, President, Nightingale Conant immediately apply to your online (or offline) business, don’t pay for the call.

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If Jay doesn’t give you a tangible pay-off in the form of usable, money-making ideas and Click here to sign up for your
specific profit-boosting strategies, that aren’t available elsewhere, Jay will not expect you to
Super Summit teleconference
pay for the call. No one else would dare make that bold and daring a proposition to you.
...And Pay Only After You Profit
And you don’t even have to make up your mind UNTIL AFTER you hear the killer
strategies revealed on both calls.
The First 1,000 People Get THESE
That’s right, you get to listen to BOTH teleconferences BEFORE you even have to decide
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BONUS #1: You get a Double Audio CD Set offering some of the best of Jay
So, you’re sitting in Solomon’s seat. It’s your call. Abraham from his $5,000 tape sets, his $25,000 live programs and his ten thousand
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Obviously, we know the power and profitability of Jay Abraham’s concepts. We know
the kind of exponential profits Jay’s clients have made using only a fraction of the infor- This recording comes from the secret archives of Jay Abraham and has never been
mation he’ll be sharing. issued before. You won’t find this on eBay or on any website.
So we’re not very worried about the “pay-only-after-performance” guarantee. In fact, it was NEVER sold before — not even at Jay’s events! — and will not be
made available after this 2-part call!
In fact, if other Internet marketers took on this challenge, (which we will expect them all
to feebly try and do) the overwhelming majority will be looking for new careers — or won’t You only get this bonus right here, right now!
get to keep many people’s money!
We will ship this Double Audio CD package of rare Jay Abraham “War Room”
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mix as you read this line. So reserve your place immediately.
Some Internet guru’s don’t want YOU on this call. It’s not in their best interest for you to
discover the man who catapulted so many of them to wealth and success. Seriously. BONUS #2: OK, let’s sweeten the deal for you (shamelessly but ethically
“bribe” you into prosperous “submission.” Reserve your position today, right now,
Even though they may credit Jay for their marketing success (over 25 already have), and I’ll also send you an extra bonus FREE report.
and they’ve signed up to be on the call themselves...But they’re terrified their customers
will learn what they plan on learning from Jay, then teaching (and passing off as their Written by Rich Schefren, the report title says it all: “How I Made $287,000 In One
own) for the next two years. Week Selling Information Products!”

But now the “cat” is out of the bag and you can choose for yourself. This report is just bursting with ideas. It’s an absolute must-read for any information
marketer — or anyone wishing to make money really fast!
Here’s your chance to become one of Jay’s select clients and be in the league with
Merrill Lynch, Dreyfus, The Wall Street Journal, Citicorp, Forbes, Fortune and 10,000 Rich divulges key secrets he has personally used to make killer sales in record speed
other prosperous companies that Jay has helped. with a high-priced product (The product sold for 10 to 15 grand a pop!).

OR — you can learn about it second hand from some Jay Abraham wannabe’s email. For example, you’ll learn:
But it won’t be the same — trust us, it won’t!
 How he successfully achieved a massive 77% conversion rate through a seven day
Never before has the choice been clearer. marketing blitz. Three different marketing methods added up to a massive

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marketing success. If you’re selling a high priced online product, you can’t be By the way, a famous, high priced direct marketing course grilled Rich about
without this secret formula. this letter and begged him for a copy. He said “NO” to them but he’s saying “YES”
to you — only if you act now.
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off” the shelves like candy in a candy store... Reserve Your Seat Immediately
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 The exact follow-up marketing sequence he used to close more sales with little  Jay’s methodology of improving your business even before the call takes place.
effort (in fact, it only took a few extra minutes to do but ramped up his sales like These grounding materials are deceivingly simple but essential to improving
crazy). Not one Internet marketer in a million knows this strategy. But you’ll your online/offline marketing mindset. It’s Jay’s way of actually paying for the
cash in on this secret. call for you.

 The one “Stealth Marketing” tactic Rich employed in his sales letter’s “bullet  The Process Of Actualization — Jay’s secret method for turning marketing ideas
points,” giving his offer a monstrous push and tickled his prospects’ curiosity into direct deposits stimulating an increase in your net worth, a sharp rise in your
glands. It made them order regardless of the cost. And that’s why you may rethink self-confidence, and an eagerness to apply more strategies to your business.
your prices after reading his letter.
 Creative Emulation — How 12 million dollars was made from an ad in the
 Where, how and when to reveal the price (remember, it was a 5-figure invest- National Enquirer and what magazines you must read to stay on the cutting edge
ment!) to optimize emotional intensity and pulling power. Mention the price too of marketing tactics.
soon or too late and you’ll miss out on maximum conversion on your site.
 Breakthrough Testing — What Do You Really Have To Lose? If you’re not applying
 The precise number and type of bonuses used that magnified the perceived value Jay’s strategies to your online business, you maybe losing money that you didn’t
of his offer and made his seemingly unaffordable offer SO irresistibly compelling. even know about. At best, you’re leaving money on the table. At worst, you’re
bleeding and don’t even know it.
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a 1000 watt halogen light on the specific tactics behind his monstrously unsuc-  How to Use Host Devices to Spectacularly Boost Your Profits. (Jay’s done over 3
cessful campaign, and revealed the key tips to doing it for yourself. billion dollars using this formula. I wonder how much more profit it can mean to
you?) This is the most highly copied of Jay’s strategies. But sadly, what’s being
 Discover the play-by-play how Rich used every strategy he learned from Jay to set
taught is only a fraction of the power as Jay originally taught it. Don’t chance
this record-breaking sales achievement. It’s the Cliff Notes version of Jay’s life’s
learning it from a wannabe. Learn from the master.
work that you can immediately put to work for you. Full of plenty of examples,
illustrations and translations you can directly apply.  How to Buy Media for Pennies on The Dollar. There’s no one who can reveal
the offline strategy that can add energy and strength to an online business. If
... And so much more!
some of those now bankrupt dot coms invested in Jay instead of their high
This special report is FREE and yours to keep when you secure your spot on this call profile low payoff Superbowl commercials, they’d still be making millions with
with Jay Abraham. Rich made $287,000 with this letter in seven days, mailing it to only their stock instead of toilet paper.
35 people. By how much can you beat that record?

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You don’t even have to pay long distance charges
Here’s Your License to Print Money
It’s your questions that drive the call. You and Jay Abraham working through your
Jay Abraham has created more millionaires than anyone else in marketing history (This
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If they even knew that Jay was “giving away” his time at these prices, they would be Decisions don’t get any easier than this.
more than upset.
Okay, you twisted my arm. I want in...
They’d be furious.
This call will be filled to capacity. This is NOT some clever ploy. Based on previous calls
But Jay has always maintained a place for the small business owner who wants to pole (which charged double of what we’re offering it to you), we’ll be turning people away simply
vault their way to riches. Also the economies of scale work to his advantage since 1500 people because the lines will be maxed out!
at a modest fee still makes him hundreds of thousands of dollars an hour for his time (but only
if what he shares with you really pays off). Jay really is a marketing genius. As Jay once put it, “One great money-making idea can make all the difference between
mediocrity and millions in your online marketing efforts.”
This is decision time.
There’s only one person on the planet we know of...who has the kind of profit promo ideas
So let’s have one final look at what’s at stake. and fortune building answers you’re looking for. Only one person who can take all the unique
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IT’S JAY ABRAHAM, without question.
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for my services. I ask only that you come on to the all with good converting prospects and making massive profit improvements on the web or off than Jay Abraham.
intent and judge me fairly.
How Much Does It Cost To Become The Next
Furthermore, I promise that if you follow my strategies, your online
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business success and income will far exceed your wildest dreams.”
Either It More Than Pays For Itself
Where’s the downside? Frankly, there is none unless...
...Or You Don’t Pay.
You miss out on this call.
Quite simply, NOTHING like this has ever been offered before! If you’re smart, you’ll
Or even worse... grab a spot on this call at the incredible price of $397 (that’s less than 10% of the cost of
just one hour of Jay’s time privately) and pray your competition doesn’t find out about
You miss out and your competition doesn’t and they eat your business for breakfast. That’s this steal of a deal.
more probable than you might think.
But that price won’t last. It will go up up to $497 very soon.
Remember, you don’t risk a penny before the call.

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Join us for this special, one-of-a-kind, two-session event. I understand that each call will be about 2 hours, and I will learn new and powerful
marketing strategies, scientific proved methodologies and business-boosting concepts that
I insist that you secure your place right now.
can make dramatic improvements in my online business and income.
Do it. Now. We’ll be waiting for you.
I understand that nothing like this has ever been offered before, and this call will
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I understand that there’s absolutely NO risk as I will not be billed in any way UNTIL
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Impulsive Profits, Inc. Schefren PublishingNew all of Jay’s juicy strategies and can still let Jay know (within 24 hours of the second call)
Ann Arbor, Michigan York, New York and never see a charge on my bill. If I’m not blown away, I will just let Jay know by
emailing him personally at Jay@AbrahamInternetStrategies.com within 24 hours of the
P.S. Consider this. Jay regularly charges five grand an hour ($10,000 two-hour minimum). second call and it will be taken care of.
Your investment for this call is less than 5% of that (at $497). With the Early Bird price of
I understand that, by enrolling today (and being among the first 1000 people to register),
$397, that’s less still! Quite frankly, you’ll NEVER see another opportunity like this!
you will immediately ship me my bonus CDs when ready, from Jay and by Jay. This alone can
provide me with new ideas that can help me make thousands of dollars.
So We urge you to consider this opportunity.
I also understand that, by enrolling right now, you will also send my bonus report, “How
P.P.S. Unsure? Undecided? No worries. Remember, Jay is taking all the risk here. Next time
I Made $287,000 In Only One Week Selling Information Products,” written by Rich
an Internet guru tries to sell you something, ask them to match Jay’s bold guarantee. What do
Schefren, where I will learn tips and unconventional strategies Rich used to sell high-ticket
you possibly have to lose here?
info-products, Which I get to keep no matter what.

