indiations fehanges in pace al sy nant the sos. Inaunnury. scene dewerpion sul include dled fermion cme xing ne ore of the allowing ares The psi caine the eee nication ba the weld of the soy. An ination ofthe nage ste, tion of the camere a the acter anor hint al the epoiinn of visuals within the ‘thot dctring eae partial tothe decor ho leary the Sal deci, Claes aout the se of str being al and abut thease of Inividul scenes ven tee oe changes (om the preset ‘esback, fm rail fai, rele hcl Contnstsctwec seer or betwee ata nme within et Inicio aout changes in pace ad hth Icons ht entre, sed ele. Indication of said bth objective (generar by soos sere) and sbjetive (aed fr deat fe a abe dorng x dangers met «Claes the contin desea the prctondesper the eset the lasers, a ll he ober prensa a Ihe wo what he alone arly ee a rar on sete, THE DRAMATIC SCENE Yo alnays aac movie scone a ate wo poly am, Yow lage in the cme the lt pol amet. Most seta rarely oa ha the sac mater i. 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The ry pit Isethr closet ater rm hr ga esta th ee yma hr tht els et seed sre rer Ee (ona ee ‘xbaquen scene wil be another developed in the encomgranag sea nd lagu air the postion fhe petagit reat i bjt ven general a th tary progresses those sings rm bape era ack ain ney, bore srg a mre pron "hn Shae aor Sane ard tart have hal «bral with yr me in the ton general store ad have been bck tote by ‘Stare the eto f the sys a fo cus We flow Ryka dling wrk learng the homesteads of hi ll ad tabi Ta roy desire get revenge on Ryker, Togh these scenes den in ‘Shane they al neni hin quest oboe ror rapping his ga bach | ‘er een they inrease he peur hi tke pga ve the robles of he poet str wih whom he alge The cc wa the mulieace's ape yen ear ahi eane meting i fear ‘Shae Ctr, when Torey Killed by Hpk wen, here een el Tateeity tthe presuareom Shan, and our caer cling of hp dfs nce, ‘Olen the separation senes& mth Is distin! 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What the otic the ev’ at with ne or eof he chr scien wise ceimtmnes or the surodings othe een, Fs the confit within the charter ‘Wher ad when does the ser ake place? Could anaber tine ot lon ser to eight he pel? What charter re resent pain whic ones enter du Ing the sce atid fee at the en1s any new character ntracel? 1 den the inten gi the wien «ging nt the nau of the carters mae the cheer mech og? hee were th characters bee the scene stated, and whee ane they ping er tena? Haste ben lal ine th ast een? a, it leo th dee tha ime an per al fw mh te has pase? A {ny iow lips of tine within the none ler aed erable? Hac theve bee tration nthe rein cee, tl hee teeing eet? [ether sce of preparation some fern? I ane ne fear? Now al cee mie thee, Does the sone comtnt ase way wih the preceling seme ote scene follow? Agin nol rene il conti, th tins of Heart Bt he Uo in”? That the sarc ret wh hey ae ad hat hey wa Arete actin fhe characters cleat and mia? Do they rea characte an mone the soy fe? Ie then any use of deamatie rey? Father uty of ation? [othe scene sail tela others af the tery? Aretbe aati dfs eng Are they to el Ar the events plas? Meet dsl be spend? Do: vets obey the "rule" pris suena ible? Dues the audience koow what might po ght eran within scene? When inthe cee do they know? When does one ‘the characters ko? Does the dio rec character? Are the ior lies of the acters reveled teu ation Iago acto? Ate any cements athe tre ed? Should hey be ae? ae seve ing teat o the tery too much oa stand or 3 pope he soy Fran? Are here inal hin, sgt span fr the. profesional who wll make the Sat? Ds cela he tary ing ld? REWRITING ‘rely btw in etn, at tint ering. think: ‘ng, eae, apronching things ane. hon yout ewig ey ain or ding she seme tha bet eek The phat ce i plex gf mete ya ‘ony ha ben he ough fr the writes uo worked ad of on, tay ab bth mos iia scenes, eri. (hey ee one apheee el on rising ang Sometines en when pict i dane, you ay, Tih Toul got my ads min” sein eigen via dig i rowing Whee mt olds the creer po ie ewig efx seren fry is complete un he i ein Av these ven the, ther reba of fin with mer inched Bc en is Sate ce: Be Ge apse perpeen te even ad ine tuning of seronps’s str conus eaghat he haning ol the ing prac nl ns with the lease pit the Bt lens sce. Most of he tin, the screams’ ivan ia ewig ede ven Whe sting begin. Someties 8 wer nt ome Lomo poe il o's ring ot, bt this als than evacuate Ant nti he writer bright nat etn phase create Wino tht canbe hain to net ice a i the bet hllows, oie new pap fra ew dan of etn tpt fn. Whever the steeniter' involvement eds ne hing let thre fae he a great deal reiting Anne nh sot the Bt af a pt ther flo has amine nara serena.