Thesis Statement

The heading should be at the minimun 3 words long

so that it can indicate which dimension the
paragraph will take in the essay
 The argument and paragraph should be clear in the
heading

start the introduction of expository essay with attention grabber

 t

Do not start the paragraph with facts and figures

 No evidence and reference

Do not start the paragraph with facts

No paragraph structure
 No evidence and reference

No evidence and reference

No evidence and reference

How are these causing mismanagement
of resources the evidence does not sat

No evidence and reference

Unstructured
 No evidence and reference

Are these impacts or causes of mismanagement?

 the argument is the outline is about causes not impacts

Unstructured

irrelevant evidence
No evidence and reference

unclear what part of paragraph is source from

the reference
 No evidence and reference

No evidence and reference

ID Code: Umar Khitab
Category Total Obtained
marks marks
Qualitative analysis 10 1
Content Quantitative analysis 10 1
Validity & Reliability 10 1
Relevance 10 1
Sentence structure 5 2
Language Vocabulary 5 2
Clarity 5 2
Command of language 5 2
Expression 5 2
Outline 5 1
Structure Introduction 5 2
Body paragraphs 5 1
Conclusion 5 2
Coherence Cohesion 5 1
Coherence 10 1
Total 22