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automatically qualify to receive your special, discounted rate of $397 (instead of $497). Also, as an affiliate you will be invited to join a private, one-time interactive call with
Jay Abraham (for affiliates only!), where he will provide his closely guarded methods and
I understand that I will be listening in on a phone call with Jay Abraham, Stephen Pierce answer questions on an open call with full organized interaction.
and Richard Schefren for a RARE two-session Summit experience.

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In other words, Jay will go through his list of the affiliates, call out their name and answer
their most pressing questions, on the spot, one by one. Stephen (and Thomas) Pierce on Blogging
The strength of this letter is in the headline. It was a deliberate swipe of a Clayton
This alone is unprecedented! And it would normally cost thousands to do and as an affil-
Makepeace letter written for Weiss Financial Newsletters.
iate that puts a minimum of 50 people on the call, they get this added advantage and inter-
action with Jay. This headline was so powerful even the people involved were jolted into reading the rest
of the letter and finding out more.
(Unfortunately, I can’t let you know the date and time as they are under “seal” and will
only be revealed to qualifying affiliates only. Sorry!) Many people were caught up in the story immediately and went on to order the product.

Click here to join right now. (opens in new window) At a recent Big Seminar, Internet Marketing genius Frank Kern said he loved the
headline on the letter and than asked in an undertone, “Is the story true?”

Stephen and his brother Thomas were the first to publicize the concept of monetizing blogs.

At the time this program was produced, blogs, RSS feeds, and pinging were all new concepts.

The search engines continually make changes to their formula and most typically the
newest innovations are partially thwarted as soon as they become popular.

Blogging to enhance position in search engines is still very effective.

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My wife screamed when she opened the email He was speaking on blogging. More specifically, how you can use your blogs to make piles
and read the death threat… of cash AND get a higher ranking in Google.

Rich and I coaxed the details out of him. You could have heard a pin drop as everyone
“Stephen, You Better Tell Your soaked up his words.
Brother To Shut The @!%# Up Or The clocks stopped ticking. We lost track of time. He went on and on. Midnight came
He’s A Dead Man!” and went but no one went to bed.

It was spellbinding. And the response was overwhelming.


Dear Savvy Internet Entrepreneur,
“We want more!” thundered the Apprentices. We brought Thomas back for an encore
It’s no secret that search engine specialists hate my guts. But sending death threats was presentation. He went on revealing a mind boggling collection of strategies and tactics to turn
a new low. the Internet into a non-stop cash machine.

The death threat email my wife printed out wasn’t joking. These guys were deadly serious. But what was most unique about these strategies was...
My brother’s latest discoveries are a huge problem to these big shots.
Anyone could put them into action within minutes of the call. Almost overnight,
Here’s why... Apprentices started calling with their spectacular results. First place rankings in Google and
Yahoo. Top ten rankings galore.
My brother Thomas zoomed to the top ranks of the “underground” professional search
engine strategists. And he stays on the top even as Google keeps cranking out new algorithms It was almost too easy. It was like “Smart Pages” all over again. Thomas played David to the
and making those coveted top rankings more elusive. SEO goliaths and the end result wasn’t pretty. Bluntly, people using Thomas’s strategies kicked
He’s been my secret weapon for years. In an industry which changes on a weekly basis, the big guy’s butts from here into the next zip code. Even in the most highly contested categories.
Thomas is months ahead of the pack. He and his underground buddies (who are the real
Pretty soon, people started to brag about their results and people started questioning why
search engine experts) hang out in Cyberspace together and explore little known quirks in
they should shell out big bucks for professional SEO work when anyone with the right set of
the search engines to leap to the top of the rankings — even in the most competitive fields.
tools could accomplish the same for a lot less.
Most people don’t know about this “search engine underground”. It’s the best kept secret
And that’s when the SEO guys got nasty and started issuing death threats if Thomas kept
by industry insiders whose reputations would be damaged if the public ever found out.
revealing his insider strategies. I told Thomas...
A lot of so-called SEO experts are talking about “Blogging” as if it’s something new. It’s
not. My brother is way ahead of the pack once again. He’s been there and done it; it started Sharing These Secrets Was His Best Protection
as blogging for fun but now it’s blogging for cold, hard cash.
I’m not about to cave in to pressure to keep these strategies secrets. Thomas’s work is the
And only because my brother was so far ahead of the pack, I had to beg so... only way right now for the little guy to level the playing field with the big companies charging
tens of thousands of dollars for their services.
My Brother Reveals His Secrets
Here’s the way I figure it. They think Thomas is a “loose cannon” in the “underground
Get this. My buddy Rich Schefren and I joined forces with marketing genius Jay Abraham search engine” world who can be stopped. But the sooner Thomas gets his material out to
for an Internet Apprentice Program. In a bonus call on secret traffic attracting strategies, my the public and the more people using these tactics, the game is over. Once the ball is
brother spilled his guts for the first time. rolling, it can’t be stopped.

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So I told Thomas he is safe as long as his material gets into the hand of the little guy as  A simple policy you must have to protect your investment on the Internet. It goes against
quickly as possible. And Rich Schefren and I joined Thomas to hone this material razor sharp common logic but it’s absolutely vital — especially if you are competing for a high ranking
so you can get the fastest results with the least effort. with a high contested keyword.

To tell you the truth, this is the only way most folks can get access to the secrets of the  How to insure your site against the next “Google dance.” You’ll laugh at the hidden fear
“search engine underground.” And even with all my connections, I’ve never seen such a clear of every SEO expert as your site climbs higher in the rankings.
presentation of what people need to do to rank highly in the search engines.
 Why certain automatic blog programs can get you banned by your ISP and what you must
But Thomas is nobody’s fool. He said if these strategies didn’t get into the hands of the do to avoid losing it all. And what you must do so you can set and forget your blog and
little guys now, he was going to yank them off the market forever. never have to make another entry again. In fact, the less effort you put in, the better!

So the deal is on for right now only.  A totally unbiased look at the different blog hosting sites available and each one rated for
simplicity and best search engine rankings.
Here’s The Word Straight From The
Search Engine Underground  Discovering the single reason most people abandon their blogs and what you can do to
avoid the dreaded “Blogger’s Block.”
 Why every expert talking about SEO today is directing their clients in the wrong direc-
tion and what you need to do to leap over the masses virtually overnight in the rankings.  How to add something to your blog not even 1% of the people with blogs even dream
about — much less ever do. It’s as if you’ve added a magnet to your blog bringing people
 What you must learn from Krispy Kreme Donuts to rake in immediate cash. Don’t make back again and again.
the same mistake they did and miss out on the huge potential.
 Four simple ways to extract cash from your blog. Most experts don’t have a clue these
 Why Blogs have become so important in the quest for high rankings and why most exist but your bank account will thank you as it begins to fill at an ever increasing pace.
bloggers never succeed in generating significant traffic for their sites. And the one
strategic piece of advice to turn things to flood their site with traffic.  How to track activity on your blog and how to make money with affiliates sending traffic
to your blog.
 How to set your blog apart from the competition and make your blog a site people will
want to return to again and again.  How blogs can make spam filters obsolete. Everyone will be grinding their teeth because
their emails are blocked while yours get through every time.
 How to turn your blog into a cash cow so you can convert visitors into dollars with no
effort on your part. It’s all how you position yourself for profits.  What a recent impartial study revealed about blog readers and why this is vital to building
serious wealth on line. You’ll want to engrave this statistic on your monitor if you ever
 The shortest way to success in blogging even if you haven’t a clue what RSS or XML are. need any urging to blog.
In fact, you just follow the steps outlined and it’s as easy as the connect-the-dots books
you colored as a kid.  A super secret tactic to a top ranking in Yahoo. It’s so simple you’ll have to pinch yourself
to see if you’re dreaming when the results appear on your computer.
 The single most important choice you need to make when you launch your blog. Choose
wrong and you’ll attract no traffic at all. Choose correctly and the search engines will be  Is there an advantage to hosting your blog on Google or should you host it elsewhere?
all over your site like white on rice. Here’s the blunt truth.

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 When you should make your site public and when should you keep it hidden from view.  A transcript of the Teleseminars so you can follow Thomas’s suggestions with ease. Value:
This secret strategy is crucial if you want to make serious money from your blog. $97

 How to get real friendly with the search engine spiders and why they’ll start visiting your  Beyond Blogs: The “RSS-Powered” Report. You’ll discover the marketing implications
site often — even every few hours. You climb in the rankings — while you sleep like a of RSS feeds. But even more important — you’ll be the one to take action while
baby with a smile on your face. everyone is still trying to decode the abbreviations! Value: $47

 Why the big corporations have just woken up and discovered blogs and what you must do  Blogs & RSS Traffic Tactics Report — Your secret tactical guide to real blogging success.
to stay ahead of them. You are given 25 no-hype traffic tactics to increase traffic to your blog and improve your
search engine rankings. Value: $47
 How Thomas gets Yahoo to crawl his site every 30 minutes. You’ll elbow your way to the
top of the ranking when you follow his model. The total package is worth a cool $712. But I’m not finished yet.

 And so much more... Because this package is about blogging, everyone purchasing this package will receive the
address of one of Thomas’s blogs and will be able to submit questions directly to Thomas.
Introducing: How To Blog For Fun & Profits And, I’ve twisted him arm so he will answer as many questions as he has in a no-holds-barred
series of 3 live teleconferences.
Discovering The Hidden Fortune In Using Blogs
And RSS to Supercharge Your Business Quite frankly, the value of those calls in an additional $397.

I’ll say one thing about my brother, Thomas; he’s thorough to the core. This is the And here’s the icing on the cake! I’m holding an invitation only event for the Internet
most complete source of information on blogging ever made available to the public. (use Apprentice Program and all the heavy hitters are going to be there.
product shot here)
I’ve asked Thomas to speak on the latest breaking developments in Blogging and I’m
Your Blogging Career Takes Off with: going to capture every word of his talk on DVD and I will send it to you as quickly as I can
rush it into print. You will be light-years ahead of the competition and have a ring-side seat
 A comprehensive guide to blogging which will take you from beginner to expert in into the mind of “my secret weapon”. The value of this DVD alone would be $497.
record time. Whether you use blogs for fun or to make serious money, this is the begin-
ning. Value: $97 I Want To Learn Thomas’s Blogging Secrets
 A hands on video tutorial where Thomas walks you step by step through every step of There’s $1606 in value in this package and Thomas is going to reveal how to make that
setting up your blog. It doesn’t get any easier than this. 90 minutes of visual how-to money back using his “Underground Strategies.”
instruction for blogging success! View your video tutorials for a visual step-by-step
walkthrough of important blogging fundamentals. Viewing these tutorials will reinforce But you aren’t going to pay anywhere near the value of the calls.
key sections of your main manual and skyrocket your blogging success. Value: $137
Remember, we’re only releasing this to get the SEO bullies off Thomas’s back. And we
 Three Information Packed CD’s Featuring A Live Teleseminar with Rich Schefren, my need this to get out there to as many people as possible.
brother Thomas, and me. The only people on this call were people who paid $5000 to
be part of the Jay Abraham Internet Apprentice program. This is the first time Thomas So we decided to charge less than a quarter of the value of this package.
went public as the “Blog Expert.” I had to seriously twist his arm to come forward and
The cost of the whole shebang with manuals, audio CD’s, video disk, special reports, 3
spill his guts. Value: $287
teleseminar calls, and bonus DVD is just $347 plus postage and handling.

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And since we’re in the Christmas spirit, we’ll even let you split the payments. Pay half my brother Thomas, and me. I know I’m going to get the same information the people
now and the other half on January 15. who paid $5000 did.

But, if you pay in full, you’ll get a free bonus report called Pierce Shortcuts to Success:  The transcript of the Teleseminars.
How To Get Started Blogging In Under An Hour!
 The Beyond Blogs: The “RSS-Powered” Report.
I Want To Get Starting Making Money With My Blog!  The Blogs & RSS Traffic Tactics Report
Now remember, these are simple to do and implement. This is a no sweat way to cash in
 The triple header — 3 teleconferences with Thomas and I on the subject of blogging.
on the biggest thing to hit the Internet since Pay-Per-Click started.
 And the DVD of Thomas presenting on Blogging at the invitation only January conference.
Now, I’m so convinced this information is light years ahead of anything else out there,
when you purchase the set of  Plus the special report on how to be an expert Blogger is less than an hour.

How To Blog For Fun and Profit, you get an incredible one year guarantee. You just show
me this information was available to ordinary folks before Thomas went public and I’ll give
you your money back up to one full year from today.

But I can save you the trouble, you can not find this information anywhere.

Look, the Webster Dictionary people just announced a four letter word — B-l-o-g was the
top word of 2004. Let me tell you when you dive into this manual, you’re going to have a new
four letter word at the top of your personal 2005 list:

C-A-S-H.

Look, if this doesn’t get into the hands of the ordinary online entrepreneurs, we’ve got to
take these threats seriously and we’ll yank this report. Order yours today.

Sincerely,
Stephen Pierce

PS. Remember, you get the whole package valued at $1109 including:

 The comprehensive guide to blogging which will take you from beginner to expert in
record time.

 The hands on video tutorial where Thomas walks you step by step through every step of
setting up your blog. It doesn’t get any easier than this.

 The Three Information Packed CD’s Featuring A Live Teleseminar with Rich Schefren,

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It’ll take you just 57 minutes to master…
Stephen Pierce on Wealth
There are a lot of different programs teaching people how to create wealth. How A High School Drop Out…Street
Many of them — wisely — deal with the mindset required to succeed. Smart Thug…From The Slums of
When I called Stephen to interview him for this project, I was surprised to find Stephen Washington D.C. Amassed A Fortune On
had a new twist.
The Internet And Continues To Stash
The Power of the Third Influence became a huge seller for Stephen when marketed to his Away Six Figures Every Month
list and to other lists as well.

Stephen has taken the text of this program and created a book out of it. Both versions of “My methodology is so simple, it’s embarrassing.” And I’ve already taught hundred of
this creative approach are worth serious study. Please see the “secret page” we’ve created at others in my sold-out $1000 a month coaching club to follow my path to riches.
www.overnight-copy.com/secretpage.html.
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If you’ve been reading self-help books, going to seminars, and doing all the
“right things” but success has still eluded you, it’s probably not your fault.
It’s simply because you never learned “The Seven Secrets of Wealth” or
discovered the amazing “Power of the Third Influence.”

From: Stephen Pierce


Date: December 20, 2005

I still remember being young and dumb and getting evicted from my apartment and cast
out on the mean streets of D.C...Using up all my chances in school until I was booted out the
door during the tenth grade...Hooked up with the wrong crowd and ended up on the business
end of a Saturday Night Special...And to this day, carry the bullet in my leg as proof.

Today, my family runs an endless empire of online businesses, offline businesses, and three
different coaching clubs. I am known as one of the powerhouses of the Internet and teach
others to replicate my success. Every day, people beg me to endorse their programs, do a joint-
venture program, or appear at a live seminar.

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“Listen, Digest, And Put Into Action” path leading to success. Today, as the coach to hundreds in my high priced programs, I
shortcut their learning curve.
“Even with my years of experience in creating windfall profits, Stephen
Pierce is light years ahead on the Internet. He’s teamed up with me to lead I began to look at my fumbles and bumbles in a new light — as part of a learning curve
my Internet Apprentice Program and take people with zero internet skills and which was now accelerating rapidly. I even discovered my impressive strength amidst the
make them savvy online entrepreneurs. Together, my program has brought failures, which I now aimed squarely at the top. I sharpened my focus and blasted off.
in over two million dollars in just five months. In his Seven Secrets of Wealth,
he explains the mindset behind his phenomenal achievements. I urge you
to listen, digest, and put into action all of Stephen’s suggestions.” “Right On Target!”
~ Jay Abraham, Marketing Guru. (use Jay’s picture and signature) “Stephen, I just finished your "Wealth" program and I have to say
congrats...The concept of the Third Influence is "right on target". I realized
also that although I thought I "knew it", the way you explain "little changes"
Some people say I’ve been blessed with the Midas touch.
reminded me to "do what I know". Thanks for nudging me back on track in a
But it wasn’t always this way. As you can imagine, doors don’t automatically open for few areas. We all need it!”
ghetto drop-outs. But there’s no doubt I were missing... ~ Jim Fleck, Instant Profits Marketing

The Keys To Success Uncovering Hidden Talents


I drifted from failure to failure, always looking for the easy way out. I used to buy all
I took a brutally honest inventory of my skills and started my first moves online. I hit a
those big $20 books on how to make money with get rich quick schemes. Some of those
number of singles waiting for the right pitch to blast in out of the park and when I discovered
ideas were just dumb.
the futures market, I found my niche.
There was the arbitration business, vinyl repair service, and vending machine route, but
When I got started online, there weren’t any trading sites. Heck, the web barely existed.
nothing worked. But the reason they didn’t work was because I didn’t put in any effort. I
There were some forums and newsgroups but that was it. I began studying the market and
didn’t even bother to read the manuals.
following the trends. Soon, I caught the rhythm of the futures market and understood the
I expected fame and fortune were going to drop down out of the sky. It didn’t. direction of the market.

I expected checks were going to magically appear without any effort. They didn’t. So many people clamored for my scoop on the futures market, I was forced to throw up
my first sites. Then I began emailing my suggested trades and began to build a following. My
I couldn’t follow simple instructions to turn things around. I realized I didn’t have an daily trades were outperforming expensive high paid services when out of the blue, fortune
overwhelming desire to be a failure. There was something missing mentally. smiled on me. A subscriber wanted to pay me five thousand dollars to teach him my trading
methodology. Instead, I started a paid subscription service and charged $350 a month.
The Simple Path From Failure To Success Within days, I had over one hundred paid subscribers and I was banking, over $35,000 dollars
a month! (Today, if I have a month like that I think it’s slow!)
The path to the top started with baby steps. I read Napoleon Hill’s Think and Grow Rich,
W. Clement Stone’s Greatest Success Secret, and Norman Vincent Peale’s Power of Positive My first ebook was Rapid Fire Swing trading which did $49,000 in the first fifty days. To
Thinking. Actually, I didn’t just read them; I devoured them. date, I’ve sold over five thousand copies banking $249,750 from this one product. Thousands
of people signed on for my daily market analysis emails. And rave reviews poured in:
No starving man ever appreciated a meal more than I valued these books. All of a
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“Hi, Stephen. It has been an excellent experience trading your RF Swing best selling ebooks of all time. But less than 20 pages of the book created nonstop contro-
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one week with a small account, can't complain! Keep it coming and God engine rankings — the Smart Pages.
bless you and yours.”
Everyone had an opinion about Smart Pages. The mammoth search optimization firms
~ Hilario Vieira, St. Catharines, Canada hated them because this $97 product outperformed their outrageously priced services. I was
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“Hello Stephen, This week was the first time that I ever made a Futures were making it too easy to rank highly!
Trade and I followed your recommendation for Cotton which gave me a
And at about that time, I started my Internet Coaching service which is still active
profit of $725 in just 3 days. I am anxious to see what you have to offer in the
today. I’ve met thousands of Internet entrepreneurs. Many of them reaching pinnacles of
coming week that can help to add to my profits.”
success; others were scrapping the bottom when they started. And I began to turn their
~ Paul Shoemaker, Woody Point, Newfoundland failures into towering homeruns.

“Five Minutes To Change Your Destiny”


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LETTERS

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HEALTH LETTERS

Hypnosis Check
E veryone loves to get a check in the mail. It’s an effective technique and it is used very
often in direct mail.

This letter is slightly different because the check is at the top of the letter. It catches the
eye because people do not throw away checks.

This letter was modeled after a similar letter used successfully at my friend Jim Van
Wyck’s centers in Canada. Jim mailed his letter in a plain #10 white envelope with the
“pay to the account of ...Jane M. Prospect” showing through the window. Everybody
opens...and reads this kind of letter.

This letter was sent to people who came in for a free consultation but did not sign up
for the program.

Each program varied in price from $1277 to $3077. For those who were inclined but the
price stopped them for going further, this irresistible offer of four weeks of hypnosis for only
$177 brought many people in the door waving their checks.

I cut my teeth in copywriting by creating dozens of highly effective weight loss ads. I hope
to share these with readers in the future.

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Harlan, I have written you a check for $300.00 you can use “Weight Melts Off”

for a powerful 4 week program for Weight Loss. Why am I “I lost 36 lbs. in 2 1/2 months. I dropped 9 lbs. the first week. That impressed
me. I’ve never had weight come off like this before. Just melting. I no longer
offering you such preferential treatment? Because .... crave the junk foods. My mind and body tell me to quit eating and I do. My
headaches and depression are gone. Joint problems have vanished. I
believe my weight loss will be permanent. The positive information is being
instilled in my brain and I know it’s going to stay there.”
~ Susan Testimonial

“My Weight Loss Will Last Forever”


“I’ve dropped an astounding 47 lbs. I noticed a change in my behavior right
after my first session. Instead of my usual high calorie snacks, I’m now
eating vegetables. Ice cream, pretzels and Pepsi were my nightly routine
when on duty. Hypnosis eliminated the cravings, food binges, and my poor
I expect people will be lining up and begging you to tell eating habits. I no longer overeat in the evenings. I’m recommending
them how you lost your weight. Positive Changes Hypnosis to everyone I know. My weight loss will last
forever because I’m eating right and it’s easy.”
Dear Harlan, ~ Susan Testimonial
As you can see, I have made out ... ready to sign... a “special internal account check” for
$300.00 which you can deposit directly into your personal Positive Changes Anniversary
account. This check is good for your personal account and may be used by you as participant “I went from a size 12 to a size 6!”
in our anniversary celebration. “My results were immediate. The same day as my first session! I was amazed
when I realized that my cravings were now for healthy foods. I didn't even
Four years ago, we introduced South Florida to the benefits of losing weight with
know that I was changing my food intake. I gave up junk foods. It happened
hypnosis. Since then thousands of South Floridians have lost weight without a struggle,
naturally! By the next day, I knew I was in control. I melted off over 30 pounds
without deprivation, and without being hungry. They have gotten results like this:
in total. I am happier and feel stronger thanks to Positive Changes Hypnosis.”
~ Susan Testimonial
“Gained Control Over Food”
“I have lost 15 pounds in less than 2 months with Positive Changes
Hypnosis. I have taken off 5 inches of unwanted fat. My weight loss has
“Now I can look in the Mirror and Smile!”
been very easy. Hypnosis eliminated the cravings, food binges, and poor
eating habits I had before. I no longer feel out of control. Losing weight “Immediately after my first session my food preferences changed. I was
has brought my self-confidence back. I believe my weight loss will be amazed when I realized that my cravings were now for healthy foods. I
permanent. I recommend you try it too.” didn't even know that I was changing my food intake. It happened
naturally! By the next day, I walked with a new spring in my step and a
~ Susan Testimonial

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smile on my face. I lost 4 pounds my first week and 10 pounds my first For example, you know you shouldn’t be eating a candy bar but a voice inside seduces
month! I melted off over 20 pounds in total. I am happier and feel stronger you into thinking “one little candy bar isn’t going to hurt.” That behavior won’t help
thanks to Positive Changes Hypnosis.” maintain your weight.

~ Susan Testimonial What if you could automatically apply all the food behaviors you already know and make
them part of your life — without the inner conflict? What if all of your poor eating habits
were redirected and you began eating the right foods, at the right times, and in the right
Do something that works! quantities? And enjoyed it as much as any candy bar you’ve ever had. What if you made
exercise a regular part of your life? And enjoyed it so much that nothing could keep you from
It’s been shown time and gain that losing fat and achieving a healthy body weight is it. All of this is easy and possible with Positive Changes.
something most people can’t do alone. So don’t feel ashamed that you’ve tried losing
weight on your own and haven’t succeeded. The only shame is in giving up the Here’s Scientific Proof
fight...especially when there’s a way to lose the weight without a struggle that is fast, easy,
and you don’t have to starve yourself. As evidenced by recent studies published in medical journals, hypnosis has been shown
to be a successful tool for weight loss. For example: In a study reported in the Journal of
So let’s get together. What’s worked for others — others who have successfully lost 20 Clinical Psychology, subjects who completed a behavioral treatment program for weight
lbs., 30 lbs., even 200 lbs. — can work for YOU. And with our program, the weight you management that included hypnosis lost significantly more weight than subjects whose treat-
lose is based on behavior and lifestyle changes. The government tells us that this is the ment plan did not include hypnosis.
only way to lifestyle changes.
A Journal of Consulting and Clinical Psychology reported on a study of 60 women who
were at least 20% overweight. The women who participated in hypnosis lost an average
Hypnosis Made Simple of 17 pounds while the control group lost only a half-pound on average. Hypnosis was
seventeen times more effective.
Here’s how hypnosis works. Ideas and attitudes for healthy habits are powerfully commu-
nicated to your subconscious mind while you are relaxed. In hypnosis, you are much more
open to suggestion than when you are in “normal consciousness”.
What the Media Says
Allure Magazine: “Most racetrack long shots have a better chance than the typical dieter...”
Or think of it another way. Is it easier to change something when your body is tense,
nervous and stressed..... or when you are calm and centered? Is it easier to learn something Woman’s Day: “Successful weight loss relies as much on the mind as the body”
when your mind is busy, overactive, jumping from thought to thought.....or when you are
relaxed and comfortable. Hypnosis just magnifies this normal process. Newsweek: “the easiest way to break habits is through hypnosis.”

Cosmopolitan: “The country is turning to hypnosis to lose weight.”


The One Question Everyone Must Ask of Themselves...If
They Truly Care About Having a Better Life CBS Channel 4: “Hypnosis works.”

Here’s the single question you must ask yourself if you want to lose lots of body fat and get Dateline NBC: Hypnosis was the fastest and safest way to lose weight.
slender and attractive looking. You already know what to do to lose weight, don’t you? You
know what foods to eat. You know when and how much to eat. The problem isn’t what you We have taken hypnosis to the next level. To a level where positive changes will
naturally and automatically occur in your life. That’s why we’ve named our company
know — it’s the pressures within you that get you to do something else.
Positive Changes Hypnosis.

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consistently — Just imagine... no more “willpower” required! (These are the
Seems Like Magic
same techniques that NFL, NBA, MLB and Olympic champions pay sports
Most of our clients report significant behavioral change after their first session. We hear psychologists hundreds of dollars an hour to learn.)
words like “effortless” and “simple” from our clients. And when you effortlessly change the
behaviors that got you overweight, everyone is going to want to know how you did it.  How to lose weight permanently. It’s a fact — 98% of the people who go on
conventional diets gain all the weight back and sometimes they end up fatter
Here’s How to Use That Check I Wrote. than when they started. Now you can learn how to be in the successful 2%
group that keeps it off forever.
Our least expensive program is a one month program for $477.77. Because we are
celebrating our fourth year anniversary in Florida, I have written you a check for $300  How to break through any weight loss plateau — even if you’ve been stuck
towards that program. at the same weight for years! 10 fool-proof methods that work like magic
every time.
This means for the next two weeks only, you can enroll in the proven Positive Changes
weight loss system for an exceptionally low price. You get four weeks of our proven weight  How to boost your energy levels higher than you ever thought possible — almost
loss program for just $177.77. This includes: instantly! (you’ll notice the difference the very first day)

 A one on one session with a certified hypnotist. Not only will you learn how to shed all  Why some people always seem to gain back the fat they’ve lost and how to
the weight you want, but also the hypnosis will help you to make the changes naturally. GUARANTEE you keep it off for good.
You will be given a complementary copy of this recording. (A $250 value)
 7 strategies to make sure your body never goes into “metabolic shutdown
 A Slenderific seminar followed by light and sound enhanced hypnosis. You’ll get the mode” and the one thing you must do immediately if you suspect it’s already
motivation you need to overcome self-sabotage and think positive. (A $100 value) happened to you

 A Mind Body Seminar followed by a hypnosis session. You’ll learn the secrets that turn  The psychological reason why most people sabotage themselves...just when their
your body into a fat burning machine. (A $100 value) diets are beginning to work. And how to make sure this never happens to you!
 A personal coaching session with a hypnotist to laser in further changes that you want
to make. (A $100 value) And there’s more...lot’s more
You’ll also get three FREE bonus reports which were previously only available to a small
 Four Hypnosis Acceleration Sessions. You’ll train your subconscious to easily, rapidly,
group of clients in my coaching programs, or you had to pay $12.95 for each report. These
and totally redirect your brain to think and act like a thin person. Each session lasers in
bonus reports are yours absolutely FREE when you enroll.
on a different target area. (A $200 value)

At my regular prices, you are getting the value of $550 for only $177.77. (It’s a good thing
BONUS #1: Foods That Burn Fat, Foods That Turn To Fat
my accountant isn’t seeing this letter!)
Many of my clients have told me that this ONE report was worth twice the price of
the entire program. It’s easy to see why: In this super-popular bonus report, you’ll learn
Here’s what you are going to learn in this program.
exactly which foods “burn fat” and speed up your metabolism — without having to cut
 The psychology of permanent weight loss...Goal setting and motivation calories drastically. (When you eat these foods, you can actually eat MORE and still lose
tactics that program your subconscious mind for massive success...Follow this fat!) This report reveals all the juicy details that most successful weight loss masters would
“secret mental training formula” and you’ll be eating properly and exercising rather keep to themselves.

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BONUS #2: The Language of Confidence came here I was a size 12 and it wasn’t going to be too long before I went up
This report will change your life. You will learn about how the language you use to a 14. I had made up my mind that was not going to happen. I knew from
affects your weight. This study has made an immediate effect on countless lives. Now it the beginning that Positive Changes would work for me.”
is yours absolutely free. ~ Susan Testimonial

BONUS #3: Stress Busting Secrets to Keep the Pounds Off


Finally! They’ve discovered that stress is one of the greatest sources of weight gain. This “The Best Decision I Have Made”
special report reveals the secrets to eliminating stress in your life, once and for all. “I came to Positive Changes with an open mind to hypnosis but with
questions. After 5 weeks of following the program I have lost 17 pounds
in an almost effortless way. The experience that I have had so far has
Wouldn’t you like results like these? been the best decision I have made in my life. My wants and questions
have been answered.”
“It’s Like a Miracle!” ~ John Testimonial
“Wow — I can so NO to all my favorite foods without effort. I no longer
have my crazy desire for sweets and I’ve only been coming here for 2
weeks. It’s like a miracle.” “I Couldn’t Be Happier”
~ Susan Testimonial “I dropped 35 pounds in three months using Hypnosis! I couldn’t be happier.”
~ John Testimonial

“My doctor took me off insulin!”


“I started Positive Changes Hypnosis 6 weeks ago as I was celebrating “Now I Can Wear Sexy Clothes”
my 80th birthday. Outside of losing weight, the most rewarding result
“My dress size plunged from 14 to a sexy size 8. Hypnosis worked when all
was my sugar level has lowered to the point I do not use insulin — an
else failed. Positive Changes Hypnosis is special to me. They helped me
average drop of 40 to 50 points lower. I have no desire to eat junk food
when all else failed. That's why I urge you to give them a call.”
and my intake of carbohydrate is dramatically lower. I intend to continue
the new eating habits.” ~ Susan Testimonial

~ John Testimonial

“I’m 26 pounds lighter!”


“Size 12 to Size 4” “I’m at my goal weight, and I look great! Thanks to hypnosis, I’ve lost my
“Positive Changes has made a lot of good things happen in my life besides weight for life!”
losing weight. My cholesterol has come down and I have been off medica- ~ John Testimonial
tion. For two years, I had to sleep with a machine and I no longer need that.
My grandson’s getting married so I had to buy a new dress size 4. When I

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“Effortless Weight Loss” Harlan, this program really works.
“I work in a sleep lab. My weight loss has been effortless. Without thinking I Call us now to get started!
just stayed away from the foods that I would normally snack on and I began to
eat more healthy foods. I am in control of my behaviors now. The weight just
came off. I believe that hypnosis will help me achieve permanent weight loss.” Sincerely,

~ Susan Testimonial Harlan D. Kilstein Ed.D. C.Ht.


Clinical Director

“Quit Smoking and Dropped 47 Lbs.!” P.S. You really have to act now or you miss this great deal. Call today. You must be one of the
“I participated in two programs simultaneously. Weight loss and stop first ten to enroll in either center to take advantage of this offer.
smoking. I have been very successful at both. I stopped smoking and lost 47
P.P.S. Four incredible weeks of the most powerful weight loss program in South Florida for
lbs. in two months. I strongly recommend hypnosis to everyone.”
just $177.77. This is an offer that will never be repeated.
~ John Testimonial
Testimonials may not reflect typical results/individual results vary.

“Self-Confidence Boost”
“I tried a number of weight loss programs. I would lose weight, but gain back
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What’s the catch?


The catch is simple. When you enroll in our program, you are going to notice results very
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Pick up the phone and call Sandra at my Broward office at xxx-xxx-0510 or Mary at the
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Acne Secrets If Acne is making your life miserable…
This letter started on the Internet and was so effective, the owner wanted to take it to
direct mail as well. “The Amazing Swiss Secret
This letter is directed at teenage emotions and pushes the emotional buttons again and again. to Acne Proof Your Face”
The subheads and the captions under the pictures force the emotional pitch at every turn. Use These Natural Methods to Eradicate Your
I use a technique in this letter called, “It’s not your fault” I first learned from Dan Kennedy.
Acne in Just 3 Days — Guaranteed.

It’s not Your Fault! Dear Acne Sufferer,


Acne makes guys
People told me that I should wash my face more often. miserable too.
Acne makes your life miserable. I know first hand
because I had one of the worst cases in history. At least Girls notice when
People told me I should stop eating so much chocolate.
your skin is broken
it felt that way.
Someone even told me I should stop thinking about sex so out with acne.
much. Fat chance. When my face broke out, my life changed. I used to
go out with friends all the time. Now I wanted to hide.
People told me, “Just live with it.”
Look when you walk into a room and there’s a cute
And that seemed to be my only choice until...
guy or a girl you’d like to know better, watch them scan
the room. In less than a couple of seconds, they make up
How I Stumbled On a Secret Cure That their mind. And if you’ve got zits on your face so that you
Got Rid of My Ugly Unwanted ACNE! look like the Wicked Witch of the West, there’s no
chance they’re going to come talk to you.
Sales on this product increased significantly when it ran on the Internet.
I hated having my picture taken. I didn’t want to look
at my senior picture.

I stopped going to parties. Stopped hanging out with


my friends. My life was ruined. I hoped and I prayed that
my acne years would end. When you have acne,
the tiniest zit stands
Worse than that, were all the well meaning people out on your face. You
who told me things like, “Life’s about how you feel feel like hiding from the
inside, not outside.” Yeah, right. Like they had a clue. world. Now, there’s a
solution that works.

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In my senior year, we hosted a boy from Switzerland. And man, this kid’s complexion
How Many Expensive Treatments
was perfect. Not only did all the girls think he was “da bomb” in girl talk, his face looked
That Leave The Skin — like it had never seen a zit.
Scarred and Unattractive Have You Tried? The week before he went on to another school, I got up my courage and asked him,
“Did you ever have acne?”
Ever notice how many cures there are for acne? Only
problem is that they don’t work... He laughed. He told me that his face once looked like mine but there was an old Swiss
remedy that all his friends used that really worked. He told me what to do and that in just
First we have the special cleansers that they sell on
three days; I would see the most incredible results.
infomercials (rip off city).
But that wasn’t all. You’ve seen pictures of Swiss guys and girls in the magazines. They
Then we have the creams that smell and leave your
The amazing Swiss all look like models or something. But they have this whole system for treating it so it just
skin oily.
secret that heals acne goes away. And even if they have a flare up, three days later, it’s gone.
Finally, we have the prescription drugs that can leave is just 3 days. Your
you sterile. You know which ones I’m talking about. skin can be smooth I Backed Up My Armored Car Up to the Fort Knox
and soft again.
(Like I say its name but then their lawyers would come of Skin Care and Loaded Up all of the Gold!
after me.) Give me a break!
My new Swiss buddy spent hours with me I unloaded and debriefed every piece of the
But people are so desperate. They take them anyway. When you’re suffering with acne, secret system that he and his friends used to eliminate acne from their lives. I couldn’t
even serious side effects don’t matter. believe the possibilities.

It’s not Your Fault! Imagine Life Without Acne!


People told me that I should wash my face more often.  Have Fresh Looking, Clear, Un-blemished Skin, that People Who Knew You
Would Swear You’d Paid Thousands for It! And everyone you knew would be
People told me I should stop eating so much chocolate.
dying to know your secret. They’ll think your kidding when you tell them
Someone even told me I should stop thinking about sex so much. Fat chance. how simple the cure is.

People told me, “Just live with it.”  Become the popular person you were meant to be when everyone stops
judging you by your zits. You’ll have to take out a second phone line to
And that seemed to be my only choice until... handle all the calls.

How I Stumbled On a Secret Cure  Stop to look at every mirror you pass because you don’t believe the new you. And
in the background, you’ll see people looking at you wishing they had your looks.
That Got Rid of My Ugly Unwanted ACNE!
 Burst out of the shyness bubble that’s held you back because you didn’t want
Every year, my school would host kids from a different foreign program. It was an
exchange program but I never knew anyone from my school who got to go. (Boy, there were people looking at you. I gotta warn you, people will stroke your face for
plenty of kids I would have gladly exchanged.) weeks to find out if its makeup.

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 Take all of the useless acne medications that you bought and have a burial There is nothing like it anywhere.
ceremony in your backyard. You’ll never need them again and will feel sorry for
those who do. Well, I shared these secrets with some of my friends and it worked for them too.

 Have the complexion of a Hollywood model. Notice how they never seem to But I’m going to warn you. The treatment is so simple that you’re likely to say, “This
have a zit. Well they use makeup but you’ll never have to use cover-up again! can’t work!”

 Notice how your parents take credit for your skin clearing up. Yeah mine But you have to try it. And it is easier than going to the drug store and buying the
thought it was the latest medicine they bought. They never even knew my latest rip-off product or going to a dermatologist so you can pay big bucks for a prescrip-
secret and I never told them! tion item that doesn’t work.

 Save a Fortune by Not Spending on Pills, Potions, Ointments, and Treatments If you’re suffering form ACNE and all the other spin-off problems that naturally get
so you have more money to go out with all the new friends and dates who are associated with it, you need to get your hands on a copy of this simply Amazing system.
going to want to get to know you better. Here’s just a tease of what you’ll get:

 How to really wash your face so ACNE doesn’t have a chance to ever pop up
Are you sick and Tired of Having Acne? again! Imagine never having a zit or blackhead again.
This is your opportunity to get rid of zits, pockmarks,
 The Myths about What Causes ACNE... AND... What Doesn’t! (The list will
blemishes and the misery that goes with it. shock you as to what’s true and what isn’t!) Relax, thinking about sex isn’t on
Once I got my Swiss friend to spill the beans and tell me his secrets, I began to research the list and after you start using this treatment, let’s just say that like Brittany
more and more. I even stumbled onto name of a turn of the century Swiss Doctor who Spears, you won’t stay a virgin!
discovered the secret remedy! This doctor had been suffering with a liver disorder and
 How to Spot the Worst Form of ACNE, so you’ll know EXACTLY How to Treat
while looking for treatments for his liver condition he stumbled on a technique that is
It When It Rears it’s Ugly Head! And you’ll be able to stop it dead in its tracks.
revolutionary in helping acne suffers.
 How to Spot the Top 10 “Impostor ACNE Conditions!” (AND... what to do
The Amazing Acne Treatment of a 19th Century Swiss Doctor! about treating them accurately!)

Finding this discovery was the “light at the end of the tunnel”. So I kept  The Differences between Teenage and Adult ACNE... And what to do about
digging...and I found information about another doctor who was using this same both of them.
technique 30 years ago in Britain.
 Why EMOTIONAL SCARS Can Leave a More Lasting Effect than ACNE’S
It seemed too easy. I started using this technique and I watched my acne vanish. Gone. PHYSICAL SCARS! And how you can handle your new popularity.
Goodbye zits. It’s over. Nada!  The 5 Elements That Produce CLOGGED ACNE Blemish! (Knowing this can
help you quickly, easily, and effectively eradicate it... for good!)
But I kept digging. I traced every single one of the secrets my friend taught me.
 6 Reasons a Simple Three Day Treatment will Banish Acne from your life.
I compiled a veritable goldmine of information for ACNE sufferers. Acne Secrets
You probably won’t even have to let anyone know that you’re doing it — once
reveals the exact step by step process that will start you on the road to your new life — Acne
you know these secrets.
Free. That’s what I said.

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 The Simple Garden Fruit That Has an Extraordinary Effect in Demolishing “... I bought this book on the basis I could ask for a refund if it didn’t work.
ACNE! It became my all time favorite and it will be yours too. Guess what ... it worked. Nothing hard just good simple advice that should
improve anyone's skin with Acne. I LOVE IT!”
 How to turn your body chemistry into ACNE destroying weapons. Forget not
being able to find Sadaam’s chemical weapons. Not one person in a million will ~ Oliver Smith, UK
ever guess your secret.

 What People With Serious ACNE, Must Do To Their Face Early in The “I read Acne Secrets a couple days ago. I gave it a try because I had nothing
Morning. This simple 3-Step Process Will Leave You Smiling all day! to lose. I have tried everything else. So far the results are great. I have been
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 A Secret Cleanser That Works Miracles for You While You sleep! Every
clearing up faster than anything I have tried in a long time.”
morning you wake up to a refreshed new you.
~ Rick Shah, MI
 A Simple 3-Part Process That Removes the Main “Attackers of the Skin!”
(Toxins Haven’t A Chance When You Kick This Into Action!)

 Why something found in your kitchen freezer will have Your Pores and “Nobody should suffer from lifelong scaring of acne, that's why anybody with
Blemishes Thanking You Forever (this is not what you think....)! acne needs Acne Secrets. Your acne detox is amazing! As an adult still suffering
with major breakouts I can't wait to put your insider strategies to use.”
 The One Natural Ingredient That Sucks The Impurities Right Of The Skin in ~ Jim Lodwig, Absolutely-Marketing.com
A Way You Wouldn’t Believe! Goodbye squeezing pimples.

 7 Outrageously Simple “Recipes for the Face” That’ll have it Glowing, Tingling
and Refreshed! They’ll leave you with the complexion of a model — guaranteed. Now for a limited time, you get my Acne
 5 Nutritional Tips that’ll Have Your Body Fighting Fit and Your Toxins Looking Secrets — For Free If You Like!
for the Exit Door!
Look, how much have you spent on acne treatments so far?
 A Simple “Face Fresh Plan” That’ll Send Your ACNE Packing and Have You
Some have spent hundreds, some even thousands. Many have certainly spent enormous
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amounts of time wondering, figuring, and calculating how to rid their lives of this problem.
paid for your new appearance.
For the price of a cheap date, a tank of gas, tickets to a movie, and a snack, your acne can
Are you ready to Say Goodbye to Acne? These People Did! be gone for good.

And if you try this system and say it didn’t work for me, I’ll give you your money back
“I suffered from severe acne in my teen and early adult years. I'm really glad
AND you get to keep Acne Secrets.
to see Acne Secrets available for the acne sufferer. It truly is all about
knowing what to do, and following the steps. It took me many years of trial
and error to figure out for myself the information offered in this resource. I If After Using Acne Secrets, You Don’t Have Clearer, Cleaner,
wish Acne Secrets had been around when I needed it. The information is Radiant, and Fresher Looking Skin Than You Ever Dreamed
exact and will work if followed. A Great gift for those in need.” Possible, You Get a Quick 100% No-Hassle Refund!
~ Cheryl Laures RN (Registered Nurse), WholeBodyBalancing.com

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But here’s what I want from you in return. When this system does work for you, I want Just Click Here and have your credit card ready. It’s that Simple. For $39.95, You’ll Be
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Sincerely Yours,
 Step-by-Step Daily Activity Guide — Everything that you
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If you’re pregnant,
Maternity Card
This was a great concept — insurance for the uninsurable. After all, who would insure How To Save Up To 60%
women who were already pregnant or who shortly wanted to become pregnant?
On Your Hospital Bill
Maternity Card hired an Internet expert who unfortunately got in my way at every
opportunity. Dear Expectant Mom,

That’s when I did something totally unusual. I interviewed Maternity Card’s sales team Hospital maternity bills are so high these days,
The stork also brings
about what people said who did not buy. families think twice about having babies. Some people huge hospital bills.
think the reason they escort new moms from the hospital Now, Maternity Card
They told me three things: in a wheel chair is so they don’t faint when they see the PPO saves you up to
bill. Today the average bill for a normal delivery is over 75% off your hospital
1. They did not believe the maternity bills were so expensive. bills – even if you
seven thousand dollars! And if you don’t have insurance
or your policy doesn’t cover maternity, you’re in trouble. don’t have insurance
2. They did not believe maternity card could save a significant amount of money. and you’re already
My name is Aaron Bouren and when my wife and I pregnant!
3. They were suspicious of buying insurance over the Internet.
had our first child, I couldn’t believe the size of the
As you read this letter, notice how each of these objections were answered. hospital bill. Her bill for one night was $4907.50

The success of this letter was immediate. Sales skyrocketed. Their commission based
sales team was so happy, the client told me they composed epic poems in my honor.

In fact everyone was happy — except the Internet expert. He was able to prove statisti-
cally the campaign was a failure.

Only no one believed him.

Then I flipped the page and saw a separate bill for the baby’s stay! Another $888. When
I got home, the doctor sent his bill for $4988.

I could hardly believe what I was reading. I mean my wife was only in the hospital
overnight and they charged her $901 for the bed. At those rates the nursery was a bargain
because they charged only $584 for using the bassinette overnight! I went through each line
of the bill astonished by what I was reading and shocked by the astronomical figures. The
bottom line was a bill of $10,783.50.

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Thank God, my insurance covered most of the bill. But while walking my baby daughter The grand total was $18815.63 before the doctor’s bill. But Maternity Card PPO saved
to sleep I began to think about all of the families who didn’t have insurance or families who her $15,420.63, a huge amount. Here’s the settlement:
had health insurance that excluded maternity.

Maternity Card PPO Saves You Money


The next morning Maternity Card PPO was born. Money should not be an issue because
having a baby should be one of the happiest moments in a couple’s life together. Everyone
says pregnant woman glow for nine months; they shouldn’t have to deal with huge bills just
as soon as the baby arrives. Moms should just focus on bonding with their new baby. That’s When Our Fan Mail Began to Arrive!
Negotiating with the insurance companies was easier than I expected. Their terms were
surprisingly simple and with few restrictions. (They couldn’t help someone on Medicaid or “Thanks for the great service and savings. I’m very happy that we found
someone who had applied for Medicaid.) Basically, I would be responsible to create a group you. Not only did we save a total of $6,229 on my $9,875 bill, but you also
of all pregnant (or even soon to become pregnant women) and they would negotiate the made the whole process easier. Much easier.”
lowest prices possible on hospital and doctor bills. ~ Dynasty Albiani, Fallon, NV

Right away, we found people could save huge amounts of money on their hospital bills.
For example, here’s a hospital bill for a mom in Atlanta, Georgia who had a C-section
“Wow! Thanks for the savings. Working with your company was a
pleasure. Everyone was very helpful and I’m glad that we decided to enroll
with you company. Here’s the picture of our baby. Take care and we’ll call
you when the next baby is on the way.”
~ Paul and Joyce Bedford, Rotonda West, FL

“Your entire staff has made me feel very comfortable! Thank you so much
for the good work and the incredible savings (over $11,000!). With no
maternity insurance this was a great option. I will definitely use you again
and, as promised, will tell my friend who are going to have babies.”
Mom’s bill was a staggering $14,780.90 and her baby boy’s bill was $4034.73.
~ Dawnette Woodcock, Vista, LA

“Having a baby is expensive and we were really feeling the pinch, but
MaternityCard™ saved us enough money to buy all the extras. The crib,
bottles, formula, car seat, new furniture and new clothes for my wife and at
the same time baby-proofing the house were all bought with the saving!”
~ Dad (R.B.)

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“We found your info on the web after we found out we were pregnant If you check our BBB records, you will
before our maternity insurance kicked in. We were really nervous about all find there isn’t a single unresolved
the high bills that were starting to come in- especially since we were complaints. Here’s why — we have an
having twins. When I finally decided to make the call- everyone was so incredible no risk guarantee. If we don’t save
helpful and supportive. It really made me feel more at ease knowing I had you at least the cost of your program in the
some help when I needed it. They saved me at least $9000 on one bill, and next year, we’ll extend your program an
I didn't have to deal with the hospital! That was so important to me additional year. (This could only occur if
because I was able to spend more time with my new babies!” you do not become pregnant. I can’t think
~ Kelly Jones, Winnemucca, NV of a single case where we have not been able
to save couples significant money.)

We’re also members of the U.S. Chamber of Commerce (use logo) because we want you
“Thank you so much for your help with my hospital maternity fees. The to know you can enroll in our Maternity Card PPO program total confidence you are dealing
hospital originally told me that I would have to pay $11,000.00, but your with people of integrity.
customer service department talked with their billing department and the
fee was reduced to $3,300.00. I know I could not have done this myself. Maternity Card PPO CBS News (use logo) recently featured Maternity
Again, thank you.” Can Save YOU Card PPO in a recent study on costs of child-
~ K.W. Austin, Texas Money On Your birth. Here’s what they had to say about us:
Maternity Bills
“Regardless of what type of professional gets involved,
We Work Exclusively With Well Known  Doctor Visits uninsured patients end up with higher bills, since insurers
Insurance Companies  Hospital Stays negotiate wholesale discounts with health-care providers. But
American Health Care Options has devised a way to make
Maternity Card PPO a division of Affordable Health Care Options works with the best  Lab Work
these savings accessible to more people. The company’s
known and recognized national PPO companies in the world. That’s why, as people new to  Sonograms ‘Maternity Card’ provides a way to save up to 60 percent on
the industry, we were able to rapidly negotiate discounts at hospitals all across the country. childbirth and fertility costs. The program isn’t limited to the
 24 Hour Counseling
In hospitals and doctors offices across the country, people immediately recognize the names uninsured: Insured people can use the program to cover their
of the companies we deal with and they accept.  24 Hour Nurse Hotline deductibles or as an alternative to paying higher premiums.
 Anesthesiologist And the company promises customers that they don't have to
We work with companies including: fill out claims forms or deal with other bureaucratic hassles.
 Pre Natal Vitamins ‘We can get people the rates that a [prepaid provider option]
Beech Street
 Newborn Tests and would get, piggybacking on our national network of 450,000
Provider B checkups hospitals and doctors,’ explains William Feller, founding
member of MaternitySavings.com, a unit of American Health
Provider C  Immunizations
Care Options in Austin, Texas. ‘But we’re not insurance. You
We are also member of the Better Business Bureau OnLine (use logo). This is what  Prescription Coverage can get insurance prior to getting pregnant, but once you are,
they had to say about us: “Affordable Health Care Options meets all BBBOnLine it’s like trying to get insurance for a house that’s already
Plus virtually all other
Reliability participation and Better Business Bureau membership standards and is author- burned down.’ So far, about 2,500 people have used the
healthcare associated with
ized to display the BBBOnLine Reliability seal.” Maternity Card since it became available 18 months ago.”
your pregnancy!

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Here’s How Maternity Card PPO Goes To Work For You Enroll Now and Save!
Once you enroll in our program, our staff helps you locate a doctor and hospital in your When you enroll by midnight tonight, we’ll start your savings immediately and reduce
area. We figure out the best negotiated program for you and handle everything so you can your enrollment fee to $XYZ. And remember, we’re taking all the risk here by guaranteeing
focus on having a happy and healthy baby. your savings. Call (888) 498.4905 ext. 2000 right now.

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care. And remember, our Certificate of Guarantee that you will save at least the cost of Right now you should be preparing for the Pitter-Patter of little feet — not the jaw
your yearly membership or we will pay you the difference plus $200 and you get to keep the dropping shock of getting your hospital bill. Maternity Card can save you thousands of dollars
benefits for an additional 12 months free of charge. on your hospital and lab bills.

We have one of the largest networks of doctors, obstetricians, hospitals and medical facil- With the money Maternity Card will save you, you can easily pay for your nursery
ities in the country. We work with these providers on a daily basis to ensure women like you furnishings, car seat, stroller, and layette. Imagine when you tell your husband how much
receive the best care available — at the very best rates. money you’ve saved on your maternity bills. Since you don’t have insurance, it will be a
load off his mind and mean relief for both of you.
Our Patient Advocacy Team™ (PAT) will contact your doctor for you, confirm benefits,
and always deliver our preferred rates that save our members thousands of dollars. Your Call Now
savings may be more or less depending on your pregnancy, but you are guaranteed to save at Here’s More Proof!
least the cost of your yearly membership or we will pay you the difference plus $200 and you If you don’t have maternity insurance (and you’re
get to keep the benefits for an additional 12 months free of charge. not on Medicaid), Maternity Card is a life saver. Take a virtual slide
You’ll be able to spend more time playing with your show savings tour!
24/7 Care — We’re Always There For You little one and less time worrying about the bills.

In addition, MaternityCard PPO provides a fully staffed team of registered nurses who Congratulations on the New Arrival. Let Maternity Card give you the peace of mind you
are available toll free 24 hours a day, 365 days a year. They are ALWAYS available to assess deserve. Call us right now Pick up the phone and dial (xxx) xxx.xxxx ext. xxxx.
your condition and help you make informed decisions about your health and pregnancy
Sincerely,
Once your baby is born, your Maternity Card will automatically expand to include your
newborn to help with checkups, immunizations, and any other medical costs that may arise. Aaron Bouren (Bold signature in blue)
For no additional costs, your Family, Infant, and Toddler (The FIT Program) Card will Aaron Bouren
arrive shortly after your baby is born with expanded benefits and more real savings.
PS. Remember, our team does all the work for you. Well, you’re still going to have to do
Affordable Rates the pushing! You can save up to 60% on your maternity bills by enrolling in Maternity
To make our program truly affordable, we keep our fees super low and affordable. Card PPO. Call us at (xxx) xxx.xxxx ext. xxxx right now.

PPS. Read what a Texas health insurance agent said about Maternity Card PPO. Your
Find out just how much you can save when you speak with one of our representatives.
savings start as soon as you enroll!
Call (888) 498.4905 ext. 2000 right now.

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I was one of the first copyrighter’s to use Google Adwords to attract clients. Today, there We’ll hook up and start working on improving your business.
are dozens and dozens of copyrighters using Adwords to attract clients. But in those days, I was
the only one. And, there was a very funny story that was associated with the use of Adwords.

Having been to a seminar with Gary Halbert and John Carlton, I wrote ads. I bought the
names Gary Halbert and John Carlton and I wrote, “Gary Halbert trained copyrighter” and I
wrote a “John Carlton trained copyrighter” ad.

Well, the next thing I knew was I got a blistering email from John Carlton saying that he
had never given me permission to use his name or to say that he had trained me, and that he
was informed by Gary Halbert as to what I’d done and I better take that ad down and correct
it. Well, needless to say, since John was my teacher of copy I complied with his request and
took down those ads. Later, Gary devoted an issue of his newsletter, The Gary Halbert Letter,
to my Adwords campaign finding with great surprise that his name was worth about 35 cents.

These days copyrighting on the Internet has gotten a great deal more competitive and I
have added to my site over the years. Originally, the site had no graphics whatsoever, but I
added the graphic banner that you see, as well as some pictures. And the truth of the matter
is, I have so many more pictures and samples that I just do not have time to post on that site.

As you scan the sites of Internet copywriters online, see how many of them have swiped
my site at www.Overnight-Copy.com.

The responses from that site keep me extremely busy and at this point, my schedule is
getting tighter than ever. I used to deal with four clients a month but the truth of the matter
is, I’m probably going to go down to two, or even one client a month because I’m just
swamped with work as well as coming out with products of my own.

Because you’ve taken the time to purchase a copy of this book, and you’ve spent good
money, (and I trust gotten good value from this book), it occurs to me that you might be inter-
ested in either a consultation with me or in working with me on a project. I’d like to do is
make you this special offer… if you call my office and tell Sandra that you have a copy of my
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Finally, you attract clients overnight like a It drives business owners insane. Every time they place an ad, they never know what to
magnet without lifting a finger — guaranteed. expect. All the advertising agencies tell you that if only you get your name and your logo out
in front of the public long enough, customers will flock to your door.
“Who else wants to attract hundreds of cash Or you put up a website and you have two problems. First, you have to get people to your
paying clients to your business or website and site. Second, they have to convert from Internet surfers to buyers. Studies show that people
make decisions about websites in about 7 seconds. And if your website doesn’t grab the reader,
generate mega-profits?” they are not going to buy.

It works like magic but almost nobody knows about it. The newspapers, radio stations, and television stations have a built in answer. “You didn’t
You’ll ask yourself, how can something so simple be so powerful... and so secret - advertise with us long enough. Give us thousands more of your hard-earned dollars and
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Here is an incredible opportunity for you to...
That’s the way it was for me and now. Those days are over...
 attract clients overnight regardless of a “weak economy”
I ran a successful counseling business and noticed that my leads began to dry up. Ads that
 build your business with a ridiculously low cost per lead my franchise supplied which were once effective no longer worked. My phones went silent.
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 flood your website with paying clients
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 laugh at the overpriced advertising agencies while counting your money
I connected with the top minds in the direct marketing business and I tapped their secrets.
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~ Frank Kern
 The one thing that is missing from almost every direct
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 How your marketing can become consistent month after
When clients are magnetically drawn to your business, your phone rings off the hook. month. And you no longer have to worry about just
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account balance begins to plummet. most expensive mistake you ever make.

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 How you can cut your cost per lead and cut down your adver- But the truth is. Most of these guys no longer work for guys like you or me. They work for
tising at the same time. the big mailers like Boardroom, Rodale, Phillips, Weiss, and Agora. Many of the big names
have decided to use their talents and promote their own product lines. Rumor has it that at
 Why the font you use affects your ad response. Newspapers least four of the copywriting superstars are leaving the field this year. So, in the meantime,
do not want you to learn the simple trick that makes your they want to sell us their courses on how to write our own copy. Big Mistake.
ad more effective.
Seriously, have you ever cut your own hair? It may look good in the front, but you can’t
 Why the advice that every marketing expert gave you about cut what you can’t see. And you can’t write effective compelling copy unless you know the
your business was dead wrong. triggers that make people salivate for your product.

But there is nothing a little guy can do.


I scrapped everything that I believed about marketing and began to use my new found
knowledge. I began writing my own ads and my phone rang off the hook. It seemed like magic. Until now...

Here’s how I discovered the secret to success... and you are the winner.
But it’s not magic at all!
I have paid tens of thousands of dollars to study with the top experts in direct marketing
You see, what my clients learn is what the great copywriter and direct marketing
including such experts as:
wizard, Gary Halbert once said, “You are only one sales letter from success.” I quickly and
effectively write hard-hitting, take-no-prisoners, kick-ass sales letters and — as a result —  Jay Abraham — the legendary king of marketing. I paid Jay’s outrageous $5000
your business improves overnight. an hour price to consult with this marketing genius. Today, I write for him!
My name is Dr. Harlan Kilstein and my ads, direct mail letters, web-sites, and radio  Gary Halbert — the Prince of Copy. I paid Gary thousands to attend his
ads have made hundreds of thousands millions of dollars for my clients. People call from seminars and study the secrets he never shares.
all over the world just to get me to write ads for them. People routinely pay me thousands
of dollars to create ads for them. I’ve taken the most distressed businesses and turned  Dan Kennedy — the no B.S. marketing genius. I’m one of the few to attend
them around overnight. Dan’s last every copywriting boot camp. I soaked up the tricks of the trade and
will put them to work for you.
Now, I know you probably never heard of me — I was content to stay in the background
with my small but elite group of clients. That’s when I discovered something. The average  John Carlton — the copywriter’s secret weapon. John is not only a mentor; he’s
business has absolutely zero-chance of getting one of the top people in direct marketing to a great friend. He now refers new copywriting clients to me.
do their copy for them. They are booked for months — even years — in advance.
 Gary Bencivenga — the world’s greatest copywriter. Studying with Gary was a
Even more frightening. Even if you pay one of the big names the staggering amounts of rare treat. Now, I’m on an extremely short list of copywriters Gary recommends.
money they ask for, there’s no guarantee that they will actually personally do the work for you.
They won’t tell you this but chances are, some flunky is actually going to do the work for you  Carl Galletti — who wrote some of the hottest copy for some of the biggest
and the big name you pay is only going to review it and make a change or two. Almost all the names. Carl won’t write for anyone anymore. He refers his clients to me.
leading copywriters farm their work out. So you pay Rolls Royce prices and get VW quality.  Kenrick Cleveland — the world’s leading expert in sales and persuasion
The way the big copy guys work is they charge are large up-front fee, typically $25,000  Bob Bly — one of the top teachers of direct mail copy today
to 40,000. And that’s just for starters. Then they may sell the letter they did for you to your
direct competitor!  David Garfinkel — an absolute master of Direct Response copy

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And after weeks, months, and years of slaving away at copy, I struck the mother lode of  How to turn lost or forgotten customers into a steady stream
gold. Letter after letter that I wrote was producing serious money for my business. I set a sales of paying clients. They’ll be glad to pay you again once you
record for my franchise — month after month. And that’s when the phone calls started. learn these secrets.

Everyone wanted me to “give away” all my secrets.  How to create a flood of hot, paying leads, sales appointments
and new customers. You may have to hire new staff to deal
And at first, I was more than happy to do so. I shared my secret success formulas with with the surge of demand.
others. I gave them my full page newspaper advertisements, my direct mail letters, my radio
 How to get customers to take action when you need
commercials, and my sales scripts.
immediate results.
It soon turned out that my ads were becoming more popular than the franchises own ads.
 The greatest advertising secret ever discovered and how it can
So they pulled the plug. I was not allowed to share my marketing secrets with anyone else in give me a 7:1 return on your investment dollar (or more.)
the franchise. Even though I wrote some of the most successful ad campaigns in their history,
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agency that they were paying at the same time. down, and shake their credit cards out of their wallets.

So, now I can’t share my work anymore with my friends. It’s against the rules of my  How to reduce the money you are currently spending on
former franchise. advertising. You will be shocked at how much I can slash your
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But they can’t stop me from working with you.
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When I decide to accept someone as a client, I totally immerse myself in their business. to your site again and again.
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Now if you book one of the big names in copy and get them to write for you — prepare tell you it will take months to make your first sale. With me,
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In the copy business, the top names are booked months (or years) in advance. So if you
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“I begged Dr. Kilstein for one of his radio commercials. When I began to written copy with a BIG IDEA then you will gladly pay the price. Lesson to
run it, he beat all our controls.” be learned: If you want a best seller, hire a best selling writer.”
~ S. Thaler , Florida ~ Christopher Tomasulo, Master Persuader

What the Pros Say About My Work “Harlan has displayed extraordinary energy and talent in his copy skills,
Guarantees Your Results! and he's a writer to watch out for. A client would do well to hook up with
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“I think you guys did a great job — better preparation than anyone.”
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“Harlan is one of the few people that I see as an expert at persuasion. His
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“ You have extraordinary talent!”
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~ David Garfinkel, Master Copywriter Multi- Millionaire

“The copy is slamming! Excellent job. I can't believe you sat in front of My Track Record (A small selection)
your computer for 12 solid hours cranking it out. I just want to thank you
personally for all the help you are providing us.”  A website I did this year set an Internet record for a telecon-
~ Stephen Pierce, Author of The Whole Truth ference. My copy brought in over $600,000.

 A new website and email campaign brought in $750,000 in


less than a month.
“The difference between a master copywriter and one who is just fluid in
copywriting techniques is similar to the difference between an writer who  A single email brought in nearly $185,000 in product sales.
knows how to write and a novelist who sells millions of copies. Harlan can
find the big idea and bring it to life. He finds the emotional hot button and  An email for an unknown writer had a 15% sales rate. The
pushes it like crazy. If you really want a master to write your next client is still in shock.
marketing piece. Visit his site: http://www.overnight-copy.com It won't be
 An email campaign brought in nearly $370,000 for a seminar.
cheap. But if you understand the massive return on investment from well
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 An email campaign sold out a coaching program. working. It’s a fascinating call. You may want to have a tape recorder ready because I will give
you so many ideas, you may not be able to write them all down.
 Newspaper ads that bring in hundreds of thousands of dollars.
First I want to understand what your business is. What’s working and what the problems
 A B2B letter selling a software product had a 47% response are. I am going to want to see copies of what you have been using. I want to know where you
rate using a secret technique. want to take your business. What’s the next level?

 And... an email campaign so successful that 1 out of every 2 I want to clearly understand what your real needs are. My questions will quickly get to the
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And then and only then will I make a proposal to write for you and turn your business
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Every campaign has been a winner. Aren’t those the results you want for your business?
business turnaround you have ever experienced.
I’ve written successfully for alternative health, financials, business opportunity
If you need to convert visitors to your website into buyers, not only can I write hard
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B2B and B2C customers.
campaign that will bring paying customers to your site in droves for just pennies in a few
Warning: After I write for you once, you will never let anyone else do your copy. minutes. And if yours isn’t working as well as you’d like, maybe you’d like my secrets. (And
even the experts in Google Adwords (like my friend Perry Marshall — Mr. Google Adwords)
use my work as an example.) One caveat, you have to be selling what people want to buy so
Time Limited Opportunity
if you’re looking for my help in selling pictures of antique buggy whips, count me out.
I select just four jobs to do a month. That’s all. I don’t farm out the work. I do it all myself.
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But that means I get to be selective about who I work with. November is nearly over booked.
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If you recognize the price I charge is immaterial because you can make it back the first day
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My Samples Demonstrate How I Can
Grow Your Business Harlan (Bold signature)
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